The Islands of Iros by L.M. Bracklow

What worked:

The plot is told through the viewpoints of Luke, Damian, and Kaori. Each of them hopes to become one of the Crimson Raiders, defenders of Zutoro, but their reasons are vastly different. Damian hopes to find treasure and the legendary, power-filled finger of a sorcerer who died many years ago. Kaori wants to escape servitude to seek adventure across the seas. Luke doesn’t really want to join the Crimson Raiders until he swears to get vengeance against the enemy general responsible for his older brother’s death. The alternating chapters provide unique thoughts of these characters that aren’t always shared with their friends.

The search for the sorcerer’s mysterious finger is at the center of the plot and comes across as an unusual quest. It’s weird that someone will need to eat the finger in order to absorb all of the sorcerer’s powers and the fact that the sorcerer was evil adds an element of uncertainty. Actually, one of my first questions was wondering if the malevolent nature of the sorcerer might influence the person possessing his magic. I can give you three guesses about which character will eventually inherit the sorcerer’s powers. To add another layer of mystery, hints are cast that the sorcerer may not actually be dead so readers will wonder when he may pop up again.

A curious twist to the plot is when the person inheriting the magic is trained by another character, a Crimson Raider, who expected to receive it. There’s an inherent animosity between the two characters due to the jealousy and anger felt by the trainer, although he’s generally portrayed as an annoying bully anyhow. He’s never practiced magic, but he’s done more research about it since he assumed he’d become the new sorcerer. The trainee obviously has no idea how to conjure the ability and nose bleeds and weakness result whenever enchantments are cast. Also, anger is a strong catalyst to evoke the power which causes me to wonder if there might be an evil nature to it. Toward the end of the book, the author introduces another huge twist to the sorcerer’s magic that dramatically changes the characters’ roles.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers may want to know more about the inner workings of the characters, especially Damian. He’s the quietest of the three main characters and is driven to find hidden treasure but it’s not clear why. There’s also a moment during Crimson Raider training when he surprisingly threatens another boy. The action makes sense in the context of the situation but that behavior is out of character for Damian. He is the most difficult one to figure out due to his angry moments and his avoidance of interacting with others.

The Final Verdict:

The plot is easy to follow and should appeal to young readers. The most interesting aspect of the story is the magic because of the mystery behind how it works and the toll it takes on the sorcerer. Overall, it’s an exciting start to a series and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Blameless (The Blameless Series 1) by E.S. Christison

What worked:

The format is familiar as a young princess named Brie is rescued by three men with powers from murderers invading the castle. Brie too has newly-discovered rare skills that may make her the most powerful Blameless but she must learn to manifest and control them. An evil, ruthless man has taken over the kingdom with abilities no one can explain and he seems to want Brie captured alive. The first half of the book deals with Brie learning about her powers and establishes the plot’s overall situation while the second half develops a head-on confrontation with the man responsible for the king and queen’s deaths. The tension and suspense are amped up as Brie fights for her life, freedom, and vengeance for her parents.

The story is filled with magic that Brie had only heard fantastic tales about. The Blameless first appear a thousand years earlier and wield abilities aligned with the sun, air, and land to protect the innocent. They go underground and live in the shadows, only appearing to help others or carry out the king’s business. The Blameless restrict their appearances because they don’t want to use their powers for unimportant situations that might create additional problems. They don’t want to cause unintentional, negative consequences with their actions. What if helping one person results in another person being harmed in some way as collateral damage?  Remaining anonymous avoids being inundated with requests for help every day and allows the Blameless to observe, consider, and decide when it’s time for them to step in. Their powers won’t work in selfish situations.

A refreshing aspect of the story is the feeling of family and community the author is able to create through Fenton’s family and the secret city of the Blameless. Brie has lost her parents and brother and the plot could easily have turned serious, dark, and angry. However, Fenton, his wife, and Fenton’s five younger sisters treat her as family and help her feel welcome and loved. Cassie is especially ecstatic that she has a new best friend in Brie, who happens to be Blameless, and happens to be a princess! Cassie’s adventurousness and free spirit are just what Brie needs while dealing with the murder of her family. Life with Fenton’s family allows Brie to be herself without worrying about royal expectations. A friend enjoys teasing her with various creative names that hint at her status as the future queen. Positive emotions continue even when Brie encounters danger and imprisonment, although those moments are more challenging.

What didn’t work as well:

It’s unexpected when Brie never fully embraces her powers. She’s trying to keep them secret from her enemy but she mostly summons objects and practices becoming invisible. Not exactly abilities associated with being the most powerful Blameless. The most interesting question in the book is how Brie’s enemy is able to force Blameless to do his bidding.

The Final Verdict:

This book is a creative, entertaining beginning to a new series and readers should be prepared to read its sequel. This book establishes a backstory for future editions as the conflict isn’t fully resolved. I’m looking forward to reading the next installment and I recommend you give this book a shot. 

Omar Rising by Aisha Saeed

What worked:

The book deals with important social issues of inequality, prejudice, and injustice. Initially, Omar is unaware he’s a victim of these problems and is thankful for the opportunities offered with his scholarship to a prestigious, private school. He continues to have dreams of becoming an astronomer but they’re challenged when he learns that he needs to complete community service each week and he can’t participate in extracurricular activities. He knows he’s from a poor family but he doesn’t feel poor until he’s called a charity case by a rich, enabled classmate.

The author delves into Omar’s thoughts and feelings allowing readers to experience his frustrations and fragile morale. He has high hopes for the school and understands it will be more difficult than his previous education. He experiences joy and success on the soccer field and in math class so he’s especially upset when he learns he can’t be part of the school team. Readers will fully understand the unfairness of the school when Omar’s effort and commitment are questioned while he’s already putting in extra time studying and working in the kitchen. Hopes for remaining in the school dwindle as the plot moves along.

Omar has a supportive group of friends, some with scholarships and some without. They come from different family backgrounds with different levels of wealth but they still treat each other as comrades. The scholarship students are burdened with extra expectations so they realize they may need to share their individual talents in order to survive their classes. Omar is constantly told that he needs to allow time to relax but he feels like he needs to spend all of his time studying. He doesn’t want to cause his family stress and he doesn’t want to let the school know about his troubles. He eventually confides in his best friend from home and she provides him with valuable advice that begins to produce optimism.

What didn’t work as well:

I’m not sure if a boy struggling to succeed in school will fully engage young readers but the story is so much more than that. Yes, much of the plot involves Oliver’s struggles with English class and meeting the school’s requirements but the true story is about an underdog battling to defeat injustice.

The Final Verdict:

The story will resonate with lovers of underdog stories and the author saves a couple of surprises for the second half of the book. Injustice always creates emotional responses within readers so their engagement should be guaranteed. I recommend you give this book a shot. 

Maya and the Lord of Shadows by Rena Barron

What worked:

I’m always conscious of how well authors create hooks to reel readers into their books. This one presents two action sequences that develop interest and also help review previous happenings in the series. Readers who haven’t read the previous books, like me, or who need reminders will appreciate the descriptions of Maya’s previous encounters with the Lord of Shadows. These scenes share Maya’s relationship with Zeran, a former darkbringer, but it’s complicated by another character’s vision that he will betray Maya. Uncertainty, mistrust, and possible outcomes are immediately piqued. The next scene sees another darkbringer reappear and it turns out to be a trap and a precursor to a darkbringer invasion.

The author creates a seemingly impossible conflict to solve and makes things worse as the plot moves along. The Lord of Shadows earlier used powers from Maya and her sister to damage the veil between the Dark and human worlds and it turns out the veil is now irreparable. The celestials, the gods and goddesses with the most power, know the Lord of Shadows will eventually break through and they probably won’t be able to stop him once he does. Maya and her godling friends want to help but it’s apparent Maya’s previous victories against the darkbringers mean nothing this time. Maya’s character fights along with other godlings but she can’t shake the knowledge that her powers helped the Lord of Shadows grow stronger. The plot seems to count down the moments until he finally breaks through the veil and unleashes the Dark into the human world where all humans, godlings, and celestials will be killed.

The characters come with a variety of personalities and backgrounds that enhance the story and interactions. A school bully is an annoying braggart who constantly exaggerates his abilities and taunts Maya. Zeran and Maya are becoming close but they won’t admit that they might be more than friends. Zeran’s secrets and unpredictable emotions don’t help their relationship. The Lord of Shadows is annoyingly smug and confident as he knows it’s only a matter of time before he rules the universe. Maya’s father is a powerful celestial who regrets the consequences of creating the veil to separate the Dark from the humans. It’s a little unusual to see Maya and her sister having dinner at home with their parents after a day full of fighting darkbringers. Maya’s commitment to protecting the veil is confounded by her self-doubt regarding her inability to master her powers.

What didn’t work as well:

Despite the author’s efforts to recap important past events, readers starting with this book will probably feel like they’re missing something. Maya often faces foes she’s met before so readers won’t be fully aware of their past relationships and issues. However, as always, the concerns are easily remedied by reading the previous books first.

The Final Verdict:

The plot contains a couple of surprises but it presents much of what readers will expect in a typical middle-grade novel. Even though Maya has the potential to be the most powerful godling in the universe, it’s nice that she learns she can’t succeed by herself. Give it a shot!

The Notorious Scarlett and Browne by Jonathan Stroud

What worked:

Scarlett and Browne are infamous thieves with Browne able to read minds and Scarlett an expert with weapons. The opening scene displays these talents as bandits quickly discover they’re attempting to rob the wrong two travelers. This moves into the next scene where they rob a Faith House with security so daunting that no other thieves are brave enough to attempt a heist. However, Browne is the moral conscience of the story as he questions what they’re doing. The church is depicted as a greedy, intimidating entity so robbing them doesn’t bother him but he wonders if Scarlett and he should be doing more to help oppressed citizens living in poverty. Their different views of the world create a simmering conflict between the two main characters until Browne learns more about Scarlett’s past.

Scarlett is the most interesting character as her personality is complicated. She comes across as rough and violent and that image is well-deserved. She has no problem killing those that threaten her or stand in her way but Browne is slowly encouraging her to treat some people less severely. Scarlett has quiet moments by herself when she calms her mind and reflects on her life. She’s always been confident in her choices and ability but she’s discovering there are treacherous, powerful people (perhaps more formidable than herself) intent on harming her or coercing her to use her skills. The main conflict in the plot actually arises from Scarlett’s concern for the safety and well-being of a young girl and her grandfather.

Fame and brochures retelling their escapades follow the notorious pair but the plot always has an air of danger. Scarlett and Browne never know who they can trust (usually no one) so Browne’s talent for reading minds comes in handy. A wild card throughout the book concerns his fear and anger as he releases blasts of devastating energy when the feelings become too strong. He’s unable to control this ability so it requires all of his inner strength to stifle the emotions. In addition to human dangers, various deadly creatures including Taints, blood-moles, and man-sized owls roam the lands, caves, and fen and add to the suspense in every chapter. A literal ticking clock counts down the time to a deadline that will result in the death of two innocent people. An intriguing twist occurs when another foe resurfaces to execute Scarlett and Browne and complicates their efforts.

What didn’t work as well:

The violent nature of the story, some suggestive scenes, and mild profanity may not be appropriate for younger readers. Actually, the author craftily blends drama, and maturity mixed with middle-grade, humor, and impossible conflicts to develop this highly fascinating story.

The Final Verdict:

While the tale of these two “heroes” has a mature tone due to Scarlett’s rough personality, middle-grade readers will still enjoy the action and dramatic situations. The very mild profanity is offset by the swear box Scarlett wears around her neck and she makes frequent donations. The overall book is very entertaining and I recommend you give it a shot. I look forward to reading the next book in the series. 

Children of the Stone City by Beverley Naidoo

What worked:

The book immediately shares the division between cultures within Stone City as the main characters, Adam and Laila, are identified as lesser citizens called Nons. The Permitteds are entitled people and they even have their own language. Every year, Adam’s father must complete an application requesting the Permitteds to allow his wife to remain with the family and not be sent back to her hometown outside the Stone Wall. She’s not even allowed to hold a paying job due to her upbringing. Adams’s father fights to protect the rights of Nons as Permitteds constantly try to steal away the homes of his neighbors. This conflict is amplified when the father dies leaving no one to provide for the family and protect the Nons from the injustices they face.

Music plays a big role in the plot as Adam loves to play the violin. His father always wanted him to pursue his interest in music so his mother and grandmother continue to encourage his violin lessons even after his father’s death. Playing his grandfather’s violin called Jabari motivates Adam even more after he learns of its history. Practicing the instrument calms him and provides him with a way to escape the stress and complications of his life as a Non. It also creates problems as the Permitteds and Permitted police are suspicious about how a young Non boy can possess such a fine violin. Adam hopes and dreams that playing Jabari may provide a solution to many of his problems.

The author compassionately develops Adam’s character as the story focuses on the emotional hardships of his life and the fragility of peace in the city. The situation is compared to a small event creating an avalanche. Potential dangers lurk whenever Adam encounters any Permitteds so traveling to and from school always becomes an unpredictable adventure. His “cousin” Zak is more impulsive and free-spirited so spending time with him is more exciting but also more precarious. Adam tries to be an obedient son but circumstances on the streets make this challenging. His mother’s pending permit, an uncle’s house stolen by the Permitteds, an upcoming concert, skirmishes with Permitted boys, and an arrest by the Permitted police overwhelm Adam and force him to focus on his music further. His turmoil and confusion will be shared by readers.

What didn’t work as well:

Much of the plot surrounds Adam’s experiences and problems as a Non and the pace may be slower than young readers like. Much of the later parts of the plot deal with legal and political There’s plenty of drama to hold their interest though as the Permitteds never let readers forget who has the power. The plot’s resolution is ambiguous and readers may want more clarity on some issues.

The Final Verdict:

What the story lacks in action is made up for in drama. The injustices described within it mirror some cultures in the world and all readers should be affected emotionally and feel the anger and frustration. Overall, the book touches on a range of feelings and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Forbidden Island (Explorer Academy 7) by Trudi Trueit

What worked:

Each book in the series focuses on an actual, real-world environmental or historical issue. Geographic and scientific information are blended into the plot to enhance descriptions of the setting and scenario. This plot begins in Antarctica where the temperatures are dangerously cold and the sun is above the horizon for only a few hours each day. The Cousteau team of Explorers must collect and record observations of wildlife that includes penguins and whales. Later, they travel to Argentina where they’ll search for ancient dinosaur fossils. Finally, the Explorers are headed to Hawaii where more mysteries and dangers await. The author reveals a large surprise during the book’s climax. The final pages of the book provide non-fiction information about some of the locations and findings mentioned in the plot.

Nebula continues to be the major antagonist as they compete with the Explorers to discover a serum that can cure any illness. If discovered, it will make the need for all other medicines and drugs in the world obsolete so pharmaceutical companies will no longer be needed. Spies have infiltrated the academy which poses problems and dangers for Cruz and his best friend Emmett. Emmett has been posing as one of the spies named Jaguar but the boys still don’t know the identity of the actual spy. The characters know this person is on their exploring vessel, the Orion, but they don’t have a clue if they’re looking for a boy or girl, friend or acquaintance. Everyone is suspect so tensions are high. The real Jaguar stole the seventh piece of an eight-piece cipher in the last book and Cruz and his friends can’t collect the last two messages without it. Cryptic clues provide the characters and readers with puzzles that must be solved that will eventually lead to the location of the world-changing serum.

The book is science fiction so a myriad of innovative inventions adds creativity to the plot. Cruz has a drone disguised as a small bee that is often used for reconnaissance, guard duty, and defense. The Explorers’ suits protect them from extreme environmental challenges and Emmett’s glasses change colors to reflect his mood. Black stones holding pieces of the cipher activate interactive holograms allowing Cruz’s deceased mother to communicate additional clues. Biometrics are used to unlock doors and Cruz’s childhood friend invents an “impossible” form of communication. All of the gadgets are based on actual science so they’re plausibly believable.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers need to read the previous editions in the series to understand the backstory and characters in this book. The author doesn’t put much effort into recounting previous events so readers will probably be confused about things that are happening especially the role of Nebula in the plot. The story can be fully enjoyed if readers understand the overall situation. The synopsis accompanying the post indicates this book ends the series but the plot’s resolution leaves the door open for more.

The Final Verdict:

The overall series is imaginatively entertaining and should be enjoyed by lovers of mysteries, adventure, and science. The relationships between characters and elements of espionage enhance the story and I highly recommend you give it a shot. 

The Jellyfish Jailbreak (Alessia in Atlantis 2) by Nathalie Laine

What worked:

There aren’t many middle-grade books that take place under the sea but Alessia returns to Atlantis very early in the plot. The author creates an imaginative setting on the ocean floor and in the waters above with creatures of all kinds. Crabs act as a police force and as the title says, a secret, secure jail is guarded by jellyfish. An inventive detail is the use of pearls called Drifts to introduce memories and flashbacks. The Drifts are like holograms that allow characters to visit other times and places for pleasure or to collect information. Alessia, the main character, comes from dry land called Selva and there’s growing suspicion and fear of anyone from the “overland”. It’s not safe for them to walk around Atlantis as overlanders are blamed for a prisoner’s escape and other suspicious activity. These issues become the main conflict in the plot, although there are evil, covert operations below the surface.

I haven’t read the first book in the series and I base my reviews on each individual edition. The author efficiently shares highlights from the previous book to quickly provide new readers, like me, with the information needed to understand what’s happened so far. The biggest news is that Alessia’s mother is a major fiend, public enemy number one, and Alessia will have a very hard time if the public ever discovers this connection. Alessia is quick to blame her mother for every “fishy” situation even when it doesn’t make sense. Readers should remember to consider the evidence themselves and draw their own conclusions.

Alessia is able to control people’s minds but she’ll need to master the ability if she hopes to stop her mother. As the book’s summary indicates, using her power has a dark side that may eventually corrupt her character. Alessia has a confusing relationship with Vulcor, the new emperor, as she’s not sure if he feels a growing closeness as she does. She also has complicated troubles with Kella, her best friend. Kella begins to notice changes when Alessia uses her power but Alessia feels like Kella doesn’t understand what’s happening. Sometimes, it’s difficult for people to accept the truth and Alessia’s ability almost becomes an addiction. Readers will be inside her head as she struggles with a myriad of problems.

What didn’t work as well:

The template for the story is very familiar with a main character learning to use her power, an evil parent plotting terrible schemes, and a close group of friends banding together to do the right thing. A nice twist is that Alessia took the power from her mother and her mother wants it back to fulfill her plans.

The Final Verdict:

The format of the story is easy to follow but the author includes original qualities to keep it fresh. Hidden conspiracies always keep things interesting and make everyone a potential antagonist. Overall, this is a very entertaining book and I recommend you give it a shot. 

Embassy of the Dead- Destiny Calling by Will Mabbitt

What worked:

Jake is the main character and he’s assisted by a ghost named Cora. Jake’s an Undoer and is tasked with helping the deceased move on to the Afterworld. Cora adds a bit of humor to the story as she attaches nicknames to Jake and his friend Sab along with an air of superiority. She thinks Jake can’t function without her around although she doesn’t have a physical presence among the living. Sab has only recently started seeing ghosts but his ability seems to be getting stronger. The Embassy of the Dead is finally taking notice of him which I assume means he’ll have an expanded role in the future.

The author creates tension in several ways to keep readers engaged. Jake and Sab are summoned to the Embassy of the Dead but they need to leave their bodies to get there. They each carry a ticket that counts down the time they have left before their bodies will die leaving them stranded in the Underworld forever. Their empty, immobile bodies are left in Jake’s kitchen where his mother might freak out if she discovers them. Also, demons and spirits have existed together in the Underworld for years but hostility against demons is growing. Jake’s concerns grow when he’s declared the Chosen One and tasked with killing the last follower of Fenris. Suspicions should be peaked since main characters rarely commit premeditated murder.

There’s more going on behind the events presented but readers will need to figure out what. As mentioned, having a main character go on a mission to murder someone is a stark contrast to Jake’s personality and defies the rules of middle-grade literature. The opening scene describes two sisters, one a ghost and one a human, sneaking into Jake’s house with the intent to kill him. At that point in the book, readers can only wonder why they want him dead. Jake first encounters his target and future victim when he arrives at the Embassy of the Dead. He can’t understand why he’s supposed to kill a boy who seems adored by everyone there. Nevertheless, the weapon Jake carries compels him to complete his mission.

What didn’t work as well:

I feel like it will be a big advantage to read the preceding books first, which I have not done. Jake and his friends live with the Embassy of the Dead culture and expectations and that can’t be fully grasped by reading this book alone. As I’ve said in the past, my concerns can easily be resolved by starting with the first book, surprisingly called Embassy of the Dead.

The Final Verdict:

The author blends interesting characters and a mysterious plot to create an entertaining story. It’s probably best to read the previous books but this one can still be enjoyed by itself.  I recommend you give it a shot.

The Fireflies’ Champion (Guardian Angels United 1) by Amy Mirashi

What worked:

The story is set in a world of angels where Caroline finds herself after she dies in a house fire. Readers will know something’s not right when she fails to walk into heaven’s light and it becomes more puzzling when she’s reunited with her father, a member of the Guardian Angels United. He calls her Lily and says she mustn’t let anyone know about the power of her ring. Caroline has no idea what’s going on anyhow and she becomes worried when she hasn’t started growing angel wings. Her father and some other GAU angels turn up missing so the plot evolves into a mystery adventure. Caroline learns she has a gift of sight and can foresee when the living are in danger. Also, something extremely rare occurs when she begins the process to join the GAU and these events may offer clues as to why she’s in danger and must be wary about who she trusts.

The author keeps the setting relatable as the angel world works much like the land of the living. Lily works at a coffee shop to earn money, and the food here is “heavenly”. She’s surprised to find all of the angels wearing black but the color white isn’t even an option when she shops for a new outfit. Messages are sent via mail, although they’re distributed by delivery angels. Gods and mythical creatures are part of the story but they’re mostly talked about and not seen.

The plot is presented through the eyes of Caroline and her mentor Dash. This allows readers to better understand the mixed thoughts and feelings of the two main characters. Dash fails his mission to save Caroline’s life so he feels guilt whenever he sees her. The two of them have a connection through Caroline’s death but Dash is reluctant to develop any friendships and avoids becoming closer. When the two of them touch, Caroline gets visions of humans facing death but she’s also able to see things other angels cannot. She doesn’t fully understand life in the City of Angels and she’s unsure where to safely seek help. A character named Fin has power among the angels and Caroline starts to feel an attraction toward him. Fin’s arrogance will cause readers to be suspicious and Dash’s comments will reinforce the doubts.

What didn’t work as well:

Although Caroline’s life is threatened, the plot doesn’t fully develop the tension associated with the danger. Caroline and Dash have a device predicting when a threat will occur which actually lessens the suspense since the characters know when to expect an attack.

The Final Verdict:

It’s creative to have angels blended with Greek gods and other creatures and the City of Angels has much of the same drama as cities of the living. Caroline’s kind character makes her endearing and readers will root for her as she strives to find and rescue her father. It’s an entertaining start to a series and I recommend you give it a shot.

Rise of the School for Good and Evil by

What worked:

This book is a prequel to the popular series, The School for Good and Evil, and introduces the balance needed between Good and Evil. Twin brothers Rhian and Rafal are School Masters for the two opposite branches, and everything will remain equitable as long as their love for each endures. Their feelings are challenged when Aladdin enters the School for Good, while they both agree he should have been placed in the School for Evil. They begin to question the Storian’s wisdom, and Rhian decides he can confirm the magic Pen’s decision by changing Aladdin to good. Things only go downhill from there.

The theme of the book continues to explore the balance between good and evil. Conflict arises when one believes it doesn’t possess any amount of the other. Even though motivations may be good, it doesn’t mean Good can do whatever it wants or that it’s always right. Evil needs to be present to point out fallacies or errors in judgment by Good. The problem explodes in the book when each side believes the neutral Storian is favoring the other, so they feel a need to “cheat” or look for advantages. While the absence of opposing views seems great at first, the characters sense a void in their lives that is difficult to fill.

The book includes several curious characters to make the plot more interesting, familiar, and unpredictable. Aladdin and his magic lamp are included early on, but his wish goes awry and begins his problems. An outsider named Vulcan uses his personality to seize an opportunity while the twins struggle to resolve their differences. Hook is destined to kill Pan in Neverland, but he’s still a student at a pirate school. He takes a pivotal role in the story later in the book. A young seer able to see into the future becomes a wildcard, as it’s a huge challenge to make plans against foes when a character already knows what will happen.

What didn’t work as well:

The conflict and plot seem to be resolved after the first three-fourths of the book, but then a new problem is presented, related but different. It seems like a whole new story is starting, but actually, the original problem is brought to a more definite conclusion. I can’t say it will be happily ever after, but it provides a valuable lesson to the idea of good and bad people.

The Final Verdict:

It’s not always easy to tell Good from Evil. This thoughtful book is a stand-alone that precedes The School for Good and Evil. The characters have depth to them, as their actions, feelings, and intentions don’t always align. The concepts of good and evil are constantly at the forefront, and the lessons will leave readers reevaluating the differences between the two. I recommend you give this book, and the series, a shot.

The Extradimensional Reappearance of Mars Patel (Mars Patel 3) by Sheela Chari

What worked:

The most unique aspect of the book is that all of the characters are kids, except for the rogue Oliver Pruitt. Although there are too many characters to develop fully, their personalities are quite entertaining. Mars is the main character even though it’s unclear to him why he’s so popular among the kids on Earth. His life is complicated by the knowledge that Pruitt, the most hated man in the solar system, is his father. Caddie has telepathic abilities and is able to sense things others cannot. Toothpick is the brains of Mars’s group and he’s reprogrammed a drone they call Droney. Droney is an intelligent, talking drone programmed to interact socially, act as a scout and source of information, and a moving light. A tardegarde from Mars acts as a loyal, protective pet for Mars the character and Cupcake often behaves as though she can read his mind.

The story is told from various points of view that reflect events from a wide range of settings. Mars is reunited with his two friends back on Earth but all of the adults have disappeared. Aurora is now principal of the Pruitt Prep but she has bigger aspirations and is willing to use shady tactics to achieve her goals. A major conflict on the planet surrounds the question of whether the kids should make any attempt to locate the missing adults. As the story moves along, it becomes apparent that something above Oliver Pruitt is happening. Caddie and Julia have managed to survive on Mars by organizing the young colonists to develop a sustainable colony. However, strange clouds are spotted in the North and there’s an unexplainable surprise waiting for the characters.

The overall story reads like a mystery as readers will try to figure out how all of the events fit together. Most novels settle into a predictable format but this book keeps readers off balance the whole way through. The absence of any adults takes some getting used to as the possibility of their return is always on the edge of readers’ minds. A quick jump to another dimension early in the book makes a future connection always possible. The Mars colony seems to be doing well until their tardegardes abandon the settlement and issues with the power supply is upset. The kids left on Earth are also having problems even though they’ve reversed some of the effects of global warming. Again, readers will wonder how Mars, Earth, Pruitt, and the other dimension are connected, if at all, and the answers won’t be revealed until the book nears its extraordinary climax.

What didn’t work as well:

The early pages of the book are confusing so you’ll want to read the previous book before this one. Readers are dropped right into the middle of the action as the characters mention names of friends abandoned on another planet after Mars, his father, and others flee the destruction of an erupting volcano on the planet Mars. Mars is sucked into a wormhole that presents an alternate reality but those moments seem to be forgotten in the story almost as soon as they happen.

The Final Verdict:

The plot will challenge readers’ minds but it’s worth the effort. The author creatively crafts an imaginative world with children leading their peers on Earth and on Mars. It shares an underlying message of conservation and cooperation that can be applied to life in our real world. It feels like this book ends the series but who knows besides the author and the publisher? I recommend you give this book a shot.