Elder Ascending: The Rise of Princess Alex by Jeff Eivers

What worked:

The author quickly gets readers thinking and speculating in the opening pages. The prologue describes a woman being threatened by shapeshifters, telling them her baby is dead. Then, the opening chapter finds 12-year-old Alex writing in her journal about her dream of that same scene. She then goes to Tae Kwon Do class where her sparring partner, Derek, says that she’s more powerful than she knows. Alex is confused about this new student’s knowledge of her, and readers will wonder about his identity and abilities. Alex’s puzzlement will continue throughout the book as she finds herself caught between two factions of Elders. Someone is trying to sabotage Alex’s efforts to find her mother’s crown, and readers will be engaged as they try to figure out the character’s identity. It will be a surprise.

The Hyrands believe the immortals should live in harmony with humans and act as their guardians. However, the Vestrals believe humans should be their slaves, causing a rift with the other Elders. Malachon leads the Vestrals, he wants the rift to continue, and he’ll do anything to stop anyone opposing him. Alex learns that her parents came from the two different sides, and Malachon kills her mother in the book’s opening pages. He wants Alex dead, and she spends much of the story learning to defend herself and avoiding Malachon’s cronies. All the while, she’s trying to learn about the world of Elders and how to master her rapidly emerging abilities. Arthur and Dominic share information from the Hyrand’s point of view, while Derek is sharing contradictory ideas from the Vestrals.

Learning that she’s an Elder princess creates conflicts in Alex’s human life. She begins to clash with her mother, who doesn’t understand the pressures she’s facing. Alex can’t tell her best friend, Jenny, anything either, and this causes animosity and hurt feelings. Alex wants to tell her the truth, but she’s afraid it will endanger Jenny’s life. Alex dreads being around Jenny because she doesn’t know what to say to her friend. She still considers confiding in Jenny until Arthur shares a blunt truth. If any Elders discover Jenny knows the truth, one of them will kill her to protect the secret.

What didn’t work as well:

Being told you are immortal should come as a shock, but Alex takes it in stride. Also, epilogues usually tell readers what’s happening after the plot’s resolution, but this one clarifies something that happened during the story. The word epilogue creates expectations, so perhaps the title should have been left off the last chapter.

The final verdict:

Alex’s situation creates tension and suspense, as her thirteenth birthday becomes a countdown clock. The book has action, complicated character relationships, and mystery, so I highly recommend you try this book yourself.

Greta Grimsdark and the Normal New Neighbor by Haley Neil

What worked:

Making new friends can be challenging for young children, so they can relate to the book’s plot. It can be scary trying to figure out the best way to find common interests with strangers. Greta decides to give her new neighbor a test by starting with a tour of the castle. Agnes isn’t troubled when meeting Greta’s dragon parents or petting the pet alligators out front. Greta thinks she can learn more about Agnes by spying, but she’s surprised when Agnes directly asks her what she likes to do! The story's amusement stems from their starkly different home lives, as they slowly discover common interests and forge a friendship.

Another conflict results from Greta’s perfect housewarming gift for Agnes. She decides a pet will help undo the cuteness of Agnes’s cozy cottage, but her plans don’t work out as planned. Greta follows instructions to trap a monster pet, but she fails to read the small print. Of course, this is a mistake and could have a catastrophic effect. Greta and Agnes must work together to find a solution to their new problem, but they learn that there isn’t a clear way to do it. Young readers will enjoy the zaniness of the problem and the wacky attempts to resolve it, but the two main characters will use them to solidify their budding friendship.

What didn’t work as well:

Agnes doesn’t have any problems accepting Greta’s family and home, which is fine. However, it’s harder to understand why Agnes’s father doesn’t bat an eye about his daughter’s monster pet. The problem, in Greta’s eyes, comes from the family differences, but the effect is muted when other characters don’t seem to notice. 

The final verdict:

This book is perfect for low- to mid-range middle-grade readers. They’ll enjoy the story’s strangeness and Greta’s unusual feelings about “normal” and friendship. I recommend you give it a shot.

A Dash of Daring (Alice Eclair Spy Extraordinaire 4) by Sarah Todd Taylor

What worked:

Alice now has a reputation as one of the most skilled bakers in France, and she once again creates amazing, impressive cakes. She’s joined by Sophie, a young, gifted engineer who also appeared in the previous book. These two characters developed a close rapport, and Sophie is working as an unofficial spy. Alice’s Uncle Robert reappears to cause trouble, as Sophie knows he’s working for the Germans. He was Alice’s mentor until she discovered that he’s a traitor to France. The book’s setting is pre-World War II, and the French fear Germany may be preparing for another war. The missing inventor’s encoding machine will be a game-changer for whichever country possesses it. 

Alice’s baking talents project a compelling cover identity, allowing her to move freely around the training camp. Adele is an aspiring Olympic cyclist, and she’s receiving threatening letters that instruct her to drop out. There’s no apparent reason to target her, and Adele isn’t going to let the messages stop her from competing. The letters sound very similar, so Alice suspects there’s more to them than may appear. Young readers who enjoy mysteries and puzzles will like being inside Alice’s head as she tries to uncover the suspicious messages and threats. 

Alice is joined by a team of unique characters, each one assisting in some way. Adele’s brother, Hugo, is a gifted artist, but he’s forced to use a wheelchair for long periods of walking. Adele and Hugo’s knowledge of their father is invaluable in solving coded letters. Hugo is training a pigeon to deliver messages, and it helps the characters communicate in difficult situations. Even a cat named Casper helps rescue Alice, although it usually causes trouble by sneaking into the kitchen.

What didn’t work as well:

Alice’s ability to create “masterpieces” of pastry and cake is hard to swallow at times. She always manages to come up with amazing recipes and designs even though she has limited time and uses different baking mediums. On the other hand, it makes her seem like a super girl, Alice Éclair, Spy Extraordinaire!

The final verdict:

It’s unclear if there will be a fifth book, but this one wraps up all of the past subplots and problems. This book can be enjoyed on its own, but I recommend you start from the beginning. 

Adventure in the City of Stories (Cousins in the Time of Magic 2) by Emma Otheguy

What worked:

Each book in the series is set in a different time in history. This time, the cousins travel back to the United States in 1930, trying to return a “stolen” book from a present-day New York library. The book creatively describes life during the Great Depression, as the kids navigate the city. There’s an emphasis on racial prejudice, specifically against Puerto Ricans. A wealthy white woman tries to exaggerate her influence by focusing on any negative news stories that involve Puerto Ricans. She wants Puerto Ricans living in New York to become more “American”, although she’s reminded that Puerto Ricans are, in fact, already Americans. Some prejudicial thoughts are eerily similar to those the cousins have experienced in the modern world. The end of the book includes the author's words explaining factual historical information related to elements of the book. 

The cousins, Jorge, Camila, and Siggy, are the main characters, and they each have important roles in the story. Tia Xia is the dependable savior for the cousins during the adventure. The kids know she can always resolve their problems, although they’re all separated in this story. Tia Xia has experience with time travel, and she always seems to know people from previous trips into the past. One Harlem archive owner is aware of her time-traveling and is an invaluable asset in solving the conflict. Tia Xia also seems aware of how situations will work out, creating calmness and confidence in the other characters. An obnoxious, rich bully in the present has a surprisingly helpful part in resolving the conflict in 1930. 

What didn’t work as well:

The characters from the past are too carefree about the cousins traveling through time. They’re more curious and excited about the possibility than alarmed or disbelieving. Also, the mechanics of time travel aren’t clear. The characters hop into small boats and are carried to where and when in history they need to go. 

The final verdict:

You can still enjoy this book without having read the previous one. The plot is fast-paced, and it provides fun information about United States history. I recommend you try it for yourself.

Quetzal's Labyrinth by Karla Arenas Valenti

What worked:

The plot will sound familiar to young readers, as the main character, Diego, learns he is the new gatekeeper charged with saving humanity. He’s a normal thirteen-year-old kid thrust into a battle of gods and evil spirits. The author grabs readers’ interest by opening with a wolf-bear-wild boar sending Diego, Violeta, and a talking dog running for their lives. The setting then goes back two days, but readers know that the book will eventually return to Diego running for his life. The first few chapters are very short, which creates a feeling that the action is moving rapidly. They let readers know that the story will be full of strange creatures and lively action.

The author blends drama and humor, as Diego’s team strives to complete his quest. Throughout the book, Diego is tracked by a creature with five hands, including one on the tip of its tail. It will always be in the back of readers’ minds, and they’ll wonder when it will finally confront Diego. Diego enters the magical world of the gods and finds many characters are willing to help. However, skeptics will consider the possibility that some of them may not be allies. The rubber chicken helps Diego reach the labyrinth and adds levity to the story. The author uses sentence structure and description to develop suspense as the plot nears the climax.

The story is based on Mexican folklore and culture. Quetzal and Tezca are godly brothers who have taken turns wiping out mankind. Tezca will do it once again if he escapes the labyrinth, since Quetzal hasn’t been seen in years. Diego encounters many mythical personalities and creatures, and he’s surprised by some modes of transportation. His abuelo has taught him the history of the myths, and Diego is in disbelief that he’s now a part of it. However, he doesn’t fully realize the closeness of his connection until the plot nears the climax.

What didn’t work as well:

There are short sections when the author uses random creatures to describe what they see. It’s a unique strategy helping explain the story, but it sometimes makes readers pause to understand what’s happening. It’s more effective early in the book when evil minions take control of various animals, for example, a mouse.

The final verdict:

Experienced middle-grade readers will easily follow the story, as Diego is the reluctant hero, facing dangers he’s not ready for. Overall, it’s an entertaining version of Mexican folklore, and I recommend you give it a shot.

Monster and Apprentice by Jessica Khoury

What worked:

The initial description of the Arcanist is creepy and creates mysterious expectations. He’s concealed under a hooded cloak, and a glimpse of his face reveals a dark beard and scarred skin. All of the duke’s guards are afraid to be near the man, as tales of his viciousness are rampant. It’s said that he eats the corpses of slain Cryptids and absorbs their powers. A captain of the guard warns Rolan that ten years in prison will be safer than becoming the Arcanist’s apprentice. However, Rolan figures he can go with the Arcanist and run away at his first opportunity.

The Arcanist is named Luc, and Rolan may be testing his mettle more than Cryptids. Luc offers shelter and steady meals, but he knows that Luc wants to leave. Rolan snoops into places he shouldn’t, and he doesn’t always follow directions. He resists taking a bath but eventually finds himself in a trough full of water. The turning point in their relationship may be when Rolan foolishly tries to follow Luc into the forest but finds himself face to face with a large Cryptid. Rolan is resistant to learning how to read (How does reading help fight Cryptids?), but he eventually agrees if Luc will teach him to fight. Their connection is tested due to Rolan’s lack of discipline and Luc’s secrets.

The plot takes an unexpected turn around its midpoint. Rolan is separated from Luc and returns to the town he left earlier. Cryptids grow from secrets, and the town is full of them. Secrets are the foundation of the story, and readers know that a huge secret will be revealed at some point. An enormous Cryptid is haunting the forest, and Rolan notices that the Arcanist is worried about it. To complicate matters, the people fear the Arcanist because they think he learns about their secrets from slain Cryptids. Rolan can’t believe the townspeople hate and fear Luc when he’s the person protecting them from Cryptid attacks. Even though he may not be ready, Rolan feels he needs to help the Arcanist and prove himself.

What didn’t work as well:

Rolan often has thoughts about his father, but their past relationship is hazy. Rolan thinks about joining his father’s gang, but there’s no evidence the man has any fondness for him. This situation may confuse readers, but it displays Rolan’s strong desire to be wanted.

The final verdict:

Readers may be drawn to this book by the monsters, but the story has heart. Rolan’s stubborn, self-centered attitude is amusing, but the subtle tenderness between Luc and him is the true highlight. I highly recommend you try this book for yourself.

Jazzy the Witch in Friend Fiasco 2 (Jazzy the Witch 2) by Jessixa Bagley

What worked:

All of the characters are witches, but their issues are universal. All young readers will have encountered new students in their schools, and they’ve probably resented showoffs or braggarts. Jazzy and Aggie are best friends, and they’re each top at something in school. Jazzy thinks she’s the best bike rider, while Aggie has been the top student. However, Estrella uses her expensive bike to taunt Jazzy, and Aggie is annoyed when Estrella answers all of the teacher’s questions. Their conflict escalates, and readers will sense their miscommunication or misunderstanding. Young readers will enjoy Jazzy’s familiar, as Fiona the bat enjoys telling corny jokes. Fiona and Aggie’s familiar, Cassie the cat, have an amusing rivalry throughout the book.

The color illustrations clearly communicate the story without being overly detailed. The author uses different font colors and sizes in the captions to convey emotions and tone of voice. The chapters are of reasonable length, providing readers with breaks and allowing emerging readers to feel accomplished. Bonus pages are found at the back of the book, after the plot has been resolved. A Witch-tionary shares information about witches throughout history; most “witches” were healers and midwives. Other pages explain witchy-sounding ingredients or how to moon bathe.

What didn’t work as well:

As with many graphic novels, the story lacks plot and character development. The plot is easy to follow, and readers will probably have some idea about how the conflict will be resolved.

The final verdict:

This book is perfect for young middle-grade or emerging readers. The simple plot and colorful pictures make the book easy to follow, and it shares a valuable lesson about understanding others. I recommend you give this book a shot.

A Most Mysterious Monster (Kevin the Vampire) by Matt Brown

What worked:

The author has created a humorous tale about a carnival of friendly monsters. Kevin is the main character, and he’s a good vampire, so regular expectations don’t apply to him. He’s surrounded by many different kinds of creatures with “normal” personalities and behaviors. He has a pet… something that’s not a dog, but he calls it Dog. Dog behaves much like “normal” pets, but one of his jobs is to be the carnival’s garbage disposal. The last page of many chapters displays interesting “facts” about the various monsters. For example, Dog’s page suggested you don’t let him lick your face. Some chapters follow Susie, who lives with her two aunts. The aunts are humorous characters, as their desire to control Susie is over the top. Susie’s daily to-do list begins with “Sleep”, “Wake up, lazy”, “Sweep floors now!”, and “Make us breakfast.”

The author builds anticipation by referring to the monster in the mountain as the You-Know-What. This ambiguous name doesn’t provide any clues regarding what kind of dangers it might bring. The people don’t provide any clues about what it’s done in the past or why it’s so terrible. Readers will assume it must be really frightening, since all of the townspeople are terrified that it might return. It’s also the reason the town won’t welcome any monsters at all. The mayor is happy that the town is quiet and boring, since it kept You-Know-What from attacking for over seventy years. However, there’s no evidence that the town can protect itself from any dangers.

What didn’t work as well:

The book requires a tolerance for silliness. There are “serious” scenes in the story, but then something silly will be added. For example, hiding from a monster and then falling into its toilet. Also, the book doesn’t spend much time on character development.

The final verdict:

The plot has a clear storyline, and it even gives readers things to think about, namely tolerance for those who are different. It’s probably not for upper middle-grade readers, but I suggest you try it for yourself.

The Haunting of Old Splinter by Jack Mackay

What worked:

The author allows the plot to develop slowly, with the mystery of the wishing claw and the family’s issues always on Peter and Adrian's minds. Adrian loves scary stories, even though they frighten him, and Peter does his best to allay his brother’s fears. Peter finds the corpse of a missing magician in Old Splinter, making the town’s folklore more real. This discovery allows readers to anticipate the moment the brothers will find the hand and unleash the magic.

The wishing claw is comparable to a genie’s lamp, since it takes effect only after a wish is made. Adrian even assumes they’ll only get three wishes, because that’s what he’s read in his stories. On the plus side, the characters have no idea what will happen, so they’re responsible enough to choose their wish words very carefully. After two wishes, they understand the hand has unpredictable consequences and decide to stop. Of course, that doesn’t last long. The consequences seem to become more serious with bigger wishes, and the author moves the plot in a very eerie direction. It becomes reminiscent of ghastly, frightening ghost stories with a peaceful resolution difficult to foresee.

Family relationships are a big factor in the story. Peter and Adrian are half-brothers, but that doesn’t stop them from loving each other. George has married Peter’s mother, but he struggles to call him Dad. Peter’s birth father shows up at times, but that usually stirs up confusing thoughts and feelings. The most difficult exchanges are between George and his brother Lawrence. They’re supposed to be fixing up Old Splinter together, but Lawrence is usually overseas for business. When he shows up, he spoils the boys, especially Adrian, and infuriates George with his carefree attitude. Their brotherly love/hate relationship is a constant thread throughout the book.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers will expect Old Splinter to be a focal point of the story, but it takes a backseat to the wishing claw. The characters frequently enter the house early in the book, but the setting moves elsewhere after the magician’s corpse is found. The claw is haunted, not the house. The book’s title seems misleading.

The final verdict:

The author slowly develops the conflict and suspense, but the book’s second half will get readers’ hearts pounding. I recommend you check it out for yourself.

Shadow Wars: Son of Shadows (The Shadow Wars Series 2) by Sherrilyn Kenyon, Hinako Hishinuma, Madaug Hishinuma

What worked:

The story is based on Japanese mythology, as humans, deities, and monsters interact. Ryuichi is the main character, and his father, Ryucage, is a powerful, feared god in the spirit world. His mother once guarded the gate between the worlds, but that job now falls upon Ryuichi. He doesn’t understand how to use his powers, so he’ll never stand a chance against Orochi. His parents weakened and imprisoned the “World Eater”, so Orochi is focused on gaining revenge. Ryuichi’s mother is gone, Ryucage is missing, so Orochi’s fury and growing power are now aimed at Ryuichi. Ryuichi and his friends think their only desperate hope is to seek help from his violent, malevolent father.

Ryuichi’s team is a highlight of the book. The most unusual character is Ryuichi’s shadow, which has separated from his body. Ryuichi-kage has a mind and spirit of his own, and he enjoys fighting and killing. He reveals something later in the book that adds a countdown clock to the importance of reuniting with Ryuichi. Haruki is a goddess, incessantly insulting and antagonizing the others, often reminding them that they’ll probably die soon. Koichi is Ryuichi’s fighting teacher, but he’s constantly trying to get his hands on sake to drink. Masaru has vowed to protect Ryuichi, and he can enter Ryuichi’s body to make him a formidable warrior. He also likes to banter with Haruki and takes verbal jabs at Koichi. Ryuichi is joined by other colorful characters along the way that create additional entertaining exchanges.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers unfamiliar with Japanese culture may struggle with the language, names, and terms. Also, Ryuichi defeated Ryucage in the first book, but many of the characters that are helping Ryuichi are still loyal to his father. It’s puzzling why demons following Ryucage are helping the character who defeated Ryucage.

The final verdict:

I strongly recommend that you read the first book in the series. Without reading it, readers will feel they're lacking the depth of knowledge needed to fully understand the backstory and current conflict. I recommend you give the series a shot, starting with The Secret War.

Secrets at Sparhawk Point by Anna Rose Johnson

What worked:

The story focuses on two pairs of siblings, neighbors in a remote town in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. The girls are the daughters of the town’s pastor, which adds a layer of moral expectations. The boys know money is tight, so they want to help their mother in any way. The kids make inferences about their parents’ intentions, and readers will sense the desperation about the prospect of moving. The kids are responsible, well-behaved, and respectful of others, and they’re motivated to help their families. Readers will follow their efforts to make a difference, some of them successful while others are not.

The story is connected by the mystery of the lake monster. People speculate about what it might be, and stories about previous sightings arise. Other newspapers build on what’s reported locally, and that’s when complications emerge. Some people wonder if the sightings are related to secret German war efforts. Even though the war is overseas, the author shares its everyday effects on lives in the United States. Metal is used to make army vehicles and supplies, and there are food shortages. The kids help by collecting scraps around town, and many women work at the local factory.

What didn’t work as well:

The plot evolves slowly, as it follows the description found in the synopsis. The main nugget of interest is the fact that the children see an unidentified object in Lake Superior. A UFO, an unidentified floating object? Readers may expect a surprising secret, but it’s nothing earth-shattering.

The final verdict:

This is a wholesome story from a small, laid-back town during the Second World War. The citizens are good people, and readers can relate to their secrets. You should check it out for yourself.

The Band From Another World (Alien Survival Guide 3) by Kevin Garone

What worked:

Each chapter begins with an excerpt from a guidebook that describes what to do in case of an alien invasion. These passages are usually related to events in the book, and Marv follows the information as though it’s the absolute truth. He’s convinced Earth is being invaded, so he interprets most situations as evidence supporting his ideas. The story is told through Marv’s eyes, so readers are aware of every thought of an alien conspiracy. Nora joined his team in the first book, but Marv continues to think her father is an alien. Marv’s given each character a nickname. His best friend, Jace, is called Baller One, Nora is Space Cadet, Kenji is Pyro, and Marv calls himself Gold Leader.

This book introduces a new character named Liv, but Marv immediately starts calling her Alien Lover. As you can guess from her name, Liv thinks visiting aliens will be friendly, and she would like to travel into space with them. Her character contrasts with Marv’s view of aliens, so readers will be entertained by their interactions. On the plus side, they share a strong interest in aliens, so Liv is supportive of Marv’s efforts to find proof. Nora thinks Marv is nuts, and Jace goes along with his friend’s strange ideas. Kenji just loves the adventure and opportunities to play with fire or create pranks.

Considering the possibility of alien lifeforms visiting Earth is an entertaining aspect of the series. Marv is convinced it’s going to happen, or it’s already happened, but the first two books had science-related explanations for what occurred. This book follows that same pattern, so readers start to wonder if aliens will ever show up. Marv and his friends find musical instruments in an old, abandoned house, and they begin to behave strangely. Their behavior is worst while playing the instruments, so readers may suspect they’re possessed by spirits. Marv’s sister, Reformed Skeptic, contacts paranormal experts, and they seem to resolve the problem. However, the handbook warns that a dangerous time period arises when you think everything is fine.

What didn’t work as well:

The story is meant to be humorous, but some readers may think Marv is wackadoodle. The characters' names and nicknames are used interchangeably without a pattern for when they are used. This is unusual since the story is told from Marv’s point of view. He uses nicknames within dialogue, so why don’t his thoughts use those same names?

The final verdict:

This book can be enjoyed on its own, but I suggest you start with the first book in the series, I Know What UFO Did Last Summer. The climax brings back events from previous books, so it will help to be more aware of them. I recommend this book for paranormal/UFO lovers, so give it a chance.

War of the Wings (New Dragon City 2) by Mari Mancusi

What worked:

The story is told from different points of view, as alternating chapters focus on Noah, Maya, and Asha. Noah and Maya are the two main human characters, and they offer contrasting attitudes toward dragons. Noah has been looking forward to the dragons emerging from hibernation, since he’s bonded with Asha, queen of her dragon herd. Maya is fearful of dragons and can’t understand how people have quickly forgotten the destruction they caused. She remembers feeling safe in hiding until dragons killed her grandmother. Noah and Maya are good friends, but readers are well aware that Maya’s negative memories of dragons will be hard to change. Likewise, some dragons can’t understand how Asha and her herd want to be friends with humans. Noah and Asha want their bond to be a beacon of hope for all humans and dragons.

Noah reunites with characters from the series prequel, Dawn of the Dragons, as the plot shifts to their conflict. Lucas bonded with Cinder, princess of her herd, but her brother, Flame, has run off with a few other dragons in the herd. They were told of a settlement in the former city of Boston where humans and dragons live together harmoniously. However, Noah and Asha sense something is off about the City of Scales. Asha is uncomfortable about her initial impressions of the city, and readers should notice clues to reinforce those worries. The dragons here seem to have taken over tasks once done by heavy machines, so the happy alliance between humans and dragons feels shady.

The relationships between the main humans and the dragons are ever-changing. Noah and Asha face rough moments, as Noah sees positives in the City of Scales while Asha continues to worry about how the dragons are treated. Strangely, Noah doesn’t take the time to see things from his bonded dragon’s point of view. Maya’s main emotions toward dragons are still fear and anger, but she has an unexpected encounter below ground. A new character shares some history of the city and how things operate there. This information is invaluable in resolving the conflict and has a profound effect on Maya. 

What didn’t work as well:

Readers should quickly figure out what’s wrong with the dragons in the City of Scales. The clues are evident even as the characters keep saying something feels off. The full extent of the problem still needs to be determined, but the thing that is “off” isn’t a mystery. 

The final verdict:

I haven’t read New Dragon City, but I might recommend you read its prequel, Dawn of the Dragons. The story has a nice blend of close relationships, action, and intrigue, as Noah and his friends try to unite humans and dragons. I recommend you give this book a shot!

The Midnight Guardians by Ross Montgomery

What worked:

Col’s guardians form an entertaining group of characters. Their banter and teasing are incessant and constantly stir up emotions. King of Rogues is a brave, loyal, short knight in full armor, and he suffers from insecurities that cause him to overreact to many comments. Don’t call him Rogue! Mr. Noakes is a talking badger with a keen sense of smell, and he loves to tease the King of Rogues. Pendlebury is a tiger that can transform from the size of a tiny mouse to become as large as a house. She can carry the main characters on her back and constantly acts as the calming influence for the Guardians. They’re later joined by Ruth, a mysterious, angry young girl, although the King of Rogues is leery of her intentions. Spies for the Midwinter King are everywhere.

The Midwinter King presents a formidable character, since he’s gaining strength from the negativity and violence of the war. He controls the Spirit World with an iron fist, and he won’t tolerate any spirits escaping the realm. However, Col’s three guardians have done just that, so the Midwinter King becomes obsessed with recapturing them. Even after discovering the Guardians aren’t actively doing anything to stop his plans of controlling the world, he can’t allow spirits to escape without punishment. The Midwinter King can enter Col’s dreams, and he uses that ability to harass Col with nightmares. Col fears he may give away the Guardians’ location if he falls asleep at night.

Young readers can learn a bit about World War II from the story’s descriptions and occasional pages sharing brief facts from that time. Nighttime is when the Midwinter King becomes stronger, but blackouts were essential during the war with Germany. Throughout the story, characters extinguish lights and cover their windows with dark sheets every night, camouflaging their homes from enemy bombers. It’s difficult to find food and shelter amid the destruction, and families feel safer living farther from the large cities. The people in Europe are overwhelmed by the power of German forces, and they pray that the United States will eventually enter the war and help.

What didn’t work as well:

The passages about World War II aren’t necessary. They’re not always directly related to events in the story, and the information isn’t detailed or specific. The plot would not be affected if these passages weren’t present.

The final verdict:

The story stresses love for family and friends. The book will appeal to readers who enjoy quests, humor, and unusual characters. I recommend you try it for yourself.

The Mystery of Insch Brae House by Susan Fiddes

What worked:

The author describes a mysterious, depressing setting for Muriel, as she’s sent to stay with a guardian she’s never met. Miss Floss demeans her at every opportunity to the point where Muriel is afraid to move about the house. The house itself is drab and dusty, with most of the rooms standing empty. However, food surprisingly appears outside her bedroom door, but it seems Miss Floss doesn’t know anything about it. Strange sounds and Muriel’s curiosity lead her to begin investigating the house.

The author uses short chapters, which should appeal to young readers. The conflict focuses on the history of Insch Brae House, since Muriel doesn’t understand why it’s in such poor condition now. She deduces that it may have been a school where Miss Floss once worked, but Muriel wants to know why she’s now so sad and bitter. A young boy from town joins Muriel halfway into the story, and together, they follow clues to uncover what happened to the house and Miss Floss. The truth involves bullying and a tragic love story and builds to a surprising climax.

What didn’t work as well:

The prologue and an early chapter describe Muriel’s father in India. He’s injured during an earthquake, and her mother travels there to be with him. However, her parents aren’t a major part of the story, and readers may be disappointed or surprised by that. Perhaps the parents will be more present in the book’s sequel.

The final verdict:

The plot isn’t a suspenseful mystery, but it features unique characters and a heart-warming ending. I suggest you give it a shot.

The Nightkeeper’s Apprentice by Jude Reid

What worked:

Eilidh joins her aunt and cousin on a barren, rocky island, and readers' speculation begins with her arrival. She’s told to never enter the lighthouse but isn’t given a reason. Most readers will join Eilidh, as her imagination comes up with many ways to explain why she can’t visit a lighthouse that doesn’t shine a warning light for ships. Adding to the intrigue is the question of what her aunt can possibly be doing in there every day. Readers know that something will happen, making Eilidh eventually break her promise to her aunt and venture into the strange tower. This will change the trajectory of the story.

Two characters contribute to the mystery and an unpredictable course of events. Magnus is Eilidh’s cousin, and he’s fairly quiet for much of the story. He clearly doesn’t want her around and spends much of his time stomping around the house or going off on his own outside. He knows about the lighthouse and its secrets, and he moves about the property as if he’s searching for something. Later, Cam joins the story, and he’s the ghost mentioned in the synopsis. He feels he hasn’t moved on because of unfinished business, but he has no idea what it might be. Ghosts always include a bit of uncertainty. However, Cam infuses some humor as he becomes acquainted with Eilidh.

There’s a simmering conflict behind the scenes between the Finfolk and the Landfolk, though it isn’t clear whether the humans are aware of it. Long ago, all creatures were Finfolk until some discovered a way to live on shore by trading their fins for legs. Eventually, Landfolk forced Finfolk to remain in the ocean, and they then took all the fish and polluted the waters. Finfolk have never forgotten. Sing-In-The-Shallows is infatuated by Landfolk, but she’s angered by their wars and killing. The author inserts pages between some chapters that explain what Sing-In-The-Shallows is doing and what she observes. Readers will remain curious as they discover how she fits into the story. A magical horn emerges as a major conflict, but readers must wait to find out what it means.

What didn’t work as well:

The Finfolks’ current attitude toward Landfolk is unclear. The pages about Sing-In-The-Shallows describe her curiosity about humans and how she helps them in times of need. However, she says the other Finfolk wouldn’t approve of her actions, but they don’t enter the story until the very end. Their feelings are still ambiguous even after that scene.

The final verdict:

Readers under ten years of age can still enjoy this book. It’s reminiscent of Irish selkie stories and creepy water creatures. The mystery of the Nighthouse will keep readers captivated, although readers will predict that Eilidh will make a questionable decision. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Grimlore Game by Kalyn Josephson

What worked:

Grimlore Manor is a magical house, although none of the characters are stereotypical back-stabbing relatives. The curse causes scenes to change and memories to be shared. These visions offer information that can be used to solve puzzles and end the Grimlore Game. Kit is shocked to see a fancy-dressed cat open the front door when she first arrives, and even more surprised to learn no one else can see him. Carmine is an aloof character and feels no need to speak with Kit. Her luggage floats up to her suite, and meals are prepared by bowls and utensils guided by Carmine’s instructions. Kit’s best friend is a tarantula named Gregor with an insatiable love for sweets. He’s not magical, but he adds color to the story.

Kit is full of emotions that will take readers on a rollercoaster adventure. Her parents were victims of the curse, and Kit desperately misses her father. They used to solve all kinds of puzzles together, and Kit uses that knowledge to unlock new clues. She doesn’t really have a home anymore, since her relatives only tolerate her because she might inherit Amos’s money. Kit doesn’t hide her disdain for them, and they treat her like a rude, disobedient little girl. Readers will wonder what will become of Kit once the Grimlore Game concludes. No one shows her any kindness, so who will become her new guardian? Kit slowly comes to realize the game may be more about solving the curse than locating the family wealth.

Mystery and puzzle lovers should enjoy this book, as that’s the driving force of the plot. All of the Devlin relatives gather for the reading of their grandfather’s will, hoping to inherit his wealth. Kit never met the man, but he seemed to favor her over all of her aunts and uncles. She encounters a puzzle box, riddles, and other confusing clues that lead to other mysteries. Kit gets reluctant help from her cousin Harlow, but he has low self-esteem and is afraid of almost everything. Initially, Kit thinks she needs to do everything herself, but she’s forced to admit she needs Harlow. All the while, Kit doesn’t understand why her Grandfather Amos took an interest in her.

What didn’t work as well:

Excerpts from “A Guide to Curses” follow some of the chapters. They often repeat information readers already know, but they also add some food for thought. However, they don’t add much to the overall story.

The final verdict:

The book’s charm comes from Kit’s journey to break the curse and find a home where she can feel wanted and safe. The search for clues will appeal to mystery lovers, and the plot builds to an unexpected resolution. I recommend you try this book for yourself!

Chloe Vega and the Missing Unseen (Chloe Vega and the Agents of Magic 2) by Leslie Adame

What worked:

The Unseen is a barrier separating the magical and non-magical worlds. In the first book, Chloe accepted one of the three strongest gems in the world, the opal gem, but this time she learns of its side effects. Using the power destroyed the Unseen around the Mexican-United States border, so innocent people are being exposed to dangers and magic for the first time. The immigration issue remains a conflict in the story, as Chloe’s parents are undocumented. Congress is considering a bill that will make life easier for immigrants, and the academy students are well aware of its effect. In the meantime, Osthall and his followers still want to eliminate the Unseen all over the world. 

As with many middle-grade speculative fiction books, Chloe doesn’t know how to handle her immense new power, and readers learn it responds to her emotions.  She is thirteen years old, and it’s difficult to control feelings at this stage of life. She loses control of herself a few times, and she’s very distressed after harming her best friend. Other students hate or fear her, except for her closest friends, so the school drama is ramped up. The adults decide it will be best to remove the gem’s powers from Chloe, but the security council may use an illegal process to do it. Reese offers to tutor Chloe in a process that will make it easier for her to voluntarily give up the power. However, Reese used to be Osthall’s second in command, so readers will be leery of his intentions. Chloe’s emotional turmoil is a highlight.

The opening chapters are full of action, as Chloe is attacked several times before arriving at the academy. She faces personal attacks at school, and a council representative aggressively tries to catch her making mistakes. One more misuse of Chloe’s opal power will result in it being painfully extracted from her. Chloe alienates her friends to keep them safe, even though she needs as much emotional support as she can get. The plot builds to a dramatic showdown full of fighting and surprises. Readers will need to figure out which characters are behind Chloe and which ones are secretly working against her. Readers will be shocked by the final revelations. 

What didn’t work as well:

Some readers may tire of Chloe’s constant drama with friends and the council representative. However, these trials and tribulations are important for developing the conflict and plot. They complicate her mastery of the opal gem and add suspense to the story. 

The final verdict:

Readers should probably start with the first book in the series. This one is full of conflicted feelings and character relationships, but the author’s surprises at the end are especially entertaining. I highly recommend you give it a shot.

The Book Trap (Pix and Gabe) by Kate Machon

What worked:

This book will have loyal readers thinking back to the first one when Pix was getting to know Gabe. She is forced to partner with Memoria from the Angel Archives, and the relationship has a rocky start. Memoria says Pix has “obstinate behaviour”, which is accurate, and readers will enjoy Pix’s mischievous actions as she tries to mess with the angel. Pix did the same thing with Gabe when they started working together, and they’re reunited in trying circumstances. Gabe is thrust into a book and can’t escape without completing different challenges. Luckily, Pix joins him, and she has no problem using deceit, trickery, and mischievous pranks to help her friend. Gabe’s situation forces Pix to conjure more spells than in the past, and she taps into powers that she’s not supposed to have.

Angels are notorious rule-followers, but Caelix has created Gabe’s tests. Caelix seems to have a huge grudge against Gabe, and the tasks don’t follow normal angel rules. Pix’s efforts to help Gabe are hampered because Gabe won’t tell his faerie friend any useful information about his past relationship with Caelix. This creates a mystery for young readers, as they try to figure out how Pix can best help Gabe. The angels have quickly turned against him, forcing Gabe to go into hiding. Pix takes the initiative to clear her friend’s name and reveal the treachery creeping into the angel world. However, there’s a time factor, as Caelix’s power is growing.

The relationship between Pix and Gabe is challenged. Pix is sure Gabe is keeping secrets even though they’ve promised to be honest with each other. Gabe said it was necessary if they were going to remain friends. However, Pix thinks she can’t help fight Caelix if she doesn’t understand the problem’s origins. On the other hand, Pix isn’t sharing all of her secrets, but she thinks she has no choice. Pix continues to help Gabe, but there’s a real question as to whether their friendship will survive.

What didn’t work as well:

It’s not essential that you read the first two books, but there are references to things Pix and Gabe did in the first book. It also feels like Pix is casting spells in every chapter, and it feels like too much. Much of the story takes place in the magical worlds of pixies and angels, so perhaps it makes sense.

The final verdict:

This book is more “serious” than the previous books, since Pix must use her antics and thinking skills to solve a big problem. In the past, there was more collaboration between Pix and Gabe, but Pix controls almost all decisions driving the plot. I highly recommend you read this book, and it’s not a bad idea to start with the beginning of the series. 

The Wondrous Tale of Lavender Wolfe by Karen Foxlee

What worked:

The setting aboard the pirate ship is strange, as all children develop their magic. Lavender finds herself below deck working with the kitchen crew. However, Big Agatha says it’s bad luck to have girls in the kitchen, so Lavender immediately has her hair cut off and is given the name Hans Whitby. The children’s magic is varied, as one can measure ingredients by sight, another can fly, and another can summon birds. Big Agatha calls the six children in the kitchen her rats and orders and threatens them. However, rats is an endearing term, and she’s quick to give hugs, offer soothing words, and magic cooking.

Big Agatha and the rats tell a tale about the origin of the ship’s curse, and it’s identifiable by the boldface font. A wizard cast a spell that will take full effect at the end of the year, so the conflict has a deadline to increase tension. As the plot progresses, readers will learn that some of the characters are connected to the original curse. Hans/Lavender begins to understand what’s at stake, and she faces a big choice. Does she try to escape the ship like her friend Colin, or does she stay on the ship and risk the same cursed fate of the crew? The characters' emotional trials are a highlight.

The author has a creative mind and masterful talent for description and language. The words will make readers think, create vivid mental images, and evoke a full range of emotions. Hans becomes torn about returning to her mother or remaining on the ship as a pirate. She defiantly reminds herself that she’s Lavender, but readers will notice how that inner voice becomes less insistent. Big Agatha is distressed every time one of her kitchen rats joins the crew on deck, as she demonstrates love and caring for them. The author subtly describes the camaraderie among the rats, and readers will become empathetic toward their fates and ever-changing relationships.

What didn’t work as well:

The thing that makes this book special may also make it confusing for young readers. Amazon suggests it for ages eight and older, but 8-year-olds will find connections between the plot and Agatha’s tale confusing. The book is also described as “playful illustrated”, but there are limited pictures that don’t majorly impact the story.

The final verdict:

Older middle-grade readers will enjoy this adventure and the author’s inventive world-building. Lavender/Hans is a dynamic character, and her emotional journey is gripping. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Neverfear (Impossible Creatures 3) by Katherine Rundell

What worked:

Christopher helps a mother unicorn deliver its distressed baby, but there’s an unexpected result. Somehow, touching the infant imbues Christopher with the ability to receive animals’ thoughts and emotions. It comes in handy at times, such as when controlling an injured behemoth, but it also carries potentially dangerous consequences. It affects him physically and can become overwhelming. Readers know this is a significant ability, and it will impact the story before the problems are resolved.

As the book’s title implies, it’s full of unusual and impossible creatures and characters. Jacques is back, and this tiny dragon with attitude is Christopher’s companion and a source of amusement for readers. Companion might be the wrong word, because Jacques constantly questions decisions and tells the humans how they’re doomed. He also has many flowery instructions for Christopher to write in the dragon’s biography. Manticores, Cerberus, and giants are imposing obstacles, or they assist the characters. The author’s imagination will introduce readers to other creatures that they’ve never heard of. The back of the book contains illustrations and descriptions for many of them.

The plot focuses on Irian’s rescue after being kidnapped by bandits. Christopher and Anya are forced to rescue her on their own, since the kidnappers have forbidden them from telling Nighthand, her husband. This restriction enhances the conflict because Nighthand is a berserker and formidable warrior. Christopher and Anya are ordered to obtain three objects that were once part of Hercules’s thirteen labors. They question why the kidnappers want these three specific items and wonder if something larger is happening. The Immortal was an important character in the first book but was absent from the second. The Immortal is reborn as a young boy, and his presence complicates the conflict. A new antagonist, Astor Morax, is introduced, and his evil plans will continue into the next book.

What didn’t work as well:

The plot mostly follows Christopher and Anya, so readers might want to know more about the other characters. However, the author saves a surprise about Anya for later in the book, although astute readers will suspect it. Also, it would be nice to have the illustrations of creatures within the story instead of grouping them at the end.

The final verdict:

Lovers of adventure and uncommon beasts will enjoy this book. Serious dangers threaten this world, and the events come to a dramatic climax, or two. I highly recommend you try this book for yourself, and further, I suggest you start with the first book in the series. 

Ghost in the Night by Tiffany D. Jackson

What worked:

As you might guess from the synopsis, this ghost story turns into a mystery. A popular black man is murdered, his grandson goes missing, and Harmony’s new friend Myah is determined to find the killer. Myah is also dealing with the consequences of a poor decision, but readers don’t learn the details until later. Robby is a precocious ten-year-old dealing with an overprotective mother. Harmony is still grieving for her recently deceased grandmother, and she’s been touring with her father’s band for the past six months. She wonders if she’s already seen her grandmother’s ghost, so she’s more open to the possibility of spirits in the most haunted city in America.

The narrative is a nice blend of fiction, true ghost tales, and the history of New Orleans and Savannah. The author acknowledges she took some liberties “to keep this story PG”, since some of the actual tales are “REALLY gruesome”. There are links in the back of the book to some of the author’s favorite ghost tours and sources of ghostly information. The narrative includes actual locations and real people who lived in Savannah. The author includes information about the abuse and disrespect shown toward slaves, and readers may be surprised to know that parts of Savannah are built atop mass graves.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers looking for a ghost story will be disappointed. The book has more information about ghosts than it does about a spooky story. The mystery of the murder is the driving force of the plot, along with the children’s subplots mentioned above. The book’s second half becomes more interesting as things fall into place.

The final verdict:

Despite the backdrop of ghost stories and a murder mystery, the story of the three children is most engaging. I recommend this book to readers interested in learning about ghosts and children dealing with hardships. 

The Magic Library of Waterfall Way (The Prophecymakers) by Julie Abe

What worked:

Lyra is immediately cast into the role of underdog when she’s labeled Extremely Unremarkable. She’s the only Unremarkable in the empire, and the empire’s census shows it. She’ll be sent to the Mist if a guild doesn’t accept her, and every guild so far balks when they become aware of her status as Extremely Unremarkable. Readers will develop empathy for Lyra’s character because she’s desperate to find a place she can call home. Her parents are dead, and her older sister is in the Guild of the Crown, so she doesn’t have any family left. The Guild of Scholars is her last chance to avoid the Mist.

The Guild of the Crown is cast in a negative light, as its superiority is lorded over everyone else. This guild will probably become more of a focus in future books, but the Mist is the true antagonist this time. The Mist was once united with the Guilds, but they were separated hundreds of years ago. The Mist wants to control all of the magic in the world, although they’re appeased when the Guilds send them any Unremarkables who are not part of a guild. Readers and Lyra will learn more about the Mist throughout the book, as Lyra reads and hears stories about the past. The topic of Prophecymakers arises later in the plot, but it’s very important to the series.

Two supporting characters are important to the plot for different reasons. Wishlight is a sable that can transform into a book, with a tail. Lyra and Wishlight can communicate through their minds, and Wishlight possesses a bit of magic. Wishlight gives Lyra an unexpected quest that becomes the conflict’s main conflict. Flynn is the assistant to the Guild Master, and his dislike for Lyra is evident. He openly says he wishes she’d leave, even though they’ve both lost family members. There are moments when they seem to bond, but any camaraderie doesn’t last.

What didn’t work as well:

Lyra’s quest is unusual, as it involves reopening halls in the library that closed following a great fire. She makes attempts to find the keys, but she can always leave whenever she wants to have dinner or rest in her bed. Venturing inside the library presents dangers, but the ability to leave makes it unusual.

The final verdict:

The fact that Lyra is an orphan and only wants to find a new family and home will touch readers’ heartstrings. The premise of the book is fresh and innovative, and I recommend you give it a shot!

The Missing Magic of Sparrow Xia (An Illustrated Novel) by Leia Ham

What worked:

Sparrow, real name Ruyan, is an unassuming, humble student, trying to learn about magic before it’s lost. All children in this setting possess magic while knowing they’ll lose it as adults. Her older brother Ainsley is a third-year student, but he’s recognized for his powerful fire magic. In contrast, the fire Sparrow summons is barely larger than the flame on a match, and she feels inadequate when compared to other students, especially her brother. However, she sees a vision while being tested for her magical ability, and she’s told that’s usually an indicator of strong power. The head healer examines her and says something is blocking Sparrow’s ability to access her power. This tells readers that there’s more to her character than they currently see, and they’ll await the moment her powers awaken.

Sparrow becomes obsessed with finding out the cause of magedrain, which is causing students to lose their magic. She thinks it’s not natural reasons and suspects that someone is poisoning their classmates. Sparrow quickly identifies a suspect, but readers will question if she’s right. The suspect seems too obvious, and Sparrow makes all of her observations and “evidence” fit this person. The illness is attacking students with the strongest magic, so Sparrow fears her brother may be one of the next victims. Her friend wonders if Sparrow is more concerned about finding the guilty party or proving her brother wrong. Good question.

The school’s purpose is to strengthen students’ magic, and it’s interesting to see the variety of mages. Besides Sparrow’s fire, her best friends Lyndon and Orla possess air and nature magic, respectively. All of the students want stronger powers, although Lyndon has a special interest in magecraft, the art of engineering magic. The school includes a first-year bully who goes out of her way to heckle and tease Sparrow. Sparrow eventually has an unexpected reaction to the girl’s harassment, but it’s important to the story.

What didn’t work as well:

It would be nice to know more about a few of the supporting characters. Ainsley is a conflicted mage, but readers are only shown his arrogant side. Camellia taunts Sparrow throughout much of the story, but behaves differently later on. Readers don’t really know exactly what changed to cause this new version of herself.

The final verdict:

The book has many of the same traits as other stories about schools for magic students, although it’s unusual that none of the teachers can perform it. The plot focuses on the mystery of magedrain and Sparrow’s drive to prove herself, culminating in a surprising revelation that will continue into the sequel. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Jamie Cooper and the Touchscreen Portal by J.P. Harper

What worked:

The format will be familiar to middle-grade readers, as an underdog, Jamie, teams up with two students at opposite ends of the student spectrum. Dan is a large, quiet boy whom everyone else avoids out of fear. Lakshmi is a popular, top student who brings her knowledge to the group. A twist involves Jamie’s older brother, as his father has moved to this small town for a fresh start. The early chapters inform readers that Cameron died, but they soon learn that he actually disappeared. This fact leaves the door open for Cameron to reappear later.

Visiting a new world is nothing new, although this book connects Myridiam to video games. The mysterious messages and portal to the world arise from Jamie’s iPad, and a version of it allows him to return home. Much of his experience doesn’t feel like virtual reality, although Jamie, Dan, and Lakshmi see text in their peripheral vision that identifies unknown creatures and weapon upgrades. Upon arriving in Myridiam, a chamber chooses a bow for Jamie, giving him the ability to rapidly shoot arrows with electrical charges or fire. Dan is assigned gleaming armor along with a shield that can grow to protect him and others from attacks. Lakshmi receives a staff that fires an energy beam and other powers that are revealed when needed.

It’s interesting to note that these three Guardians don’t overtly kill anyone with their powerful weapons, and there are many fighting scenes where that can happen. The only clue that an opponent might have been slain is a VR message indicating Jamie’s arrow made a critical hit. The kids have virtuous characters that aren’t immediately evident in the early chapters. This quality and their merciful nature make others respect and admire them, which is especially important when they venture within the borders of suspicious, aggressive Sothian warriors.

What didn’t work as well:

The ending is disappointing, as it leaves readers needing to read the sequel to resolve unfinished business. Also, the characters get into dire, no-win situations, but the arrows, staff, or armor get sudden upgrades to get them out of it, especially Lakshmi’s staff. It sometimes feels like cheating, since the characters don’t use their talents or intelligence to come up with solutions.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to middle-grade readers who enjoy underdog characters with unexpected abilities. The purity and compassion of the main characters are admirable, as they aid new allies to save Myridiam. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Odyssey (A Classic Tale by Homer) Retold by Geraldine McCaughrean

What worked:

The book is based on Greek mythology, so young readers will be familiar with most of the gods mentioned. Zeus, Poseidon, and Athena are important to the story, as Odysseus’s behavior sometimes angers them, or he prays to them for help. Readers who enjoyed the Percy Jackson books or movies will recognize the Lotus Eaters, the cyclops, and the Sirens. The book offers aspects of mythology that young readers may not know, such as Odysseus blinding the cyclops, Polyphemus. The author’s retelling of Homer’s short stories makes them more understandable and faster-paced for a middle-grade audience.

Each chapter tells a different adventure where Odysseus and his crew struggle for their lives. They’ve been away from Ithaca for ten years, so they’re desperate and determined to return home to their wives and children. The first story finds Odysseus’s crew beguiled by the Lotus Eaters, as their food mesmerizes them into complacency without a motivation to leave. The second chapter introduces Polyphemus, and Odysseus’s decision to blind him changes the trajectory of the rest of the book. Poseidon is furious that his son can no longer see, so he finds all kinds of ways to punish Odysseus by impeding his progress or putting him in perilous situations.  

What didn’t work as well:

The book is a collection of short stories, and Odysseus is the only character connecting them all. Little time is spent developing characters, because there isn’t much of a reason. Everyone except Odysseus dies.

The final verdict:

The original Homer version of The Odyssey would intimidate young readers, but the author’s retelling makes it accessible. The collection of brief stories with life-threatening conflicts will appeal to all adventure lovers. I recommend you give this book a shot.