The Strange Disappearance of Imogen Good by Kirsty Applebaum

What worked:

Readers are treated to two stories instead of one, and the two parts are combined to form the overall plot. The opening pages describe Imogen and a friend named Bex when they approach a garden behind Stillness Hall. Everyone in town knows to stay away from it, but Imogen dares Bex. The book’s synopsis picks up from there, as Fran discovers no one knows a girl named Imogen. The plot follows Fran as she slowly realizes that the people here are trying to trick her. An unusual twist in this book is that there is still physical evidence of Imogen’s existence; her organized, dusty bedroom hasn’t been touched since she disappeared. There’s even a photograph of Bex alongside Imogen, but Bex has no memory of her. How can Imogen find Imogen when no one in town knows she exists?

Alternate chapters tell the tale of the original owners of Stillness Hall. The wealthy couple finally gives birth to a baby boy, but he later becomes dangerously ill. No one knows what’s wrong, so the parents go to drastic measures to save his life. Grief, anger, and enchantments lead to consequences that last for decades. Fran has no idea of the truth surrounding Stillness Hall, so she’s in danger of becoming the next victim. The book follows her relentless search for Imogen, and alternating chapters reveal the mystery's origins and the property's terrifying legends. Readers will anticipate the moment when the two stories merge to an eerie conclusion.

The plot addresses bullying and perceptions of others. Fran dreads seeing her cousin, Imogen, because Imogen is bossy and no fun to be around. Imogen doesn’t care for her sloppy cousin either, so their dislike is mutual. Imogen wants to be liked by a popular group of girls, so she bullies Bex into accepting a dare. That’s what ignites the main conflict. Fran realizes she may have bullied Bex, too, by pressurizing her into doing something she didn’t want to do. In a related way, the plot addresses atonement, as the girls try to make up for past indiscretions.

What didn’t work as well:

Part of the enchantment can be tricky to understand, as it doesn’t affect everyone. The story includes an explanation, but it may still have readers thinking twice.

The final verdict:

This speculative fiction story is skillfully crafted to share Fran’s determined efforts to do what’s right. Stillness Hall provides a mystery, and readers will follow hints from the alternate chapters to put together a solution. Of course, understanding the mystery doesn’t explain how to solve the problem. Overall, I recommend this book for all middle-grade readers who like mysteries.