I Know What UFO Did Last Summer (Alien Survival Guide 1) by Kevin Garone

What worked:

Having Marv tell the story is interesting because he’s convinced an alien invasion is imminent. In most books, characters who believe in conspiracies have minor roles while this book makes Marv the main focus. He calls himself Gold Leader, his best friend Jace is Baller One, and his new girl neighbor Nora is named Space Cadet. Marv lets an alien-invasion guidebook control his life and the book opens with an observation mission/campout atop an abandoned fire ranger tower. It’s strange to be inside Marv’s mind when he expects anything unusual to be a sign of an alien invasion. His wacky interpretations of everyday sights and events add amusement to the story. He’s frustrated when others don’t agree with his conclusions but he’s equally unwilling to consider he might be wrong.

Each chapter opens with an excerpt from How to Survive an Alien Invasion: Your Guidebook to an Inevitable Future. These lines are related to the events in their chapters without sounding overly serious. They cover how aliens might infiltrate society, the importance of monitoring the skies, what to do if you’re being chased by an alien, and the reluctance of the public and authorities to take action after you report a sighting. Don’t run into the streets yelling, “They’re here!” These excerpts offer consistency and cohesion to the overall story and temporary pauses in the non-stop action.

About a third of the way into the book, the plot takes a twist in whole new direction. Nora’s just moved to the area with her father and Marv finds all his electronic equipment suspicious. Nora’s the first one to notice a flashing light in the forest which leads Marv, Jace, and Nora to discover a large, cylindrical “spaceship” with an “alien” dressed in black suit wearing a helmet. Further snooping reveals Nora’s father is connected to this site and he’s keeping secret from his daughter. Then, Marv notices a red pickup truck slowly cruising the streets and wonders if it’s part of the alien sighting. He confronts the man and woman in the truck and is relieved to see their Department of Homeland Security badges. However, this moment is when the story heads in a new, unexpected direction.

What didn’t work as well:

There’s little character development as the story immediately jumps into Marv’s campout. Readers don’t know what made him so obsessed with the alien invasion that’s consumed his life. Amazingly, his character continues to speak of an alien invasion even after the plot takes its dramatic turn.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to science fiction lovers who don’t mind a story that’s not overly serious (even though several characters perish). The second half of the book requires Marv and his friends to stop a potential threat to world peace. Overall, it’s a fun book and the resolution leaves readers with an unresolved question.

Abeni and the Kingdom of Gold by P. Djeli Clark

What worked:

The book builds anticipation from the first page by introducing the Witch Priest’s daughter, Fulan. She’s summoned to her father’s underground throne room surrounded by heat, fire, and molten rock. The Witch Priest displays his ruthlessness by torturing a follower who failed a mission. Fulan is detained on her way there by a huge, muscular creature. The author shows off her viciousness as she quickly dispatches him and cuts the topknot from his head as a trophy. The Witch Priest orders Fulan, and a terrifying hunter, to track down Asha and bring her back to his throne. Fulan has flickering memories but readers can’t predict how they might affect her. Abeni is protecting Asha from the Witch Priest so readers will anxiously expect a future confrontation with Fulan.

The author creates a cast of characters with a variety of personalities, including one antagonist. Abeni plays the role of peacekeeper for her group, especially when Ama, princess of the Gold Kingdom, joins the story. Ama has a superior air of royalty but the other characters are chafed when she tries to order them around. Zaneeya is a spirit who transforms between a young girl and a panther and she’s more vocal about her irritation than the others. Zaneeya faces her problems head-on and often wants to resolve them with violence. Nyomi is a timid, porcupine spirit girl who loves to eat and has no problem munching on grubs, worms, and bugs she digs up in the dirt.

The author artfully creates a wide range of emotions as the plot’s suspense grows. Zaneeya and Nyomi add levity through starkly different means. Nyomi disappears at the first signs of violence while Zaneeya enjoys antagonizing others, especially Ama. Ama is torn between her role as princess and the despicable deeds her people have inflicted on others. She’s even more confused and upset when she learns the history she’s known all her life is wrong. The presence of the Witch Priest and Fulan invokes feelings of danger and malevolence which only grow as their influence spreads throughout the lands. Asha always projects feelings of calm when she speaks and shares words of knowledge and reason.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers who haven’t read the first book may be puzzled about the references to Abeni’s past deeds.  She leads her group of friends and can wield a staff with skill during battle but she doesn’t seem to possess any special abilities. Fulan calls her a sorceress but Abeni’s greatest powers seem to come from kindness, leadership, and a determination to do what’s right. The author reveals more about Abeni’s powers at the end of the book.

The final verdict:

This book can be enjoyed by itself but I suggest you read the prior one first. The story contains non-stop adventure and Abeni’s group offers a variety of curious characters. Abeni and Fulan go through huge changes and Ama must change too. I recommend you give this book a shot.

What Fell From the Sky by Adrianna Cuevas

What worked:

The book includes elements of historical fiction as it’s set in 1952 Texas. The Korean War is going on and Communism is a major threat to the United States and democracy. The Cold War is brewing and the book opens with Pineda’s class under their desks, practicing a nuclear bomb drill. Pineda’s father and most of the men in Soledad served in World War II so a feeling of patriotism is strong. An army corporal knows white soldiers don’t like taking orders from him since he’s black. People don’t have a high tolerance for things that are different so Pineda doesn’t feel fully accepted due to his half-Cuban heritage. Interestingly, the Author’s Note at the end of the book says the military exercise that’s so important to the plot actually happened in Texas.

The author has the alien, Luisa, resemble humans to make her more relatable to young readers. She has one head, two legs, two arms, and white hair but there are differences beyond that. Close observation will show she has two pupils in each eye and two eyelids covering them. Her six toes on each foot can be covered by shoes but her light gray skin is harder to hide. She doesn’t understand human languages but she seems to be a quick learner. Luisa’s parents explore life on different planets so she’s used to encountering other life forms. Body language and tone of voice help her grasp emotions but she doesn’t understand why some people hate others because of skin color.

The chapters alternate between Pineda and Luisa as they share contrasting points of view. Pineda’s protective side kicks in as he makes it his responsibility to keep Luisas safe. He can identify with Luisa feeling different from white people and his chapters include subtle, and some blatant, insults he hears from other citizens. Luisa’s chapters share her confusion and fear as she tries to make sense of the world. Some moments are highlighted by single letters like B is for barn, H is for headache, or C is for confused. The author changes the chapter pattern late in the book as she features several other characters. This variation shows how the town finally begins to work together although the community fair at the end demonstrates they still have a way to go.

What didn’t work as well:

Luisa’s chapters are told as though readers are in her mind but the narrative is written in perfect English. It’s confusing when her mind says she doesn’t understand what’s happening or what is said yet the narrative clearly explains those very ideas. One chapter about her is very short and basic and it better displays how her mind might be working.

The final verdict:

This seems to be a simple, innocent story of an alien on Earth but readers will discover it has heart. Pineda and his friends are determined to help Luisa even though she’s different and only wants to go home with her parents. Young readers will enjoy the innocent alien and the pranks unleashed to help her escape. I recommend you give this book a shot.

Wicked Never Waits (The School for Wicked Witches 2) by Will Taylor

What worked:

This book has a different feel from the first book due to Ava’s wishy-washy decisions. She ran away from the Swickwit and the School for Wicked Witches last time but this book opens with her trying to return. She’s still accompanied by Crow, an underperforming student, and Henry, a giant who shrank to human size from a curse. They’re welcomed back by the headmaster but there are consequences for running away last month. Ava feels overwhelmed from trying to catch up on lessons she’s missed but the punishment is taking up all of the time she might have to study. She thinks it isn’t fair but rule breakers don’t get to complain about the penalties they must pay. Ava is back at the academy but doesn’t have the same feeling.

Vivienne Morderay is the villain as she tries to become the most powerful, evil witch ever. Tinabella, Ava’s roommate, has the same goal so she idolizes Vivienne. Vivienne wants revenge against the school’s headmaster but she can’t penetrate its protective wards. Readers were introduced to her character in the first book when Ava made a deal to free a gargoyle. However, Vivienne always plans ahead and figuratively plants seeds through Ava to attack the school. She hopes to get her hands on a book in the school library that may be just what she needs to make her powers unbeatable.

Ava, Henry, Crow, and Tinabella must work together to save the school. Warden Pike and the other teachers guarding the school are trapped by Vivienne and will soon die if she doesn’t receive the magic book. Ava and her friends must use their individual talents to venture into unexplored areas of the school where they’ll new, quirky characters. They must solve cryptic clues to find the elusive book. Readers will wonder about Tinabella since she seems to have mixed motives. Help her friends save the school or impress her idol, Vivienne Morderay?

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may want to see Crow and Henry play a bigger role especially since little was known about Crow in the first book. He’s finally discovered his magic so it would be nice to see it incorporated more. The book also makes references to the land of Oz so readers might be searching for more from that story.

The final verdict:

This book shares a fun twist on what it means to be a wicked witch. Ava and her friends won’t be able to overpower Vivienne’s magic so they must use their teamwork and wits. You can still enjoy this book without reading the first one and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Guardian's Quest (The Magic Paintbrush 2) by Kat Zhang and Eric Darnell

What worked:

The previous book introduces readers to Amy and the magic jade paintbrush and this book provides enough information to get the gist of the backstory. Amy’s grandmother was the previous guardian of the magic paintbrush and Amy’s still learning how to take her place. Amy unexpectedly creates a portal to a fantasy world where she encounters an old woman living inside a cage. Minli says the paintbrush’s power must be recharged every 500 years so Amy accepts a quest that will create the magic. Readers will be leery to believe Minli’s story and it’s puzzling when her cat shows up later to help Amy and her two friends. The cat gets annoyed when Amy asks for help but he gets irked anyway when she acts like she doesn’t need it. Its surly attitude and questionable actions make readers wonder if the cat is a friend or a foe in disguise.

Luna is a humorous character and his impulsiveness is sometimes surprisingly helpful. He has the body of a tiger and the wings of a bird, although tiger claws aren’t great for holding things. He has the enthusiasm of a little kid but is fiercely protective of Amy. That might be because he’s only existed since Amy created him in the first book. His ability to fly makes him an excellent scout and his sense of smell makes him immediately suspicious of Minli and Cat. Many young readers like to see animals in books so they’ll be overjoyed with this large, cute, energetic creature. The bummer is when Luna disappears and is absent from the story.

The quest seems straightforward without any complications but of course, that’s not the way things go. Minli gives Amy a time limit for the quest which adds an unspoken countdown clock as the plot progresses. Characters can magically change their appearances so readers should always question the motives of anyone Amy meets. Is generosity coming from a kind heart or is it bait for a trap? The quest tasks seem simple enough, such as collecting sap from a specific tree, but surprises await Amy at every stop. The cat begins to regain some of its lost memories and shares tidbits of information making her question the whole mission. Amy envisions praise from her grandmother and Minli after she collects the ingredients to recharge the paintbrush but what if her efforts create a more terrible problem?

What didn’t work as well:

The characters can be developed more as we know little about Amy other than being the guardian of the magic paintbrush. Also, Luna’s disappearance leaves a big void in the story. His bold personality creates a presence in the story and readers will miss him when he’s not there.

The final verdict:

The plot is fast-paced with plenty of action that will appeal to young readers. The magical world leads to a wide range of characters that will keep readers guessing. The conflict’s resolution is predictable although events during the quest offer surprises. Overall, this book offers an imaginative story and I recommend you give it a shot.

Chronicles of Whetherwhy: The Age of Enchantment by Anna James

What worked:

The characters of Whetherwhy fall into different magical focuses related to the “five” seasons. Children of age go through a ceremony to identify the season guiding their futures. Spring is the season of creation, summer is for revelation, autumn is the power of transformation, and winter is to soothe and calm. An exception is the citizens who can use powers from all the seasons and become enchanters. Juniper is the main character when she’s identified as an enchanter and is sent to Thistledown Academy for her schooling. Readers will join her as she learns to control her powers. A unique aspect of these abilities is the enchanters weave strands of magic from different seasons to create spells. Think of it like sewing together the ingredients of a recipe.

The plot is fairly uneventful until Juniper’s trip to Thistledown offers readers a taste of what’s to come. She doesn’t understand how a horse-drawn carriage can complete a two-day trip before school starts tomorrow morning. The driver, Nimbus, picks up two more beginning students including Zinnia, a pompous rich girl, who readers will notice flaunts her superior attitude throughout the story. At an inn, the children encounter several threatening men and something unexplainable happens to Juniper. Juniper’s twin brother Rafferty reenters the book about a third of the way in when he takes an apprenticeship to be nearer his sister. He meets Jessy, another apprentice, and readers will immediately sense the mystery she brings to the book when she tells Rafferty, “Keep your wits about you.” This subplot creates the plot’s conflict and merges with Juniper’s story in the end.

The author creates intrigue through cryptic descriptions. Juniper’s strange experience at the inn has never been seen before and it delays her learning at Thistledown. She’s unable to summon her magic like the other students but she’s assured her powers will come back shortly. Juniper wonders if that’s true. The queen has been hiring more enchanters than expected but there’s little evidence of what they’re doing for her. A secret society is meeting at the bindery where Rafferty works and he learns there’s a connection to the death of Jessy’s parents. This group presents a mystery that Rafferty and Jessy will need to solve.

What didn’t work as well:

The story shifts between Juniper and Rafferty with each shift going on for several chapters. The downside is it breaks the flow of each plot and requires remembering what happened before rejoining each one. However, these separate subplots are necessary as there are two distinct stories and settings to be covered.

The final verdict:

This is a fun, suspenseful adventure of young characters learning to use seasonal magic. Many books have characters with new powers become superior to others but Juniper merely displays a special aptitude for her ability. It makes her more humble and relatable. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Song of Orphan's Garden by Nicole M. Hewitt

What worked:

A middle-grade novel in verse, especially one with over 350 pages, is uncommon but this one tells an engaging story. The king of the giants is a ruthless man and he’s learned to control the Winter Spirits. He views Humans almost as parasites and he’ll be happy if they all die in the winter wastelands. His cruelty is on display when he punishes one of his soldiers for not killing a group of Humans and letting them get away. A twelve-year-old Giant boy named Brob watches his father face the king’s wrath and is shocked when his family is exiled into the land of the Winter Spirits. At least the king didn’t have them all executed but that may have been a kinder fate than the slow, painful death that awaits.

The story is mostly told from the perspectives of Brob and a Human girl named Lyriana. Lyriana and her little brother Zave have lost their mother so they’re struggling to survive the Winter Spirits, hoping to reach the rumored Orphan’s Garden. Lyriana is a very rare Storysummoner and she can use her mother’s ocarina to play magical tunes. She can summon Fermata from the ground which can be used to combat the Winter Spirits. However, the song takes something from the Storysummoner, and Lyriana’s mother died from giving too much. Only a rare Giant called a Greensgrower can convert the Fermata into something useful and guess which Giant can do it? Brob created the Orphan’s Garden at the age of six and its song is now guiding him back to the sanctuary. The Garden understands the symbiotic relationship between Humans and Giants but will Brob learn it in time?

An advantage to writing in verse is the author can emphasize certain thoughts and emotions to manipulate words and language and create more meaningful descriptions. “Searing, ice-cold pain – ripping through – my chest with each breath” describes Lyriana’s suffering while journeying to the Orphan’s Garden. When Brob discovers Humans in his garden… “My head shouts MINE! – My heart howls MINE! – ‘THIS PLACE IS MINE!’ I roar.” The author even shares thoughts of a wall built around the garden. “I make no judgments – just silently watch the – clash of Giants and Humans – and the rise of the Winter Spirits – who threaten to rip you all apart. – If you don’t manage to do it yourselves.”

What didn’t work as well:

A full book of this length in verse won’t appeal to every middle-grade reader. It’s written in free verse as there’s no rhyming pattern or stanzas of the same length. This style works better since rhymes and patterns might make the book feel monotonous.

The final verdict:

I’m not typically a fan of books in verse but this one tells a heartfelt, gripping tale of discord and harmony. The author skillfully crafts the words that elicit a myriad of emotions. Overall, it’s a spellbinding story and I recommend you give it a shot.

Sona and the Golden Beasts by Rajani LaRocca

This book is a finalist for a 2024 Cybils Book Award in Elementary/Middle-Grade Speculative Fiction.

What worked:

The story is set in a world of prejudice after the Malech armies invaded and took over Devia. It’s reminiscent of real-world countries, including the United States, that have invaded countries and native lands to claim abundant resources.  Skin color has often identified racial groups throughout history and ear color in this book distinguishes the oppressed Devans from the greedy, ruthless Malechs. Readers can sympathize with the plight of the Devans as they’re over-taxed, overworked, and victims of unfair laws. The Malechs hoard the bountiful precious gems found in Devia and they take whatever they want. Devans have few rights and they’re treated as lesser people.

Early in the book, Sona learns she is the daughter of a Malech father and a Devan mother. Her father kept this secret because society looks down on mixed-race children. Neither the Malechs nor the Devan will accept them so Sona must never tell anyone else about her parentage. She travels with a boy named Raag across the lands to find a remedy for her grandmother. Sona meets a Malech Hunter who’s trying to kill all five of the sacred Devan beasts and she fears for the safety of a gold-eared cub she’s nursing back to health. She also starts to hear stories of a sixth sacred beast that will save them all but no one knows what kind of creature it might be. The mystery of this sixth sacred beast and the looming danger of the Hunter will keep readers captivated.

Sona has a special connection to animals that confuses Raag. She nurses a horse back to health and sings and talks to him as if the horse understands. She hears music of the animals and can sense when Goldstorms are approaching. Raag’s never met anyone who survived being caught outside in a Goldstorm for as long as Sona did. Sona’s love, kindness, and willingness to forgive are her greatest attributes and she’s rewarded in the end. It’s nice to see such a positive character receive positive results for her efforts. Sona’s optimistic outlook is challenged as the plot nears its climax but her character stays true to what’s important.

What didn’t work as well:

Between each chapter, the author presents letters, articles, and song lyrics that have relevance to what’s happening in the plot. Some writings are dated at various times, some recent and some years in the past, and come from different sources. Readers must consider the source, time, and relevance of each writing before they continue the story. These inserts aren’t a big problem but some don’t add to the story and could be omitted.

The final verdict:

Sona’s endearing character and her love for all living creatures guide this touching story. The Hunter, Malechs, and Goldstorms present constant obstacles on her quest but her kind heart overcomes them all. I highly recommend you give this book a shot.

Max in the House of Spies by Adam Gidwitz

This book is a finalist for a 2024 Cybils Book Award in Elementary/Middle-Grade Speculative Fiction.

What worked:

The author weaves information about World War II into the plot as Max’s parents send him away from Germany in 1940. The story chronicles the Nazi’s mistreatment of Jews and rumors of death camps in Germany. Russia is allied with Germany and has its own concentration camps for Jews. Readers may not be aware that many countries weren’t accepting Jewish refugees including the United States. England won’t take Jewish adults fleeing Germany but their children are allowed to enter. Max ends up living with a wealthy family in London although he’s not happy being away from his parents. News articles are written about Germany taking over several European countries before it began dropping bombs into civilian areas of London.

Max is a clever, resourceful eleven-year-old and he’s learned to think three or four steps ahead of everyone else. He uses his wits to help his younger foster brother deal with bullies and he gets revenge against a cruel teacher. Max has a special talent for working with radios and it comes in handy when adjusting to life in his foster home. He modifies his radio to pick up stations he used to hear back in Berlin. He fiddles with car radios to become pseudo-bugging devices to further his cunning plans. Readers will feel Max’s frustrations and longing to be reunited with his parents but they’ll marvel at his ingenious schemes. He uses all his mental resources to graduate from his one-month spy training.

This book is speculative fiction due the kobold and dybbuk, named Stein and Berg, sitting on each of Max’s shoulders. These small invisible creatures have been around since the start of time and they’re normally mischief makers. They’re not sure how to deal with Max but they offer advice, ridicule, or bewilderment depending on what he’s done. They often don’t understand Max’s actions but other times they support him with their disruptive antics. The kobold and dybbuk always provide humor for young readers.

What didn’t work as well:

Some young readers may want more from the resolution as the book ends at a dramatic moment. However, the sequel picks up where this book leaves off and has an equally wonderful story.

The final verdict:

The book tells a gripping story as Max is the only young person in a cast of adults. The inclusion of information about WW II provides a historical context. Max has learned to survive the persecution of Jews in Nazi Germany and he uses those lessons and his creative thinking to become a spy for the British army. Overall, this book is worthy of being a Cybils finalist and I recommend you give it a shot.

Benji Zeb Is a Ravenous Werewolf by Deke Moulton

This book is a finalist for a 2024 Cybils Book Award in Elementary/Middle-Grade Speculative Fiction.

What worked:

Benji narrates the story which allows readers to become immersed in his thoughts and emotions. He has overwhelming anxiety, especially around his family, and he fears he’ll lose control. He has trouble expressing himself to his family and the pressure causes him to escape situations. In school, Benji must keep his werewolf identity secret which adds to his stress. Then, Benji has a crush on a boy named Caleb and doesn’t know how to act around him. The pair were friends until the start of this school year and Benji doesn’t understand what happened. Benji keeps all of his anxiety inside and changing to his wolf form is the only time he feels free.

The story offers a whole new perspective on werewolves. Changing into a werewolf has nothing to do with full moons as they control when they transition. Benji can normally manage his changes although he fears his anxiety will eventually cause him to lose control. Another mistaken myth is that a werewolf bite will result in the victim becoming a werewolf. Werewolves are born from werewolf parents. Both mother and father must carry the werewolf trait even though the gene may be recessive. This means the parents may not display the signs of being werewolves even though they carry the DNA for it. Readers learn all of the nuances of being a werewolf when Benji is forced to teach the newly transformed Caleb about his new life.

A large conflict slowly emerges that will guide the plot and amp up the drama. Benji’s family owns and runs a wolf sanctuary but many of their neighbors raise cattle. Caleb’s stepfather is angry the sanctuary will receive proceeds from a local fair instead of the farmers. However, readers learn the anger goes beyond the fair. Caleb’s stepfather also hates Benji’s family because they’re Jewish and Caleb’s been taught negative, prejudicial ideas for years. The plot goes beyond the topic of werewolves as Benji educates Caleb about the traditions and history of Judaism.

What didn’t work as well:

Some parts of the book come across as more instructional than fictional narrative. Caleb doesn’t know about Benji’s family life or he’s been told incorrect information so Benji spends much of his time teaching Caleb about werewolves, wolves, and Judaism. Much of the story finds Benji translating Hebrew language or explaining why his family performs different traditions. The information could have been woven into the story more seamlessly.

The final verdict:

The creative take on werewolves is a highlight as it’s more of a culture choice than a curse. The abundant explanations of being werewolves and Jewish may not have universal appeal but the conflict with Caleb’s father adds drama to the plot. Overall, the book will make readers think and I recommend you give it a shot.

Accidental Demons by Clare Edge

This book is nominated for a 2024 Cybils Book Award in Elementary/Middle-Grade Speculative Fiction.

What worked:

The book’s title is a nice hook as readers will wonder how there can be accidental demons. The story is told through the eyes of Bertie, or Ber, and her diabetes is a major part of the story. As a diabetic, she must check her blood sugar levels throughout the day to make sure they’re not too high and not too low. Diabetes is a common disease but it doesn’t usually play a prominent role in stories. Many readers will relate to Ber as she tracks the carbohydrates she eats and is embarrassed when injecting insulin in front of classmates. A teacher even brings up how menstruation can throw Ber’s blood sugar out of whack. She already has the most powerful blood-magic since the great-great-grandmother she’s named after and her energy complicates the rash of accidental demons.

The most innovative aspect of this story is the Crowley family’s blood magic. Their spells summon demons to perform tasks ordered by the witches and the witches’ intentions must be clear. Ber’s conjuring spells summon demons to do simple things like carry messages, tidy rooms, and detangle her sister Maeve’s hair. She’s still at the basic level of magic but thinks she’s ready for intermediate magic like her sister. Maeve gets an idea to use magic to help monitor Ber’s diabetes and they ask their parents and grandmother for advice. Readers will probably predict that her sister’s helpful idea won’t go as planned.

A subplot develops regarding members of the magic community. Ber’s parents and grandmother are concerned about another coven of blood witches that’s now led by a young witch named Lindley. Lindley left her coven for a time but later returned to surprisingly take over as leader. Ber’s parents and grandmother wonder if she’s practicing dark magic. The blood witches also have a feud with weather witches and they don’t get along with mages either. Ber learns there’s a mind mage at her school and she’s shocked when she learns the identity. Ber eventually leads an unlikely team of characters to save her family and end a disturbing kind of magic. Her team includes a Mystery demon whose motivations and abilities are unknown so readers will anticipate the moment when these uncertainties are revealed.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may have mixed thoughts about the prominence of diabetes in the plot. It’s definitely interesting to see how the author includes it and many readers or family members are dealing with the disease. However, there are scenes in the book where Ber unexpectedly deals with her diabetes and it stands out more than it needs to. It affects the flow of the story but readers must remember the inclusion of diabetes is a key element of the plot.

The final verdict:

Readers dealing with diabetes will have a close connection to the story. The author offers a different take on magical characters and the Mystery demon provides uncertainty. Overall, it’s an outstanding book and I recommend you give it a shot.

Splinter & Ash 1 by Marieke Nijkamp

This book is nominated for a 2024 Cybils Book Award in Elementary/Middle-Grade Speculative Fiction.

What worked:

Ash and Splinter each face challenging expectations from the kingdom. Ash returns from six years of education in a small village to disgruntled and disrespectful comments from nobles and members of the court. They think she lacks the qualities of a princess, is an embarrassment, and is out of touch with how life among nobles should be. Her brother even says she should go away. Ash’s crippled walk only lowers their thoughts about her. Splinter dreams of becoming a squire, a knight, and a hero but prospects for girls are limited. Ash asks her to be her squire but Splinter’s teachers are skeptical of her abilities and the other squires tease and laugh at her. The queen is leery of accepting a female squire and Ash must use all of her persuasive talents to change her mother’s mind. Splinter knows everyone is against her success but she refuses to leave Ash’s side.

The author includes a couple of twists and turns, adding intrigue to the plot. Chapters alternate between Ash and Splinter and the first half of the book mostly describes their challenges adjusting to life in the castle. The country is being invaded from the north and there are fears some members of the queen’s court are disloyal. The queen asks her daughter to spy on a noble family suspected of traitorous activities. Ash’s kidnapping is unexpected but the reason behind it is shocking. Splinter’s rocky relationship with the other squires reaches a breaking point with dramatic consequences. She forms a highly improbable alliance with an enemy as they team up to rescue Ash.

Underlying the whole story is a growing unrest among the citizens and nobles. The nobles are disgruntled that the queen doesn’t favor them enough while the people living outside the capital city think she has turned her back on them. Ash’s time living away from the castle has given her an appreciation for the commoners and a lack of empathy for the entitled. She’s learned how to work with her hands and has interests that might not be considered suitable for a princess. Her difficulty walking has made her tough and she refuses to show any signs of being dependent on others. Young readers will admire her kind heart, loyalty, and determination.

What didn’t work as well:

The question of Splinter’s gender comes up throughout the book but the choice of pronouns used may confuse some readers. Splinter says she’s not a girl but she’s also not a boy. However, the story continues to use the pronouns she and her when talking about Splinter. Using those pronouns isn’t terrible but they may puzzle readers when Splinter tells other characters she’s not a girl.

The final verdict:

The author creates a captivating story of the friendship between Ash and Splinter but it morphs into an adventure to save the kingdom. Ash must learn to exist amid the politics surrounding the crown while Splinter battles prejudice from her fellow squires and citizens wanting to return to the old ways. Overall, the book is exciting and engaging and I highly recommend you give it a shot.

Kwame Crashes the Underworld by Craig Kofi Farmer

This book is nominated for a 2024 Cybils Book Award in Elementary/Middle-Grade Speculative Fiction.

What worked:

The plot takes an immediate right turn as Kwame reluctantly prepares for a family trip to Ghana to honor his recently deceased grandmother. The next thing readers know, he’s spending the night at his best friend Autumn’s house only to end up in the Ghanaian underworld. The underworld is called Asamando in the Ghanaian culture and the back of the book includes a glossary for other terms. Kwame’s adventure begins when he tries to retrieve the dashiki his grandmother made for him. His blood carries power from the deceased Asase Yaa, Ghana’s Goddess of the Earth, although Kwame repeatedly denies he's Ghanaian. Asase Yaa’s death, Kwame’s denial of his heritage, and characters  dealing with grief are major factors in the story’s plot.

The early chapters describe Kwame’s reluctance to accept his grandmother’s death. He’s in denial for a week and continues to struggle with his grief for much of the story. He begins to accept what’s happened when he encounters his grandmother in the underworld and remembers the wild stories she used to tell. Autumn accompanies him on the adventure and the author takes the time to address her hearing problems. She’s born able to hear but an illness takes away the ability. She has hearing aids but frequently communicates with Kwame using sign language. The author includes descriptions of hand motions used by Autumn and Kwame to communicate with each other.

Humor is a big part of the story and it comes in different forms. Interactions between Kwame and underworld characters lead to humorous misunderstandings and dialogue  A monkey-like, mythical creature called an aboatia initially creates the conflict for Kwame and it stops atop Autumn’s shoulders for most of the adventure. Woo has an insatiable curiosity and appetite and becomes a part-time protector when not causing mischief. Woo steals an akrafena, a magical sword, that mostly follows Kwame’s commands. The akrafena can fight on its own but Kwame quickly learns that it doesn’t always do exactly as it's instructed. A variety of mythical creatures become part of the plot, some friendly and some dangerous, including cows as big as eighteen-wheelers.

What didn’t work as well:

The book goes heavily into the Ghanaian culture which may not appeal to all. However, it’s not a big deal and shouldn’t stop young people from reading it.

The final verdict:

Kwame’s love for his grandmother is prevalent as he manages his grief after her death. The plot’s antagonists are also dealing with loss so grief management may connect with young readers. This book about Ghanaian culture offers a freshness to mythology stories and I highly recommend you give it a shot. 

Dead in the Water (Zombie Season 2) by Justin Weinberger

What worked:

Zombies have been attacking for years and humans have been forced to relocate to protected cities. They call themselves ZDPs, zombie displaced people, and are always on the lookout for zombie hordes. HumaniTeam is an international company that’s developed weapons to fight them off with water and cold seeming to stop zombies in their tracks. However, the Prologue describes a giant zombie rising from the ocean, and later, a zombie breaks free from glacier ice. It appears the zombies are now drawing strength and power from the weapons being used against them! Regina knows more of HumaniTeam’s secrets and one of them involves her “friend” Nix.

While zombies are the obvious danger, HumaniTeam is cast in the role of antagonist. They are more concerned about maintaining profits than the safety of humanity, which explains Regina’s determination to expose them. Sky Stone is the new CEO of the company and he comes across as a smooth-talking manipulator. He tells the public how his company is protecting humans and they’re on the brink of a major invention that may allow everyone to go back to normal lives. However, beyond public eyes, he threatens, bribes, and coerces anybody who might try to undermine HumaniTeam.

The subplots follow four main characters as they battle zombies in different ways. Regina is busy collecting evidence against HumaniTeam but keeping it secret from her parents, who both used to work for the company. Oliver wants to do all he can to save his hometown of Redwood but Regina gives him the task of becoming Nix’s guardian. Joule’s father is killed by zombies and she tries to locate and recruit other kids to join Regina’s team. Anton is coerced into helping Sky Stone which finds him on the same ship as Joule. These four subplots tackle the zombie problem from different angles and their separate stories begin to converge as the book nears its end.

What didn’t work as well:

The chapters jump around to follow different characters so the reader's attention is drawn to various subplots. This allows the author to cover a variety of topics and stories but it also means readers must recall details from several chapters in the past. It takes some time and mental effort to remember what’s happened when from earlier subplots.

The final verdict:

There are a lot of moving parts to the story that require readers’ attention. The author creates a dystopian-like world where stopping the zombies seems futile but hints that something more terrible may be rising. Overall, this book offers a new, innovative twist to zombies and I recommend you give it a shot.

Away by Megan E. Freeman

What worked:

The conflict is unclear early on so readers are left to wonder what’s happening. The characters are evacuated from different parts of Colorado due to an imminent threat. The National Guard, government, and news reports don’t share specific details so the characters are left to wonder. They don’t know if there’s been a nuclear accident, terrorist attack, or some other major incident. Characters, and readers, will create their own truths in the absence of facts. Guessing and speculation will keep readers mentally engaged as the plot slowly unfolds into an unbelievable mystery.

Teddy and Harmony are the easiest characters to follow as their narratives aren’t in verse. Teddy is obsessed with movies and decides to film the evacuation and life in the relocation camp. He plans to eventually make a documentary although he’s not sure if it will be about the evacuation or the unexplained reason for it. Teddy’s narratives are written as movie scripts and share his experiences with other characters. Harmony wants to become a reporter so her narratives are presented in two different formats. She writes articles for her school, and later a zine, and she pens letters to her aunt, an international reporter. Her articles inform readers about events in a more factual manner while her letters offer observations, questions, and other thoughts.

Everyone has his/her own story and the characters’ subplots are shared in different ways. Grandin’s story is told in verse and it infuses his emotions. He enjoys his life on a farm and he helps his father deliver a baby calf in the early entries. His story becomes more emotional when his father defies the mandatory evacuation and sneaks off before he can be taken away. Grandin and his mother are left wondering what’s happened to him. Ashanti’s mother is a doctor and sets up a clinic in the relocation camp. Ashanti also wants to become a doctor and she’s frustrated that ineffective schooling in the camp will keep her from getting into the best colleges. Her narrative is shared in verse too and includes the strong emotions she’s experiencing. Teddy is very smart and he’s angry about the poor schooling too although readers don’t discover his self-imposed pressure until later. Harmony’s experience as a reporter helps the group formulate a strategy to uncover the truth. Interestingly, Grandin is probably the quietest character but his rash decision changes the direction of the story.

What didn’t work as well:

The story format takes getting used to as it’s a blend of verse, news articles, movie scripts and storyboards, and news bulletins. The different forms of writing communicate information in different ways which is frustrating as the book opens. Readers try to make connections and get a sense of the text while trying to understand how the story has been written.

The final verdict:

Adjusting to the story’s unique format is worth it as the plot builds to a gripping climax. The young characters draw inspiration from “The Wizard of Oz” and the flying monkeys lead to an impactful resolution. An unbelievable conspiracy awaits and I recommend you give this book a shot!

The Origami Kid: A Paperfolding Adventure by Robert McGuire

What worked:

The author indicates his family shares two cultures and this story is a new version of a Japanese folktale, Momotaro (The Peach Boy). Origami is a Japanese art form and it becomes a central part of this book. The main character is Mike and he folds paper to make new friends or to make items that will help during his adventure. The author includes directions for the origami and there are even pieces of thin origami paper in the back. The early origami requires simple folds while the later ones are more detailed.

The colorful illustrations will catch the eyes of young readers as Mike travels through the jungle, sails across ocean water, and lands on an island. He encounters an oni (a demon or ogre from Japanese folklore) and isn’t sure what to do. The folded friends are added to the graphics as they become part of Mike’s team. The exception is Oni as readers must wait until the end to learn how to fold him.

What didn’t work as well:

While this book is considered middle-grade, the story itself probably won’t entertain middle-grade readers. It has a very plain format that’s appropriate for picture books. Middle-grade readers will most enjoy the origami.

The final verdict:

The reading level of the story is for young children but the instructions for paper folding are more appropriate for middle-grade readers. Older readers who enjoy origami will like this book but they will find the story lacking. The author summarizes the story of Momotaro at the end but I suggest reading the actual book and comparing it to The Origami Kid.

The Monster Hunter (Stitch Head 6) by Guy Bass

What worked:

Stitch Head is the mad professor’s first creation although the professor forgets about his “monsters” as soon as he makes them. Stitch Head is like the caretaker guardian of Castle Grotteskew as he sees to the welfare of all creations. As the first creation, he develops a potion to tame all the monstrous beasts Mad Professor Erasmus invents. There are now over three hundred creations in the castle who are the tamest, gentlest creatures you can find. Stitch Head has protected them, and the professor, from all kinds of dangers and challenges in previous books, and this one brings the series to a satisfying conclusion.

There are two main humans in this book who present contrasting characters. Arabelle has been part of the series since the beginning and has been looking for adventure all her life. Stitch Head offered her a home in the castle after her grandmother died so she’s been unwaveringly loyal to him ever since. However, she has a temper and threatens to kick anyone who makes her angry. Even the largest and most fierce-looking creations are terrified of being kicked by her big boots. Dotty Dauntless shares Arabelle’s love of adventure but she comes to Castle Grotteskew looking for a monster to capture. She’s determined and pushy so she often gets what she wants before anyone else knows what’s happening. She fills the role of antagonist when she targets Creature as the monster she’ll haul away. Creature has been a popular character throughout the books so faithful readers will become emotionally involved.

The chapters are very short which will appeal to young or reluctant readers. The abundant black-and-white illustrations enhance the story and help readers visualize the events and characters. The pictures have a Gothic feel which fits perfectly in a story about monsters. Every chapter begins with a quotation although they come from various sources this time. Of course, Mad Professor Erasmus is the author of many of them and they’re often zany. Some of the quotations come from Dotty’s diary and mostly share some of her background story. There are even some words this time from the Creations of Grotteskew.

What didn’t work as well:

There’s a level of silliness to the book that readers must accept. When the story opens, the creations are competing to see who can be the most monstrous, and a tiny, doll-like creation named Ivo wins. The professor’s attitude toward creations is “Why add an arm, when you can add three? And some tentacles and a tail.” This quotation gives you an idea of the mad professor's cast of characters.

The final verdict:

This book ends the charming adventure of Stitch Head, Arabella, and their creation friends. The plot is clear and dramatic and builds to an unexpected conclusion. Readers who enjoy friendly monsters with a bit of humor and suspense will love this book and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Midwatch Institute for Wayward Girls by Judith Rossell

What worked:

Maggie is anonymously left at an orphanage but the nuns send her to the Midwatch Institute due to her bad behavior. The cannery owner’s son was bullying some young kids so she pushed him off the wharf and into the bay. This shows how she’s willing to protect the weak from the strong. Midwatch has a reputation for taking in the worst kids but Maggie is shocked when she’s settled within its walls. Girls are taught useful skills for solving crimes and keeping the city safe although Maggie doesn’t understand exactly what that means. One surprise for readers might be that the institute has no bullies. Maggie and two other recruits are immediately accepted by other girls so they easily transition to the new setting. There is some banter between first-year and second-year girls but nothing malicious or mean.

Many chapters end with mini-lessons for some of those useful skills mentioned above. These pages add levity to the story even though some seem a bit strange. One of the lessons describes how to escape an alligator attack and another covers how to dance the Charleston. It's easier to see how learning to communicate with Morse Code and training animals might be useful in helping others. Maggie is surprised by her class schedule but readers will recognize the usefulness of the lessons. They include learning to speak German, read maps, and hide. Maneuvering around the institute tests her agility as it’s often like completing an obstacle course.

The plot’s conflict emerges as it nears the midpoint and it will make readers wonder. People have been disappearing around the city but no one is sure what’s causing it. There’s nothing supernatural about life at the institute so readers will suspect a person or gang must be responsible. However, news reports describe a large beast due to growls heard and scratch marks found at the locations. Eventually, a librarian reports a missing woman and the police direct him to the institute. Everyone is stumped by a note left by the woman until Nell, another new arrival and Maggie’s friend, realizes there’s a cry for help hidden within the words. This leads to Maggie and the other first-years becoming part of the search but things don’t work out as smoothly as they hope. The plot builds to an exciting climax above the city!

What didn’t work as well:

I’m not female but the premise of the story might bother some readers. The girls can move freely around town because no one expects anything from females, especially young ones. The man inspecting Midwatch thinks sewing is the best way to improve a young girl’s character so that’s what the teachers and girls show him when he visits. Nevertheless, the young, female characters at Midwatch prove to be brave, resourceful detectives.

The final verdict:

The book has similarities to another one called The School for Wicked Witches. The most interesting part of the story is Midwatch’s façade of a strict institute for wayward girls while it secretly trains them to keep the city safe. The absence of petty squabbles, jealousy, and malicious bullying is refreshing and the immediate comradery between characters is very enjoyable. Overall, this book will make readers feel positive and entertained and I recommend you give it a shot!

Grunthar's Revenge (The Outer Space Mystery Pizza Club 2) by Bruce Hale

What worked:

The story’s humor is perfect for lower-middle-grade readers. The two main alien characters are named Clorox and NoWay and they come from the planet Kroon. Clorox tends to interpret language literally and NoWay takes notes of wordplay they haven’t heard before. The human characters tell them to “Spill” the reason they’ve arrived on Earth but Clorox says they don’t have a drink to spill. Amazon indicates this book is for younger readers but they might not understand some of the word humor. A man tells the characters to “Beat it” and Clorox wants to know if they’re supposed to beat an egg or a rug.

The plot is easy to follow for younger readers and older, reluctant readers can finish it quickly. Grunthar is an alien inventor from Kroon and the characters are trying to figure out what he’s up to. Tina, her older brother Mateo, and their babysitter Jennica are the main human characters although they’re joined by a neighbor named Booker. Jennica might have a crush on NoWay. Tina wants to be the hero as she feels like Mateo gets all of the attention. Her favorite television show is about solving mysteries and she thinks she should be better at finding Grunthar. Grunthar’s motives are unclear but everything he’s doing involves pizzas.

What didn’t work as well:

More experienced readers might tire of the juvenile humor and expect more from the plot. While the story is humorous, it lacks detailed development that might create suspense or drama.

The final verdict:

The book will be entertaining for emerging or reluctant young readers due to its light conflict and corny jokes. I recommend it for this targeted audience but experienced readers may not like it as much. 

Shadow Wars: The Secret War (Shadow Wars Series 1) by Sherrilyn Kenyon

What worked:

The story’s unusual, curious aspect occurs when Ryuichi’s protective yokai is revealed. Yokai choose the person they’ll protect and Masaru becomes Ryuichi’s guardian. However, Masaru is an evil demon and it’s unclear why he chooses an unremarkable samurai in training. It’s not unusual in books for spirits to protect heroes but it’s very strange when a “guardian” like Masaru doesn’t fulfill his role. Not only does he not appear when summoned but he’s prone to act against Ryuichi’s best interests. Masaru is allied with Ryuichi’s father, the malevolent Shadow King, who wants his son’s powers. Readers will enjoy the transformation of Masaru’s character when he experiences unexpected emotions.

Ryuichi’s life changes after being sent to the dangerous Night Patrol. The Night Patrol searches for demons during the night and most of its members end up lost or dead. They’re led by a disgraced, drunken warrior named Koichi who initially doesn’t provide much guidance. The dynamics change when Ryuichi is overwhelmed by a demon and the other members of Night Patrol come to his aid. Koichi begins to suspect something unusual about Ryuichi and the big secret is slowly revealed. Koichi is a fearsome protector for Ryuichi but also adds humor to the story. His sarcastic barbs toward others and himself lament becoming sober and taking on the role of Ryuichi’s guardian.

Ryuichi doesn’t know the identity of his parents so he feels unworthy of training to become a samurai. He feels he deserves the teasing and bullying from his peers and instructors which adds to his anger and loneliness. These feelings are significant since his character is teetering between good and evil. Negative emotions will lead him toward his father and allow demons to pass through the gate his mother once guarded. He’ll be overwhelmed by the shadows. On the other hand, he’ll become a guardian of his mother’s gate if he can stay positive and defeat the army of shadows.

What didn’t work as well:

The story includes an abundance of Japanese terms and readers should be able to use context clues to understand many of them. However, there are some terms whose meanings aren’t as clear. A glossary of terms might be helpful to ensure readers have correct meanings and mental images. It’s also challenging to keep a mental image of events as the characters fluctuate between humans, shadows, demons, and the shadow world.

The final verdict:

The plot is fascinating although the narrative sometimes makes it difficult to follow the events. A battle between good and evil always makes a good story and the immersion in Japanese folklore spices things up. Give the book a shot if you’re into Asian monsters or samurai.