What worked:
The mixed bag of supernatural creatures will amuse young
readers. The prologue describes a newly caught wyvern that can mentally
communicate with the main characters, Ollie and Gerin. Their parents study elves,
goblins, and other creatures, and Ollie’s father has made discoveries that help
the world. He’s currently working on the severe lightning storms worsening
outside. A golem named Henry has been granted freedom to roam the facility in
exchange for assisting Anomalies 53’s security. A manticore cub arrives and causes
a major disruption, sending the plot in an unexpected direction. Most of the
story happens outside Area 53 after the anomalies escape. Ollie and Gerin are
sucked through a portal and end up in the Shadowlands. All anomalies live
safely there, but readers learn that problems happening around Area 53 are
connected to problems in the Shadowlands.
Gerin and Ollie are best friends, but that may be because
they’re the only kids. Gerin is two years older and enjoys challenging Ollie to
tasks that he can never win. She’s starting to display heightened physical skills
and even beat a mermaid’s swimming record. Ollie is most confused about her
ability to pass through all of the facility’s security measures. Passcodes are
changed every six hours, but somehow, she still knows how to open locked doors.
He also notices something strange about her freckles, and readers will
eventually learn the truth about what’s happening, or has already happened.
What didn’t work as well:
There’s not much character development, but that’s to be expected
in fast-paced plots. Readers may wonder what the rest of the world is doing
while the lightning storms are raging. Readers learn these tempests may destroy
the planet, so it’s reasonable to wonder what else is happening.
The final verdict:
This book will appeal to a wide range of middle-grade readers,
especially those readers interested in mythical creatures. The story moves
quickly, and the author saves surprises as it nears the climax. I recommend you
give it a shot.






