The Echoes of Time (Temporal Scent Trilogy #1) by Duane Penshorn

What worked:

Imagining how the past and present can merge can be daunting, but the author introduces it gradually. At first, a woman is startled to see her older image in the mirror, and her children treat her as if her mind is addled. A famous podcast personality visits a holocaust concentration camp and becomes overwhelmed by the smell and despair of the slaughter. His emotional breakdown is broadcast live for all to see. A man in Japan visits a memorial at the site of the atomic bomb and is overcome by the terror and searing heat during the explosion. The effects of temporal scent bombard the senses, “… a bizarre new reality where the past could be sensed, like a lingering smell of history.”

Temporal scent becomes a mystery, as much of the plot tries to understand everything about it. Several scientists from various fields of study interview and observe three subjects. Two men and a woman are put in situations to activate the phenomenon, while the scientists take notes. All three report that their experiences started about two months ago, but there’s no evidence that they’re a result of environmental factors. The military is leading the investigation, so skeptical readers will wonder what the army will do with any information they learn. Also, a select group is formed to protect the highest level of specials, and a scientist wonders about its combination of knowledge and power.

Other chapters share the variety of experiences and points of view toward temporal scent. One charlatan tries to make money by pretending to have the ability, while another man uses specials to locate hidden treasures. A detective becomes a valuable asset when he can sense new information from crime scenes and evidence. A TSA worker is transferred to border patrol, because her temporal scent allows her to identify suspicious people and vehicles. Other stories are presented as people discover new ways to use this new ability.

What didn’t work as well:

NetGalley listed this book for middle grades, but it’s probably best for an older audience. All of the characters are adults, which will make it less relatable for middle-grade readers. The story doesn’t have main characters, although a few personalities begin to stand out near the end. A few characters’ dialogue is sprinkled with the f-word.

The final verdict:

The plot is very creative, but the book feels like it’s establishing the backstory for future books. The ending will have readers wanting to turn the page for more information, but they won’t find it. Overall, this book will appeal to an older audience, but I can’t recommend it for most middle-grade readers.

The Golden Monkey Mystery by Piu DasGupta

What worked:

The plot becomes an adventure when Roma encounters a rare golden monkey. She makes it her mission to return it to its home, but there are many complications to her plan. It’s first captured by bandits, sold, stolen again, and Roma eventually ends up in the middle of the jungle. She reluctantly joins forces with a young boy, but she knows his cousin will be a hindrance. Arabella is a privileged, spoiled foreigner with no helpful skills, so she’ll only make the quest more difficult. It takes all of Roma’s self-control to hold her tongue, although Arabella’s whining and slowness make that challenging.

Roma’s dream is to enter medical school, but women in India are not permitted to attend them. Nevertheless, Roma won’t give up, and she thinks returning the rare golden monkey to its Himalayan home may change the minds of some people. She displays the medical knowledge she’s gained as she encounters different problems. She saves the life of a boy when a king cobra is ready to strike, but she shares how she would have treated a snake bite anyway. She needs to avoid detection from a light sleeper, and she knows an herb that promotes deeper sleep. Becoming a doctor is important to Roma, as she’s sure she’ll be able to save the lives of many Indian women.

The illustrations are clever, and they’re an integral part of the story. The most uncommon thing about them is that they show different scenes depending on how they’re viewed. One picture might display events relevant to the text on that page, but looking at it upside down shows something totally different. Roma notices the same thing, and several inverted illustrations provide clues toward completing the quest. These unique pictures add an innovative twist to the story.

What didn’t work as well:

Some readers may want a more developed adventure, as Roma quickly resolves any issues. The whole story takes place over the course of one day, so more serious complications or description may have been warranted.

The final verdict:

This quick adventure can be enjoyed by all middle-grader readers. Its fast pace is easy to follow, and the Indian jungle may be new to many young readers. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Case of the Pilfered Pearls (Shrew Detective #1) by Margi Preus

What worked:

The story is full of humor, as Minerva’s cousin, Tenacity, asks her to investigate a missing pearl necklace. Much of the humor arises from their lives as shrews, although Minerva lives in the wild and Tenacity lives in a house full of humans. Most of the story is set in the house where the shrews must avoid dangers from mouse traps, humans, a cat, and a security dog. Tenacity distracts the dog by claiming to hear a rubber ball bouncing down the stairs. Wordplay creates levity; for example, Tenacity calls Minerva the Shrewd Detective. Other examples are the result of similar-sounding or misused words, which Minerva sometimes does for her own amusement.

Readers can learn a good deal about shrews, as the author utilizes many facts about them in the story. Readers may be surprised to learn that shrews must eat frequently, which helps explain why they don’t sleep much. Minerva is constantly hungry, so many different types of shrew food are mentioned. More facts are shared after the story concludes, so readers may remember them from earlier in the book. Information about chipmunks and flying squirrels is also shared, as their unique talents are used to solve the problem.

What didn’t work as well:

Minerva has wallpapered her den with pages from a dictionary, so she shows off her large vocabulary throughout the book. The words and definitions are bold-faced to stand out, but they may simply distract some readers. Readers should be able to use context to understand the words. Curiously, this strategy is used in chapter 6 for words like brooch, leverage, simple machine, and fulcrum.

The final verdict:

This book is a wonderful first mystery for young middle-grade readers wanting to explore this genre. The plot is straightforward without any confusing complications. Overall, I recommend you try this book for yourself.

The Declaration Decoded: A Guide to the Document That Inspired Our Nation by Katie Kennedy

What worked:

The author breaks down the Declaration of Independence step by step and explains the meaning behind its different parts. The explanations are highlighted in red for easy identification. It briefly goes into the events leading up to its creation, and the colonists’ rising frustration and anger with the King of England. There are anecdotes about historical figures and events relevant to the grievances; some will be familiar, while others will not. Communication between England and the colonists was troublesome because messages took weeks to cross the Atlantic, and some were lost along the way.

The decoding makes the declarations easy to understand, and they’re followed by rationales and connections to real events. The author examines the grievances with an impartial stance and doesn’t hesitate to point out Thomas Jefferson’s flair for propaganda. Most of the grievances are directed at the king, even when the king didn’t have control over them. Other grievances sound greater than they might have been, or they may not have been concerns for all of the colonists. However, the Declaration of Independence showed that the thirteen colonies were united in rejecting the king’s rule. He was not looking out for their best interests, and England did not think the colonists’ rights were equal to those of citizens living in Europe.

What didn’t work as well:

While the book presents interesting, factual information, the tone may not resonate with middle-grade readers. It’s non-fiction, so the readers may have trouble connecting with unfamiliar personalities and straightforward descriptions of events that happened hundreds of years ago.

The final verdict:

The synopsis indicates this book is for readers interested in civics or American history, so it’s not for a general audience. However, readers interested in the evolution of the United States or the Declaration of Independence will find this book enlightening. I recommend you try it for yourself.

Deepa M.D. by Priya Swaminathan

What worked:

Deepa’s leukemia is in remission, but she tells everyone she knows that she’s cured. She just wants to get back to having a normal life, so she doesn’t even tell her best friend, Renee. Denying her actual condition causes Deepa to put her health in jeopardy, and readers will anticipate the consequences. Her behavior is ironic, since she wants to become her uncle’s medical partner. Patients call her uncle when their doctors can’t help, and he has a perfect record for diagnosing the causes of confusing symptoms. However, his people skills are lacking, and Deepa can calmly mediate his interactions with patients. She’s surprised when a patient won’t heed her uncle’s medical advice, but she’s doing the same thing in her own situation.

Medicine is similar to solving mysteries, as doctors must make observations and collect clues to understand their patients’ problems. Deepa’s uncle has the role of Sherlock Holmes, and Deepa compares herself to Dr. Watson. The newest patient happens to be the brother of Deepa’s nemesis, which adds a complication to the plot. Their efforts face additional obstacles when they discover some characters are reluctant to be forthcoming with useful information. Tayo, the patient, isn’t telling his parents everything happening with his health, and other characters don’t seem to want Tayo get better. Assumptions and lies make things more difficult.

Childhood diseases are a part of life, but they can be devastating for the patients and their families. Readers will learn about Deepa’s leukemia, from her initial symptoms to the treatments during the diagnosis and remission. Her parents are concerned about a possible relapse, so they’re overly protective. A young, world-famous pop star suffers dizzy spells that keep her from performing, so she doesn’t want to cancel her tour. The most confusing case will remind readers to be vigilant when staying safe from summertime dangers.

What didn’t work as well:

Many different things are going on in the story, and readers’ attention may become distracted. However, the author navigates the numerous problems to bring the story to an emotional climax and resolution.

The final verdict:

This book will appeal to mystery lovers, as Deepa is as obsessed as her uncle when it comes to deciphering symptoms. Honesty and friendships are topics that will resonate with all middle-grade readers. I recommend you give it a shot.

STEM Kids Make a Robot by Carlotta Berry

What worked:

The book describes a problem-solving process using the STEM approach. The group of kids must first identify a real problem where they can build something to solve it. They focus on the lunchroom and decide that the process for collecting food trays needs to be changed. Getting outside for recess as quickly as possible is something all middle-grade students can understand. The kids decide to create an AI robot that will collect and sort the paper, plastic, and silverware as it moves around the room. The kids learn to use library books and the computer to research how to create a robot, and they get invaluable help from the school’s technology teacher. They create a prototype, make modifications, and finally test it, taking notes.

The story also teaches young readers how to work with others in a small group. Tyler tends to make silly comments, and his partners kindly guide him to focus on useful ideas. They remember to always keep their comments respectful. They often remind each other of the teacher’s instructions or things they’ve learned in class. There are moments of compromise, like when the kids select the group name and choose a problem for the project. The kids assign responsibilities based on the team members’ interests and talents, and they respect their teammates’ ideas. They accept input from each group member and ask for help or ideas when needed. Each student steps up to make modifications based on his or her specialty. In the past, Minyuan always ate lunch by herself, but the students developed a friendship and now sit with her.

What didn’t work as well:

The story sounds like a description of a science project, because that’s what it is. Every chapter deals with a different step in the process, so it probably only appeals to readers interested in STEM. The target audience is younger, but some of the vocabulary is pretty technical.

The final verdict:

Amazon indicates this book is appropriate for students in kindergarten and older, but it’s probably over the heads of readers in the primary grades. The emphasis on STEM and describing the steps in completing a project may limit the audience, but I recommend you try the book for yourself. You may disagree.

Scrap by Guy Bass

What worked:

Paige and Gnat are sisters with contrasting views of Scrap. Gnat is convinced that Scrap is the missing King of the Robots and that he will help them escape Somewhere Five One Three. Paige is certain this dented, broken case of metal and bolts is definitely not K1-NG. Humans are comparable to rodents on this planet, and the robots are trying to exterminate them. Paige, Gnat, and their ailing mother are the last humans, and Gnat expects Scrap to help them escape. However, Scrap feels the humans betrayed him during The Difference of Opinion, and he’s sworn never to help them again.

Scrap’s character straddles the line between humans and robots. He’s made of metal parts and a battery that will never run out, but he must keep his core’s identity a secret. The robots consider K1-NG a traitor, and he’ll be dismantled if they discover his identity, his core code. Like humans, the robots have male and female genders, and readers learn they have vanity and emotions. All robots are obsessed with getting upgrades, and they constantly want more. Scrap tells Paige that he has a mind and dreams when he sleeps. Readers will follow his internal turmoil as he debates whether to help the girls or keep the promise he made to himself. Scrap tells them he won’t help, but readers know his actions say something different.

The author infuses elements of humor in different ways. Early chapters open with sales pitches that advertise all of the wonderful things humans can expect when they’re transported to Somewhere 513. Readers will smile when they contrast the descriptions to the actual robot takeover on the planet. Later chapters insert messages to the robots and provide readers with context for the rules guiding the robots. A character called Gunner enters the story mid-book, and she frequently mixes up familiar figures of speech by using similar-sounding words. The author often italicizes phrases like “have you been living under a sock”, “I beg your garden”, and “thinks outside the blocks”. Gnat’s childish innocence contributes levity and a contrast to the seriousness of her situation. Paige has one grenade, and she frequently threatens to blow everyone up.

What didn’t work as well:

Gnat and Paige wear old robot heads to hide their identities as humans. Strangely, a world full of self-aware, highly evolved robots can’t recognize human bodies under the robot heads. Gnat pretends to be mechanical, calling herself Gnat-Bot Ninety-Nine, but it’s still unbelievable that the human girls can navigate the world of robots with such simple disguises.

The final verdict:

The story mirrors human fears that robots will rise up one day and take over the world. The mayor is the true villain, and she’ll reveal the underlying problem when the story nears its climax. This is an unpretentious book, and I highly recommend it for readers wanting thought-provoking entertainment.