What worked:
The narrative has a humorous tone, as it’s told in Baxter’s
voice. He wakes up one morning with a full beard and fears that he’s started some
type of hyper-puberty. His dad’s upset that Baxter’s beard is better than his! The
“chin rug” eventually goes away, but his hands and feet then become covered in fur.
The “knuckle sweaters”, “stubble socks”, and “Bax Beard” always disappear, but Baxter’s
life really changes when the Dean of Prodigium Academy shows up one evening. Bax
is a monster, so he must attend a monster school.
Baxter’s main interest is playing basketball, and he’s
excited to try out for the academy’s team. The other players can do one skill
well but stink at everything else. Baxter’s roommate, an eight-foot-tall troll,
plays great defense but can miss the rim while trying to dunk. The point guard
dribbles like a pro but can’t shoot or play defense. A smug warlock bully named
Nico is the only player on the team who does everything well. The coach is a mummy
who spends most of his time in a coffin. The players run practices and never do
drills to improve their skills. Their biggest problem is a lack of confidence,
but they must learn that their differences are their greatest strength.
Several conflicts drive the plot. The Prodigium basketball
team has never won a game, setting a record by losing for the past ninety-three
years. They’re hosting a tournament for the first time, but everyone, including
Bax’s teammates, expects them to lose every game. Nico hates Baxter and
constantly insults him about his “wolfiness”. Baxter is afraid to embrace that
he’s a werewolf, even though changing into one makes him play better basketball.
Finally, an EIP phantom steals players’ shoes and leaves messages behind. It
wants the team to withdraw from the tournament, so Baxter decides he must solve
the mystery and discover the EIP’s identity.
What didn’t work as well:
The early chapters are strange because no one is alarmed when
Baxter suddenly grows hair overnight. Schoolmates think it’s cool, and the
doctor isn’t too concerned. Characters don’t have a problem with him until he
grows fangs. No one considers calling him a werewolf until the monster school dean
shows up.
The final verdict:
I assume each book will involve new tournaments. Middle-grade
readers interested in monsters, basketball, and mystery will love this fun,
fast-paced story. I recommend everyone give it a shot!






