Skygull Calamity by Bronwyn Fairchild

What worked:

The setting is quite unusual, as Nova City sits vertically atop long stilts in the middle of the ocean. Blue, the main character, works in a weather station at the top, alongside a retired zephyr named Lucado. The wealthy live on the upper levels with a nice view of the sky, while the poor, like Blue and his mother, live on the lower levels. Thelanamous Green runs Green Industries and the Zephyr Consortium, and his influence makes him the most powerful man in Nova City. Rain and snowstorms with high winds constantly bash the structure, and the Consortium has ignored Lucado’s warnings of an imminent catastrophe. Blue’s daily climbs to the weather station using rope ladders and back down to deliver Lucado’s weather reports help readers understand the difficulties of living in a vertical city. However, it seems evident that the Consortium is hiding secrets, but why?

Blue’s mother was a famous pilot, and he once hoped to follow in her footsteps, but he failed to pass the initial entrance test. Blue feels pressure from many directions, causing readers to empathize with him. His family is poor, and his position as an apprentice zephyr would have provided a significant, steady income. Thelanamous thinks Lucado is insane, so Blue knows his family will be homeless if he loses his job. A girl named Coraline brings intrigue to the plot, as she’s been studying the worsening weather for years. Blue doesn’t want anything to do with her, but she’s persistent. Maybe she’ll become a friend? And what about the photo Blue finds showing his mother in a place that’s not Nova City? Throughout the story, Blue compares his anxiety levels to severe storms and ranks his fear on a scale from 1 to 11. The numbers help describe Blue’s stress as he encounters ever-perilous challenges.

The story takes a turn when Blue and Tate miraculously find Lost City. The book’s second half introduces new characters, drama, and conflict, and the plot includes several surprises. Blue learns more about his mother’s past, but many questions remain. Tate always seems to know more than Blue, but even she may not have the answers to escape Lost City. The pair discovers the cause of the dangerous tempests threatening Nova City, but the kids are shocked when they learn its origins. It won’t be easy to find a solution, because people are willing to do anything to keep the storms brewing.

What didn’t work as well:

There are “miraculous” events that will test readers’ tolerance. Blue suffers falls in death-defying situations, but he always survives with minimal injuries. Tate is a smart girl, and she always has the skill or knowledge needed to solve any problem they face. The pair somehow escapes two instances in which their flying machine is blown to pieces.

The final verdict:

The book’s early chapters have drama, but things get very interesting when the plot shifts to Lost City. I recommend this book to lovers of adventure, science fiction, and steampunk.

 

The Traitor Moth by Katharine Orton

What worked:

How many books have you read that feature moths? Catclaw is the main character, and he belongs to the Nameless clan. Dreamkins used to have the ability to see premonitions of the future until the queen of all moths took that power away. Their clan is now known as Nameless. Most moths live around twelve moon turns, which readers will assume means twelve months. The moths find refuge in trees, tall grasses, and other vegetation, and it’s dangerous for them to fly during daylight hours. Bats and toads are common, natural enemies for moths, but Bluewings are mutant wasps that nearly wiped them all out. Catclaw fears the Bluewings are now returning.

The main conflict finds Catclaw on a quest to speak with the moth queen. He has a premonition of Bluewing attacks, and it’s believed the queen once repelled them by using her voice. However, the Nameless don’t believe Catclaw had a vision, so it’s unlikely other clans will listen to him. The queen rarely agrees to see visitors, and Catclaw must collect tokens from the other clans before he can even hope to approach her. The Nameless haven’t had contact with the other clans for years, and Catclaw discovers the situation is much worse than he expects. The other clans aren’t communicating with each other anymore, so how is he supposed to collect the tokens he needs? A huge surprise awaits once he finally reaches the queen’s fortress, and the book’s title makes sense.

The author includes some mystique to accent its speculative fiction. The Nameless Master dies, but first, he gives Catclaw his diary. Catclaw carries it with him during his adventure, but he realizes the book provides guidance. He thinks or speaks questions, and the book displays cryptic answers. However, the last page also states Catclaw Traitor. Catclaw has premonitions of future events, so readers are given hints of what’s to come. In contrast, italicized paragraphs relate to stories Master Saturna told Catclaw in the past, and they provide information related to current happenings. Catclaw also senses someone is watching him during his journey, but he’s never able to spot anyone.

What didn’t work as well:

Even though all kinds of creatures can be found in speculative fiction books, some readers may still have trouble wrapping their minds around moths. Some of the descriptions and movements are hard to visualize when readers consider the characters are moths.

The final verdict:

The title and moth characters may confuse young readers, but the plot contains everything they’ll want. Catclaw is an admirable character as he’s trustworthy and determined to save the clan that shunned him. Overall, I recommend adventure lovers check out this book.

Last Year With Maddy by Anna Rosner

What worked:

The story is told from Aviva’s first-person point of view, and she reflects on happy and troubled times with her best friend, Maddy. Aviva desperately laments about not speaking to Maddy anymore and hints at the reason. Readers will imagine what might have happened to keep best friends apart. The narrative is written using a middle-grade voice, including Aviva’s love for italics, capital letters, and poetry. Readers will understand her difficulties when she describes troubled moments, and these segments are offset by happier times together. The book’s purpose is presented as Aviva’s message to Maddy, and two pages at the end share Maddy response.

Midway into the book, the plot shifts to Aviva’s three-year-old brother. Unfortunately, serious childhood health issues aren’t uncommon, and Ethan’s development is delayed. He only says a couple of words, and he refuses to toilet train. A doctor diagnoses a physical problem, and the family hopes that surgery will make things better. However, they learn that Ethan is on the autistic spectrum, so he’s going to need to go through many different therapies to improve his deficiencies. The author shares a great deal of information and explanations about autism, and young readers will learn autistic people are different, not less.

What didn’t work as well:

Aviva states that she always says the wrong thing, but readers may disagree. She catches herself from saying things she shouldn’t, and her slip-ups don’t seem that offensive. Her worst comments arise when she’s angered, so readers can understand and forgive her for them. One of Aviva’s positive qualities is her empathy for others, and young readers can learn from her good example.

The final verdict:

The author shares an emotional tale of two close friends and the ups and downs they must navigate. Aviva acts as the narrator, so young readers can experience her rollercoaster of thoughts and feelings. I recommend this book for all middle-grade readers.

The First Flame (The Aerimander Chronicles Book 2) by Lily Berlin Dodd

What worked:

The same main characters from the first book regroup to save an aerimander from danger. Aerimanders will remind readers of dragons, and the main one in this story is Rubi. Dusty and Eva guarded her egg until she hatched, and they still have a connection with her. Eva and Dusty can sense when the aerimander is near, which comes in handy when they try to locate Rubi in the mountains. The story takes a surprising turn when the characters finally locate her, or rather, Rubi finds them.

Dusty, Eva, and Myrna bring contrasting talents to the story. Dusty grew up in an orphanage before escaping, so he has street smarts and physical skills the others lack. He has other abilities and connections thanks to his time in the Thieves Guild. Eva is book-smart and outspoken, so don’t expect her to hold her tongue. She has a keen eye for details and a talent for creativity. Readers find her in a reformatory for problem girls when she enters this story. Myrna is Eva’s best friend, and her strengths are planning and a sensitivity to nature. Eva is rescued from the reformatory thanks to Myrna’s step-by-step plans.

Several elements of the plot will have readers wondering about upcoming events. Myrna is not immune to aerimander flame, like Dusty and Eva, so it’s dangerous for her to be around them. Eoin Parnassus, the story’s evil antagonist, is searching for Rubi and wants to use her as a weapon. He’s nearing the mountains where Rubi is hiding, and he’s dragging a heavy box along with him. It’s obviously not good news, but what is in the box? Dusty, Eva, and Myrna discover people secretly living in the mountains, and the three kids pass a test to join their school. They’ll learn common school topics, but they’ll learn all about the aerimanders. However, these people seem to know everything about the trio, and Eva wonders how that’s possible. There’s a huge secret they’re not being told.

What didn’t work as well:

Rubi’s size may be confusing. On one hand, Dusty can carry her in his arms, but later she picks him up and flies him away to safety. There’s also a scene later in the book where Dusty and Eva wear a protective covering to complete a ceremony. However, Myrna later walks the same path without the same protection. Confusing. However, overall, this is a solid book.

The final verdict:

Readers should begin with the first book, The Last Ember, to fully understand the backstory. I recommend it for lovers of dragons and adventure.

I Know You Started It by Daphne Benedis-Grab

What worked:

The main characters represent the kinds of students readers encounter every day in school. Gabe is always angry and in trouble, but he’s promised himself that he’s going to change. He fears he’ll be accused of arson, and public opinion will find him guilty. Gabe, Liam, Dani, and Kate are the first witnesses called to the principal’s office, and Gabe is convinced that makes them look like suspects. Kate’s on the school newspaper, and she used to be best friends with Dani. Now, they don’t talk anymore, and readers are left to wonder what happened. Liam is new to the school, and no one has taken an interest in him. Maybe helping to find the arsonist will finally make classmates notice him. The chapters alternate the focus among these four characters, revealing their individual struggles.

Rumors, gossip, and cyberbullying are major issues. It’s what motivates Gabe, Liam, Dani, and Kate, and they think they must solve the arson case before the end of the school day. Classmates’ gossip will find them guilty if they wait for the principal to finish her investigation. Jonathan’s locker was the arsonist’s target, but he’s one of the most popular kids in school. Does Jonathan have a secret, unsavory side that makes someone hate him? As it turns out, identifying the fire-starter doesn’t end the story. Additional planning is needed before justice is served.

What didn’t work as well:

The synopsis says the setting is in a middle school, but it’s actually a combined middle school and high school. The high school characters make the book appeal to a more mature audience, but the narrative's vocabulary and sentence structure are appropriate for younger readers. It’s also unrealistic to think the entire story takes place between homeroom and 2:00 PM in one school day.

The final verdict:

The issues and characters are probably most relevant to teens, but the reading level is appropriate for mature middle-grade readers. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Time Thief (Solve Your Own Mystery 2) by Gareth P. Jones

What worked:

The series includes a good deal of humor and strange events, which should appeal to young readers. Detective Klaus drives a car that used to be a dog. It wags its tailpipe when it’s happy or excited and makes soft, satisfied sounds when you scratch its car seats. Two talking gargoyle statues watch a museum’s back entrance, where a medusa-like character is the curator. The main police inspector is a minotaur, and the lead detective is an elf walking on stilts. A banshee news reporter details the facts of her stories, or she makes them up to make the stories more appealing to her readers.

The premise of the series is that the reader is Klaus’s assistant, and they make decisions on which clues to follow. Young readers will enjoy skipping pages to arrive at the next step in the story they have chosen. The different sections aren’t very long, which is appealing to young or reluctant readers. Like real detectives, readers identify the cast of suspects, examine their motives, and decide if they had opportunities to commit the crime. There’s always evidence pointing to different suspects, but readers eventually discover clues that narrow their focus. The book says there are three possible conclusions, depending on which clues are followed. The last page of the story lets readers move to alternate endings by directing them to different parts of the book. 

What didn’t work as well:

There isn’t much time spent developing characters or describing the events in detail. However, that’s the trade-off for skipping around to different parts of the plot. Readers may be curious about Klaus’s time with the UPF when he was the lead detective on the police force. It’s been mentioned in both books, but readers are left to wonder about anything specific. 

The final verdict:

Books that allow readers to choose how the stories unfold are always entertaining, and this one adds mystery and humor. Overall, I recommend this book to all middle-grade readers.

Monster Maker (Solve Your Own Mystery 1) by Gareth P. Jones

What worked:

These kinds of books allow young readers to control their reading experiences. The narrative asks them to make decisions as the story unfolds, and their choices direct them to different pages. This book indicates there are three possible endings, but there are many alternate pathways to arrive. The book’s format allows, even encourages, readers to reread the story while making different decisions. Every few pages offer choices, creating frequent breaks for young readers needing to stop. Reluctant readers also feel like they’re making visible progress at these spots without getting overwhelmed by the book’s length. Skipping to other pages makes young readers feel good. Humor is another attractive asset, along with the black-and-white illustrations in each chapter.

This particular mystery describes the theft of a monster-making machine, and readers are Detective Klaus Solstaag’s assistant. Klaus is a large yeti, and the client, Dr. Franklefink, is the only human in the story. Monsters don’t trust humans or bald characters. The theft occurred when the doctor held a birthday party for his son, whom he had created nine years earlier. The primary suspects are the parents of the kids attending the party, although Franklefink is convinced that a bald vampire must have done it. Klaus knows he can’t dismiss any suspects and must follow clues to identify the guilty party.

What didn’t work as well:

The story doesn’t end once a guilty person is identified. More information leads to further reading until the monster maker is finally retrieved. This situation isn’t necessarily bad, but it moves the plot further along than readers may anticipate. Also, there’s not a great deal of character development and story description, but that’s to be expected in this type of book.

The final verdict:

These kinds of books are fun to read, since the format is so different. Young or reluctant readers aren’t used to skipping pages, but making choices is empowering. Overall, I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Sacrificing Ayda by D.A. Beaumont

What worked:

Ayda doesn’t have many friends, and her teacher has frequent problems with her. Villagers accuse her mother of being a witch, so Ayda dreams of fleeing to Witch Marsh. She’s chosen to sacrifice her life to protect all of Zandia, but she doesn’t want to give her life for people who hate her. When an entourage arrives to take her away, a Wilder named Sunny helps her escape. His role is to lead Ayda to her destination, but he says he’ll take her to Witch Marsh or to the Pit where she’ll be sacrificed. It’s up to her, but he warns that Witch Marsh may not turn out as she expects.

Sunny is the most interesting character, and readers will suspect he’s much older than he seems. He always seems to know about future events, but he never tells Ayda what she should do. He pops up to offer assistance and counsel and speaks to Ayda in her dreams, too. He performs nature magic, repels witch spells, and Aden says he must be a wizard. Sunny always wears a smile, and his confidence always makes Ayda want to trust him. Some of his recommendations seem to put her life in danger, making Ayda seriously think about what he says.  

A witch named Dara tells Ayda that being a witch is about power. “And power comes from being the one inflicting the pain, not being the one receiving it.” Ayda’s major internal conflict is deciding whether she should venture to Witch Marsh or follow Sunny’s idea and travel to the Pit. Readers will think that it’s best if she does as Sunny says, but how can her sacrifice at the Pit be the best decision? On the other hand, Ayda already displays tattoos that identify her as a witch. So doesn’t it make sense that she should go to the Witch Marsh, where she’ll be accepted by witches just like herself?

What didn’t work as well:

Ayda and Dara form a bond as events evolve, but it’s unexpected and a little confusing. Dara spits threats and demonstrates how witches inflict pain, but Ayda still feels a need to protect her. Ayda seems to care more for Dara than the witch feels for her.

The final verdict:

The story presents many twists and turns, so young readers may be frequently surprised. A case can be made that the book is a metaphorical look at God and the Devil. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Cassette Tape Secret by Danielle Herzog

What worked:

Alex and Ida May form an unusual, contrasting pair of characters. Alex likes everything neat and orderly, and he always follows the rules. His obsession with sterilizing surfaces he might touch makes him an easy target for middle-school classmates. Readers’ introduction to Ida May arises when she confronts the school bully and makes him back down. Alex immediately knows she’s not someone to mess with, so he’s stunned and leery when she asks a teacher to put them in the same group. She asks him to fix her cassette player, but Alex resists, saying those are not the directions for the activity. Alex’s therapist wants him to try new things, so readers know that Alex should prepare for uncomfortable challenges ahead.

Alex’s battle with OCD is more compelling than solving the cassette tape mystery. He’s embarrassed to be around other people, and he’s well aware of his strange habits. He must do things in fours (turning doorknobs, etc.), and he sterilizes anything he needs to touch. Don’t expect him to sit in a chair that can’t be wiped down first. His therapist’s weekly challenges force him out of his comfort zone, and Ida May’s constant support gives him a needed push. Alex describes his anxiety as a combination of nervousness and fear, and the author does an excellent job of describing the physical and mental pressure he endures.

Ida May has her own issues, since her mother didn’t make the move with the family. Ida May often tells Alex her mom will be coming soon, but something comes up to keep that from happening. Ida May’s anguish is evident, and she quickly hides her feelings when tears start to form. Alex is aware of his “friend’s” pain and offers supportive words of “that sucks.” Alex doesn’t know if Ida May is his friend, because he’s never cared about anyone else like this before. What does friendship feel like? Ida May and Alex are good for each other, and their characters transform as they investigate the cassette tape.

What didn’t work as well:

The message on the tape may not create the anticipated suspense, since readers don’t know when it was recorded. It seems like years ago, which doesn’t make the message feel urgent. The characters treat it more as a curiosity than a mystery that must be solved.

The final verdict:

This mystery focuses more on emotions and feelings, as Alex must learn to handle new situations. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Building 903 by Lois Lowry

What worked:

The author is a master of writing dystopian novels for middle-grade readers. In this setting, the government controls everything, and citizens are afraid to say anything against the president. He has ruled for decades, and no one opposes him during elections. Animals have been eliminated from the planet, and Tessa’s pet “dog” is robotic. No religions are allowed, so the characters don’t know the meanings of prayers or the bible. All books have been banned because they spread dangerous ideas. Anyhow, fiction books are untrue, so why would anyone want to read about lies? Possessing books is against the law, and their presence in Tessa’s house creates drama.

Tessa was born a twin, but her brother Theo isn’t around anymore. Readers will wonder what’s happened to him, and investigators don’t know why he went missing. The government doesn’t like leaving Theo’s disappearance unsolved, so they’ve erased all records that he ever existed. The family doesn’t speak about him, but Tessa constantly keeps his memory in her thoughts. However, passages from Theo’s point of view pop up in the narrative, so readers know he still exists somewhere. The first passages describe him on a sailing ship, but readers will be puzzled by this new information. What happened to Theo, and what does their former neighbor know about it?

What didn’t work as well:

The book is mostly dystopian science fiction, but the absence of Theo inexplicably shifts it into the genre of speculative fiction. Tessa’s father tries to explain Theo’s disappearance, and it makes scientific sense up to a point. The moment Theo vanishes takes the story into speculative fiction because it lacks a logical, scientific basis.

The final verdict:

It’s always fun to see how authors foresee possible futures for the world, and this book takes current societal issues and makes them obsolete. It will have readers comparing and contrasting their lives with events in the story. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot!

Joey the Good by Erin Fry

What worked:

The story deals with death and grief, as Joey still struggles with the loss of his grandfather two years earlier. The author hints at the cause of Nonno’s death, and Joey feels guilt for having caused it. Joey loved Nonno more than anyone, and the first-person narrative shares Joey’s constant memories. Joey won’t talk about Nonno’s death, and he’s angered when others ask about his feelings. Joey and Leo were there when Nonno died at the lake cabin, so Leo’s presence this summer magnifies painful thoughts. Joey’s battle with his emotions is a major internal conflict.

Leo’s presence reminds Joey of that fateful day, and Leo often tells Joey that Nonno had wanted them to hike together. The comments add to Joey’s guilt and stir up difficult feelings. The relationship between Joey and Leo is the main focus of the plot, as Joey struggles to adapt. Joey’s lazy routine is disrupted, and he whines about the frequent early morning hikes. Leo is super personable and looks like he’s in excellent physical shape, and Joey is neither of those things. Initially, Joey doesn’t know about Leo’s MS diagnosis, so he doesn’t understand why Leo wants to hike with him. How can Joey the Good keep up with Leo the Great? How will they climb Mt. McKinley when Leo’s condition is worsening, and Joey is a long way from being a competent hiker? It takes Joey a while to consider that they might need each other.

Joey’s relationship with other characters his own age is important in the story. He has a crush on a classmate named Desiree, but Joey’s poor self-image keeps him from seeing that she likes hanging out with him. Joey and Leo join a hiking group to help with their training, and a girl named Maya gravitates to the back of the group with Leo. She’s not warm and fuzzy, but they still learn to get along. Dante follows right behind Joey on their hikes, but Dante doesn’t ever say a single word. Joey doesn’t pay him much attention, but his Nonna says that people who don’t talk may have the most to say. Maybe Joey needs to listen harder.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may want to know more about some of the minor characters, since they influence Joey’s life, specifically Desiree, Maya, and Dante. Dante is especially curious. The story shares a little about the silent Dante’s home life, but the information still generates more questions.

The final verdict:

This book tells an emotional story as Leo and Joey deal with the MS diagnosis. Misunderstandings, along with family and friend issues, complicate the story and stir up mixed feelings. I recommend you try this book for yourself. 

Into the Shadows (Anomalies 53) by Angela Cervantes

What worked:

The mixed bag of supernatural creatures will amuse young readers. The prologue describes a newly caught wyvern that can mentally communicate with the main characters, Ollie and Gerin. Their parents study elves, goblins, and other creatures, and Ollie’s father has made discoveries that help the world. He’s currently working on the severe lightning storms worsening outside. A golem named Henry has been granted freedom to roam the facility in exchange for assisting Anomalies 53’s security. A manticore cub arrives and causes a major disruption, sending the plot in an unexpected direction. Most of the story happens outside Area 53 after the anomalies escape. Ollie and Gerin are sucked through a portal and end up in the Shadowlands. All anomalies live safely there, but readers learn that problems happening around Area 53 are connected to problems in the Shadowlands.

Gerin and Ollie are best friends, but that may be because they’re the only kids. Gerin is two years older and enjoys challenging Ollie to tasks that he can never win. She’s starting to display heightened physical skills and even beat a mermaid’s swimming record. Ollie is most confused about her ability to pass through all of the facility’s security measures. Passcodes are changed every six hours, but somehow, she still knows how to open locked doors. He also notices something strange about her freckles, and readers will eventually learn the truth about what’s happening, or has already happened.

What didn’t work as well:

There’s not much character development, but that’s to be expected in fast-paced plots. Readers may wonder what the rest of the world is doing while the lightning storms are raging. Readers learn these tempests may destroy the planet, so it’s reasonable to wonder what else is happening.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to a wide range of middle-grade readers, especially those readers interested in mythical creatures. The story moves quickly, and the author saves surprises as it nears the climax. I recommend you give it a shot.

Race for Midgard: The Marleau Twins 1 by Maya Y. Lefèvre

What worked:

The book opens with a quest adventure for Kate, Jack, and Stefan. These three characters have grown up together, and they pass through a portal into another world. The king gives them the option of rescuing his daughter or spending time in the dungeons, so the friends opt to rescue the princess. Stephen, Jack, and Kate are taught battle skills before they are ready to embark on their quest. The journey takes them through forests and over a mountain before arriving at the castle that’s holding the princess. Readers will enjoy the fight scenes with guards and mythical creatures, but they’ll be surprised by what the characters discover when they reach the princess. It turns out that her rescue is merely the introduction to the actual conflict.

The book is divided into three parts, each with a complete plot. The first part is summarized above, and its resolution leads into the next story. The Marleau twins and Kate must find a way to unseat a mysterious, cloaked man who’s claimed the title of king. This conflict will lead the kids across the world and into other moments in time. Stefan and Jack also learn that one of them will become the next guardian of Migard. The Norse gods will force them into a contest against each other, the winner becoming the guardian and the loser being forgotten. This story is part of the book’s third part, along with their efforts to return Princess Annabeth to the throne.

Kate is a very interesting character, and it sometimes seems she should be highlighted equally with the Marleau twins. She becomes accomplished with the bow and arrows, and she’s the first to act when the king is poisoned. Kate is separated from the others in the book’s second section, and she’s featured in this critical part of the group’s plans. Readers learn that common folk can’t see portals leading to other realms, and they’re only visible “in the presence of people with significant ties to the nine worlds.” The twins are connected through their father’s bloodline, but why is Kate able to activate the first portal? What is her connection to the realms?

What didn’t work as well:

The story skips the yearlong training to become warriors, which leaves readers feeling like they’ve missed quite a bit. In one chapter, the characters are normal teens with no fighting talents, and in the next chapter, they’re experts with the sword, spear, and bow. Some parts of the story abruptly change settings, while other parts are double-spaced or are formally separated.

The final verdict:

The plot can be enjoyed by all upper middle-grade readers, although the main characters are 15-16 years old. There’s a good deal of adventure and action, and the epilogue introduces an interesting twist for the sequel. I recommend young readers give this book a shot!

Airrelle of the Maroon Witches by Sumayyah Beck

What worked:

Obviously, identifying witches in the title means there will be magic, and the author adds new twists. The witches live in hidden settlements around the world, and the setting for this story is Missen Dessalin. The witches work together to create an invisible shield that conceals the settlement. Airrelle must collect four patrons; her first is a crane, to become a full witch. Patrons select their witches and offer advice and assistance. Witches are expected to fly, so Airrelle’s first rite of passage is the soljourney. Witties, witches in training, must survive in the wild in their astral forms until they learn how to fly. Airrelle is most excited about the prospect of flying, so she can travel beyond the barrier and into the Overside.

The story includes subtle commentary about the real world. Airrelle’s first venture into Overside with her mother reveals many disturbing sights. They find perfectly good food tossed into the trash, even though hungry people are living on the streets. Cars pollute the air, and buildings replace nature. Airrelle’s mother says concrete is the most abundant substance in Overside. Related to this, the witches have a close connection to nature. Their patrons are plants or animals, and patrons are often attracted to the witches’ songs. Witches must show them respect, since nature decides who is worthy of help. Witches often thank elements of nature and appreciate the beauty and wonder. Young readers may develop admiration and gratitude for natural things they take for granted.

Rabiah is a character who brings mystery and uncertainty to the story. She’s from the Overside, but Airrelle wants her to train to become a witch at Missen Dessalin. She’s not a clear candidate, so there are mixed opinions about whether this is a good idea. A scry indicates she has the potential to become a powerful witch, but the settlement will have problems if her family searches for her. The weakening shield may allow Oversiders to see into the settlement. Airrelle agrees that Rabiah should be returned to Overside if she fails to pass her trials, with her memory erased. However, Airrelle is determined that Rabiah will succeed; what will she do if things don’t work out? It gets complicated.

What didn’t work as well:

Halfway into the book, it’s still unclear where the plot is headed. Several things are happening: the father is away and in trouble, there’s something wrong with the mother, and Airrelle is trying to get her maroon cloak and befriending a non-magical girl. Many readers prefer having a more focused objective in the plot.

The final verdict:

This book feels like it’s establishing the backstory for future books. There’s a focus on the world of Maroon Witches, along with some of their issues and problems. It’s a creative view of witchcraft that features many interesting characters. Overall, you check out this book and decide for yourself.

Girl of Lore by Melanie Dale

What worked:

Mina is the main character, and she has a variety of issues. Her psychiatrist says it’s unlikely that she’ll ever act on her thoughts of stabbing people, and her OCD is how her body maintains control. She doesn’t know how to get along with people, and she’s not sure why popular, pretty Jackie is still her friend. Mina needs Jackie’s support, but what does Mina have to offer? She hides her sketches of gory scenes, and visiting the graveyard is her favorite activity. Mina feels disturbed and confused when she “hears” a book telling her to “release me”.

Readers immediately know this will be a strange story when Mina dreams of possessing a body. The body is in a car that crashes into a sinkhole, while three shadowy figures watch from above. The next day, Mina learns that a car crashed into a sinkhole near her home. Coincidence? Animals seem to attack her, which is confusing when, later, she calms some dogs and a horse with her mind. Most people in London, Georgia, are skeptical about creatures of the night, but Mina sees evidence and hears stories that make her think something dangerous is going on. A woman wrote a book about local lore, but Mina later finds her dead, with bite marks on her neck. These events will interest readers interested in the paranormal.

The author uses a familiar point of view about vampires, making them easy to understand. These vampires don’t like sunlight and anything related to God. They can control the amount of blood they take, meaning victims can be killed or turned into vampires. Victims can be saved from turning if the vampire is killed before the victim dies. Vampires grow fangs and have heightened senses. An additional danger is added to this story when readers learn that something powerful is beginning to rise in London, and it is capable of killing all humans on earth.

What didn’t work as well:

Different sources indicate this book is for middle grade, but it’s for tweens and young adults. The characters are high school age, and the scary emotions generated by the author’s writing can get pretty intense. The book has a dark tone, especially when the topic of vampires arises.

The final verdict:

Again, this book is not for most middle-grade readers due to strong, dark emotions. However, the overall story is captivating, and I recommend that mature readers try it for themselves. It looks like a sequel will follow.

Where There Be Spies (The Outersphere Series Book 2) by Alby C. Williams

What worked:

Middle-grade readers will feel a sense of familiarity as Glory and Marcus find themselves mixed up in a major problem once again. Paxton was the main antagonist in the first book, and she’s still roaming behind the scenes in this book. Glory is certain she’s up to something, and she’s certain Paxton must be responsible for missing charts. However, many students assume Glory was involved in the theft because she was the last person seen holding it. In addition, the school chancellor is missing, and Glory is certain the two incidents are not a coincidence. The characters and readers will suspect that someone at the school is still helping Paxton. Readers will recognize magic being used, but the characters don’t run around casting spells. The magic comes from potions and objects, with different materials attracting, repelling, or remaining neutral toward it.

Glory experiences social and emotional problems that will be relatable to young readers. She’s annoyed and angered by her classmates’ whispered comments accusing her of being responsible for the missing charts. She’s also aware of her mazy head, which means her mind can become overactive and go on tangents. She thinks everyone else knows she’s mazy-headed, and they think that makes her stupid and strange. These concerns are compounded by the fact that her mother is a famous spherinaut. On the one hand, Glory is proud of her mom but feels pressure living up to expectations. On the other hand, Glory fears that teachers and students treat her differently because of her famous mother. She feels angst after being assigned to the first-year dorms, even though she’s older than all of them.

A large part of the plot involves non-humans. There are two types of monsters, feral monsters and monsterfolk, but some people don’t view them differently. The feral monsters are wild and dangerous, so they are feared. The school and community have frequent monster sirens going off, sending frightened humans scurrying for safe places. These alarms may remind readers of tornado warnings. Monsterfolk are sentient creatures and are just as intelligent and eloquent as humans. This is the first time monsterfolk have been allowed to attend the school, and many students and citizens don’t like it. Glory’s roommate detests the monsterfolk, but Glory becomes good friends with the goat girl in the room next door.

What didn’t work as well:

The opening of each chapter includes numbers and words that describe location and time. However, it’s not clear how this information applies to what’s happening in the story.

The final verdict:

Readers should probably start with the first book, since prior events and characters are frequently mentioned. Glory is a likeable character, as she always wants to do the right thing, and she trusts others. Perhaps too much. I recommend you give this book a shot!

How to Build a Human: The Incredible Design of the Human Body (Tomorrow's World) by Scott Goldie

What worked:

The author uses several techniques to make the non-fiction information more palatable and approachable for young readers. The numerous, colorful illustrations are most obvious, but the backgrounds and text boxes are multi-colored too. Humor is an important part of text, making the information entertaining. Questions about the human body are often used as a bridge to relevant facts. Some pages include “Four Facts and a Fib” that create active reading instead of remaining passive. “Fun Facts” break up the narrative by sharing short, related information.

The book is surprisingly comprehensive. It begins by exploring what it means to be human and then addresses cells and pathogens, microscopic things found in the body. Other chapters describe the skeletal system (since we’re vertebrates) and then the brain and nervous system. It shares the various types of bones and even the different kinds of bone joints. There’s a section about the BCI, which enables humans with disabilities to recover some mobility they may have lost due to paralysis. There’s an explanation of how our sense of smell works, along with an amusing page titled “How to Safely Remove a Booger”. The book covers everything readers expect, such as the heart, lungs, liver, and less obvious topics kids might find interesting. Poop, pee, blushing, and sweating are natural bodily functions, so the book talks about them. Young readers are aware of reproduction, allergies, and diseases, and these subjects are covered toward the end.

What didn’t work as well:

The book contains loads of information and facts, but readers will be challenged to find specific topics. There isn’t an index at the back, so readers doing research will need to use context, skimming, and scanning to locate needed pages. Most chapters have creative titles, so the relevant pages may not be obvious. The heart, blood, and platelets are in the chapter “Let’s Plug in the Heart”, and “The Finishing Touches” covers skin, hair, and fingernails.

The final verdict:

It’s always effective when an author makes nonfiction entertaining, so upper middle-grade readers will have fun while they’re learning. This book can be used for research or for short periods of reading amusement. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot!

You are Now Old Enough to Hear This by Aaron Starmer

What worked:

The author is a master storyteller, weaving several of them together in this book. Roman has never heard the entire story of his grandfather’s missing toe, and readers can expect the unexpected from events surrounding the grandfather’s death. Roman is surprised by his grandfather’s terrified face while padlocking a shed, and the man dies the very next day. However, Roman is shocked when he later finds his grandfather locked in that same shed. A series of short, creepy stories follows, and readers must piece together new information to make sense of the overall plot.

The short stories are divided into sections, so they stand out from the overall tale. This strategy helps young readers focus on them separately, helping with comprehension. The book opens with the events mentioned above, but it later describes the full story of the Toe Monster, The Girl, and the bucket. The bucket becomes a very important part of the plot, so readers will need to pay attention. The author wraps things up by alternating points of view between Roman and The Girl. These chapters provide a full explanation of how everything ties together, and reader imagination is required. The stories of the bucket and The Girl depict a family rite of passage, and the entire plot gives Roman and readers things to think about.

The Girl is the most intriguing character. Her name isn’t mentioned until late in the book, so she projects an aura of mystery. She’s always accompanied by dogs, and many family pets choose to join her. She takes over all the businesses in a small town, so readers will ponder her possible motives. On the other hand, she sometimes sounds lost and alone, causing readers to develop empathy for her character. A Tasmanian Tiger called Tiger is always nearby, and this extinct animal can talk and grant wishes. These two characters are at the heart of the plot, and their stories are revealed in the end.

What didn’t work as well:

The short stories are quite peculiar, so readers must be tolerant and open to strangeness. The ending will still have readers scratching their heads, trying to piece everything together.

The final verdict:

Hopefully, you understand this book is for active readers and requires mental engagement. The ending may leave readers with some unanswered questions, but overall, I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Ameti Rising (Miro Chronicles 2) by Emily Arons

What worked:

Two aspects of this book differ from those of others. The setting is on a planet called Miro, and the humans harvest power from rocks called Orra. Humans had mismanaged natural resources on their former planet, so survivors fled to Miro. Conservation of nature is a primary focus, as the characters try to protect the climate, Orra, and all living things. Orro comes in different colors, and each one has unique powers and qualities. The second different thing about this book is that the characters can communicate with their partner animals. This is accomplished through collars the animals wear and their humans’ orbs. The orbs also connect the humans to AI partners that provide knowledge and guidance. One unexpected event arises in the first quarter of the book when Jimmy, the main character, is reunited with his loyal, brave, and always hungry otter, Otto.

Des, Jimmy’s uncle, was the antagonist in the first book, and the characters are well aware that he’s still lurking somewhere on the planet. He wants to control all of the Orra and become the most powerful person on Miro. Des is causing changes to landforms and the environment, and he’s begun controlling powerful packs of wild animals that threaten the natural balance. Complicating matters, Jimmy feels pressure to live up to his family’s legacy, continues to verbally spar with a rival, and he fears he might have similar characteristics to his uncle. Readers know that Jimmy and his friends, Derek and Tala, will stop Des’s latest plans before the book ends.

The plot moves quickly, which should appeal to most middle-grade readers, even reluctant ones. The chapters are fairly short, which works well for young readers with short attention spans. The story includes periodic reminders of what’s already happened, along with emphasis on what’s at stake. The setting is reminiscent of Earth with similar climates, familiar animals, and people mining for oil. The book teaches messages on conservation of nature and resources that apply to readers’ lives on Earth.

What didn’t work as well:

The downside to a story moving at a fast pace is that there tends to be a lack of description and details. There are parts where there’s a retelling of action rather than a description of what’s happening. There are jumps in time, and readers sometimes need to make assumptions and connections about missing information.

The final verdict:

This book is a wonderful example of speculative fiction that can be enjoyed by a wide range of middle-grade readers. It contains action, humor, drama, and character relationships that make the story appealing. I suggest you give this book a shot. 

Lessons from Harlow (The Adventures of Raini #3) by Licia Chenoweth

What worked:

Honesty and trust remain key issues, as Raini struggles with her father, Gerry. He recently entered her life, and she’s constantly challenging his patience. Raini has lied quite a bit in the first two books, so Gerry is reluctant to give her the benefit of the doubt. This time, Raini runs into trouble trying to perform a good deed when she finds a cellphone in the subway. She manages to find out where the owner will be, but complications arise when Raini shows up. The phone may be more important than anyone thinks, and Raini attracts danger once again. The story is told from Raini’s point of view, so readers can fully understand her different fears, emotions, and motivations. This plot is more adventurous than in the previous two books, and readers will empathize with Raini as events spiral out of control.

The author adds two new characters to the series, and there’s a stark contrast in their contributions. Gerry hires a woman named Phobe to help Raini become a more responsible, respectable girl. However, Raini detests the woman, so her character becomes a source of conflict. Phoebe is condescending and irritated with Raini, and she even tries Gerry’s patience sometimes. Harlow is Raini’s new classmate, and their characters have similarities and differences. Their mothers aren’t present in their lives, although for different reasons. Harlow lives with an elderly, rich aunt and says Raini is lucky to have a father who cares. Harlow is allowed total independence, so she helps Raini navigate life in New York City. Cecilio is still a dependable friend, but Raini isn’t sure how she feels about his relationship with Harlow

What didn’t work as well:

In the previous two books, readers might have tired of Raini’s constant lying, even though her father was trying to protect her. She still has trouble being totally honest, but readers will appreciate that she’s trying to change. Her dishonesty is more palatable since Harlow and Cecilio are aware of her situation.

The final verdict:

Readers should finish the previous two books first to appreciate Raini’s complex relationship with her father fully. This time, Raini’s predicament isn’t totally her fault, which makes her character more vulnerable. I strongly recommend you try this book for yourself. 

Finding Lila (The Adventures of Raini 2) by Licia Chenoweth

What worked:

A mysterious man tells Raini that she can see her mother if she doesn’t say anything to her father. Raini was a baby when her mother left, so she jumps at the chance. However, the effect of this misadventure is that the setting shifts to New York City, miles away from her grandfather, Mo. Gerry, her father, thinks someone is trying to kidnap her by using her mother as bait, so he restricts her privileges and has an adult stay with her while he’s at work. Finding her mother becomes an obsession for Raini and steers the plot for the rest of the book. She sneaks around, looking for clues, until Gerry finds out and threatens to send her to Scotland, again. Detectives are investigating the possible kidnapping, and Gerry’s deathly afraid for his daughter’s safety.

Raini meets a delivery boy from the deli across the street, and she thinks he’s her only friend. However, Cecilio is forbidden from seeing her anymore after her photograph gets posted in the New York Times. Gerry is livid because the picture may expose her to more danger. Cecilio displays flowers of different colors, and Raini looks forward to seeing them each day. Gerry forbids any further contact between them, which creates underlying tension from that point on. Raini’s behavior causes Gerry’s distrust, but Raini is angered that Gerry is keeping secrets about her mother. Gerry frequently tells Raini she must trust him on this, but their communication breakdown creates further conflict and unease.

What didn’t work as well:

Raini often disobeys her dad, and the behavior has been consistent in the first two books. It seems like she wants to be a loving daughter, so it’s hard to believe how quickly she can misbehave behind Gerry’s back. She apologizes to him every time she’s caught, but then quickly goes against his wishes. It’s hard to sympathize with her character when she constantly deceives her father and rarely considers how her behavior affects Gerry’s feelings.

The final verdict:

This book is more dramatic than the first one, as the conflict surrounding Raini’s mother is more serious. I suggest you start with book one to fully understand relationships and backstories. I recommend you check this book out yourself. 

The Boy with the Living Shadow (MIriwan Academy 1) by Anas Hakeem

What worked:

Adam’s character will generate sympathy, as he’s remained unadopted for ten years. He’s bullied by the “tall boy”, insulted and singled out by the nasty director, and is forced to live alone in the orphanage’s dismal attic. Then, a gnome transports him into a new life of magic. He’s adopted by a woman who once knew his mother, but no one knows anything about his father. Readers will anticipate that his father’s identity will become significant sometime in the future. Also, Adam displays unusual abilities with his new power, after he infuses some of his energy into a non-living companion he creates and calls Jumperjeans. Not to mention, his shadow seems to have a mind of its own when Adam feels strong emotions. This adds unpredictability to the story.

The book uses vocabulary that probably won’t be familiar to most readers. The story opens in Algiers, so the author incorporates words that reflect the culture and religion there. In addition, he creates words that are necessary to describe the magic in the story. Young readers should be able to understand the meaning by using the context in the story and sentences. Adam and others with magic are called Gushmars, and the magic itself is called Gushoolah. Adam’s adopted brother, Daniel, manifests his Feranimus on his Sunderday. Most of the Gushmar students at Miriwan Academy have already welcomed their animal companions, but readers must wait for Adam Feranimus to emerge. The Gushoolah in some students will never be strong enough to celebrate a Sunderday. Adam’s lack of a Feranimus will have readers wondering what animal he will have, or if he will ever get one.

The author incorporates aspects of fictional and real schools to keep the setting familiar, but adds his own twists. Adam attends a school for magic, but the Gushmars’ powers boil down to three areas. They can manipulate objects and perform telekinesis, they can create illusions, and they can make objects and themselves invisible. Adam’s shadow tends to do things without his control, and this can be frustrating, confusing, and sometimes helpful. Some magic is conjured with concoctions, but most of the magic in the story comes from the Gushmars exerting their powers. An underlying conflict with sundering and feranimi is brewing throughout the plot and eventually comes to a head in the climax.

What didn’t work as well:

There are quite a few characters with uncommon English names, so readers may mentally double-check their memories when the characters pop up. This is not a huge concern, but it’s something young readers might experience as they read.

The final verdict:

The author presents some innovative ideas about magic, but keeps everything familiar enough for young readers. Adam’s kindness and empathy for others are admirable qualities, and he’s determined to uncover secrets and save all Gushmars. I recommend you try this book for yourself!

My Thousand Treasures (The Adventures of Raini 1) by Licia Chenoweth

What worked:

The story breaks down into two main parts. The opening chapters describe Raini taking a gold coin that thieves left on the beach and fleeing the beach patrol. She reluctantly tells her cousin, Ian, what she’s done, and they form a shaky alliance to keep it a secret. The tension amps up when one of the thieves lurks outside their home, and Ian becomes especially distressed. The situation becomes more complicated when a couple of things happen. A professor tells Raini that the coin may be very valuable, which means she’s in a bigger mess than she thought. Also, the plight of an old, widowed woman is connected to the coin, and time is running out to save her home from destruction. Readers will become engrossed in Raini’s thrilling adventure as she tries to evade danger and trouble while trying to make things right.

The second main part involves Raini’s relationship with her father, Gerry. Raini feels no love for him, since he only recently entered her life. Gerry didn’t know Raini existed before that, so readers will need to decide how they feel about the situation. Gerry is trying hard to connect with his daughter, but she’s doing all she can to push away. Some of that is due to her strained feelings, while some of it is due to the time-sensitive adventure mentioned above. The pair tries to navigate Raini’s disrespect and impulsiveness, and Gerry’s family plans to help them grow closer. About halfway into the book, Raini learns their bond is even more confusing when her father texts that he knows about the coin.

What didn’t work as well:

Gerry and Raini’s great aunt are Scottish, and Ian has just returned from living there. The author tries to use alternate spellings to reflect their Scottish accents, but that strategy isn’t overly successful. Most young readers won’t be familiar enough with the variation in dialect, so they won’t appreciate the author’s efforts.

The final verdict:

Raini is a headstrong young girl who should connect with many middle-grade readers. Her mother left when she was a baby, and the book’s resolution revisits the topic. It seems likely that it will become part of the sequel. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

Theft of the Ruby Lotus by Sayantani Dasgupta

What worked:

Ria has a complicated relationship with her mother. Her mother works for the Metropolitan Museum, but she spends much of her time trying to get relics returned to the countries from which they were stolen. The book opens with the mother announcing that Ria and her grandmother will be moving to Germany with her. The mother is not present for much of the story. Ria doesn’t understand why her mother suddenly left the museum, or was fired, so Ria is left to make up answers when problems and questions arise. A news article reports that robbers attempted to steal a legendary sword from India, but they were only able to pry a large, red ruby from it. Then, Ria finds the ruby and a cryptic message in an envelope mailed to her mother. Did her mother help steal it? Who mailed it?

The plot is the mystery surrounding the sword and the stolen ruby. Who stole the Ruby, and why was it mailed to Ria’s mother? Who is the cute boy Ria meets outside the museum? He keeps showing up, but Ria’s friends don’t trust him. Who are the two women they keep seeing, and are they part of the Lotus Society, a radical group started in the early 1970s? Is the Lotus Society still active, and are they the thieves targeting the sword and ruby? How much trouble are Ria and her friends in for attempting to return the ruby to the museum?

Each chapter is titled with “In Which…” and three comments that hint at events to come. For example, one chapter is titled “In Which We Make a Discovery in a Bathroom Stall, Concoct a Concept of a Plan, and Get Spied On.” Another says, “In Which We Are Suspects on the Run, Hide Behind Some Gods, and Do a Little Bit More Stealing.” The titles prepare readers for the chapter, and some of them add a little humor. A section after the plot’s resolution provides information about some concepts in the story. Repatriation is at the heart of the conflict, holograms become important, and ideas about the Indian queen and sword are based on real history.

What didn’t work as well:

Ria, Annie, and Miracle come from three different cultures, but it doesn’t work as well in this book. Ria has some Indian in her; the narrative is told in her first -person voice, and the sword comes from India. Her culture is well-represented, but details about the other ones are somewhat lost amid the adventure and descriptions of the Indian culture. Perhaps the other cultures will be more important in the future, but they didn’t work as well as they might have.

The final verdict:

The mystery offers twists and turns, as Ria and her friends try to identify their opponents and repatriate the sword and ruby to India. Young readers will learn a bit about Indian culture as the characters avoid trouble and danger all around New York City. I recommend you try this book for yourself. 

Relic of Thieves (The Underwild 2) by Shana Targosz

What worked:

Anya has emotional concerns that sometimes overwhelm her. She’s tormented by her parents and older brother, which is more than sibling rivalry. He thinks life was better before Anya joined the family, and she frequently suffers his threats and physical abuse. Anya also suffers from panic attacks and finds her best defense is to avoid any attention. Lizzie is her best friend and understands most of Anya’s problems. Lizzie knows how to calm Anya’s emotions, but Lizzie is still not fully aware of her best friend’s home situation. Despite her self-doubts, Anya undergoes a dramatic transformation, always wanting to assist anyone in need. She must battle self-doubt and low self-esteem to discover the power she holds.

Using the magical keys incorrectly sets off unseen alarms, and the three mythical furies are sent to track down Anya. These creatures are relentless and won’t stop until they find her, and they aren’t averse to using violence during their pursuit. This creates perpetual danger for Anya and constant suspense for readers. Other characters are more sympathetic to Anya’s plight, and Senka becomes an invaluable new friend. Different characters from Greek mythology are part of the story, including Dionysus, Ariadne, and Charon, and Zeus is the unforgiving, powerful ruler of everything godly. Dionysus and Ariadne don’t agree with Zeus’s overbearing, intolerant position, and they set Anya a quest. Her ultimate goal is to find three mythological witches who might provide an answer to her predicament.

An interesting twist to the story comes from a creative retelling of Persephone’s myth. The myth says Persephone ate six pomegranate seeds while in Hades. Consequently, she’s forced to spend six months in Hades, creating fall and winter, while spring and summer arise when she returns to her mother, Demeter, for the rest of the year. However, the author changes the relationship between Hades and Persephone into a tragic love story. Persephone’s story involves the magical keys and the curse that Zeus places upon them. This curse explains Anya’s ill-fortune, but other characters she meets aren’t happy with Zeus’s bullying and strict punishments. This results in Anya encountering many unexpected allies, especially when they’re most needed.

What didn’t work as well:

This is a long story that requires endurance. However, it’s worth the effort and ends with a surprising, satisfying trial.

The final verdict:

This book can be read independently, though the first book will provide more backstory about Senka and the Underwild. Young readers will enjoy Anya’s loyalty to others and cheer for her to overcome her insecurities. I highly recommend you read this book yourself!