The Fire Serpent Legacy by Cindy L. Rodriguez

What worked:

Auri’s parents died when she was an infant, and she compares her life to a puzzle with missing pieces. Many books save the truth about lost parents until later, but readers learn early that her father rode a fire serpent and protected the Amazon jungle. She realizes that the large egg displayed in her grandmother’s cabinet holds the last fire serpent and wants to follow her parents’ wishes by returning it to Brazil. Auri feels an electrical charge up her arms when she touches the egg, which lets readers know she has a special connection with the Boitatás. Readers will anxiously await the moment the egg hatches, giving the story a jump start.

The book weaves elements of the Portuguese/Brazilian culture and the Amazon Forest into the story. The importance of the rainforest to Earth's survival is emphasized, and deforestation is the main conflict in the plot. The characters prepare Portuguese dishes, and Auri and her sister learn about unique fruits and foods found in Brazil. Auri’s aunt mostly speaks Portuguese, and Auri’s sister has refreshed her knowledge of the language to become fluent. Portuguese words and phrases add authenticity to the story, and readers can figure out most of their meanings using the context. Auri also interprets some of the vocabulary, although she struggles with the language herself.

The conflict is complicated by Auri’s uncle, since he’s a major player in the destruction of the local environment. Auri’s grandmother goes so far as to warn Auri to stay away from her uncle, because he’s a dangerous man. In addition, a group of Amazon protectors used to support the efforts of the Boitatás, but they’re no longer active. Many of them think it’s most important to save the last Boitatás, which is why Auri’s grandmother took the egg to the United States. Consequently, Auri doesn’t know who might be willing to help her and the newly hatched Boitatás. Some people will want Sergio taken out of the country to keep him safe, but Auri is determined to stop the deforestation.

What didn’t work as well:

Sergio’s reaction to Auri after hatching is a little confusing. The tingling she feels when touching the egg implies they’re already forming a bond, yet the Boitatás is defensive and frightened toward Auri when they first meet. They quickly become close, but that initial meeting is surprising.

The final verdict:

This exciting adventure addresses a real-world issue: deforestation. The issue may be news to many young readers, but the book’s message is vitally important for them to hear. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

George Goodwin, Dragon Slayer: A Scouting Legend (Order of the Dragon Slayer) by Candace Lee and Eric Newman

What worked:

This book is reminiscent of the movie, “The Goonies”? This book also has a group of local kids venturing underground, looking for hidden treasure. Thieves race to flee the abandoned mine taking diamonds that could be used to save the dying town. George’s main goal is to clear the disgraced memories of his father, since his dad was blamed for the deaths of other miners. The other kids follow him into the mine with thoughts of becoming rich, but they become trapped and must follow a map to get out. The tunnels are difficult and treacherous, and there are natural obstacles just waiting to bring tons of rocks falling onto the kids. Oh, there’s also a dragon looking for its next meal.

Readers can learn about West Virginia and the importance of coal mining to the people living there. The people are prideful, but they know the dangers of working in the mines. Many towns are abandoned when the coal runs out, and Big Mountain is slowly becoming the next casualty. The narrow tunnels are reinforced to offer support, and George wishes this mine had been lined with limestone to prevent the spread of fires. The kids learn that a blocked exit can mean death, since the only other way out is on the other side of the mountain.

The plot will certainly satisfy any readers with a need for action or fighting scenes. The dragon attacks are relentless, and readers discover it won’t stop searching for George until it kills him. Lulls in the action give a false impression that things are okay, only to have the dragon rear its terrifying face again. To complicate things further, thieves are roaming the tunnels, so readers can expect them to pop up. One of them is crazy enough to destroy the whole mountain, even if the kids are still inside the mine.

What didn’t work as well:

There’s a Scottish man named Rowland who can see into the future. He adds humor and predictions of events to come, but his ability doesn’t immediately make sense. The book begins with a realistic tone, and the existence of a dragon is strange enough. The kids use scouting skills, but there’s no hint that some humans will have superpowers.

The final verdict:

This story is a flat-out action adventure, as George and his friends battle a dragon that is determined to kill them. I recommend you give this book a shot.

Dungeon Runners: Fang Attack Level 4 by Kieran Larwood

What worked:

The plot moves very quickly, so it will keep the attention of young, emerging, and reluctant readers. The characters face many obstacles and dangerous creatures, although this part of the series offers new twists. This story finds Kit, Sandy, and Thorn on the last leg of the Dungeon Runners competition. They must finish in the top two places to be promoted to the Tryhard League (a new future book series?) or lose their hopes of being Dungeon Runners forever. In addition, this competition will be held in Vostovia, a land of vampires. Thorn is a vegan vampire, and this new setting provides complications for him. A bully from Kit’s past is on the third-place Trogton Terrors, and Kit’s sure the first-place Roost Raiders “earned” their position by cheating.

Kit, Sandy, and Thorn form the team of Triple Trouble, and they’re a stark contrast from the other teams. Kit has the roles of leader and fighter, but he’s gotten this far with limited abilities and questionable bravery. His best assets are intelligence, luck, and compassion. Sandy is the team’s mage, even though she doesn’t know many spells. Plus, the spells she tries to cast rarely work the way she intended. Thorn is the healer, and he’s uncertain about returning to Vostovia. He’s afraid of what will happen if the other vampires find out he doesn’t drink blood anymore. They’ll surely be angry, and the consequences may result in the end of his eternal life. Readers can easily predict that his secret will eventually be revealed.

What didn’t work as well:

The book jumps right into the action, so readers need to have read the previous three books to understand what’s happening. There’s not enough character and plot development to help readers connect with the backstory and featured personalities.

The final verdict:

This is a fun series that features underdogs with admirable qualities. Their kindness and empathy for others make them unpredictable Dungeon Runners when contrasted with their ruthless, selfish, cheating competitors. I recommend this book for a wide range of young readers.

The Wizard's Way (Adventures in O'Mirra Book 1) by Lisa Kelly

What worked:

Divorce is very relevant to the girls’ problems. Katie and Jenny’s father left the family, and they don’t know why. With no explanation, the girls suspect that they are the reason. More specifically, Katie feels certain that her headstrong, rebellious behavior is the cause of her father’s anger and absence. She remembers what she did on the day he left, and the way he talked about her. This internal conflict plagues the girls as their adventure to O’Mirra unfolds. Their father makes an appearance in O’Mirra, in a way.

Katie learns her mother and grandmother are witches, and that she is one, too. She first notices her amulet is vibrating against her chest, and she sees her deceased (missing?) grandmother in the scrying mirror. Readers will have questions about her family. Where is her grandmother? Why doesn’t her mother seem to have any knowledge about magic and O’Mirra? Katie has moments of insecurity about her abilities, but she really displays an aptitude toward casting spells. She feels responsible and protective of her younger sister, but Jenny often offers her support and flashes of bravery. Their mettle will be tested by a magical plague that feeds on fear, anger, and self-doubt.

What didn’t work as well:

Katie’s magical learning curve is very quick, as performing spells isn’t overly complicated. It’s a matter of possessing the ability and reading spell words from a scroll. At times, it seems that the most difficult part of casting magic is unrolling the scrolls and reading in pressure situations. It’s a little odd.

The final verdict:

The book shares a fast-paced adventure in a magical world. The plot’s format is familiar, but the author includes twists to make it unique. I recommend you try the book for yourself. 

Sire, Oleander isn't dead! (Yet) by T.I. Avens

What worked:

The opening chapter introduces Marlow and leaves readers with a couple of significant questions. She is living with a guardian, so readers will wonder what’s happened to her parents. While delivering messages, she is saved by slayers, and readers are introduced to Oleander. However, later, Marlow’s guardian asks if the slayers recognized who she really is, and Marlow says they did not. What is her true identity, and why doesn’t she want anyone to know? Marlow has a complicated history, and her secret is a major focus during the book’s second half.

In the next chapters, readers learn about Oleander’s pressure-filled life. His mother is highly demanding, and she won’t accept that he’s not giving full effort at all times. She shows him a room honoring his family’s heritage, and renowned heroes highlight every generation. Oleander’s mother says he will be a footnote, forgotten forever, if he slacks off for even a moment. Her pressure causes Oleander to take risks, and he pushes Squallsong, the guild he leads, to go on non-stop missions. Oleander uses a poisoned blade to kill difficult wilders, but it has unexpected results. The creatures return from the dead and will continue to do so until they get vengeance against Oleander. Marlow notices a magical aura around her friend, but revealing her observation will give away her secret.

Marlow struggles with a family situation that causes complications and expectations that she can’t handle. In addition, the other slayers in Oleander’s guild have trouble with his leadership, and they choose to follow someone else. Oleander reflects on his life path and must make hard decisions about his future. Oleander and Marlow find support and understanding in each other, but Marlow’s secret may fracture their relationship.

What didn’t work as well:

There are numerous fictional monsters, and it can be challenging to visualize them. The story includes brief descriptions, but matching their names from memory is tricky. A glossary or collection of illustrations would help.

The final verdict:

Young readers will enjoy the adventures of Oleander and Marlow, and the endless stream of dangerous wilders creates suspense and fighting scenes. I recommend you try this book for yourself. 

A Sprinkling of Danger (Alice Eclair, Spy Extraordinaire #3) by Sarah Todd Taylor

What worked:

The book is set in Paris, right before the start of World War II. Alice works her way onto the movie set by baking cakes and pastries for different scenes. Readers will know from the previous books that Alice is an expert chef, so she can whip up delicious, decorative, and detailed pastries at a moment’s notice. She is tasked with locating the map that reveals French agents secretly working throughout Europe, and identifying the spy sharing information with the Germans. The story presents several suspects, ranging from the movie’s star, Catrine, to movie employees and the hotel’s staff. Readers know Alice’s life is in constant danger after there are multiple events when she could have been killed. The lives of French agents are in immediate peril, so there is pressure for Alice to complete her mission as quickly as possible.

A different twist in this third book is that Alice is supposed to train a new agent. Readers know immediately that it will add a complication, since Pierre doesn’t want anything to do with her. He says he won’t listen to anything she has to say and that he works alone. He finagles himself onto the movie set and sneers every time he looks her way. However, Alice notices him passing secret messages to Catrine, and it crosses her mind that he might be a double agent. She also spots a man passing a package to an unknown accomplice, so readers will wonder if it’s one of the missing hotel artifacts.

Many young readers enjoy cooking and baking, so they’ll appreciate Alice’s talent and the products she creates. She works at her mother’s famous French bakery, but her mother is unaware of her daughter’s life as a secret agent. Alice bakes multi-tiered cakes, decorated like objects found in the hotel and on the movie set. She adds special effects that amaze everyone, although her plan for sparklers is disrupted by the sun. Luckily, the mishap explains one of the attempts on her life. It also helps Alice realize the identity of the traitor working with the movie production.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may wonder about Pierre, since the story doesn’t give any information about him. He appears in the second chapter but goes on his own right away. If Alice is supposed to train him, how does he know what to do without her help? What is in his background that makes him totally reject Alice without even speaking to her?

The final verdict:

Lovers of mystery and adventure will enjoy this latest installment of Alice Éclair’s secret missions. She is in more danger than in the previous books, but that makes it more dramatic and exciting. I recommend you give this book a shot.

Trunk No. 3 by Allie Millington

What worked:

The first thing readers will appreciate is the author’s masterful ability to tell a story. They can feel the desperate emotions of Earl Grey and Cleo as they try to find their places in the world. Earl loves living with Oswald, but she longs to know who she belonged with Before Oswald. Cleo believes he is a failure, so he wants to run away. No one will miss him. The narrator explains, “And sometimes, you started breaking rules when you started breaking inside too.” An old, battered trunk is the center of attention, and it supplies footnotes with explanations from its point of view. It had to say something when Cleo commented that it smelled “… like bad breath that had been held in for too long.”

Oswald and his deceased wife used to mine for memories, and his Repertorium contains objects holding strong, emotional experiences. “It’s like the expression of walking a mile in another person’s shoes.” Guests can touch the items and experience moments that leave them feeling thrilled, curious, or surprised. Oswald’s never shown Earl how to mine, but she discovers that she gets visions and emotions just from touching other people. This ability will have readers wondering more about Earl and where she came from. How can her ability be explained?

It turns out, there’s more than one trunk. Cleo steals Trunk No. 3 from Earl, but he doesn’t realize how his theft will bring them together. Earl finds another trunk, Trunk No. 2, and the two characters discover the trunks are “magically” connected. Earl’s bunny climbs in her trunk, and the lid closes, and it immediately appears in Cleo’s trunk. This begins their “pen pal” correspondence, even though they’re unaware of each other’s identity. Readers will anticipate the moment they figure out their paths have already crossed. Also, readers may wonder if there’s a Trunk No. 1.

What didn’t work as well:

Earl seems to have a better handle on the whole situation than is believable. She’s struggling to learn about her past, but she somehow manages to offer Cleo sage advice about his situation. The eloquence of her messages to him seemed more mature than her character should have been.

The final verdict:

The book shares a tender, budding friendship between two characters who are trying to understand their places in the world. I recommend that middle-grade readers try it for themselves.

The Strange Disappearance of Imogen Good by Kirsty Applebaum

What worked:

Readers are treated to two stories instead of one, and the two parts are combined to form the overall plot. The opening pages describe Imogen and a friend named Bex when they approach a garden behind Stillness Hall. Everyone in town knows to stay away from it, but Imogen dares Bex. The book’s synopsis picks up from there, as Fran discovers no one knows a girl named Imogen. The plot follows Fran as she slowly realizes that the people here are trying to trick her. An unusual twist in this book is that there is still physical evidence of Imogen’s existence; her organized, dusty bedroom hasn’t been touched since she disappeared. There’s even a photograph of Bex alongside Imogen, but Bex has no memory of her. How can Imogen find Imogen when no one in town knows she exists?

Alternate chapters tell the tale of the original owners of Stillness Hall. The wealthy couple finally gives birth to a baby boy, but he later becomes dangerously ill. No one knows what’s wrong, so the parents go to drastic measures to save his life. Grief, anger, and enchantments lead to consequences that last for decades. Fran has no idea of the truth surrounding Stillness Hall, so she’s in danger of becoming the next victim. The book follows her relentless search for Imogen, and alternating chapters reveal the mystery's origins and the property's terrifying legends. Readers will anticipate the moment when the two stories merge to an eerie conclusion.

The plot addresses bullying and perceptions of others. Fran dreads seeing her cousin, Imogen, because Imogen is bossy and no fun to be around. Imogen doesn’t care for her sloppy cousin either, so their dislike is mutual. Imogen wants to be liked by a popular group of girls, so she bullies Bex into accepting a dare. That’s what ignites the main conflict. Fran realizes she may have bullied Bex, too, by pressurizing her into doing something she didn’t want to do. In a related way, the plot addresses atonement, as the girls try to make up for past indiscretions.

What didn’t work as well:

Part of the enchantment can be tricky to understand, as it doesn’t affect everyone. The story includes an explanation, but it may still have readers thinking twice.

The final verdict:

This speculative fiction story is skillfully crafted to share Fran’s determined efforts to do what’s right. Stillness Hall provides a mystery, and readers will follow hints from the alternate chapters to put together a solution. Of course, understanding the mystery doesn’t explain how to solve the problem. Overall, I recommend this book for all middle-grade readers who like mysteries.

Creepers: Soul Harvest (Creepers Horror Stories) by Edgar J. Hyde

What worked:

This book is easy to read due to its short chapters and total number of pages. The entire story takes place over the course of one day. The eerie black-and-white illustrations help create a mysterious, supernatural tone. The new ghoulish neighbors dressed in “black and old-timey” clothing silently move in, so readers immediately know these characters have evil intentions. The name of the series is appropriate, since the book is creepy, but not so scary that it will give young readers bad dreams. At first, the strange behavior only seems to affect adults, but the main characters discover that other children are behaving oddly, too.

Jacob is the main character, but his younger sister, Ava, is the hero. Noah is Ava’s best friend, and Alex is Jacob’s best buddy. Early in the book, Ava behaves like a typical little sister, but it’s clear that Jacob loves her dearly. He is the one who consoles Ava when their neighbor angrily yells at her. In contrast, Ava volunteers to perform two risky tasks that are critical to stopping the strange happenings in their town. However, young readers and the characters will anxiously await news to find out what’s happened to her after the climax.

What didn’t work as well:

Obviously, a book this short sacrifices any kind of descriptive development of the characters and plot. Readers are left to wonder how the “seeds” are planted before souls can be harvested. Why are the four kids the only ones not affected?

The final verdict:

This will be popular with young or reluctant middle-grade readers. It’s fast-paced and spooky, which will make it appealing to them. I recommend you give this book and series a shot.

Down the Plot Hole by Annaleise Byrd

What worked:

The main characters travel into Grimm’s fairy tales to correct gaps in the book’s text. Basil and Terry are the stars, and they’re tasked with finding missing sheep in different stories. Terry has a crush on Gretel, and she told the boys that plot holes are the worst thing that can happen. Members of FANCY are charged with locating and fixing any holes that develop. However, Gretel says the missing sheep aren’t a big problem, so there’s no need to worry. She seems to be echoing Herr Korbes’s words, but it doesn’t make any sense.  Why isn’t the leader of FANCY concerned about plot holes that could destroy everything in the fairy tale world?

The story lets readers revisit familiar characters in new situations and exposes them to less familiar tales. Readers will know the Grimms’ tales of Hansel and Gretel and Sleeping Beauty, but their stories of The Mouse, the Bird, and the Sausage, The Pink, and Clever Grethel will be new. Characters from different tales interact, and they are aware of each other’s plots. Many fairy tales feature gruesome, gory storylines, and this issue is the main conflict. SAD EGGS and another group are frequent victims in these tales, and their protests are creating problems. Prejudice and assumptions create bad feelings, so Basil and Terry will need to find a way to bring everyone together.

What didn’t work as well:

Apparently, Terry and Basil aren’t friends, but the evidence contradicts that. They formed a bond after the events in the first book, but this time they show no friction toward each other. Also, the plot creates questions and contradictions that aren’t resolved.

The final verdict:

This book can be read independently of the first one. It has a fast-paced plot and unexpected twists that young readers will enjoy. I recommend you try this book yourself.

Skygull Calamity by Bronwyn Fairchild

What worked:

The setting is quite unusual, as Nova City sits vertically atop long stilts in the middle of the ocean. Blue, the main character, works in a weather station at the top, alongside a retired zephyr named Lucado. The wealthy live on the upper levels with a nice view of the sky, while the poor, like Blue and his mother, live on the lower levels. Thelanamous Green runs Green Industries and the Zephyr Consortium, and his influence makes him the most powerful man in Nova City. Rain and snowstorms with high winds constantly bash the structure, and the Consortium has ignored Lucado’s warnings of an imminent catastrophe. Blue’s daily climbs to the weather station using rope ladders and back down to deliver Lucado’s weather reports help readers understand the difficulties of living in a vertical city. However, it seems evident that the Consortium is hiding secrets, but why?

Blue’s mother was a famous pilot, and he once hoped to follow in her footsteps, but he failed to pass the initial entrance test. Blue feels pressure from many directions, causing readers to empathize with him. His family is poor, and his position as an apprentice zephyr would have provided a significant, steady income. Thelanamous thinks Lucado is insane, so Blue knows his family will be homeless if he loses his job. A girl named Coraline brings intrigue to the plot, as she’s been studying the worsening weather for years. Blue doesn’t want anything to do with her, but she’s persistent. Maybe she’ll become a friend? And what about the photo Blue finds showing his mother in a place that’s not Nova City? Throughout the story, Blue compares his anxiety levels to severe storms and ranks his fear on a scale from 1 to 11. The numbers help describe Blue’s stress as he encounters ever-perilous challenges.

The story takes a turn when Blue and Tate miraculously find Lost City. The book’s second half introduces new characters, drama, and conflict, and the plot includes several surprises. Blue learns more about his mother’s past, but many questions remain. Tate always seems to know more than Blue, but even she may not have the answers to escape Lost City. The pair discovers the cause of the dangerous tempests threatening Nova City, but the kids are shocked when they learn its origins. It won’t be easy to find a solution, because people are willing to do anything to keep the storms brewing.

What didn’t work as well:

There are “miraculous” events that will test readers’ tolerance. Blue suffers falls in death-defying situations, but he always survives with minimal injuries. Tate is a smart girl, and she always has the skill or knowledge needed to solve any problem they face. The pair somehow escapes two instances in which their flying machine is blown to pieces.

The final verdict:

The book’s early chapters have drama, but things get very interesting when the plot shifts to Lost City. I recommend this book to lovers of adventure, science fiction, and steampunk.

 

The Traitor Moth by Katharine Orton

What worked:

How many books have you read that feature moths? Catclaw is the main character, and he belongs to the Nameless clan. Dreamkins used to have the ability to see premonitions of the future until the queen of all moths took that power away. Their clan is now known as Nameless. Most moths live around twelve moon turns, which readers will assume means twelve months. The moths find refuge in trees, tall grasses, and other vegetation, and it’s dangerous for them to fly during daylight hours. Bats and toads are common, natural enemies for moths, but Bluewings are mutant wasps that nearly wiped them all out. Catclaw fears the Bluewings are now returning.

The main conflict finds Catclaw on a quest to speak with the moth queen. He has a premonition of Bluewing attacks, and it’s believed the queen once repelled them by using her voice. However, the Nameless don’t believe Catclaw had a vision, so it’s unlikely other clans will listen to him. The queen rarely agrees to see visitors, and Catclaw must collect tokens from the other clans before he can even hope to approach her. The Nameless haven’t had contact with the other clans for years, and Catclaw discovers the situation is much worse than he expects. The other clans aren’t communicating with each other anymore, so how is he supposed to collect the tokens he needs? A huge surprise awaits once he finally reaches the queen’s fortress, and the book’s title makes sense.

The author includes some mystique to accent its speculative fiction. The Nameless Master dies, but first, he gives Catclaw his diary. Catclaw carries it with him during his adventure, but he realizes the book provides guidance. He thinks or speaks questions, and the book displays cryptic answers. However, the last page also states Catclaw Traitor. Catclaw has premonitions of future events, so readers are given hints of what’s to come. In contrast, italicized paragraphs relate to stories Master Saturna told Catclaw in the past, and they provide information related to current happenings. Catclaw also senses someone is watching him during his journey, but he’s never able to spot anyone.

What didn’t work as well:

Even though all kinds of creatures can be found in speculative fiction books, some readers may still have trouble wrapping their minds around moths. Some of the descriptions and movements are hard to visualize when readers consider the characters are moths.

The final verdict:

The title and moth characters may confuse young readers, but the plot contains everything they’ll want. Catclaw is an admirable character as he’s trustworthy and determined to save the clan that shunned him. Overall, I recommend adventure lovers check out this book.

Last Year With Maddy by Anna Rosner

What worked:

The story is told from Aviva’s first-person point of view, and she reflects on happy and troubled times with her best friend, Maddy. Aviva desperately laments about not speaking to Maddy anymore and hints at the reason. Readers will imagine what might have happened to keep best friends apart. The narrative is written using a middle-grade voice, including Aviva’s love for italics, capital letters, and poetry. Readers will understand her difficulties when she describes troubled moments, and these segments are offset by happier times together. The book’s purpose is presented as Aviva’s message to Maddy, and two pages at the end share Maddy response.

Midway into the book, the plot shifts to Aviva’s three-year-old brother. Unfortunately, serious childhood health issues aren’t uncommon, and Ethan’s development is delayed. He only says a couple of words, and he refuses to toilet train. A doctor diagnoses a physical problem, and the family hopes that surgery will make things better. However, they learn that Ethan is on the autistic spectrum, so he’s going to need to go through many different therapies to improve his deficiencies. The author shares a great deal of information and explanations about autism, and young readers will learn autistic people are different, not less.

What didn’t work as well:

Aviva states that she always says the wrong thing, but readers may disagree. She catches herself from saying things she shouldn’t, and her slip-ups don’t seem that offensive. Her worst comments arise when she’s angered, so readers can understand and forgive her for them. One of Aviva’s positive qualities is her empathy for others, and young readers can learn from her good example.

The final verdict:

The author shares an emotional tale of two close friends and the ups and downs they must navigate. Aviva acts as the narrator, so young readers can experience her rollercoaster of thoughts and feelings. I recommend this book for all middle-grade readers.

The First Flame (The Aerimander Chronicles Book 2) by Lily Berlin Dodd

What worked:

The same main characters from the first book regroup to save an aerimander from danger. Aerimanders will remind readers of dragons, and the main one in this story is Rubi. Dusty and Eva guarded her egg until she hatched, and they still have a connection with her. Eva and Dusty can sense when the aerimander is near, which comes in handy when they try to locate Rubi in the mountains. The story takes a surprising turn when the characters finally locate her, or rather, Rubi finds them.

Dusty, Eva, and Myrna bring contrasting talents to the story. Dusty grew up in an orphanage before escaping, so he has street smarts and physical skills the others lack. He has other abilities and connections thanks to his time in the Thieves Guild. Eva is book-smart and outspoken, so don’t expect her to hold her tongue. She has a keen eye for details and a talent for creativity. Readers find her in a reformatory for problem girls when she enters this story. Myrna is Eva’s best friend, and her strengths are planning and a sensitivity to nature. Eva is rescued from the reformatory thanks to Myrna’s step-by-step plans.

Several elements of the plot will have readers wondering about upcoming events. Myrna is not immune to aerimander flame, like Dusty and Eva, so it’s dangerous for her to be around them. Eoin Parnassus, the story’s evil antagonist, is searching for Rubi and wants to use her as a weapon. He’s nearing the mountains where Rubi is hiding, and he’s dragging a heavy box along with him. It’s obviously not good news, but what is in the box? Dusty, Eva, and Myrna discover people secretly living in the mountains, and the three kids pass a test to join their school. They’ll learn common school topics, but they’ll learn all about the aerimanders. However, these people seem to know everything about the trio, and Eva wonders how that’s possible. There’s a huge secret they’re not being told.

What didn’t work as well:

Rubi’s size may be confusing. On one hand, Dusty can carry her in his arms, but later she picks him up and flies him away to safety. There’s also a scene later in the book where Dusty and Eva wear a protective covering to complete a ceremony. However, Myrna later walks the same path without the same protection. Confusing. However, overall, this is a solid book.

The final verdict:

Readers should begin with the first book, The Last Ember, to fully understand the backstory. I recommend it for lovers of dragons and adventure.

I Know You Started It by Daphne Benedis-Grab

What worked:

The main characters represent the kinds of students readers encounter every day in school. Gabe is always angry and in trouble, but he’s promised himself that he’s going to change. He fears he’ll be accused of arson, and public opinion will find him guilty. Gabe, Liam, Dani, and Kate are the first witnesses called to the principal’s office, and Gabe is convinced that makes them look like suspects. Kate’s on the school newspaper, and she used to be best friends with Dani. Now, they don’t talk anymore, and readers are left to wonder what happened. Liam is new to the school, and no one has taken an interest in him. Maybe helping to find the arsonist will finally make classmates notice him. The chapters alternate the focus among these four characters, revealing their individual struggles.

Rumors, gossip, and cyberbullying are major issues. It’s what motivates Gabe, Liam, Dani, and Kate, and they think they must solve the arson case before the end of the school day. Classmates’ gossip will find them guilty if they wait for the principal to finish her investigation. Jonathan’s locker was the arsonist’s target, but he’s one of the most popular kids in school. Does Jonathan have a secret, unsavory side that makes someone hate him? As it turns out, identifying the fire-starter doesn’t end the story. Additional planning is needed before justice is served.

What didn’t work as well:

The synopsis says the setting is in a middle school, but it’s actually a combined middle school and high school. The high school characters make the book appeal to a more mature audience, but the narrative's vocabulary and sentence structure are appropriate for younger readers. It’s also unrealistic to think the entire story takes place between homeroom and 2:00 PM in one school day.

The final verdict:

The issues and characters are probably most relevant to teens, but the reading level is appropriate for mature middle-grade readers. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Time Thief (Solve Your Own Mystery 2) by Gareth P. Jones

What worked:

The series includes a good deal of humor and strange events, which should appeal to young readers. Detective Klaus drives a car that used to be a dog. It wags its tailpipe when it’s happy or excited and makes soft, satisfied sounds when you scratch its car seats. Two talking gargoyle statues watch a museum’s back entrance, where a medusa-like character is the curator. The main police inspector is a minotaur, and the lead detective is an elf walking on stilts. A banshee news reporter details the facts of her stories, or she makes them up to make the stories more appealing to her readers.

The premise of the series is that the reader is Klaus’s assistant, and they make decisions on which clues to follow. Young readers will enjoy skipping pages to arrive at the next step in the story they have chosen. The different sections aren’t very long, which is appealing to young or reluctant readers. Like real detectives, readers identify the cast of suspects, examine their motives, and decide if they had opportunities to commit the crime. There’s always evidence pointing to different suspects, but readers eventually discover clues that narrow their focus. The book says there are three possible conclusions, depending on which clues are followed. The last page of the story lets readers move to alternate endings by directing them to different parts of the book. 

What didn’t work as well:

There isn’t much time spent developing characters or describing the events in detail. However, that’s the trade-off for skipping around to different parts of the plot. Readers may be curious about Klaus’s time with the UPF when he was the lead detective on the police force. It’s been mentioned in both books, but readers are left to wonder about anything specific. 

The final verdict:

Books that allow readers to choose how the stories unfold are always entertaining, and this one adds mystery and humor. Overall, I recommend this book to all middle-grade readers.

Monster Maker (Solve Your Own Mystery 1) by Gareth P. Jones

What worked:

These kinds of books allow young readers to control their reading experiences. The narrative asks them to make decisions as the story unfolds, and their choices direct them to different pages. This book indicates there are three possible endings, but there are many alternate pathways to arrive. The book’s format allows, even encourages, readers to reread the story while making different decisions. Every few pages offer choices, creating frequent breaks for young readers needing to stop. Reluctant readers also feel like they’re making visible progress at these spots without getting overwhelmed by the book’s length. Skipping to other pages makes young readers feel good. Humor is another attractive asset, along with the black-and-white illustrations in each chapter.

This particular mystery describes the theft of a monster-making machine, and readers are Detective Klaus Solstaag’s assistant. Klaus is a large yeti, and the client, Dr. Franklefink, is the only human in the story. Monsters don’t trust humans or bald characters. The theft occurred when the doctor held a birthday party for his son, whom he had created nine years earlier. The primary suspects are the parents of the kids attending the party, although Franklefink is convinced that a bald vampire must have done it. Klaus knows he can’t dismiss any suspects and must follow clues to identify the guilty party.

What didn’t work as well:

The story doesn’t end once a guilty person is identified. More information leads to further reading until the monster maker is finally retrieved. This situation isn’t necessarily bad, but it moves the plot further along than readers may anticipate. Also, there’s not a great deal of character development and story description, but that’s to be expected in this type of book.

The final verdict:

These kinds of books are fun to read, since the format is so different. Young or reluctant readers aren’t used to skipping pages, but making choices is empowering. Overall, I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Sacrificing Ayda by D.A. Beaumont

What worked:

Ayda doesn’t have many friends, and her teacher has frequent problems with her. Villagers accuse her mother of being a witch, so Ayda dreams of fleeing to Witch Marsh. She’s chosen to sacrifice her life to protect all of Zandia, but she doesn’t want to give her life for people who hate her. When an entourage arrives to take her away, a Wilder named Sunny helps her escape. His role is to lead Ayda to her destination, but he says he’ll take her to Witch Marsh or to the Pit where she’ll be sacrificed. It’s up to her, but he warns that Witch Marsh may not turn out as she expects.

Sunny is the most interesting character, and readers will suspect he’s much older than he seems. He always seems to know about future events, but he never tells Ayda what she should do. He pops up to offer assistance and counsel and speaks to Ayda in her dreams, too. He performs nature magic, repels witch spells, and Aden says he must be a wizard. Sunny always wears a smile, and his confidence always makes Ayda want to trust him. Some of his recommendations seem to put her life in danger, making Ayda seriously think about what he says.  

A witch named Dara tells Ayda that being a witch is about power. “And power comes from being the one inflicting the pain, not being the one receiving it.” Ayda’s major internal conflict is deciding whether she should venture to Witch Marsh or follow Sunny’s idea and travel to the Pit. Readers will think that it’s best if she does as Sunny says, but how can her sacrifice at the Pit be the best decision? On the other hand, Ayda already displays tattoos that identify her as a witch. So doesn’t it make sense that she should go to the Witch Marsh, where she’ll be accepted by witches just like herself?

What didn’t work as well:

Ayda and Dara form a bond as events evolve, but it’s unexpected and a little confusing. Dara spits threats and demonstrates how witches inflict pain, but Ayda still feels a need to protect her. Ayda seems to care more for Dara than the witch feels for her.

The final verdict:

The story presents many twists and turns, so young readers may be frequently surprised. A case can be made that the book is a metaphorical look at God and the Devil. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Cassette Tape Secret by Danielle Herzog

What worked:

Alex and Ida May form an unusual, contrasting pair of characters. Alex likes everything neat and orderly, and he always follows the rules. His obsession with sterilizing surfaces he might touch makes him an easy target for middle-school classmates. Readers’ introduction to Ida May arises when she confronts the school bully and makes him back down. Alex immediately knows she’s not someone to mess with, so he’s stunned and leery when she asks a teacher to put them in the same group. She asks him to fix her cassette player, but Alex resists, saying those are not the directions for the activity. Alex’s therapist wants him to try new things, so readers know that Alex should prepare for uncomfortable challenges ahead.

Alex’s battle with OCD is more compelling than solving the cassette tape mystery. He’s embarrassed to be around other people, and he’s well aware of his strange habits. He must do things in fours (turning doorknobs, etc.), and he sterilizes anything he needs to touch. Don’t expect him to sit in a chair that can’t be wiped down first. His therapist’s weekly challenges force him out of his comfort zone, and Ida May’s constant support gives him a needed push. Alex describes his anxiety as a combination of nervousness and fear, and the author does an excellent job of describing the physical and mental pressure he endures.

Ida May has her own issues, since her mother didn’t make the move with the family. Ida May often tells Alex her mom will be coming soon, but something comes up to keep that from happening. Ida May’s anguish is evident, and she quickly hides her feelings when tears start to form. Alex is aware of his “friend’s” pain and offers supportive words of “that sucks.” Alex doesn’t know if Ida May is his friend, because he’s never cared about anyone else like this before. What does friendship feel like? Ida May and Alex are good for each other, and their characters transform as they investigate the cassette tape.

What didn’t work as well:

The message on the tape may not create the anticipated suspense, since readers don’t know when it was recorded. It seems like years ago, which doesn’t make the message feel urgent. The characters treat it more as a curiosity than a mystery that must be solved.

The final verdict:

This mystery focuses more on emotions and feelings, as Alex must learn to handle new situations. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Building 903 by Lois Lowry

What worked:

The author is a master of writing dystopian novels for middle-grade readers. In this setting, the government controls everything, and citizens are afraid to say anything against the president. He has ruled for decades, and no one opposes him during elections. Animals have been eliminated from the planet, and Tessa’s pet “dog” is robotic. No religions are allowed, so the characters don’t know the meanings of prayers or the bible. All books have been banned because they spread dangerous ideas. Anyhow, fiction books are untrue, so why would anyone want to read about lies? Possessing books is against the law, and their presence in Tessa’s house creates drama.

Tessa was born a twin, but her brother Theo isn’t around anymore. Readers will wonder what’s happened to him, and investigators don’t know why he went missing. The government doesn’t like leaving Theo’s disappearance unsolved, so they’ve erased all records that he ever existed. The family doesn’t speak about him, but Tessa constantly keeps his memory in her thoughts. However, passages from Theo’s point of view pop up in the narrative, so readers know he still exists somewhere. The first passages describe him on a sailing ship, but readers will be puzzled by this new information. What happened to Theo, and what does their former neighbor know about it?

What didn’t work as well:

The book is mostly dystopian science fiction, but the absence of Theo inexplicably shifts it into the genre of speculative fiction. Tessa’s father tries to explain Theo’s disappearance, and it makes scientific sense up to a point. The moment Theo vanishes takes the story into speculative fiction because it lacks a logical, scientific basis.

The final verdict:

It’s always fun to see how authors foresee possible futures for the world, and this book takes current societal issues and makes them obsolete. It will have readers comparing and contrasting their lives with events in the story. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot!

Joey the Good by Erin Fry

What worked:

The story deals with death and grief, as Joey still struggles with the loss of his grandfather two years earlier. The author hints at the cause of Nonno’s death, and Joey feels guilt for having caused it. Joey loved Nonno more than anyone, and the first-person narrative shares Joey’s constant memories. Joey won’t talk about Nonno’s death, and he’s angered when others ask about his feelings. Joey and Leo were there when Nonno died at the lake cabin, so Leo’s presence this summer magnifies painful thoughts. Joey’s battle with his emotions is a major internal conflict.

Leo’s presence reminds Joey of that fateful day, and Leo often tells Joey that Nonno had wanted them to hike together. The comments add to Joey’s guilt and stir up difficult feelings. The relationship between Joey and Leo is the main focus of the plot, as Joey struggles to adapt. Joey’s lazy routine is disrupted, and he whines about the frequent early morning hikes. Leo is super personable and looks like he’s in excellent physical shape, and Joey is neither of those things. Initially, Joey doesn’t know about Leo’s MS diagnosis, so he doesn’t understand why Leo wants to hike with him. How can Joey the Good keep up with Leo the Great? How will they climb Mt. McKinley when Leo’s condition is worsening, and Joey is a long way from being a competent hiker? It takes Joey a while to consider that they might need each other.

Joey’s relationship with other characters his own age is important in the story. He has a crush on a classmate named Desiree, but Joey’s poor self-image keeps him from seeing that she likes hanging out with him. Joey and Leo join a hiking group to help with their training, and a girl named Maya gravitates to the back of the group with Leo. She’s not warm and fuzzy, but they still learn to get along. Dante follows right behind Joey on their hikes, but Dante doesn’t ever say a single word. Joey doesn’t pay him much attention, but his Nonna says that people who don’t talk may have the most to say. Maybe Joey needs to listen harder.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may want to know more about some of the minor characters, since they influence Joey’s life, specifically Desiree, Maya, and Dante. Dante is especially curious. The story shares a little about the silent Dante’s home life, but the information still generates more questions.

The final verdict:

This book tells an emotional story as Leo and Joey deal with the MS diagnosis. Misunderstandings, along with family and friend issues, complicate the story and stir up mixed feelings. I recommend you try this book for yourself. 

Into the Shadows (Anomalies 53) by Angela Cervantes

What worked:

The mixed bag of supernatural creatures will amuse young readers. The prologue describes a newly caught wyvern that can mentally communicate with the main characters, Ollie and Gerin. Their parents study elves, goblins, and other creatures, and Ollie’s father has made discoveries that help the world. He’s currently working on the severe lightning storms worsening outside. A golem named Henry has been granted freedom to roam the facility in exchange for assisting Anomalies 53’s security. A manticore cub arrives and causes a major disruption, sending the plot in an unexpected direction. Most of the story happens outside Area 53 after the anomalies escape. Ollie and Gerin are sucked through a portal and end up in the Shadowlands. All anomalies live safely there, but readers learn that problems happening around Area 53 are connected to problems in the Shadowlands.

Gerin and Ollie are best friends, but that may be because they’re the only kids. Gerin is two years older and enjoys challenging Ollie to tasks that he can never win. She’s starting to display heightened physical skills and even beat a mermaid’s swimming record. Ollie is most confused about her ability to pass through all of the facility’s security measures. Passcodes are changed every six hours, but somehow, she still knows how to open locked doors. He also notices something strange about her freckles, and readers will eventually learn the truth about what’s happening, or has already happened.

What didn’t work as well:

There’s not much character development, but that’s to be expected in fast-paced plots. Readers may wonder what the rest of the world is doing while the lightning storms are raging. Readers learn these tempests may destroy the planet, so it’s reasonable to wonder what else is happening.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to a wide range of middle-grade readers, especially those readers interested in mythical creatures. The story moves quickly, and the author saves surprises as it nears the climax. I recommend you give it a shot.

Race for Midgard: The Marleau Twins 1 by Maya Y. Lefèvre

What worked:

The book opens with a quest adventure for Kate, Jack, and Stefan. These three characters have grown up together, and they pass through a portal into another world. The king gives them the option of rescuing his daughter or spending time in the dungeons, so the friends opt to rescue the princess. Stephen, Jack, and Kate are taught battle skills before they are ready to embark on their quest. The journey takes them through forests and over a mountain before arriving at the castle that’s holding the princess. Readers will enjoy the fight scenes with guards and mythical creatures, but they’ll be surprised by what the characters discover when they reach the princess. It turns out that her rescue is merely the introduction to the actual conflict.

The book is divided into three parts, each with a complete plot. The first part is summarized above, and its resolution leads into the next story. The Marleau twins and Kate must find a way to unseat a mysterious, cloaked man who’s claimed the title of king. This conflict will lead the kids across the world and into other moments in time. Stefan and Jack also learn that one of them will become the next guardian of Migard. The Norse gods will force them into a contest against each other, the winner becoming the guardian and the loser being forgotten. This story is part of the book’s third part, along with their efforts to return Princess Annabeth to the throne.

Kate is a very interesting character, and it sometimes seems she should be highlighted equally with the Marleau twins. She becomes accomplished with the bow and arrows, and she’s the first to act when the king is poisoned. Kate is separated from the others in the book’s second section, and she’s featured in this critical part of the group’s plans. Readers learn that common folk can’t see portals leading to other realms, and they’re only visible “in the presence of people with significant ties to the nine worlds.” The twins are connected through their father’s bloodline, but why is Kate able to activate the first portal? What is her connection to the realms?

What didn’t work as well:

The story skips the yearlong training to become warriors, which leaves readers feeling like they’ve missed quite a bit. In one chapter, the characters are normal teens with no fighting talents, and in the next chapter, they’re experts with the sword, spear, and bow. Some parts of the story abruptly change settings, while other parts are double-spaced or are formally separated.

The final verdict:

The plot can be enjoyed by all upper middle-grade readers, although the main characters are 15-16 years old. There’s a good deal of adventure and action, and the epilogue introduces an interesting twist for the sequel. I recommend young readers give this book a shot!

Airrelle of the Maroon Witches by Sumayyah Beck

What worked:

Obviously, identifying witches in the title means there will be magic, and the author adds new twists. The witches live in hidden settlements around the world, and the setting for this story is Missen Dessalin. The witches work together to create an invisible shield that conceals the settlement. Airrelle must collect four patrons; her first is a crane, to become a full witch. Patrons select their witches and offer advice and assistance. Witches are expected to fly, so Airrelle’s first rite of passage is the soljourney. Witties, witches in training, must survive in the wild in their astral forms until they learn how to fly. Airrelle is most excited about the prospect of flying, so she can travel beyond the barrier and into the Overside.

The story includes subtle commentary about the real world. Airrelle’s first venture into Overside with her mother reveals many disturbing sights. They find perfectly good food tossed into the trash, even though hungry people are living on the streets. Cars pollute the air, and buildings replace nature. Airrelle’s mother says concrete is the most abundant substance in Overside. Related to this, the witches have a close connection to nature. Their patrons are plants or animals, and patrons are often attracted to the witches’ songs. Witches must show them respect, since nature decides who is worthy of help. Witches often thank elements of nature and appreciate the beauty and wonder. Young readers may develop admiration and gratitude for natural things they take for granted.

Rabiah is a character who brings mystery and uncertainty to the story. She’s from the Overside, but Airrelle wants her to train to become a witch at Missen Dessalin. She’s not a clear candidate, so there are mixed opinions about whether this is a good idea. A scry indicates she has the potential to become a powerful witch, but the settlement will have problems if her family searches for her. The weakening shield may allow Oversiders to see into the settlement. Airrelle agrees that Rabiah should be returned to Overside if she fails to pass her trials, with her memory erased. However, Airrelle is determined that Rabiah will succeed; what will she do if things don’t work out? It gets complicated.

What didn’t work as well:

Halfway into the book, it’s still unclear where the plot is headed. Several things are happening: the father is away and in trouble, there’s something wrong with the mother, and Airrelle is trying to get her maroon cloak and befriending a non-magical girl. Many readers prefer having a more focused objective in the plot.

The final verdict:

This book feels like it’s establishing the backstory for future books. There’s a focus on the world of Maroon Witches, along with some of their issues and problems. It’s a creative view of witchcraft that features many interesting characters. Overall, you check out this book and decide for yourself.

Girl of Lore by Melanie Dale

What worked:

Mina is the main character, and she has a variety of issues. Her psychiatrist says it’s unlikely that she’ll ever act on her thoughts of stabbing people, and her OCD is how her body maintains control. She doesn’t know how to get along with people, and she’s not sure why popular, pretty Jackie is still her friend. Mina needs Jackie’s support, but what does Mina have to offer? She hides her sketches of gory scenes, and visiting the graveyard is her favorite activity. Mina feels disturbed and confused when she “hears” a book telling her to “release me”.

Readers immediately know this will be a strange story when Mina dreams of possessing a body. The body is in a car that crashes into a sinkhole, while three shadowy figures watch from above. The next day, Mina learns that a car crashed into a sinkhole near her home. Coincidence? Animals seem to attack her, which is confusing when, later, she calms some dogs and a horse with her mind. Most people in London, Georgia, are skeptical about creatures of the night, but Mina sees evidence and hears stories that make her think something dangerous is going on. A woman wrote a book about local lore, but Mina later finds her dead, with bite marks on her neck. These events will interest readers interested in the paranormal.

The author uses a familiar point of view about vampires, making them easy to understand. These vampires don’t like sunlight and anything related to God. They can control the amount of blood they take, meaning victims can be killed or turned into vampires. Victims can be saved from turning if the vampire is killed before the victim dies. Vampires grow fangs and have heightened senses. An additional danger is added to this story when readers learn that something powerful is beginning to rise in London, and it is capable of killing all humans on earth.

What didn’t work as well:

Different sources indicate this book is for middle grade, but it’s for tweens and young adults. The characters are high school age, and the scary emotions generated by the author’s writing can get pretty intense. The book has a dark tone, especially when the topic of vampires arises.

The final verdict:

Again, this book is not for most middle-grade readers due to strong, dark emotions. However, the overall story is captivating, and I recommend that mature readers try it for themselves. It looks like a sequel will follow.

Where There Be Spies (The Outersphere Series Book 2) by Alby C. Williams

What worked:

Middle-grade readers will feel a sense of familiarity as Glory and Marcus find themselves mixed up in a major problem once again. Paxton was the main antagonist in the first book, and she’s still roaming behind the scenes in this book. Glory is certain she’s up to something, and she’s certain Paxton must be responsible for missing charts. However, many students assume Glory was involved in the theft because she was the last person seen holding it. In addition, the school chancellor is missing, and Glory is certain the two incidents are not a coincidence. The characters and readers will suspect that someone at the school is still helping Paxton. Readers will recognize magic being used, but the characters don’t run around casting spells. The magic comes from potions and objects, with different materials attracting, repelling, or remaining neutral toward it.

Glory experiences social and emotional problems that will be relatable to young readers. She’s annoyed and angered by her classmates’ whispered comments accusing her of being responsible for the missing charts. She’s also aware of her mazy head, which means her mind can become overactive and go on tangents. She thinks everyone else knows she’s mazy-headed, and they think that makes her stupid and strange. These concerns are compounded by the fact that her mother is a famous spherinaut. On the one hand, Glory is proud of her mom but feels pressure living up to expectations. On the other hand, Glory fears that teachers and students treat her differently because of her famous mother. She feels angst after being assigned to the first-year dorms, even though she’s older than all of them.

A large part of the plot involves non-humans. There are two types of monsters, feral monsters and monsterfolk, but some people don’t view them differently. The feral monsters are wild and dangerous, so they are feared. The school and community have frequent monster sirens going off, sending frightened humans scurrying for safe places. These alarms may remind readers of tornado warnings. Monsterfolk are sentient creatures and are just as intelligent and eloquent as humans. This is the first time monsterfolk have been allowed to attend the school, and many students and citizens don’t like it. Glory’s roommate detests the monsterfolk, but Glory becomes good friends with the goat girl in the room next door.

What didn’t work as well:

The opening of each chapter includes numbers and words that describe location and time. However, it’s not clear how this information applies to what’s happening in the story.

The final verdict:

Readers should probably start with the first book, since prior events and characters are frequently mentioned. Glory is a likeable character, as she always wants to do the right thing, and she trusts others. Perhaps too much. I recommend you give this book a shot!