The Missing Magic of Sparrow Xia (An Illustrated Novel) by Leia Ham

What worked:

Sparrow, real name Ruyan, is an unassuming, humble student, trying to learn about magic before it’s lost. All children in this setting possess magic while knowing they’ll lose it as adults. Her older brother Ainsley is a third-year student, but he’s recognized for his powerful fire magic. In contrast, the fire Sparrow summons is barely larger than the flame on a match, and she feels inadequate when compared to other students, especially her brother. However, she sees a vision while being tested for her magical ability, and she’s told that’s usually an indicator of strong power. The head healer examines her and says something is blocking Sparrow’s ability to access her power. This tells readers that there’s more to her character than they currently see, and they’ll await the moment her powers awaken.

Sparrow becomes obsessed with finding out the cause of magedrain, which is causing students to lose their magic. She thinks it’s not natural reasons and suspects that someone is poisoning their classmates. Sparrow quickly identifies a suspect, but readers will question if she’s right. The suspect seems too obvious, and Sparrow makes all of her observations and “evidence” fit this person. The illness is attacking students with the strongest magic, so Sparrow fears her brother may be one of the next victims. Her friend wonders if Sparrow is more concerned about finding the guilty party or proving her brother wrong. Good question.

The school’s purpose is to strengthen students’ magic, and it’s interesting to see the variety of mages. Besides Sparrow’s fire, her best friends Lyndon and Orla possess air and nature magic, respectively. All of the students want stronger powers, although Lyndon has a special interest in magecraft, the art of engineering magic. The school includes a first-year bully who goes out of her way to heckle and tease Sparrow. Sparrow eventually has an unexpected reaction to the girl’s harassment, but it’s important to the story.

What didn’t work as well:

It would be nice to know more about a few of the supporting characters. Ainsley is a conflicted mage, but readers are only shown his arrogant side. Camellia taunts Sparrow throughout much of the story, but behaves differently later on. Readers don’t really know exactly what changed to cause this new version of herself.

The final verdict:

The book has many of the same traits as other stories about schools for magic students, although it’s unusual that none of the teachers can perform it. The plot focuses on the mystery of magedrain and Sparrow’s drive to prove herself, culminating in a surprising revelation that will continue into the sequel. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

Jamie Cooper and the Touchscreen Portal by J.P. Harper

What worked:

The format will be familiar to middle-grade readers, as an underdog, Jamie, teams up with two students at opposite ends of the student spectrum. Dan is a large, quiet boy whom everyone else avoids out of fear. Lakshmi is a popular, top student who brings her knowledge to the group. A twist involves Jamie’s older brother, as his father has moved to this small town for a fresh start. The early chapters inform readers that Cameron died, but they soon learn that he actually disappeared. This fact leaves the door open for Cameron to reappear later.

Visiting a new world is nothing new, although this book connects Myridiam to video games. The mysterious messages and portal to the world arise from Jamie’s iPad, and a version of it allows him to return home. Much of his experience doesn’t feel like virtual reality, although Jamie, Dan, and Lakshmi see text in their peripheral vision that identifies unknown creatures and weapon upgrades. Upon arriving in Myridiam, a chamber chooses a bow for Jamie, giving him the ability to rapidly shoot arrows with electrical charges or fire. Dan is assigned gleaming armor along with a shield that can grow to protect him and others from attacks. Lakshmi receives a staff that fires an energy beam and other powers that are revealed when needed.

It’s interesting to note that these three Guardians don’t overtly kill anyone with their powerful weapons, and there are many fighting scenes where that can happen. The only clue that an opponent might have been slain is a VR message indicating Jamie’s arrow made a critical hit. The kids have virtuous characters that aren’t immediately evident in the early chapters. This quality and their merciful nature make others respect and admire them, which is especially important when they venture within the borders of suspicious, aggressive Sothian warriors.

What didn’t work as well:

The ending is disappointing, as it leaves readers needing to read the sequel to resolve unfinished business. Also, the characters get into dire, no-win situations, but the arrows, staff, or armor get sudden upgrades to get them out of it, especially Lakshmi’s staff. It sometimes feels like cheating, since the characters don’t use their talents or intelligence to come up with solutions.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to middle-grade readers who enjoy underdog characters with unexpected abilities. The purity and compassion of the main characters are admirable, as they aid new allies to save Myridiam. I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Odyssey (A Classic Tale by Homer) Retold by Geraldine McCaughrean

What worked:

The book is based on Greek mythology, so young readers will be familiar with most of the gods mentioned. Zeus, Poseidon, and Athena are important to the story, as Odysseus’s behavior sometimes angers them, or he prays to them for help. Readers who enjoyed the Percy Jackson books or movies will recognize the Lotus Eaters, the cyclops, and the Sirens. The book offers aspects of mythology that young readers may not know, such as Odysseus blinding the cyclops, Polyphemus. The author’s retelling of Homer’s short stories makes them more understandable and faster-paced for a middle-grade audience.

Each chapter tells a different adventure where Odysseus and his crew struggle for their lives. They’ve been away from Ithaca for ten years, so they’re desperate and determined to return home to their wives and children. The first story finds Odysseus’s crew beguiled by the Lotus Eaters, as their food mesmerizes them into complacency without a motivation to leave. The second chapter introduces Polyphemus, and Odysseus’s decision to blind him changes the trajectory of the rest of the book. Poseidon is furious that his son can no longer see, so he finds all kinds of ways to punish Odysseus by impeding his progress or putting him in perilous situations.  

What didn’t work as well:

The book is a collection of short stories, and Odysseus is the only character connecting them all. Little time is spent developing characters, because there isn’t much of a reason. Everyone except Odysseus dies.

The final verdict:

The original Homer version of The Odyssey would intimidate young readers, but the author’s retelling makes it accessible. The collection of brief stories with life-threatening conflicts will appeal to all adventure lovers. I recommend you give this book a shot. 

The Island at the Edge of Night by Lucy Strange

What worked:

The early chapters will have readers immediately conjuring mysterious thoughts. The prologue describes Faye sleepwalking and hearing her aunt exclaim, “Oh, what have you done, you wicked child?” Faye is sent to a “different” school, far away from home, located on a desolate island. The headmaster’s wife shows Faye and Boudicca, another new student, to their cells, which the wife says are what the monks used to call their rooms. However, they’re locked inside their rooms to keep them “Safe from each other.” Faye is given a blue pill, a “sort of vitamin”, that the wife says all the children are given. Faye secretly refuses to take the pill because she’s concluded that she can’t trust anyone.

The mystery continues, as readers will try to understand Faye’s character. Something terrible happened one night while she was sleepwalking, and she woke up with an axe in her hand. She’s told that all of the kids at this school have done something horrible, and Faye wonders what she’s done. She feels a tremendous pull from nature, and her safe place always finds her in the branches of a tree. Being cooped up in the school on Auk Island depresses Faye greatly, but she is transfixed by the sight of The Knife. Her father was a renowned botanist until he presented a paper proposing that trees can talk to each other and that fae folk exist.

The author creates a dark, creepy atmosphere through the setting and characters. The island always seems to be covered by dark clouds, rarely letting the shine break through. The desolate landscape is void of green plants, and animals are rarely seen. The Knife towers over everything else, and its secrets beckon to be discovered. Dr Lighter and Nurse Violet clearly don’t like the children under their care, and they use medication, mind games, and threats to make the students subservient. The kids have no way to escape since the doctor and nurse pay the captain’s salary to ferry the only boat to the island.  All mail is read before it can be sent, isolating the students from all contact with the outside world.

What didn’t work as well:

It would be nice to know more about the other students, since they’re not a major part of the plot until the book’s last quarter. Boudicca is an especially interesting character, since she’s most defiant about the strict expectations. She won’t stop asking questions, speaks without permission, and refuses to follow orders. However, she disappears shortly after her arrival and isn’t heard from again until much later.

The final verdict:

The real mystery involves the truth behind Faye’s amnesia, although astute readers will predict what happened. The story’s dark tone and Faye’s natural spirit are highlights of the book, and I recommend you check this book out for yourself. 

Fifth Grade Top Dogs (Rule the School) by Jerry Spinelli

What worked:

The plot will be familiar to all middle-grade readers, as best friends George (Suds) and Joey look forward to being the oldest class in their elementary school. The early chapters describe George preparing for the first day of school, as he doesn’t know how to be a Top Dog. He consults with his mom and dad, but Joey gives him the most useful tips. George asks Joey how he can be so cool, and Joey replies that the best way is to fake it until you feel it. All middle-grade students go through fifth grade, so they can relate to George’s questions, doubts, and insecurities. The story is told from George’s point of view, so readers will know everything he thinks and feels. The narrative isn’t complicated by advanced vocabulary or surprising twists, so it can be easily read and finished in a short amount of time.

The author includes two common subplots to enhance the story. George finds his younger sister very annoying, and there’s only one year difference in their ages. George wants more privacy, and he’s tired of Zippernose barging into his bedroom. He can’t stand her crying and whining when she doesn’t get her way, and he might be getting too old for the pranks they pull on each other. Another problem for George is the crush he’s had on a classmate since they were in first grade. He always gets nervous around Judy, but he can’t stop watching her whenever he can. At first, he’s happy when Judy bullies his sister off the swings during recess, but it also makes him feel uneasy. I mean, Zipoernose is his little sister after all.

What didn’t work as well:

The story may be overly simple for older middle-grade readers. The adults in this book are probably kinder and more understanding than in the real world, as the boys test the limits of their independence.

The final verdict:

Spinelli captures the trials and tribulations of fifth-grade boys with his easy narrative and sense of humor. In the end, readers can benefit from George’s realizations and lessons learned. I recommend you give this book a shot. 

The Thing About Giants by Christopher Galvin

What worked:

This book has a giant role reversal, pun intended. Readers meet a young giant named Corman as he’s searching for medicinal plants to help his sick sister. It’s his first time above ground, so he’s leery of every new thing he sees, like an owl and a deer. However, the most fearsome things he might meet are humans trained to hunt and kill giants. Readers then meet Jacq, the daughter of the greatest giant hunter who was recently killed by rebels. Giants are slain to harvest their bones, which are used to make buildings, tools, and other things the humans need. However, Jacq has no interest in becoming a giant hunter and thinks the two groups should live in harmony. Her outlook on hunters strongly contrasts with expectations for the daughter of the greatest hunter hero, creating a major conflict.

The innocence and purity of Jacq and Corman will make this book endearing for young readers. Corman’s motivation is to bring healing herbs to his ailing sister. When things get tough, that thought gives him extra energy and determination. Jacq finds herself hunting for giants from a helicopter only because of her father’s orders. Her hope is to be rescued and returned to her home. Corman and Jacq are forced to work together to survive the dangers they encounter. However, their shared experiences allow their characters to grow and understand the enemies they’ve always feared. Giants aren’t emotionless, stupid beasts who want to devour humans. Not all humans are hunters who want to harvest the bones of slain giants.

There are overall themes of understanding others and the evils of greed. Humans and giants have been told horrible stories about each other since they were children, and short statements on the first page of each chapter reinforce them. There are different kinds of giants, and Corman’s people were forced underground seeking safety when humans arrived. Another effect of humans invading these lands is that the different kinds of giants rarely interact with each other anymore. In contrast, many humans are fixated on killing giants for their bones, and it’s an honor for children to be chosen to become giant hunters. Readers will learn later in the story that lies and schemes are being plotted, and Jacq will discover an unknown truth about her mother’s death.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers shouldn’t think too much about the logistics of giants, since an underground city of them is hard to imagine. Hidden passageways are challenging to envision when they’re big enough to fit giants. Also, if human society is developed enough to have helicopters, electronics, and factories, why are they so determined to harvest giants’ bones? Why not build structures utilizing the same metal used to make helicopters?

The final verdict:

This emotional, action-filled adventure shares thoughtful commentary regarding human behavior. Overall, young readers will be touched by the empathy and compassion shown by the main characters, and I recommend you give this book a chance. 

The Echoes of Time (Temporal Scent Trilogy #1) by Duane Penshorn

What worked:

Imagining how the past and present can merge can be daunting, but the author introduces it gradually. At first, a woman is startled to see her older image in the mirror, and her children treat her as if her mind is addled. A famous podcast personality visits a holocaust concentration camp and becomes overwhelmed by the smell and despair of the slaughter. His emotional breakdown is broadcast live for all to see. A man in Japan visits a memorial at the site of the atomic bomb and is overcome by the terror and searing heat during the explosion. The effects of temporal scent bombard the senses, “… a bizarre new reality where the past could be sensed, like a lingering smell of history.”

Temporal scent becomes a mystery, as much of the plot tries to understand everything about it. Several scientists from various fields of study interview and observe three subjects. Two men and a woman are put in situations to activate the phenomenon, while the scientists take notes. All three report that their experiences started about two months ago, but there’s no evidence that they’re a result of environmental factors. The military is leading the investigation, so skeptical readers will wonder what the army will do with any information they learn. Also, a select group is formed to protect the highest level of specials, and a scientist wonders about its combination of knowledge and power.

Other chapters share the variety of experiences and points of view toward temporal scent. One charlatan tries to make money by pretending to have the ability, while another man uses specials to locate hidden treasures. A detective becomes a valuable asset when he can sense new information from crime scenes and evidence. A TSA worker is transferred to border patrol, because her temporal scent allows her to identify suspicious people and vehicles. Other stories are presented as people discover new ways to use this new ability.

What didn’t work as well:

NetGalley listed this book for middle grades, but it’s probably best for an older audience. All of the characters are adults, which will make it less relatable for middle-grade readers. The story doesn’t have main characters, although a few personalities begin to stand out near the end. A few characters’ dialogue is sprinkled with the f-word.

The final verdict:

The plot is very creative, but the book feels like it’s establishing the backstory for future books. The ending will have readers wanting to turn the page for more information, but they won’t find it. Overall, this book will appeal to an older audience, but I can’t recommend it for most middle-grade readers. Since posting my review, the author informed me that this book is no longer listed for middle-grade readers.