The Nightkeeper’s Apprentice by Jude Reid

What worked:

Eilidh joins her aunt and cousin on a barren, rocky island, and readers' speculation begins with her arrival. She’s told to never enter the lighthouse but isn’t given a reason. Most readers will join Eilidh, as her imagination comes up with many ways to explain why she can’t visit a lighthouse that doesn’t shine a warning light for ships. Adding to the intrigue is the question of what her aunt can possibly be doing in there every day. Readers know that something will happen, making Eilidh eventually break her promise to her aunt and venture into the strange tower. This will change the trajectory of the story.

Two characters contribute to the mystery and an unpredictable course of events. Magnus is Eilidh’s cousin, and he’s fairly quiet for much of the story. He clearly doesn’t want her around and spends much of his time stomping around the house or going off on his own outside. He knows about the lighthouse and its secrets, and he moves about the property as if he’s searching for something. Later, Cam joins the story, and he’s the ghost mentioned in the synopsis. He feels he hasn’t moved on because of unfinished business, but he has no idea what it might be. Ghosts always include a bit of uncertainty. However, Cam infuses some humor as he becomes acquainted with Eilidh.

There’s a simmering conflict behind the scenes between the Finfolk and the Landfolk, though it isn’t clear whether the humans are aware of it. Long ago, all creatures were Finfolk until some discovered a way to live on shore by trading their fins for legs. Eventually, Landfolk forced Finfolk to remain in the ocean, and they then took all the fish and polluted the waters. Finfolk have never forgotten. Sing-In-The-Shallows is infatuated by Landfolk, but she’s angered by their wars and killing. The author inserts pages between some chapters that explain what Sing-In-The-Shallows is doing and what she observes. Readers will remain curious as they discover how she fits into the story. A magical horn emerges as a major conflict, but readers must wait to find out what it means.

What didn’t work as well:

The Finfolks’ current attitude toward Landfolk is unclear. The pages about Sing-In-The-Shallows describe her curiosity about humans and how she helps them in times of need. However, she says the other Finfolk wouldn’t approve of her actions, but they don’t enter the story until the very end. Their feelings are still ambiguous even after that scene.

The final verdict:

Readers under ten years of age can still enjoy this book. It’s reminiscent of Irish selkie stories and creepy water creatures. The mystery of the Nighthouse will keep readers captivated, although readers will predict that Eilidh will make a questionable decision. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Grimlore Game by Kalyn Josephson

What worked:

Grimlore Manor is a magical house, although none of the characters are stereotypical back-stabbing relatives. The curse causes scenes to change and memories to be shared. These visions offer information that can be used to solve puzzles and end the Grimlore Game. Kit is shocked to see a fancy-dressed cat open the front door when she first arrives, and even more surprised to learn no one else can see him. Carmine is an aloof character and feels no need to speak with Kit. Her luggage floats up to her suite, and meals are prepared by bowls and utensils guided by Carmine’s instructions. Kit’s best friend is a tarantula named Gregor with an insatiable love for sweets. He’s not magical, but he adds color to the story.

Kit is full of emotions that will take readers on a rollercoaster adventure. Her parents were victims of the curse, and Kit desperately misses her father. They used to solve all kinds of puzzles together, and Kit uses that knowledge to unlock new clues. She doesn’t really have a home anymore, since her relatives only tolerate her because she might inherit Amos’s money. Kit doesn’t hide her disdain for them, and they treat her like a rude, disobedient little girl. Readers will wonder what will become of Kit once the Grimlore Game concludes. No one shows her any kindness, so who will become her new guardian? Kit slowly comes to realize the game may be more about solving the curse than locating the family wealth.

Mystery and puzzle lovers should enjoy this book, as that’s the driving force of the plot. All of the Devlin relatives gather for the reading of their grandfather’s will, hoping to inherit his wealth. Kit never met the man, but he seemed to favor her over all of her aunts and uncles. She encounters a puzzle box, riddles, and other confusing clues that lead to other mysteries. Kit gets reluctant help from her cousin Harlow, but he has low self-esteem and is afraid of almost everything. Initially, Kit thinks she needs to do everything herself, but she’s forced to admit she needs Harlow. All the while, Kit doesn’t understand why her Grandfather Amos took an interest in her.

What didn’t work as well:

Excerpts from “A Guide to Curses” follow some of the chapters. They often repeat information readers already know, but they also add some food for thought. However, they don’t add much to the overall story.

The final verdict:

The book’s charm comes from Kit’s journey to break the curse and find a home where she can feel wanted and safe. The search for clues will appeal to mystery lovers, and the plot builds to an unexpected resolution. I recommend you try this book for yourself!

Chloe Vega and the Missing Unseen (Chloe Vega and the Agents of Magic 2) by Leslie Adame

What worked:

The Unseen is a barrier separating the magical and non-magical worlds. In the first book, Chloe accepted one of the three strongest gems in the world, the opal gem, but this time she learns of its side effects. Using the power destroyed the Unseen around the Mexican-United States border, so innocent people are being exposed to dangers and magic for the first time. The immigration issue remains a conflict in the story, as Chloe’s parents are undocumented. Congress is considering a bill that will make life easier for immigrants, and the academy students are well aware of its effect. In the meantime, Osthall and his followers still want to eliminate the Unseen all over the world. 

As with many middle-grade speculative fiction books, Chloe doesn’t know how to handle her immense new power, and readers learn it responds to her emotions.  She is thirteen years old, and it’s difficult to control feelings at this stage of life. She loses control of herself a few times, and she’s very distressed after harming her best friend. Other students hate or fear her, except for her closest friends, so the school drama is ramped up. The adults decide it will be best to remove the gem’s powers from Chloe, but the security council may use an illegal process to do it. Reese offers to tutor Chloe in a process that will make it easier for her to voluntarily give up the power. However, Reese used to be Osthall’s second in command, so readers will be leery of his intentions. Chloe’s emotional turmoil is a highlight.

The opening chapters are full of action, as Chloe is attacked several times before arriving at the academy. She faces personal attacks at school, and a council representative aggressively tries to catch her making mistakes. One more misuse of Chloe’s opal power will result in it being painfully extracted from her. Chloe alienates her friends to keep them safe, even though she needs as much emotional support as she can get. The plot builds to a dramatic showdown full of fighting and surprises. Readers will need to figure out which characters are behind Chloe and which ones are secretly working against her. Readers will be shocked by the final revelations. 

What didn’t work as well:

Some readers may tire of Chloe’s constant drama with friends and the council representative. However, these trials and tribulations are important for developing the conflict and plot. They complicate her mastery of the opal gem and add suspense to the story. 

The final verdict:

Readers should probably start with the first book in the series. This one is full of conflicted feelings and character relationships, but the author’s surprises at the end are especially entertaining. I highly recommend you give it a shot.

The Book Trap (Pix and Gabe) by Kate Machon

What worked:

This book will have loyal readers thinking back to the first one when Pix was getting to know Gabe. She is forced to partner with Memoria from the Angel Archives, and the relationship has a rocky start. Memoria says Pix has “obstinate behaviour”, which is accurate, and readers will enjoy Pix’s mischievous actions as she tries to mess with the angel. Pix did the same thing with Gabe when they started working together, and they’re reunited in trying circumstances. Gabe is thrust into a book and can’t escape without completing different challenges. Luckily, Pix joins him, and she has no problem using deceit, trickery, and mischievous pranks to help her friend. Gabe’s situation forces Pix to conjure more spells than in the past, and she taps into powers that she’s not supposed to have.

Angels are notorious rule-followers, but Caelix has created Gabe’s tests. Caelix seems to have a huge grudge against Gabe, and the tasks don’t follow normal angel rules. Pix’s efforts to help Gabe are hampered because Gabe won’t tell his faerie friend any useful information about his past relationship with Caelix. This creates a mystery for young readers, as they try to figure out how Pix can best help Gabe. The angels have quickly turned against him, forcing Gabe to go into hiding. Pix takes the initiative to clear her friend’s name and reveal the treachery creeping into the angel world. However, there’s a time factor, as Caelix’s power is growing.

The relationship between Pix and Gabe is challenged. Pix is sure Gabe is keeping secrets even though they’ve promised to be honest with each other. Gabe said it was necessary if they were going to remain friends. However, Pix thinks she can’t help fight Caelix if she doesn’t understand the problem’s origins. On the other hand, Pix isn’t sharing all of her secrets, but she thinks she has no choice. Pix continues to help Gabe, but there’s a real question as to whether their friendship will survive.

What didn’t work as well:

It’s not essential that you read the first two books, but there are references to things Pix and Gabe did in the first book. It also feels like Pix is casting spells in every chapter, and it feels like too much. Much of the story takes place in the magical worlds of pixies and angels, so perhaps it makes sense.

The final verdict:

This book is more “serious” than the previous books, since Pix must use her antics and thinking skills to solve a big problem. In the past, there was more collaboration between Pix and Gabe, but Pix controls almost all decisions driving the plot. I highly recommend you read this book, and it’s not a bad idea to start with the beginning of the series. 

The Wondrous Tale of Lavender Wolfe by Karen Foxlee

What worked:

The setting aboard the pirate ship is strange, as all children develop their magic. Lavender finds herself below deck working with the kitchen crew. However, Big Agatha says it’s bad luck to have girls in the kitchen, so Lavender immediately has her hair cut off and is given the name Hans Whitby. The children’s magic is varied, as one can measure ingredients by sight, another can fly, and another can summon birds. Big Agatha calls the six children in the kitchen her rats and orders and threatens them. However, rats is an endearing term, and she’s quick to give hugs, offer soothing words, and magic cooking.

Big Agatha and the rats tell a tale about the origin of the ship’s curse, and it’s identifiable by the boldface font. A wizard cast a spell that will take full effect at the end of the year, so the conflict has a deadline to increase tension. As the plot progresses, readers will learn that some of the characters are connected to the original curse. Hans/Lavender begins to understand what’s at stake, and she faces a big choice. Does she try to escape the ship like her friend Colin, or does she stay on the ship and risk the same cursed fate of the crew? The characters' emotional trials are a highlight.

The author has a creative mind and masterful talent for description and language. The words will make readers think, create vivid mental images, and evoke a full range of emotions. Hans becomes torn about returning to her mother or remaining on the ship as a pirate. She defiantly reminds herself that she’s Lavender, but readers will notice how that inner voice becomes less insistent. Big Agatha is distressed every time one of her kitchen rats joins the crew on deck, as she demonstrates love and caring for them. The author subtly describes the camaraderie among the rats, and readers will become empathetic toward their fates and ever-changing relationships.

What didn’t work as well:

The thing that makes this book special may also make it confusing for young readers. Amazon suggests it for ages eight and older, but 8-year-olds will find connections between the plot and Agatha’s tale confusing. The book is also described as “playful illustrated”, but there are limited pictures that don’t majorly impact the story.

The final verdict:

Older middle-grade readers will enjoy this adventure and the author’s inventive world-building. Lavender/Hans is a dynamic character, and her emotional journey is gripping. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Neverfear (Impossible Creatures 3) by Katherine Rundell

What worked:

Christopher helps a mother unicorn deliver its distressed baby, but there’s an unexpected result. Somehow, touching the infant imbues Christopher with the ability to receive animals’ thoughts and emotions. It comes in handy at times, such as when controlling an injured behemoth, but it also carries potentially dangerous consequences. It affects him physically and can become overwhelming. Readers know this is a significant ability, and it will impact the story before the problems are resolved.

As the book’s title implies, it’s full of unusual and impossible creatures and characters. Jacques is back, and this tiny dragon with attitude is Christopher’s companion and a source of amusement for readers. Companion might be the wrong word, because Jacques constantly questions decisions and tells the humans how they’re doomed. He also has many flowery instructions for Christopher to write in the dragon’s biography. Manticores, Cerberus, and giants are imposing obstacles, or they assist the characters. The author’s imagination will introduce readers to other creatures that they’ve never heard of. The back of the book contains illustrations and descriptions for many of them.

The plot focuses on Irian’s rescue after being kidnapped by bandits. Christopher and Anya are forced to rescue her on their own, since the kidnappers have forbidden them from telling Nighthand, her husband. This restriction enhances the conflict because Nighthand is a berserker and formidable warrior. Christopher and Anya are ordered to obtain three objects that were once part of Hercules’s thirteen labors. They question why the kidnappers want these three specific items and wonder if something larger is happening. The Immortal was an important character in the first book but was absent from the second. The Immortal is reborn as a young boy, and his presence complicates the conflict. A new antagonist, Astor Morax, is introduced, and his evil plans will continue into the next book.

What didn’t work as well:

The plot mostly follows Christopher and Anya, so readers might want to know more about the other characters. However, the author saves a surprise about Anya for later in the book, although astute readers will suspect it. Also, it would be nice to have the illustrations of creatures within the story instead of grouping them at the end.

The final verdict:

Lovers of adventure and uncommon beasts will enjoy this book. Serious dangers threaten this world, and the events come to a dramatic climax, or two. I highly recommend you try this book for yourself, and further, I suggest you start with the first book in the series. 

Ghost in the Night by Tiffany D. Jackson

What worked:

As you might guess from the synopsis, this ghost story turns into a mystery. A popular black man is murdered, his grandson goes missing, and Harmony’s new friend Myah is determined to find the killer. Myah is also dealing with the consequences of a poor decision, but readers don’t learn the details until later. Robby is a precocious ten-year-old dealing with an overprotective mother. Harmony is still grieving for her recently deceased grandmother, and she’s been touring with her father’s band for the past six months. She wonders if she’s already seen her grandmother’s ghost, so she’s more open to the possibility of spirits in the most haunted city in America.

The narrative is a nice blend of fiction, true ghost tales, and the history of New Orleans and Savannah. The author acknowledges she took some liberties “to keep this story PG”, since some of the actual tales are “REALLY gruesome”. There are links in the back of the book to some of the author’s favorite ghost tours and sources of ghostly information. The narrative includes actual locations and real people who lived in Savannah. The author includes information about the abuse and disrespect shown toward slaves, and readers may be surprised to know that parts of Savannah are built atop mass graves.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers looking for a ghost story will be disappointed. The book has more information about ghosts than it does about a spooky story. The mystery of the murder is the driving force of the plot, along with the children’s subplots mentioned above. The book’s second half becomes more interesting as things fall into place.

The final verdict:

Despite the backdrop of ghost stories and a murder mystery, the story of the three children is most engaging. I recommend this book to readers interested in learning about ghosts and children dealing with hardships. 

The Magic Library of Waterfall Way (The Prophecymakers) by Julie Abe

What worked:

Lyra is immediately cast into the role of underdog when she’s labeled Extremely Unremarkable. She’s the only Unremarkable in the empire, and the empire’s census shows it. She’ll be sent to the Mist if a guild doesn’t accept her, and every guild so far balks when they become aware of her status as Extremely Unremarkable. Readers will develop empathy for Lyra’s character because she’s desperate to find a place she can call home. Her parents are dead, and her older sister is in the Guild of the Crown, so she doesn’t have any family left. The Guild of Scholars is her last chance to avoid the Mist.

The Guild of the Crown is cast in a negative light, as its superiority is lorded over everyone else. This guild will probably become more of a focus in future books, but the Mist is the true antagonist this time. The Mist was once united with the Guilds, but they were separated hundreds of years ago. The Mist wants to control all of the magic in the world, although they’re appeased when the Guilds send them any Unremarkables who are not part of a guild. Readers and Lyra will learn more about the Mist throughout the book, as Lyra reads and hears stories about the past. The topic of Prophecymakers arises later in the plot, but it’s very important to the series.

Two supporting characters are important to the plot for different reasons. Wishlight is a sable that can transform into a book, with a tail. Lyra and Wishlight can communicate through their minds, and Wishlight possesses a bit of magic. Wishlight gives Lyra an unexpected quest that becomes the conflict’s main conflict. Flynn is the assistant to the Guild Master, and his dislike for Lyra is evident. He openly says he wishes she’d leave, even though they’ve both lost family members. There are moments when they seem to bond, but any camaraderie doesn’t last.

What didn’t work as well:

Lyra’s quest is unusual, as it involves reopening halls in the library that closed following a great fire. She makes attempts to find the keys, but she can always leave whenever she wants to have dinner or rest in her bed. Venturing inside the library presents dangers, but the ability to leave makes it unusual.

The final verdict:

The fact that Lyra is an orphan and only wants to find a new family and home will touch readers’ heartstrings. The premise of the book is fresh and innovative, and I recommend you give it a shot!

The Missing Magic of Sparrow Xia (An Illustrated Novel) by Leia Ham

What worked:

Sparrow, real name Ruyan, is an unassuming, humble student, trying to learn about magic before it’s lost. All children in this setting possess magic while knowing they’ll lose it as adults. Her older brother Ainsley is a third-year student, but he’s recognized for his powerful fire magic. In contrast, the fire Sparrow summons is barely larger than the flame on a match, and she feels inadequate when compared to other students, especially her brother. However, she sees a vision while being tested for her magical ability, and she’s told that’s usually an indicator of strong power. The head healer examines her and says something is blocking Sparrow’s ability to access her power. This tells readers that there’s more to her character than they currently see, and they’ll await the moment her powers awaken.

Sparrow becomes obsessed with finding out the cause of magedrain, which is causing students to lose their magic. She thinks it’s not natural reasons and suspects that someone is poisoning their classmates. Sparrow quickly identifies a suspect, but readers will question if she’s right. The suspect seems too obvious, and Sparrow makes all of her observations and “evidence” fit this person. The illness is attacking students with the strongest magic, so Sparrow fears her brother may be one of the next victims. Her friend wonders if Sparrow is more concerned about finding the guilty party or proving her brother wrong. Good question.

The school’s purpose is to strengthen students’ magic, and it’s interesting to see the variety of mages. Besides Sparrow’s fire, her best friends Lyndon and Orla possess air and nature magic, respectively. All of the students want stronger powers, although Lyndon has a special interest in magecraft, the art of engineering magic. The school includes a first-year bully who goes out of her way to heckle and tease Sparrow. Sparrow eventually has an unexpected reaction to the girl’s harassment, but it’s important to the story.

What didn’t work as well:

It would be nice to know more about a few of the supporting characters. Ainsley is a conflicted mage, but readers are only shown his arrogant side. Camellia taunts Sparrow throughout much of the story, but behaves differently later on. Readers don’t really know exactly what changed to cause this new version of herself.

The final verdict:

The book has many of the same traits as other stories about schools for magic students, although it’s unusual that none of the teachers can perform it. The plot focuses on the mystery of magedrain and Sparrow’s drive to prove herself, culminating in a surprising revelation that will continue into the sequel. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Jamie Cooper and the Touchscreen Portal by J.P. Harper

What worked:

The format will be familiar to middle-grade readers, as an underdog, Jamie, teams up with two students at opposite ends of the student spectrum. Dan is a large, quiet boy whom everyone else avoids out of fear. Lakshmi is a popular, top student who brings her knowledge to the group. A twist involves Jamie’s older brother, as his father has moved to this small town for a fresh start. The early chapters inform readers that Cameron died, but they soon learn that he actually disappeared. This fact leaves the door open for Cameron to reappear later.

Visiting a new world is nothing new, although this book connects Myridiam to video games. The mysterious messages and portal to the world arise from Jamie’s iPad, and a version of it allows him to return home. Much of his experience doesn’t feel like virtual reality, although Jamie, Dan, and Lakshmi see text in their peripheral vision that identifies unknown creatures and weapon upgrades. Upon arriving in Myridiam, a chamber chooses a bow for Jamie, giving him the ability to rapidly shoot arrows with electrical charges or fire. Dan is assigned gleaming armor along with a shield that can grow to protect him and others from attacks. Lakshmi receives a staff that fires an energy beam and other powers that are revealed when needed.

It’s interesting to note that these three Guardians don’t overtly kill anyone with their powerful weapons, and there are many fighting scenes where that can happen. The only clue that an opponent might have been slain is a VR message indicating Jamie’s arrow made a critical hit. The kids have virtuous characters that aren’t immediately evident in the early chapters. This quality and their merciful nature make others respect and admire them, which is especially important when they venture within the borders of suspicious, aggressive Sothian warriors.

What didn’t work as well:

The ending is disappointing, as it leaves readers needing to read the sequel to resolve unfinished business. Also, the characters get into dire, no-win situations, but the arrows, staff, or armor get sudden upgrades to get them out of it, especially Lakshmi’s staff. It sometimes feels like cheating, since the characters don’t use their talents or intelligence to come up with solutions.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to middle-grade readers who enjoy underdog characters with unexpected abilities. The purity and compassion of the main characters are admirable, as they aid new allies to save Myridiam. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Odyssey (A Classic Tale by Homer) Retold by Geraldine McCaughrean

What worked:

The book is based on Greek mythology, so young readers will be familiar with most of the gods mentioned. Zeus, Poseidon, and Athena are important to the story, as Odysseus’s behavior sometimes angers them, or he prays to them for help. Readers who enjoyed the Percy Jackson books or movies will recognize the Lotus Eaters, the cyclops, and the Sirens. The book offers aspects of mythology that young readers may not know, such as Odysseus blinding the cyclops, Polyphemus. The author’s retelling of Homer’s short stories makes them more understandable and faster-paced for a middle-grade audience.

Each chapter tells a different adventure where Odysseus and his crew struggle for their lives. They’ve been away from Ithaca for ten years, so they’re desperate and determined to return home to their wives and children. The first story finds Odysseus’s crew beguiled by the Lotus Eaters, as their food mesmerizes them into complacency without a motivation to leave. The second chapter introduces Polyphemus, and Odysseus’s decision to blind him changes the trajectory of the rest of the book. Poseidon is furious that his son can no longer see, so he finds all kinds of ways to punish Odysseus by impeding his progress or putting him in perilous situations.  

What didn’t work as well:

The book is a collection of short stories, and Odysseus is the only character connecting them all. Little time is spent developing characters, because there isn’t much of a reason. Everyone except Odysseus dies.

The final verdict:

The original Homer version of The Odyssey would intimidate young readers, but the author’s retelling makes it accessible. The collection of brief stories with life-threatening conflicts will appeal to all adventure lovers. I recommend you give this book a shot. 

The Island at the Edge of Night by Lucy Strange

What worked:

The early chapters will have readers immediately conjuring mysterious thoughts. The prologue describes Faye sleepwalking and hearing her aunt exclaim, “Oh, what have you done, you wicked child?” Faye is sent to a “different” school, far away from home, located on a desolate island. The headmaster’s wife shows Faye and Boudicca, another new student, to their cells, which the wife says are what the monks used to call their rooms. However, they’re locked inside their rooms to keep them “Safe from each other.” Faye is given a blue pill, a “sort of vitamin”, that the wife says all the children are given. Faye secretly refuses to take the pill because she’s concluded that she can’t trust anyone.

The mystery continues, as readers will try to understand Faye’s character. Something terrible happened one night while she was sleepwalking, and she woke up with an axe in her hand. She’s told that all of the kids at this school have done something horrible, and Faye wonders what she’s done. She feels a tremendous pull from nature, and her safe place always finds her in the branches of a tree. Being cooped up in the school on Auk Island depresses Faye greatly, but she is transfixed by the sight of The Knife. Her father was a renowned botanist until he presented a paper proposing that trees can talk to each other and that fae folk exist.

The author creates a dark, creepy atmosphere through the setting and characters. The island always seems to be covered by dark clouds, rarely letting the shine break through. The desolate landscape is void of green plants, and animals are rarely seen. The Knife towers over everything else, and its secrets beckon to be discovered. Dr Lighter and Nurse Violet clearly don’t like the children under their care, and they use medication, mind games, and threats to make the students subservient. The kids have no way to escape since the doctor and nurse pay the captain’s salary to ferry the only boat to the island.  All mail is read before it can be sent, isolating the students from all contact with the outside world.

What didn’t work as well:

It would be nice to know more about the other students, since they’re not a major part of the plot until the book’s last quarter. Boudicca is an especially interesting character, since she’s most defiant about the strict expectations. She won’t stop asking questions, speaks without permission, and refuses to follow orders. However, she disappears shortly after her arrival and isn’t heard from again until much later.

The final verdict:

The real mystery involves the truth behind Faye’s amnesia, although astute readers will predict what happened. The story’s dark tone and Faye’s natural spirit are highlights of the book, and I recommend you check this book out for yourself. 

Fifth Grade Top Dogs (Rule the School) by Jerry Spinelli

What worked:

The plot will be familiar to all middle-grade readers, as best friends George (Suds) and Joey look forward to being the oldest class in their elementary school. The early chapters describe George preparing for the first day of school, as he doesn’t know how to be a Top Dog. He consults with his mom and dad, but Joey gives him the most useful tips. George asks Joey how he can be so cool, and Joey replies that the best way is to fake it until you feel it. All middle-grade students go through fifth grade, so they can relate to George’s questions, doubts, and insecurities. The story is told from George’s point of view, so readers will know everything he thinks and feels. The narrative isn’t complicated by advanced vocabulary or surprising twists, so it can be easily read and finished in a short amount of time.

The author includes two common subplots to enhance the story. George finds his younger sister very annoying, and there’s only one year difference in their ages. George wants more privacy, and he’s tired of Zippernose barging into his bedroom. He can’t stand her crying and whining when she doesn’t get her way, and he might be getting too old for the pranks they pull on each other. Another problem for George is the crush he’s had on a classmate since they were in first grade. He always gets nervous around Judy, but he can’t stop watching her whenever he can. At first, he’s happy when Judy bullies his sister off the swings during recess, but it also makes him feel uneasy. I mean, Zipoernose is his little sister after all.

What didn’t work as well:

The story may be overly simple for older middle-grade readers. The adults in this book are probably kinder and more understanding than in the real world, as the boys test the limits of their independence.

The final verdict:

Spinelli captures the trials and tribulations of fifth-grade boys with his easy narrative and sense of humor. In the end, readers can benefit from George’s realizations and lessons learned. I recommend you give this book a shot. 

The Thing About Giants by Christopher Galvin

What worked:

This book has a giant role reversal, pun intended. Readers meet a young giant named Corman as he’s searching for medicinal plants to help his sick sister. It’s his first time above ground, so he’s leery of every new thing he sees, like an owl and a deer. However, the most fearsome things he might meet are humans trained to hunt and kill giants. Readers then meet Jacq, the daughter of the greatest giant hunter who was recently killed by rebels. Giants are slain to harvest their bones, which are used to make buildings, tools, and other things the humans need. However, Jacq has no interest in becoming a giant hunter and thinks the two groups should live in harmony. Her outlook on hunters strongly contrasts with expectations for the daughter of the greatest hunter hero, creating a major conflict.

The innocence and purity of Jacq and Corman will make this book endearing for young readers. Corman’s motivation is to bring healing herbs to his ailing sister. When things get tough, that thought gives him extra energy and determination. Jacq finds herself hunting for giants from a helicopter only because of her father’s orders. Her hope is to be rescued and returned to her home. Corman and Jacq are forced to work together to survive the dangers they encounter. However, their shared experiences allow their characters to grow and understand the enemies they’ve always feared. Giants aren’t emotionless, stupid beasts who want to devour humans. Not all humans are hunters who want to harvest the bones of slain giants.

There are overall themes of understanding others and the evils of greed. Humans and giants have been told horrible stories about each other since they were children, and short statements on the first page of each chapter reinforce them. There are different kinds of giants, and Corman’s people were forced underground seeking safety when humans arrived. Another effect of humans invading these lands is that the different kinds of giants rarely interact with each other anymore. In contrast, many humans are fixated on killing giants for their bones, and it’s an honor for children to be chosen to become giant hunters. Readers will learn later in the story that lies and schemes are being plotted, and Jacq will discover an unknown truth about her mother’s death.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers shouldn’t think too much about the logistics of giants, since an underground city of them is hard to imagine. Hidden passageways are challenging to envision when they’re big enough to fit giants. Also, if human society is developed enough to have helicopters, electronics, and factories, why are they so determined to harvest giants’ bones? Why not build structures utilizing the same metal used to make helicopters?

The final verdict:

This emotional, action-filled adventure shares thoughtful commentary regarding human behavior. Overall, young readers will be touched by the empathy and compassion shown by the main characters, and I recommend you give this book a chance. 

The Echoes of Time (Temporal Scent Trilogy #1) by Duane Penshorn

What worked:

Imagining how the past and present can merge can be daunting, but the author introduces it gradually. At first, a woman is startled to see her older image in the mirror, and her children treat her as if her mind is addled. A famous podcast personality visits a holocaust concentration camp and becomes overwhelmed by the smell and despair of the slaughter. His emotional breakdown is broadcast live for all to see. A man in Japan visits a memorial at the site of the atomic bomb and is overcome by the terror and searing heat during the explosion. The effects of temporal scent bombard the senses, “… a bizarre new reality where the past could be sensed, like a lingering smell of history.”

Temporal scent becomes a mystery, as much of the plot tries to understand everything about it. Several scientists from various fields of study interview and observe three subjects. Two men and a woman are put in situations to activate the phenomenon, while the scientists take notes. All three report that their experiences started about two months ago, but there’s no evidence that they’re a result of environmental factors. The military is leading the investigation, so skeptical readers will wonder what the army will do with any information they learn. Also, a select group is formed to protect the highest level of specials, and a scientist wonders about its combination of knowledge and power.

Other chapters share the variety of experiences and points of view toward temporal scent. One charlatan tries to make money by pretending to have the ability, while another man uses specials to locate hidden treasures. A detective becomes a valuable asset when he can sense new information from crime scenes and evidence. A TSA worker is transferred to border patrol, because her temporal scent allows her to identify suspicious people and vehicles. Other stories are presented as people discover new ways to use this new ability.

What didn’t work as well:

NetGalley listed this book for middle grades, but it’s probably best for an older audience. All of the characters are adults, which will make it less relatable for middle-grade readers. The story doesn’t have main characters, although a few personalities begin to stand out near the end. A few characters’ dialogue is sprinkled with the f-word.

The final verdict:

The plot is very creative, but the book feels like it’s establishing the backstory for future books. The ending will have readers wanting to turn the page for more information, but they won’t find it. Overall, this book will appeal to an older audience, but I can’t recommend it for most middle-grade readers. Since posting my review, the author informed me that this book is no longer listed for middle-grade readers.

The Golden Monkey Mystery by Piu DasGupta

What worked:

The plot becomes an adventure when Roma encounters a rare golden monkey. She makes it her mission to return it to its home, but there are many complications to her plan. It’s first captured by bandits, sold, stolen again, and Roma eventually ends up in the middle of the jungle. She reluctantly joins forces with a young boy, but she knows his cousin will be a hindrance. Arabella is a privileged, spoiled foreigner with no helpful skills, so she’ll only make the quest more difficult. It takes all of Roma’s self-control to hold her tongue, although Arabella’s whining and slowness make that challenging.

Roma’s dream is to enter medical school, but women in India are not permitted to attend them. Nevertheless, Roma won’t give up, and she thinks returning the rare golden monkey to its Himalayan home may change the minds of some people. She displays the medical knowledge she’s gained as she encounters different problems. She saves the life of a boy when a king cobra is ready to strike, but she shares how she would have treated a snake bite anyway. She needs to avoid detection from a light sleeper, and she knows an herb that promotes deeper sleep. Becoming a doctor is important to Roma, as she’s sure she’ll be able to save the lives of many Indian women.

The illustrations are clever, and they’re an integral part of the story. The most uncommon thing about them is that they show different scenes depending on how they’re viewed. One picture might display events relevant to the text on that page, but looking at it upside down shows something totally different. Roma notices the same thing, and several inverted illustrations provide clues toward completing the quest. These unique pictures add an innovative twist to the story.

What didn’t work as well:

Some readers may want a more developed adventure, as Roma quickly resolves any issues. The whole story takes place over the course of one day, so more serious complications or description may have been warranted.

The final verdict:

This quick adventure can be enjoyed by all middle-grader readers. Its fast pace is easy to follow, and the Indian jungle may be new to many young readers. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Case of the Pilfered Pearls (Shrew Detective #1) by Margi Preus

What worked:

The story is full of humor, as Minerva’s cousin, Tenacity, asks her to investigate a missing pearl necklace. Much of the humor arises from their lives as shrews, although Minerva lives in the wild and Tenacity lives in a house full of humans. Most of the story is set in the house where the shrews must avoid dangers from mouse traps, humans, a cat, and a security dog. Tenacity distracts the dog by claiming to hear a rubber ball bouncing down the stairs. Wordplay creates levity; for example, Tenacity calls Minerva the Shrewd Detective. Other examples are the result of similar-sounding or misused words, which Minerva sometimes does for her own amusement.

Readers can learn a good deal about shrews, as the author utilizes many facts about them in the story. Readers may be surprised to learn that shrews must eat frequently, which helps explain why they don’t sleep much. Minerva is constantly hungry, so many different types of shrew food are mentioned. More facts are shared after the story concludes, so readers may remember them from earlier in the book. Information about chipmunks and flying squirrels is also shared, as their unique talents are used to solve the problem.

What didn’t work as well:

Minerva has wallpapered her den with pages from a dictionary, so she shows off her large vocabulary throughout the book. The words and definitions are bold-faced to stand out, but they may simply distract some readers. Readers should be able to use context to understand the words. Curiously, this strategy is used in chapter 6 for words like brooch, leverage, simple machine, and fulcrum.

The final verdict:

This book is a wonderful first mystery for young middle-grade readers wanting to explore this genre. The plot is straightforward without any confusing complications. Overall, I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Declaration Decoded: A Guide to the Document That Inspired Our Nation by Katie Kennedy

What worked:

The author breaks down the Declaration of Independence step by step and explains the meaning behind its different parts. The explanations are highlighted in red for easy identification. It briefly goes into the events leading up to its creation, and the colonists’ rising frustration and anger with the King of England. There are anecdotes about historical figures and events relevant to the grievances; some will be familiar, while others will not. Communication between England and the colonists was troublesome because messages took weeks to cross the Atlantic, and some were lost along the way.

The decoding makes the declarations easy to understand, and they’re followed by rationales and connections to real events. The author examines the grievances with an impartial stance and doesn’t hesitate to point out Thomas Jefferson’s flair for propaganda. Most of the grievances are directed at the king, even when the king didn’t have control over them. Other grievances sound greater than they might have been, or they may not have been concerns for all of the colonists. However, the Declaration of Independence showed that the thirteen colonies were united in rejecting the king’s rule. He was not looking out for their best interests, and England did not think the colonists’ rights were equal to those of citizens living in Europe.

What didn’t work as well:

While the book presents interesting, factual information, the tone may not resonate with middle-grade readers. It’s non-fiction, so the readers may have trouble connecting with unfamiliar personalities and straightforward descriptions of events that happened hundreds of years ago.

The final verdict:

The synopsis indicates this book is for readers interested in civics or American history, so it’s not for a general audience. However, readers interested in the evolution of the United States or the Declaration of Independence will find this book enlightening. I recommend you try it for yourself.

Deepa M.D. by Priya Swaminathan

What worked:

Deepa’s leukemia is in remission, but she tells everyone she knows that she’s cured. She just wants to get back to having a normal life, so she doesn’t even tell her best friend, Renee. Denying her actual condition causes Deepa to put her health in jeopardy, and readers will anticipate the consequences. Her behavior is ironic, since she wants to become her uncle’s medical partner. Patients call her uncle when their doctors can’t help, and he has a perfect record for diagnosing the causes of confusing symptoms. However, his people skills are lacking, and Deepa can calmly mediate his interactions with patients. She’s surprised when a patient won’t heed her uncle’s medical advice, but she’s doing the same thing in her own situation.

Medicine is similar to solving mysteries, as doctors must make observations and collect clues to understand their patients’ problems. Deepa’s uncle has the role of Sherlock Holmes, and Deepa compares herself to Dr. Watson. The newest patient happens to be the brother of Deepa’s nemesis, which adds a complication to the plot. Their efforts face additional obstacles when they discover some characters are reluctant to be forthcoming with useful information. Tayo, the patient, isn’t telling his parents everything happening with his health, and other characters don’t seem to want Tayo get better. Assumptions and lies make things more difficult.

Childhood diseases are a part of life, but they can be devastating for the patients and their families. Readers will learn about Deepa’s leukemia, from her initial symptoms to the treatments during the diagnosis and remission. Her parents are concerned about a possible relapse, so they’re overly protective. A young, world-famous pop star suffers dizzy spells that keep her from performing, so she doesn’t want to cancel her tour. The most confusing case will remind readers to be vigilant when staying safe from summertime dangers.

What didn’t work as well:

Many different things are going on in the story, and readers’ attention may become distracted. However, the author navigates the numerous problems to bring the story to an emotional climax and resolution.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to mystery lovers, as Deepa is as obsessed as her uncle when it comes to deciphering symptoms. Honesty and friendships are topics that will resonate with all middle-grade readers. I recommend you give it a shot.

STEM Kids Make a Robot by Carlotta Berry

What worked:

The book describes a problem-solving process using the STEM approach. The group of kids must first identify a real problem where they can build something to solve it. They focus on the lunchroom and decide that the process for collecting food trays needs to be changed. Getting outside for recess as quickly as possible is something all middle-grade students can understand. The kids decide to create an AI robot that will collect and sort the paper, plastic, and silverware as it moves around the room. The kids learn to use library books and the computer to research how to create a robot, and they get invaluable help from the school’s technology teacher. They create a prototype, make modifications, and finally test it, taking notes.

The story also teaches young readers how to work with others in a small group. Tyler tends to make silly comments, and his partners kindly guide him to focus on useful ideas. They remember to always keep their comments respectful. They often remind each other of the teacher’s instructions or things they’ve learned in class. There are moments of compromise, like when the kids select the group name and choose a problem for the project. The kids assign responsibilities based on the team members’ interests and talents, and they respect their teammates’ ideas. They accept input from each group member and ask for help or ideas when needed. Each student steps up to make modifications based on his or her specialty. In the past, Minyuan always ate lunch by herself, but the students developed a friendship and now sit with her.

What didn’t work as well:

The story sounds like a description of a science project, because that’s what it is. Every chapter deals with a different step in the process, so it probably only appeals to readers interested in STEM. The target audience is younger, but some of the vocabulary is pretty technical.

The final verdict:

Amazon indicates this book is appropriate for students in kindergarten and older, but it’s probably over the heads of readers in the primary grades. The emphasis on STEM and describing the steps in completing a project may limit the audience, but I recommend you try the book for yourself. You may disagree.

Scrap by Guy Bass

What worked:

Paige and Gnat are sisters with contrasting views of Scrap. Gnat is convinced that Scrap is the missing King of the Robots and that he will help them escape Somewhere Five One Three. Paige is certain this dented, broken case of metal and bolts is definitely not K1-NG. Humans are comparable to rodents on this planet, and the robots are trying to exterminate them. Paige, Gnat, and their ailing mother are the last humans, and Gnat expects Scrap to help them escape. However, Scrap feels the humans betrayed him during The Difference of Opinion, and he’s sworn never to help them again.

Scrap’s character straddles the line between humans and robots. He’s made of metal parts and a battery that will never run out, but he must keep his core’s identity a secret. The robots consider K1-NG a traitor, and he’ll be dismantled if they discover his identity, his core code. Like humans, the robots have male and female genders, and readers learn they have vanity and emotions. All robots are obsessed with getting upgrades, and they constantly want more. Scrap tells Paige that he has a mind and dreams when he sleeps. Readers will follow his internal turmoil as he debates whether to help the girls or keep the promise he made to himself. Scrap tells them he won’t help, but readers know his actions say something different.

The author infuses elements of humor in different ways. Early chapters open with sales pitches that advertise all of the wonderful things humans can expect when they’re transported to Somewhere 513. Readers will smile when they contrast the descriptions to the actual robot takeover on the planet. Later chapters insert messages to the robots and provide readers with context for the rules guiding the robots. A character called Gunner enters the story mid-book, and she frequently mixes up familiar figures of speech by using similar-sounding words. The author often italicizes phrases like “have you been living under a sock”, “I beg your garden”, and “thinks outside the blocks”. Gnat’s childish innocence contributes levity and a contrast to the seriousness of her situation. Paige has one grenade, and she frequently threatens to blow everyone up.

What didn’t work as well:

Gnat and Paige wear old robot heads to hide their identities as humans. Strangely, a world full of self-aware, highly evolved robots can’t recognize human bodies under the robot heads. Gnat pretends to be mechanical, calling herself Gnat-Bot Ninety-Nine, but it’s still unbelievable that the human girls can navigate the world of robots with such simple disguises.

The final verdict:

The story mirrors human fears that robots will rise up one day and take over the world. The mayor is the true villain, and she’ll reveal the underlying problem when the story nears its climax. This is an unpretentious book, and I highly recommend it for readers wanting thought-provoking entertainment.

The Unchosen One by Amy Sparkes

What worked:

The synopsis is misleading, since Tassie doesn’t have a problem becoming part of the Chosen One’s prophecy. Saving Peryll from the Shadow fits perfectly into her dream of going on an adventure. The Wisest of the Wise tells her she’s the Chosen One, but she knows that she doesn’t totally fit the description. Sure, Tassie was born during the overlap of the Three Moons, and she’s escaped death several times, but no one can say she has a calm mind or that she’s wise beyond her years. The characters then decide she’s not the Chosen One, but Tassie eagerly joins the quest to find the real one. Readers are left to wonder if Tassie is, or isn’t, the Chosen One.

The author provides many twists to keep readers guessing. The Wisest of the Wise leaves Tessie to navigate a dangerous forest on her own, following an unknown path. An elf named Darley thinks he can steal Tessie’s gold, so he agrees to be her guide. However, nefarious characters want to get their hands on him, including a dangerous fairy queen. Darley has learned to distrust everyone, but he’s never met anyone like Tessie. She shows she cares about his welfare and refuses to leave him behind. Darley, and perhaps readers too, is surprised that he begins to care about her.

The author infuses humor into the story in different ways. Three wraiths strike fear into everyone they encounter, and their purpose is to destroy the Chosen One before the Shadow rises. The wraiths try to use proper manners, like saying please and thank you, even when they’re threatening “doom and destruction!” The banter between Tassie and Darley is fun. Tassie is always getting him into trouble, and she rarely has a plan to get him out of it. However, she has a talent for knowing what to say to confuse other characters. She convinces her best friend, Spin, to go with her by calling her quest a research mission rather than an adventure.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may expect Spin to have a larger role in the story. He’s Tessie’s best friend and is a talented inventor. Although Tessie talks about the wonderful things he’s created, the only one he uses in the story converts a bar into a shield. It feels like he should utilize another clever invention or two.

The final verdict:

This fast-paced, entertaining story will appeal to a wide range of young readers. The action, humor, and character relationships provide a potpourri of positive elements. Overall, I recommend you give it a shot.

Lily Tripp: Diary of an Accidental Time Traveler by Amelia Tait

What worked:

Time travel is always an intriguing topic, and the author adds a creative twist. Every New Year’s Eve, Lily is transported back in time, along with everyone she knows. However, Lily is the only character aware that it’s happening. These characters maintain their personalities and relationships with Lily, which provides readers with some consistency as the settings change. Lily has a crush on Ollie, but she’s a servant in 1621 and can’t show it. They still share a love for reading and find ways to interact when opportunities arise. Georgia bullies Lily during each time period, but it’s difficult for her to obey Georgia’s orders in 1621.

A main aspect of the story is Lily’s personal growth, as she tries to understand her connections to other characters. Georgia subtly insults Lily in 2025, but Lily doesn’t understand why it happens. She reaches a breaking point in each time period and retaliates against her tormentor. However, her actions have unexpected consequences, forcing her to evaluate her own behavior. Poppy is Lily’s best friend, and Lily admires Poppy’s willingness to be different. Poppy always supports Lily, but their friendship is tested as the plot progresses. Lily is unsure how she feels about Joe. He seems to be a neutral character, although he shares suggestions about how to get revenge against Georgia. Lily eventually must reconsider his influence on her life.

Visits to different time periods provide opportunities for readers to learn about England’s history. People in 1621 were strictly religious, and being accused of witchcraft could be a death sentence. Lily draws suspicion when she refuses to let doctors drain blood from her sick mother and instead makes chicken soup and a concoction of ingredients for congestion. Lily is baffled at the lack of women’s rights in 1621, and she’s angry that there hasn’t been much improvement in 1972. She faces culture shock in 1972 when she doesn’t know about popular music and pop stars. She doesn’t understand why she’s considered different for not wearing a regular bra in 2025, but Georgia insults her for wearing one and not supporting women’s liberation in 1972.

What didn’t work as well:

The jumps to different years in history are creative, but the first half of the plot feels choppy. There’s no explanation for how or why the jumps occur, so readers are left to wonder.

The final verdict:

The time jumps make it more challenging to understand the overall plot, but Lily’s self-actualization is the real story. She encounters the same characters in different time periods and must learn to understand her place among them. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Fire Serpent Legacy by Cindy L. Rodriguez

What worked:

Auri’s parents died when she was an infant, and she compares her life to a puzzle with missing pieces. Many books save the truth about lost parents until later, but readers learn early that her father rode a fire serpent and protected the Amazon jungle. She realizes that the large egg displayed in her grandmother’s cabinet holds the last fire serpent and wants to follow her parents’ wishes by returning it to Brazil. Auri feels an electrical charge up her arms when she touches the egg, which lets readers know she has a special connection with the Boitatás. Readers will anxiously await the moment the egg hatches, giving the story a jump start.

The book weaves elements of the Portuguese/Brazilian culture and the Amazon Forest into the story. The importance of the rainforest to Earth's survival is emphasized, and deforestation is the main conflict in the plot. The characters prepare Portuguese dishes, and Auri and her sister learn about unique fruits and foods found in Brazil. Auri’s aunt mostly speaks Portuguese, and Auri’s sister has refreshed her knowledge of the language to become fluent. Portuguese words and phrases add authenticity to the story, and readers can figure out most of their meanings using the context. Auri also interprets some of the vocabulary, although she struggles with the language herself.

The conflict is complicated by Auri’s uncle, since he’s a major player in the destruction of the local environment. Auri’s grandmother goes so far as to warn Auri to stay away from her uncle, because he’s a dangerous man. In addition, a group of Amazon protectors used to support the efforts of the Boitatás, but they’re no longer active. Many of them think it’s most important to save the last Boitatás, which is why Auri’s grandmother took the egg to the United States. Consequently, Auri doesn’t know who might be willing to help her and the newly hatched Boitatás. Some people will want Sergio taken out of the country to keep him safe, but Auri is determined to stop the deforestation.

What didn’t work as well:

Sergio’s reaction to Auri after hatching is a little confusing. The tingling she feels when touching the egg implies they’re already forming a bond, yet the Boitatás is defensive and frightened toward Auri when they first meet. They quickly become close, but that initial meeting is surprising.

The final verdict:

This exciting adventure addresses a real-world issue: deforestation. The issue may be news to many young readers, but the book’s message is vitally important for them to hear. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

George Goodwin, Dragon Slayer: A Scouting Legend (Order of the Dragon Slayer) by Candace Lee and Eric Newman

What worked:

This book is reminiscent of the movie, “The Goonies”? This book also has a group of local kids venturing underground, looking for hidden treasure. Thieves race to flee the abandoned mine taking diamonds that could be used to save the dying town. George’s main goal is to clear the disgraced memories of his father, since his dad was blamed for the deaths of other miners. The other kids follow him into the mine with thoughts of becoming rich, but they become trapped and must follow a map to get out. The tunnels are difficult and treacherous, and there are natural obstacles just waiting to bring tons of rocks falling onto the kids. Oh, there’s also a dragon looking for its next meal.

Readers can learn about West Virginia and the importance of coal mining to the people living there. The people are prideful, but they know the dangers of working in the mines. Many towns are abandoned when the coal runs out, and Big Mountain is slowly becoming the next casualty. The narrow tunnels are reinforced to offer support, and George wishes this mine had been lined with limestone to prevent the spread of fires. The kids learn that a blocked exit can mean death, since the only other way out is on the other side of the mountain.

The plot will certainly satisfy any readers with a need for action or fighting scenes. The dragon attacks are relentless, and readers discover it won’t stop searching for George until it kills him. Lulls in the action give a false impression that things are okay, only to have the dragon rear its terrifying face again. To complicate things further, thieves are roaming the tunnels, so readers can expect them to pop up. One of them is crazy enough to destroy the whole mountain, even if the kids are still inside the mine.

What didn’t work as well:

There’s a Scottish man named Rowland who can see into the future. He adds humor and predictions of events to come, but his ability doesn’t immediately make sense. The book begins with a realistic tone, and the existence of a dragon is strange enough. The kids use scouting skills, but there’s no hint that some humans will have superpowers.

The final verdict:

This story is a flat-out action adventure, as George and his friends battle a dragon that is determined to kill them. I recommend you give this book a shot.