Holding on for Dear Life by Dusti Bowling

What worked:

Bull riding is the backdrop for the plot. Readers will know something about the sport, but a whole book dedicated to it should pique their interest. Readers will learn that riders can only use one hand to stay on the 1,000-pound bucky bulls, and there’s a science to holding the rope. Riders falling off before eight seconds have elapsed do not receive scores. For those who stay on for the full time, judges score them based on their performances and the activity of their bulls. It is almost impossible to earn a high score riding a bull that won’t buck or twist. Readers learn about different bulls, and Canyon shares a brief story about his choice for the greatest bull of all time. The book tries to describe the whole bull riding culture.

Canyon is the main character, and his life presents several conflicts. He loves bull riding, but he’s been seriously hurt many times. Other characters joke that he falls on his head more times than he lands on his feet. However, Canyon doesn’t reveal the truth to anyone; he constantly suffers excruciating headaches and has recurring dizzy spells. His love for bull riding is a means to impress his father and perhaps help the man find a way to fix his life. The father is an alcoholic, and he often neglects the care and supervision of Canyon and his little sister, Josie. Canyon is left to fill the void of his father’s emotional absence, and Canyon’s anger and frustration are building inside of him. He loves playing his fiddle, and it’s the only thing that brings him peace. Canyon is so good with the fiddle that his music teacher suggests he send an audition video to a television talent show. Readers will be able to predict the scheduling conflict that ensues.

Female characters have important roles in this book. Canyon’s grandmother keeps a watchful eye on the children’s welfare and expresses anger when she feels the father is falling short. She takes Canyon and Josie to her home when she sees they’re being neglected or if they’re in danger. Josie appears to be an innocent little sister, but her spunk blossoms as the plot progresses. She loves to have Canyon play his fiddle at bedtime, and these moments offer him solace, too. Finally, Dakota is a close friend, and she shares caring, kind, and playful comments with Canyon. She provides a balance to the bull riding obsession of characters, and Canyon slowly comes to appreciate her company more and more.

What didn’t work as well:

Bull riding and rodeos may not appeal to urban and suburban middle-graders in general. It’s a foreign culture to their lives, so will they want to read a whole book about it? However, Canyon’s issues with his father and the loss of his mother are universal problems, and Josie is an adorable character.

The final verdict:

Canyon’s complicated life creates an emotional, heartfelt story. Bull riding may not be familiar to most middle-school readers, but his family issues and desire to please his father are relatable. I recommend you check this book out for yourself.

Follow the Water: The Unbelievable True Story of a Teenager's Survival in the Amazon by Ellen Cochrane

What worked:

The story is told using present-tense verbs, so readers will feel like the events are happening right then. The book opens with background information describing Julianne’s formative years. This section is important as it shows where she acquired most of her survival knowledge. “Normal” teenagers would probably perish in the Amazon jungle. Julianne’s parents study Amazonian flora and fauna, and they built a home in the jungle to support their work.  Julianne spends most of her formative years in the Amazon, and her father teaches her about plants she can eat and dangers she should avoid. Following the water is an important survival skill he shares, since moving water will eventually lead to humans.

Sidebars are found in each chapter, and they present information relevant to Julianne’s situation. The first question readers will have is how a girl can still be alive after falling into a dense jungle from two miles in the sky. The book shares a scientific explanation. Hungry predators are a constant danger, so the book offers information about piranhas, jaguars, caimans, giant spiders, and various insects, including the screwworm fly. There’s even a part about the harmful effects of eating too much after starving for days. Julianne suffers from many severe injuries, and readers might wonder why she doesn’t succumb to the pain. The book provides information on how the human body responds to severe trauma and stressful situations. Some of the effects aren’t felt until several years pass. Pages at the end of the book share additional material related to the Amazon and how to become a scientist.

What didn’t work as well:

For the most part, middle-grade readers can appreciate Julianne’s ordeals. Some of the descriptions are graphic, especially when screwworm flies lay eggs in her open wounds. Julianne faces harrowing dangers in the jungle, but there’s not a moment when readers will feel her death is imminent. That’s probably due to her superior knowledge of survival.

The final verdict:

The book augments Julianne’s dramatic adventure with facts to describe jungle hazards and the science of her survival. The tale is even more amazing when readers understand that everything described happened to a real, living teenager. I recommend you try the book for yourself.  

The Weirdies #1 by Michael Buckley

What worked:

Obviously, the triplets are odd characters, and their behavior doesn’t fit normal social expectations. Readers should understand that living among a diverse range of criminals and shady personalities can warp the characters' views of the world. Garlic is the youngest and has a love for explosives and fires. The others often defer to her wisdom, but that may be due to her threateningly holding a grenade in her hand. Melancholy believes she can talk to spirits, and she enjoys collecting body parts. Barnacle thinks he can determine others’ futures by examining their skulls. The kids view the world as a violent, selfish place, and being ignored by their parents contributes to that.

Miss Emily’s personality is a strong contrast to the triplets, as she’s loving, caring, and kind. These emotions are unknown to the children, and they think Ms. Emily is weird. She recognizes that the orphans’ violent behaviors will keep them from being adopted, so she adopts them herself. This relationship is the guiding force of the plot, although it’s a rocky road. The kids recognize that Ms. Emily cares for them, so they make an effort to try fitting in. Garlic tries to help a neighbor with his squirrel problem, but he doesn’t appreciate the huge hole she creates in his backyard. Barnacle tells the future of two neighbors walking down the street, but the women don’t respond as readers might expect.

The narrator speaks directly to readers and adds additional humor, as if that were necessary. The opening page warns readers that “characters will suffer tragedies... die in unspeakable ways… Only a truly horrible person would be amused by their misfortune.” The narrator shares reminders of past events and informs readers about the missing Weirdie parents’ activities. The narrator occasionally strays from the topic and shares personal anecdotes, including an apology to her father. It’s all done to enhance the story in order to make it more amusing.

What didn’t work as well:

The main issue is the violence. Parents probably won’t appreciate it, but middle-school readers often like things that aren’t socially acceptable. The book’s resolution will be unexpected, but a sequel will be coming.

The final verdict:

The children may remind readers of the Addams Family kids, Wendy and Pugsley. Their moral standards are abnormal, and the humor may not appeal to everyone. However, those readers with a tolerance for the absurd will enjoy it, and a story of love and family lies at the heart of the tale. Check it out for yourself.

Styx and Stones by Gary D. Schmidt and Ron Koertge

What worked:

Other books have characters leave mythological worlds to enter the human domain, but this book takes the time to describe Simon’s woes in Hades. Upon entering the underworld, he refuses to drink water that will make him forget everything he’s known, and that’s the smartest thing he does. However, Simon is tortured for more than 2,500 years by memories of his family and being alive, and he’s punished thousands of times for trying to escape. The author describes the suffocating atmosphere in Hades and the dreariness of existing among mindless shades. The only positive moments come from Persephone when she allows scholars to educate Simon about math, science, and philosophy.

Simon’s introduction to the modern world is rocky, as he appears naked in a middle-school bathroom. Coming from ancient Athens, he’s immediately angered to learn he’s now in the middle of a school full of their enemies, Spartans. Simon was murdered by a Spartan! Zeke, a seventh-grader, calms him down and tells others that Simon is his cousin from Las Vegas. Obviously, Simon is unaware of middle-school culture, and he misunderstands situations, speaking without foreseeing the consequences. Young readers will smile when a bully gives him the middle finger, and Simon happily returns the greeting. A teacher tries to explain a map of Hades, but Simon ends up drawing an entirely different layout based on his time down there. Simon’s knowledge, maturity, and compassion have positive effects on almost everyone he meets, although a pompous bully probably disagrees.

Simon’s effect on Hades is an expected, thought-provoking aspect of the plot. He holds onto hope for becoming alive again, and he displays a curious, kind disposition. Hades rules his realm with hatred, cruelty, and fear, so Simon’s personality is an annoyance. The other shades and characters don’t know what to do with his kindness, but it slowly becomes the key to his escape. The subtle changes that remain after he leaves cause Persephone to wonder what makes him so different. Simon’s civility and gentleness have lingering effects in the underworld that will make Hades even angrier and vengeful.

What didn’t work as well:

Hades is supposed to be for those who were evil during their lives, so readers will wonder why Simon ended up there. The answer is revealed late in the plot, but it doesn’t seem worthy of being banished to the underworld for eternity. Also, it’s strange that Zeke doesn’t initially question Simon’s sudden appearance at school, even though Simon isn’t wearing clothes and talks about living in Hades. Most middle-school boys would flee when faced by a nude stranger in the school bathroom.

The final verdict:

The book may be more than readers expect. The threat of Hades underlies the whole story, but Simon’s gentle demeanor is the highlight of the book. I recommend you give this book a shot!

Secrets of the Purple Pearl (The Millicent Quibb School of Etiquette for Young Ladies of Mad Science 2) by Kate McKinnon

What worked:

The characters and story are odd, which should appeal to middle-grade readers. The main characters are the three Porch “sisters” with their unique personalities. Gertrude is the oldest at 13 years, and she is a lover of animals and nature. Staying at the Purple Pearl Hotel evokes memories, and she spends most of the plot trying to make sense of them. Dee-Dee is the youngest, and she has the most useful, creative ideas. She’s always chewing on a toothpick, and she believes she can’t think without one in her mouth; she even gives them names! Eugenia is in the middle, and her sarcasm and emotions are a highlight. The three sisters are guided by Millicent Quibb, a kind mad scientist, and she takes them aboard her Flycycle to sort out the mystery of the Purple Pearl. The oddity of the book creates weird humor.

The KRA is a group of evil mad scientists, and they are the antagonists of the story. The two main evil characters are Majestina DeWeen and Ashley Cookie, Esq. Ashley clearly has a huge crush on Majestina, while she detests his attention. They believe Millicent Quibb died in the first book, so they don’t take the threat of the Porch sisters seriously. Ashley and Majestina are plotting to recover the Purple Pearl from the bottom of a lake using an unusual method. The Porch sisters know it has something to do with a Shrimpmaid, but no one seems to know what that means. The sisters must avoid their Aunt Desdemona during their investigation, since she thinks they’re troublemakers. She would just as soon see them back in an orphanage or returned to the School for Failures.

The secrets behind the Porch sisters’ past are the most emotional aspect of the book. Gertrude’s memories indicate she once stayed at the Purple Pearl Hotel, but she doesn’t know how that’s possible. She’s always making up stories about growing up to make her younger sisters feel good. If she discovers the truth about her past, then she must admit that she’s been lying to Dee-Dee and Eugenia. Growing up in an orphanage brought the three girls together and helped them form their family. Revealing Gertrude’s lies could undermine her sisters’ trust and break the family apart.

What didn’t work as well:

The book is narrated by a non-character named Dr. G. Edwina Candlestank, and readers may have mixed feelings. The narrative is playful when it speaks directly to readers, but there are interruptions throughout the book. At one point, a collection of short bios is shared, giving readers a chance to recover from the story’s drama. The story breaks are amusing, but they’re not necessary.

The final verdict:

This book can be read independently, but I recommend reading the prior book first. I did not, and I missed out on previous knowledge about the KRA and its members. The general plot and storyline are funny and entertaining, and I suggest you check out the book for yourself.

Lost Evangeline by Kate DiCamillo

What worked:

The author is a master storyteller, and readers can imagine hearing the narrator’s voice. The tiny girl, Evangeline, may remind them of Hans Christian Anderson’s Thumbelina. The simple, heartfelt story features rhythmic lines and repetition that almost sound like the narrator is reciting a poem. Evangeline’s special talent is singing, and the lyrics of her song often evoke feelings of love and wonder. Evangeline’s father has always wanted to sail the seas, and they dream of future adventures aboard a fine ship.

Fairy tales often feature character flaws, and the cobbler’s wife suffers from greed, jealousy, and fear. She worries that her husband has been bewitched, so she never accepts Evangeline as a member of the family. In contrast, the cobbler immediately feels a strong affection for Evangeline, and they quickly form a close, loving bond. Their affection for each other permeates the story, and their separation leaves readers with hope that they’ll eventually be reunited. Minor characters create conflict or assistance, and the cat has an especially memorable personality. Evangeline’s kindness will evoke new, positive emotions in the self-centered cat.

What didn’t work as well:

The plot’s resolution may not satisfy readers, as it leaves much to the imagination. There isn’t a clear happy-ever-after ending, but there is a feeling of wonder and hope.

The final verdict:

The author’s writing style consistently delivers engaging, poignant stories, and this book is no exception. The sweet relationship between father and daughter is sure to tug on heartstrings, and I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Last Dragon House by Liv Mae Morris

What worked:

The early part of the book follows Olly as he is expected to find a job after finishing the fifth grade. He answers an ad for a job opening even though the description says death is a possibility. Readers will be fascinated by the personalities he encounters at the sanctuary for dragons. He’s greeted at the door by a bat-dragon that can translate most dragon languages. Olly’s jobs include wearing down the back scales on Onyx, a stone dragon, and polishing the scales on a giant, deadly wyrm named Amy. Olly must be alert when helping Amy, because she might eat him or add him to her hoard if he’s careless. Amy adds humor to the story, as she often threatens to eat other characters. A smaller, fairy-dragon adores Olly’s hair and becomes an enthusiastic companion.

The author subtly hints at societal problems before revealing the main conflict. Most children must work to help pay for their families’ needs, since rampant poverty is a major issue. Dr. Lady created the Dragon House because humans were killing them for no reason. Onyx tells Olly about humans blowing up the mountain where he lived, killing his entire family living in caves. Many humans died while mining the mountain, and then the mines closed. It didn’t make sense to Onyx. Dragons once lived peacefully among humans until the rich and powerful became angered by how the dragons helped the powerless. Today, wealthy individuals still bribe the ruler to get laws and decisions favorable to their companies and fortunes. Readers slowly learn that the conflict has arrived at the Dragon House.

The synopsis hints at Jenny’s role in the plot, but she doesn’t make a significant appearance until the book’s second half. Early in the book, she finds a creature hidden near the family garden, but her family doesn’t believe her description of a dragon. Jenny’s transformation into performing magic happens slowly and doesn’t become significant until after Dr. Lady is poisoned. The author introduces another character later in the plot who changes the dynamics. Trev doesn’t seem to like Olly and constantly scowls and says everything is stupid. His negativity stands in stark contrast to the cooperation of other characters, but his character provides an opportunity to teach readers a lesson about understanding.

What didn’t work as well:

The story includes many amusing footnotes, but they’re not shared until the end of the chapters. Readers might prefer to see them at the bottom of individual pages, so that the context will be fresh in their minds. The number of dragons can be overwhelming, but the author takes the time to highlight the main characters. Including scenes that feature them individually helps readers differentiate and understand their personalities.

The final verdict:

This is a charming book about the highs and lows of human-dragon relations with underlying messages relevant to today’s society. Olly is the main character, and his compassion, bravery, and honesty make him an admirable, honorable protagonist. Dragon lovers or those looking for adventure will obviously enjoy this book, and I recommend you check it out for yourself!

The Mummy Snatcher Curse (The Wand Keepers 2) by Tiffany McDaniel

What worked:

Middle-graders often enjoy strange humor and content that may be considered inappropriate. This book relies on absurd humor and the mystery of disappearing mummies. The characters don’t find boogers and farts disgusting, and the potions often contain strange ingredients. Aunt Caldroneyes adorns a hat with a bow made from the discarded tongue of a Frobby Beast, and Spella has an idea to combine frog slime, comet dust, and sparkledust spores to create glowing, sparkling thread. Many of the pages feature footnotes with humorous information about terms such as "hairball bucket" and "mummy box." The author also includes pages with brief excerpts from Madam Millith Muddle’s book describing topics such as mummy moaning, not wrapping mummy linen with sticky fingers, and the importance of cursing your pyramid.

Aunt Caldroneyes makes specialized hats for all types of creatures, and many hats live with her. One hat made of hats is called Socky, and it adds humor throughout most of the book by stealing socks from everyone it sees. Egypt may be the most interesting character, as she’s an ancient, mummified cat. She provides a good deal of information about Egyptian history and mythology, and the characters travel to Mummy City after she loses her wrappings. She’s fearless and protective of Spella and her best friend, Tolden. Spella and her blue freckles may have been discovered in a cauldron left on Aunt Caldroneyes’ porch, but Egypt was Lightning Born. It takes a while for Stella to convince Egypt that they’re a family.

Early on, readers learn about The Beastiarium, a book from ancient Egypt that is guarded by three sleeping giants. The giants dropped it into a bottomless river, so it seems to be unretrievable. It’s clear that the book is at the center of the plot’s conflict, although details will be slowly revealed along the way. A cracked, thirteen-legged cauldron is stolen, and it’s able to hold all of the water in the world. Other items turn up missing, but Stella and Tolden don’t see a connection. Stella frequently makes comments about a character named Stonescare, so readers can expect him to make an appearance. Stonescare was the main antagonist in the previous book. The plot reads like a mystery that readers can solve along with Stella and Tolden.

What didn’t work as well:

The humor won’t appeal to everyone, as it’s often absurd, gross, or socially unusual (inappropriate?). Ancient myths and curses are always capable of forming attention-holding stories, but there are multitudes of bizarre characters this time.

The final verdict:

I didn’t read the first book in the series, but middle-graders can still enjoy reading this one. Many of them will love descriptions they’d never find in other books, and the quirky characters are a delight. I recommend this book for readers with a sense of humor who can tolerate the unusual.

Calliope Callisto Clark and the Search for Wisdom by Claudia Mills

What worked:

Calliope, a name from ancient Greece that she’s given herself, is the most interesting character, although she doesn’t always behave appropriately. Readers immediately learn that she’s smart, but she won’t admit that she thinks she’s smarter than all of her classmates, especially Philip Kumar, the teacher’s pet. Readers also quickly learn that she’s a loyal friend when Peggy is late to class and is scolded by the teacher. Calliope yells at the teacher that her words are mean, and she ends up in the principal’s office. She’s aware that she has strong opinions about everything, and she tends to get emotional and loud. Some might say she overreacts or is weird. This problem continues throughout the book, as Calliope tries to understand the wisdom of life. Maybe it will help her make better decisions.

Calliope lives with her grandparents, and they adopted a dog from the shelter to help Calliope with her emotions. However, Archie isn’t a well-behaved dog, and his outbursts create more trouble. His rambunctiousness results in Granny breaking her arm, and Calliope spends the rest of the book trying to keep Grampy from getting rid of Archie. Calliope’s volatile emotions are put to the test, as one more mistake by Archie or her will be strike three; Archie will be out. Calliope also feels guilty for being a burden to her grandparents, and their nosy, opinionated neighbor doesn’t make the situation any easier. Granny and Grampy should be enjoying this time in their lives.

Calliope’s friendship with Peggy and her feud with Philip Kumar are central to the story. Calliope is a serious student and pushes herself to excellence, while Peggy is less serious and enjoys her drawing and artistic skills. Peggy is less outgoing in class, but Calliope is always ready to step up for her friend. Peggy doesn’t always understand why Calliope overreacts to situations, but she still shares her full support. She offers advice and perspective to Calliope and performs a best-friend deed. She agrees to join the philosophy club with Calliope, even though she has no interest in it and knows it will be the most boring meeting ever. Calliope feels challenged by Philip and thinks he’s Mr. Perfect and the teacher’s pet. Calliope hates him! However, embarrassing events and the philosophy will slowly open Calliope’s mind to unforeseen possibilities.

What didn’t work as well:

The synopsis says that Grandpa will have a stroke, but it shouldn’t have revealed it. It doesn’t happen until very late in the book, and readers don’t need to know it’s going to happen. Also, the main characters are in sixth grade, so their philosophy club may not resonate with a wide range of middle-grade readers. The discussions aren’t overly complex, but they will lead to deep thinking and reflection.

The final verdict:

The philosophical aspect of the book and the obsession with ancient Greece may not appeal to all readers, but the author creates an endearing, heartfelt story of a conflicted sixth-grader. Calliope’s extreme emotions result in humorous moments with lifelong lessons. I recommend you try this book for yourself; it may surprise you!

The Lion’s Run by Sara Pennypacker

What worked:

Lucas is a virtuous orphan, even though he’s tired of being bossed around. The other boys in the orphanage treat him unkindly, and the Nazis patrolling the streets look down on him, too. Lucas displays his courage when he keeps two large orphanage bullies from drowning five kittens. He hides them in an abandoned barn, only to have a wealthy girl tell him to leave and never come back. However, Lucas is persistent, and he eventually befriends Alice. Lucas delivers groceries to a hospital for expectant mothers, and one day he snatches a coded message to save a matron, Mme. Garnier, from Nazi soldiers. Lucas decides he's tired of Germans invading his country and convinces her to let him join the Resistance.

Readers know about Nazi concentration camps where millions of men, women, and children were executed. Characters mention a couple of people who are taken to a camp, and they know the chances of survival are slim. Nazis in the streets, night and day, are constant reminders of how quickly characters might be arrested and disappear forever. Spying is a dangerous business, and Lucas risks his life every time he carries a message. Mme. Garnier and Father Gustave are reluctant to let a young boy help the Resistance, but Lucas is in a perfect position to transport coded messages. Young readers will enjoy the mystique of spy work, and the plot maintains constant tension.

The story offers a different perspective on World War II, as the events focus on French citizens. Lucas and Alice talk about the possibility of allied nations saving the country, and they are skeptical that America is truly the land of opportunity. People do questionable things in order to survive, and Alice’s father trains racehorses for the Germans. Mme. Garnier is the only French person working at the hospital where the babies of the pregnant women will become members of the Aryan nation. The author introduces Claire, a French woman carrying a German soldier’s baby. She knows her child will be taken away and adopted by a family in Germany. However, Claire dreams of being reunited with her baby after the war, even though she’s told that won’t happen.

What didn’t work as well:

Various characters speak three languages in the story: French, German, and English. However, the narrative doesn’t differentiate between the languages very well, so readers will mostly read English. Lucas is supposed to speak French, but readers won’t get a sense that he’s speaking anything other than English.

The final verdict:

Readers will root for Lucas as he tries to make a difference during the Second World War. The author assures readers that everything mentioned about the war is true, so they’ll get a compelling look at France during this time in history. The plot takes a dramatic turn when Lucas makes a rash, daring decision, leading to an exciting climax. I recommend you give this book a try.

Angel of Ashes (The Angel Archives #1) by Erika Kathryn

What worked:

The opening scene describes the death and rebirth of the only Phoenix Angel on the planet. It’s impossible for two Phoenix Angels to walk the earth at the same time, so Audie never gets to live with her mother. She never leaves her human father’s property until she’s thirteen, and when she finally does, she’s attacked by demons. Audie is rescued by another angel, who transports her to Heaven. Jupiter, a saint, oversees the angels since she’s neutral regarding angel issues. However, Jupiter suspects something evil has infiltrated Heaven and recruits Audie and Cave to help form the Angel Army. Their task will be to identify the evil and help save Heaven.

Cave narrates the story, and he’s the only human character in Heaven. It’s amusing to see some angels resent his presence, while other angels are excited to meet a real human. Audie won’t agree to join the Angel Army unless Cave is part of it, so Jupiter makes him Audie’s historian. It’s traditional for a historian to document the life of each Phoenix Angel, so that becomes Cave’s job. Readers know that Cave’s been smitten with Audie since he first saw her, and he begins to have subtle, jealous feelings. Audie and Luce, another member of the army, seem to be developing an attraction for each other, and Cave doesn’t know what to do.

The threat to Heaven becomes clear about halfway into the book when an elder angel thinks their powers should be used to rule over humans. Audie and her friends know scorpions were stolen and that their venom can make others susceptible to mind control. Readers won’t be surprised when the creatures reappear later in the story. The problem of the elder angel becomes more complicated when the characters realize he’s Luce’s father. Readers may find it hard to understand how a father and son can view the world so differently. The Angel Army is joined by other creatures along the way, and they learn from the fairies that there was once a great war between angels. The two sides battled over the future of angels and the question of ruling over all other living things. It looks like history is close to repeating itself.

What didn’t work as well:

Much of the story is set in Heaven, so readers need to be aware of biblical references. It’s not a big issue, but the main characters are angels. The Angel Army has 11 members, so that means there are a lot of characters to remember. Consequently, the descriptions of Audie’s peers are brief, which makes it harder for readers to make connections. Also, Cave isn’t present for some of the action scenes, and there’s no mention regarding how he’s still able to record what happened in the narrative.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to lovers of adventure and angels, although any reader can enjoy the author’s imagination. I recommend you try the book for yourself. 

The Tinkerers by Caroline Carlson

What worked:

The first thing readers will notice is the book’s format. Part of the first chapter’s title is labeled “Exhibit 1”, so readers can imagine it’s part of some kind of investigation. Other chapters include sections of Peter’s narrative, star tales he tells to his brother Ollie, transcripts from interviews, surveillance videos or audio, transcripts of memos, and other sources. Peter’s character connects all of the chapters, so readers will be curious about why he’s part of an investigation. The early chapters hammer home that possessing star stuff is a dangerous, serious offense, and the substance is abundant in Stargazers Valley, where Peter lives. The author provides twists to the plot and surprises about characters as the story nears its climax.

The author creates an imaginative world where starstuff is the most valuable commodity. Astromancers from the Imperial College are researching the substance to discover beneficial uses for it.  They are the only ones legally allowed to collect or use the material. Outbounder Task Force agents are always on the lookout for violators, so citizens avoid starstuff out of fear. Clambering is the major sport in the world, and it’s a form of competitive hiking and climbing. People talk about their favorite clamberers and purchase memorabilia about them. The hot gossip is about one of the world’s best clamberers disappearing from the public eye for months. The school even has a clambering class with frequent time trials. Peter’s attempts are often labeled DNF, did not finish, so it’s constantly a huge hit to his self-confidence.

The investigation can be viewed as a mystery with many suspects to choose from. The exact crime is slow to emerge, though readers know that Peter has used the not-a-clock illegally on more than one occasion. Peter is guiding two astromancers through the surrounding terrain, as they learn to clamber. He knows they’re doing more than clambering, and they don’t want anyone else to know what they’re up to. Theodoros is a longtime resident of the inn, but Peter’s not sure about what the man does for a living. He’s another astromancer, and he weekly sends starstuff that he’s collected to an unknown location. Then, there’s Joey Pancake. No one at the inn knows when he leaves or returns, and he’s the fastest clamberer that anyone’s seen. He keeps his identity concealed and doesn’t want to interact with anyone else. What is Joey Pancake up to?

What didn’t work as well:

Readers will need to be patient as the plot slowly unfolds. The book’s format presents clues in different forms, and they’re not always in chronological order. The variety of text forms takes getting used to, but it keeps the story from getting stagnant.

The final verdict:

The author creates an imaginative, thought-provoking story. Stargazers Valley is ruled by an overreaching empress, and the not-a-clock raises moral questions. I recommend this book to readers searching for a creative story that will make them think. 

The Night Slayer (The Lords of Dimensions) by George Jancovic

What worked:

The plot quickly gets into the drama, as Alex rescues a fourth-grader from a bully in chapter one and then finds himself at the bottom of the ocean in chapter two. He discovers he’s a Vela, can communicate telepathically, and can manipulate land, air, and water. As with most middle-grade books, he’s joined by two companions. Lin exhibits superior Vela skills and has visions of the future. She dreams about Alex’s death, and keeping it secret torments her. A boy named Whiz is extremely intelligent, but his fear causes him to freeze up in stressful situations.

The plot is a quest to find the Night Slayer before the main protagonist, Moloch. The Night Slayer is the most powerful sword full of positive energy in the world, and it can be used to defeat all evil. Moloch would love to get his hands on the Blood Snatcher, an indestructible, bloodthirsty sword that pulls the souls out of its prey. Alex, Lin, and Whiz don’t know how they can possibly defeat Moloch, but they’re joined by another Vela named Cleo. She is the captain of a crew called the Vanquishers, and readers may find they’re similar to fearsome pirates. Alex and his friends convince Cleo to join them on their quest, but she wants to locate the formidable weapons for herself. Her secret desire creates an unspoken problem, and readers will anxiously await the moment when the sword is found. Also, Lin’s gentleness contrasts with Cleo’s hardness, but all of the characters immediately notice clear similarities in the girls’ physical appearances.

Whiz is an entertaining and valuable character. As mentioned, he’s frightened of all of the dangers the group encounters, and he’s aware of this weakness. Readers will often read the thoughts in his mind that reflect the “bock, bock, bock” sound of a chicken. Cleo’s disdain for Whiz’s fears and relative weakness creates some amusing moments. On the other hand, readers will feel good for Whiz’s character whenever he successfully uses his elemental abilities to help defend the group. Whiz’s real value is his knowledge, and Cleo labels him with the nickname, The Professor. Whiz seems to know everything about history, and he knows various languages, too. He’s the only character able to read the writing on an ancient map, so Cleo is forced to tolerate him.

What didn’t work as well:

Each chapter focuses on one of the main characters, so readers must remind themselves that their perspectives are constantly changing. Also, there are instances where events are unnecessarily over-explained rather than letting readers infer the information. Conversely, the author creates an exciting climax that will carry over to the book’s sequel.

The final verdict:

Readers must get used to the author’s writing style, but surprises await as the plot moves on. The characters suspect they don’t fully understand Moloch’s plans, and he’s the one who provides the climactic twist. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Ava and the Owl-Witch (Los Monstruos) by Diana Lopez

What worked:

Ava’s mother is an Owl-Witch, and Minerva flies off every night, looking for people who might endanger others. Ava loves her mother, but she misses spending more time with her. Ava doesn’t remember much of her Aunt Trudi, who died in a suspected hit-and-run accident. Her death also left her mother and Aunt Delia estranged, as Delia believes Minerva is responsible. However, Minerva blames herself, and she’s been trying to protect the citizens of Tres Leches from danger ever since. The problem is that many citizens view her as a nuisance and a vigilante.

Some readers might view Ava’s mother as a monster, but the author makes her motives something to think about. Ava doesn’t understand why her mother drops people into the town’s mud pit, but readers may be surprised by the reasons. Her mother is trying to stop those people from harming others. Readers’ first introduction to the mother occurs when she drops a man into the mud before he can drive his truck while drunk. Charges are finally brought against Minerva, and her trial builds to the plot’s climax. Ava stubbornly pursues the truth to rescue her mother from jail. Perhaps she’ll also find a way to mend the ill feelings that have kept her mother and aunt apart.

Ava knows she’s meant to be a Lechuza, and she dreams of turning into an owl and flying in the night sky. She doesn’t understand why her mother won’t teach her, and she knows little about being a Lechuza. Ava knows she’s a witch because she’s always accompanied by a familiar. Paco is a cute squirrel, and he helps Ava by running errands, offering a helpful ear, and providing non-verbal advice. Rooster and Felice are Ava’s best friends, since they understand what it’s like to have a parent who’s considered a monster. Their stories comprise the plots in the trilogy’s first two books.

What didn’t work as well:

The author develops an emotional story, although it doesn’t build to a suspense-filled climax. Perhaps that’s due to Minerva’s mental state, as she feels a need to be punished. It’s hard for readers to feel tension when it’s contrary to her emotions.

The final verdict:

This book is the third in a trilogy, but they can be read independently. It’s innovative to share the story of a “monster” and her daughter and create sympathy for them. The trial is a nice way to unite and resolve family and town issues. I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Claiming (The Last Resort #2) by Jasmine Warga

What worked:

Interestingly, this book is the second in the series, but it’s written by a different author. Previously, Lila was the only character who could see ghosts, but this time, Teddy and Caleb somehow gain the ability, too. Teddy notices something strange about Lila that leads the plot in a new direction. She starts flickering, fading in and out of existence, and sometimes disappearing entirely. This problem becomes the plot’s main conflict, as Teddy doesn’t want to let another friend die. He doesn’t know what to do, so he often goes to his chat room group, the Phantom Hunters, in search of answers. Lila also joins him in researching the history of their small Ohio town, and they begin to notice a pattern. They banished the Fire Maiden in the first book, but they fear she may be returning.

A subplot involves a tragedy that’s been traumatizing Teddy since the first book. Teddy’s best friend died when they were in the third grade, and Teddy’s been blaming himself for the past four years. Readers know it involves a skating accident, but this book adds previously unknown details. The drowning was devastating for Teddy, but his classmates’ teasing made it even worse. They still make comments about his obsession with ghosts and horror movies, so Teddy doesn’t have any good friends. Since Lila is new to his school, he’s afraid she won’t want to be associated with him when she learns he has no relationship with any other students.

The author is a master of suspense and of developing an eerie world. From the first book, readers will know Lila’s family has moved into an inn that has catered more to ghosts than humans. Of course, her parents are unaware that a portal to the world of the dead is behind the mirror in the attic. Stormy weather helps to create a creepier feeling even during the daytime hours. The tension is amplified when kids from school perform a séance that gives the Fire Maiden more power. Later, Lila’s parents plan a party on Halloween, so readers know the plot will build to a climax on that day. Readers are left to wonder how fearful, remorseful Teddy can save his friend from being claimed by a malevolent spirit that’s growing stronger.

What didn’t work as well:

Isn’t it amazing how many characters sense things are “off” but ignore those feelings. There are a couple of instances in this book where Teddy and Lila meet characters and think their actions or comments seem odd. Experienced readers will notice the clues and be on the lookout when the plot takes a turn. It’s also strange that Lila flickers in school, and no one notices enough to make it into a “thing”.

The final verdict:

There are many references to the Fire Maiden, so readers should read The Last Resort first. Middle-grade readers love scary stories, and they’ll love a spirit that feeds on fears of the living. I recommend you try this series for yourself!

The Great Escape (Wolf Girl 2) by Anh Do

What worked:

Readers need to know that Gwen was left alone four years ago, and she’s been living with four dogs ever since. The story follows Gwen, while other chapters cover the dogs, until the group is reunited. The dogs are of different species with their own unique personalities. Sunrise has known Gwen the longest, and she acts as the group’s leader when they’re separated from Gwen. Tiny is a Chihuahua and uses sensitive hearing to act as a lookout. Zip is a Greyhound with poor eyesight, and Nosey is a Labrador with a keen sense of direction. Brutus is a Mastiff and often has a grouchy disposition. The dogs are aided by an eagle called Eagle. Young readers will enjoy how Gwen works with her canine friends and Eagle to escape capture and search for her parents.

Gwen is taken to a guarded compound surrounded by a tall fence and confined in a small prison cell. She sees children her age laboring to break up rocks and then carrying them into a secret, walled-off area. Readers are left to imagine what’s going on in this compound and why she doesn’t see any adults, other than the guards. The author introduces a new character when a captive boy named Rupert gives Gwen some food. He’s punished for this act of kindness, but he becomes another ally for her. However, Rupert tells her a big lie, and Gwen must decide if she’s willing to forgive him.

What didn’t work as well:

This story feels like several chapters from one larger book. Readers must know for themselves what’s already happened. The book’s ending simply stops the action, so readers will need to read the third one to continue the story. Also, it’s unclear why the author called the wolf Puppy in the first book but changed it to Sunrise in the second.

The final verdict:

You should read Wolf Girl first, since this book picks up immediately where the first book ended. Readers may be disappointed with the plot’s resolution, but in the end, this book is a fun, fast-paced story. 

Spindlewood by Freddie Kölsch

What worked:

The synopsis shares the overall conflict, but the author introduces more immediate problems for Lilac. She pretends to see a ghost to save her uncle’s séance, and the family assumes her abilities have surfaced. She learns her mother was a Seer, as are her uncles and grandmother today. They immediately assume Lilac will attend Spindlewood, but she can’t find a good opportunity to tell the truth. As a chronic skeptic, she’s curious about going to a school where everyone thinks they can see spirits. Lilac figures she can fake her way through classes until she encounters a bombshell complication. How can she fake her way through an aptitude test that will reveal the strength of her Seer powers?

Lilac is roommates with three other students, and they welcome her into their Pretty Posse. Lilac immediately feels conflicted, because the Posse is jealous of Em, the first girl she meets. Em is a True Seer, which means she can see ghosts without performing the ritual that all others must do. This makes her a target for her schoolmates, since she is studying independently from everyone else and seems to receive special treatment. However, Lilac takes the time to talk with Em and realizes True Seers live hard, lonely lives. Spindlewood has the highest concentration of ghosts in the world, so Em sees and hears them everywhere. It’s overwhelming. Isn’t it ironic that a skeptic and non-believer like Lilac becomes friends with a True Seer? Lilac’s struggle to keep her secret from Em continues throughout the book. Her school adventure leads to hidden secrets and a trip into the Beyond.

The author establishes the groundwork for future events when the instructors go over safety requirements for all seers. Seers open doorways to see into the spirit world, but that opening also lets ghosts see into the world of the living. The greatest danger for seers is becoming possessed by a spirit, so students are taught four general safety rules. Most of the early chapters present reminders to readers that possession is extremely threatening, so it’s reasonable to assume it will happen to at least one character. The possibility will always be in the back of readers’ minds, and Lilac’s roommate, Chloe, is highly susceptible to possession. As they gain more knowledge, some readers may recall the strange behavior from one of Lilac’s uncles.

What didn’t work as well:

The entire story is narrated by a spirit, and this strategy works. However, it periodically feels the need to share word meanings using Oxford definitions. It’s an amusing strategy early on, but many times, it’s not necessary. Perhaps it’s safe to make sure all readers are aware of the definitions, but more capable readers won’t need reminders.

The final verdict:

It’s a creative twist to give all of the characters spiritual abilities, while the main character is the only one without. The author saves twists and surprises, as Lilac and Em connect cryptic clues that will lead them into a dangerous world. Lilac’s lack of seer ability creates tension that will continue throughout the whole book. I recommend this book for readers who enjoy ghostly mysteries and school drama. 

Pennies (Blight Harbor 4) by Lora Senf

What worked:

This book continues the Blight Harbor series, but it can be read independently. Magic is everywhere in the town, and it’s not necessarily good or bad. The story is told through the eyes of Mae, and she’s joined by three good friends, Claret, Brigid, and Lark. Brigid comes from a family of witches, while Claret comes from a family of vampires. Lark is the smallest member of the group, but she may be the most adventurous. Her father can sense the presence of holes, portals to the Dark Sun Side, and Mae’s father’s job is to seal them shut. No one knows anything about the Dark Sun Side, because those who’ve explored it never returned. Strangely, Lark tells the group about a new hole near her house, but her father doesn’t know it exists. Also, the adults begin to say John Heffrey Pope is a fine man when everyone knows he’s a lazy good-for-nothing.

Interestingly, ghosts are treated like ordinary characters. The girls have a secret clubhouse made from pieces of scrap wood and metal, and a ghost now resides in it. Graham was seven when he died, and the girls treat him like a little brother. Mae can usually hear most of what he says, but for some reason, she can’t now. The girls give Graham a hug and kind words, and Lark brings him her favorite teddy bear. The girls enlist advice from a ghost in Claret’s house, and he sends them to speak with twin ghosts. The twins lend valuable help to the girls to tether themselves to the living world before venturing into the Dark Sun Side. Mae and her friends encounter additional ghosts on the other side of the portal.

The conflict begins with the disappearance of Brigid’s cousin, Emilia, but other characters go missing, too. The girls venture into the hole and enter the world of the Clackity, although it makes an appearance in only one part of the story. Most of the story is set in this alternate world. Mae and her friends become lost, and they explore different tunnels, hoping for a way to find Emmi. The tunnels present different adventures, as the girls find creepy characters and settings in each one.  They discover Bridgit’s aunt is just as malevolent as Pope, although she may be even worse. However, Mae learns something unseen is going on in the Dark Sun Side that may be controlling the events. It’s hard to know who can be trusted on this side of the portal, and one misstep will leave Mae and her friends stranded here forever.

What didn’t work as well:

The girls immediately suspect John Heffrey Pope when Emmi goes missing. Authors usually try to mislead readers or keep them guessing, but that doesn’t happen here. Other twists await as the plot moves along, but Pope is always the prime suspect. It diminishes much of the suspense.

The final verdict:

This book is a companion to The Clackity, a finalist for a 2022 Cybils Book Award. The author is a master of description! The friends’ adventure becomes almost a quest, as the girls search for Emilia. The different tunnels present surprise challenges that put the girls in danger. Overall, I recommend this book for readers who enjoy creepy, spooky stories.

The Black Market by Jed Alexander

What worked:

It’s challenging to find the Black Market, since it deals in the trading of illegal goods. Patrons must know a secret password, and it’s full of shady characters. The vagueness of the market will pique readers’ curiosity, as the possibilities of evil and wrongness are endless. Martin’s aunt is a strange character, since she travels the world to remote places and rarely makes live appearances at Martin’s home. She gives him the idea of the Black Market, and her description only makes him want to go. She’ll be available to answer his questions until she suddenly leaves town for an unknown destination. Martin and his best friend, Jess, are left to figure things out on their own, and readers will want to know what otherworldly events are yet to come.

The Black Market and the Bag of Dirty Tricks are mysterious, but the author adds other elements of uncertainty. Martin recognizes the voice of a costumed character at the market, but he can’t remember the person’s identity. Readers know this person will reemerge later, and they’re left to wonder about the significance. Is it a coincidence that a stern librarian has taken over for the kind one the kids are used to? Sure, he’s scary, but a connection seems too obvious. Perhaps the voice’s owner is the new kid that Martin has run into a couple of times. Then, there’s the Bag of Dirty Tricks. Martin and Jess think the tricks are devious, and some of them are downright dangerous. How dangerous are they, and who deserves to become the victim of mean tricks?

Jess is an intelligent, loyal friend, and readers may think she’ll be a positive influence on Martin. She does that at times, but she also encourages him to make some ill-fated decisions. Jess is anxious to use one of the dirty tricks, but admits that it’s hard to think of someone they dislike strongly. She also recognizes that some of the tricks may be evil, so how do they choose one that’s bad, but not too bad?  Jess is the one who reads the rules and recipes about the tricks, and that knowledge will be important later in the plot. Martin and Jess decide to play a trick on Martin’s father first, but it doesn’t go as planned. They don’t know for sure if the effects will ever go away, but Jess is ready to pull another prank right away. Her influence on Martin is supportive, but perhaps she’s too enthusiastic.

What didn’t work as well:

It’s unclear why the author includes Malcolm in the story.  He always has a frown on his face and lurks on the periphery of the action. He helps Jess and Martin find a missing dog and makes an appearance at the very end, but he doesn’t contribute much toward the plot. The story wouldn’t be any different if he were removed from it.

The final verdict:

Like the Bag of Dirty Tricks, the book is spooky, but not too spooky. Once again, young characters make ill-conceived choices and decide they can’t ask anyone for help. It’s an appropriate book for Halloween or for readers who enjoy creepy stories, like the Goosebumps books. I recommend you try this book for yourself. 

Soccer Spacetastrophe (Quantum Interstellar Sports League 2) by J. Scott Savage

What worked:

The book is written in a combination of text and graphic novel. Most of the graphic sections are used during the soccer games which works out well. Describing game action can become tedious, so the blend of illustrations and captions avoids that problem. A narrator describes most of Wyatt’s story, and broadcast announcers enter to cover game-related information. Humor and the absurd are rampant in the book, so readers must have a tolerance for it. It begins with the strange cast of characters that team up with humans and oppose them in the tournament. They may have many appendages, unusual sizes and shapes, and others can even transform their appearances. Funny dialogue and situations add to the humor.

Wyatt is the main character, and he lacks self-confidence. He’s had a crush on his teammate, Nova, since he first met her in the first book, but his emotions are now a mess. He texts, sends emails, and gifts to her all summer, but he doesn’t get a single reply. He’s embarrassed that his messages are increasingly pathetic, but he can’t understand why she doesn’t want to communicate with him. Wyatt thought he did a great job as captain in the first book, but he’s immediately replaced by Nitro, the best soccer player on Earth. He feels worthless as a teammate, since he’s no longer the leader and doesn’t have any soccer skills. It takes him awhile to learn he can still help the team from the “backseat”.

The conflict develops additional tension by putting control of the earth at stake. A despicable alien named Schnozly Grofsplot returns as the main antagonist. Wyatt’s football team saved the planet in book one, but Schnozly’s lawyers find a loophole in the contract based on the word football. Schnozly is determined to take over Earth, so he won’t something like rules stop him. Readers can anticipate he’ll constantly find ways cheat, and this character doesn’t disappoint. There are conflicts within Wyatt’s team that are exasperated by an anonymous spy. The team dynamics are a highlight of the book. The site of each soccer match presents unique quirks and challenges, and Schnolzly’s immense wealth influences unexpected aspects of the tournament.

What didn’t work as well:

The author’s brand of humor won’t appeal to everyone. Much of it comes from zany situations, witty quips, and some of it borders on crass. However, young readers enjoy reading about things that might not be okay in real life. Amusement from the unexpected works.

The final verdict:

Readers can start the series with this book, since it provides a descriptive recap of the first one. The last page makes it clear that a sequel will be coming. I recommend this book for readers who enjoy levity and sports. 

Kid X (Boy 2.0 #2) by Tracey Baptiste

What worked:

This book is the sequel to Boy 2.0, so readers already know Coal can camouflage his appearance. He’s not exactly invisible since he casts a shadow in sunlight, but other people still can’t see him. He’s also staying in a foster home, but he likes his foster parents and their three kids. A major issue for Coal is his frustration and anger at not being independent from the control of others. He doesn’t have a say in where he lives, and an aunt shows up to aggravate the situation. She plans to force Coal into living with her next year, and Coal’s not sure how he feels about that. He wants people to listen to him before making decisions that will affect his life.

Coal’s foster family and his best friend, Door, now know about his camouflage ability, and that’s creating additional problems for him. His foster sister wants him to retrieve a pencil that was stolen by a classmate, but that’s only the beginning of his moral quandary. Getting the pencil back seems like righting a wrong, but what about actions like pranks? Coal realizes he must consider his morals and standards when using his camouflage. Ethics becomes a big issue in the plot, but for a totally different reason. The introduction of his aunt adds a change to the cast of characters, but it also opens the door for an unknown cousin. The story takes an unexpected turn that sends events out of control and will ultimately carry over to this book’s sequel.

Having a new, anonymous owner take control of Mirror Tech infuses a fresh mystique to the plot. Recall, the new owner’s alias, is never seen, but he (or she?) has eyes everywhere in the renamed company, Echo Biometrics. Recall has reassigned many of the former employees, and new cronies now control the camouflage technology. Also, news reports reveal numerous ghost “sightings” around town, and Coal knows he’s only responsible for one of them. Add in Coal’s antsy feeling that he’s being watched, and readers can deduce that someone else is moving around unseen. He discovers that one “ghost” moved his unconscious body to be rescued, so at least one must be friendly, right? What’s the explanation for these ghostly sightings?

What didn’t work as well:

It’s unusual for characters to tell others about their super abilities, so it’s strange to find Coal’s foster family, his best friend, and two characters from Mirror Tech know about his camouflage. Readers may wonder why characters in other books don’t ask for help, but Coal has ample support. His foster parents even know and are helping him manage his ability. It’s not necessarily bad, but it’s very uncommon in middle-grade books. Having a support team will be good in the long run.

The final verdict:

Readers probably don’t need to read Boy 2.0 first, but it will establish prior events more clearly. This book becomes an action-packed adventure story, and I recommend you give it a shot.

Bunns Rabbit by Alan Barillaro

What worked:

Bunns is a lovable, underdog character. Her short ears immediately make her different, and her parents are overly protective. They know the other rabbits are superstitious, and they don’t know how the Elders will react to her appearance. Bunns’ innocence and naiveté will cause readers to develop warm feelings for her and worry about her well-being. Bunns displays unexpected bravery when she leaves home alone to protect the rest of her family. Her curiosity, friendliness, and trust guide her through the forest, which she’s been told never to enter. Lingering insecurities complicate her life. Her adventure into the unknown soon becomes a quest to save the land and water.

The book’s format is unique, as it combines elements of a novel and a graphic novel. Side stories use many illustrations with accompanying brief text to describe the action. Several of these segments share folklore to establish the history of the world and introduce the Spirit Fox character. The main narrative often sounds like the retelling of a tale about Bunns and the Spirit of Land and Fire. All creatures fear the fox and are sure he will eat them or burn down the forest. However, the Spirit Fox takes an interest in Bunns, and their initial meeting takes on a friendly tone. However, Bunns inadvertently does something to anger the fox, and the rest of the story finds Bunn fleeing for her life. Will she be able to atone for her mistake in time to save everyone she cares for?

Bunns’ heartsong is an important element of the plot. It allows Bunns to sense others’ heartsongs and determines if they can be trusted or should be feared. All rabbits can hear each other’s heartsongs, but Bunns has a rare ability to hear the songs in other types of animals. No one has ever heard of that happening before. Rabbits and birds are not allowed to associate with each other, but Bunns becomes best friends with a hummingbird named Bee. She also befriends a loon they call Loon, and the three characters support each other with numerous challenges. Monarch butterflies always flock around the Spirit Fox, but Bunns is the only character able to hear the riddles that they sing. Bunns can’t figure them out, but they’re the key to resolving the plot’s main conflict.

What didn’t work as well:

It might be challenging to determine the appropriate target audience for this book. Bunns is a sweet, cute bunny, but that may not interest older readers. However, the story has deeper meanings and thinking that younger readers won’t understand.

The final verdict:

The deeper message in the story makes this book more fascinating than readers might first expect.  The adorableness of Bunns makes her very likable and relatable, and readers will root for her to overcome her issues with being different. I highly recommend you try this book for yourself. 

The Bionic Boy by Lynn Plourde

What worked:

Although Benji is the main character, his younger sister may be the most entertaining part of the book. Becka is in the first grade and has Down syndrome. Becka’s positivity and friendliness make it almost impossible for readers not to feel good. She says hello to everyone, and her smiling face spreads happiness to everyone she encounters. Becka gets very psyched to participate in the Special Olympics, and her performance there earns her a special honor. She loves Benji unconditionally, and they get along as well as any brother and sister.

Benji was born without hands, and his fathers adopted him into their home. They’re supportive and patient with him, especially as he battles his fears and lack of confidence. Benji is used to his lack of hands, but he’s uncomfortable when others stare at him when they first meet. Meeting a quadruple amputee inspires and excites Benji, but he’s too frightened to ask the man a single question. Benji fears anything he assumes he can’t do, but the staff sergeant’s speech at the Special Olympics gets Benji wondering. Is he brave enough to tackle difficult challenges, knowing that he might fail?

A subplot involves a new neighbor who seems to be angry all the time. Izzy makes it clear that she doesn’t want to be here, and she has no intention of ever speaking to Benji or Becka. Benji can handle being ignored by Izzy, but he’s very protective of Becka and her feelings. No one is allowed to hurt Becka! Readers will find Izzy is almost an unsolvable mystery, as she doesn’t offer any clues to explain her attitude.

What didn’t work as well:

The book’s first half focuses on Becka’s story rather than Benji’s. His handicap is put on the back burner until Benji is offered an opportunity to get bionic arms. However, Becka is delightful, so readers won’t mind the wait. Also, the reason for Becka’s grumpiness is predictable, especially as the author provides small clues.

The final verdict:

This emotional, feel-good story will appeal to readers who enjoy simple plots in a family setting. The topics of Down syndrome, physical disabilities, and adoption are large parts of the book. I recommend you try this book for yourself, but don’t be surprised if you shed a tear or two.

The Beasts of Winter: A Daggers of Ire Novel by J. C. Cervantes

What worked:

Fetch is changed into a fox by the Winter Witch, and she takes Fetch’s younger sister, Violet. The main focus of the plot is Fetch’s quest to rescue Violet, with the subplot being his attempt to stop Celeste’s trap during a festival. The journey includes stops with an oracle (or two if you count Beck), a ghost, a giant, and other magical characters. There are a few ambiguous clues or riddles, and a no-win situation. Fetch has doubts that he’s worthy of saving his sister, but he always follows his heart when making difficult decisions. He faces certain death times, but perhaps those situations weren’t as unquestionable as readers might think.

The author incorporates several elements to create underlying tension and a figurative countdown clock. Violet left behind a handkerchief with magical stitches that once belonged to their mother. The handkerchief is connected to Violet’s heart, but the stitches disappear each day to show the time left before losing her heart. Also, Fetch is unaware that he’s been possessed by a spirit called Malvada. Malvada is searching for someone more powerful to possess, but it’s draining Fetch’s magic while inside his body. Fetch becomes weaker but doesn’t know why. Readers will anticipate the moment when Fetch realizes Malvada’s the spirit within himself or when it finds a more powerful character to possess.

Fetch conjures a tiny bone dragon that may be the highlight of the story. It calls itself Beckblade, and it contributes amusement and mystery while becoming a loyal friend and protector to Fetch. It turns out that Beck’s dreams foretell the future, so readers get a hint of what’s to come. To add humor and novelty, Beck has narcolepsy, meaning he may fall asleep at any moment. His small size doesn’t keep him from performing brave deeds as various dangers arise. Other abilities arise to keep readers guessing. Beckblade always seems to find a way to bridge differences between characters or to bring reason to volatile situations.

What didn’t work as well:

A few questions remain once the conflict is resolved. Readers may want to know more about the dojee’s past after she finishes helping Fetch. Also, readers may be curious about Fetch’s appearance in the future. Perhaps, there’s a sequel in the works?

The final verdict:

This book tells a fun story about a Fox who is determined to rescue his sister and ultimately saves the kingdom. The conflicted main character’s quest draws in creative personalities, and the author inserts complications to increase the drama and tension. I highly recommend you give this book a shot!