I’m always interested in how authors motivate readers in the
opening pages to keep them reading. This author uses an unusual strategy by
having the first chapter describe how uninteresting the town has become. It
makes readers curious to find something unexpected. The river that once carved out
a canyon is now a trickling stream and canola farms have replaced the booming barley
industry. The old, drafty school holds students from elementary through high
school although ghosts might, or might not, be spotted there. The town tries to
maintain an image of the Old West but the shop owners aren’t always hospitable.
The most interesting thing happening now is that Hannah’s father has been
missing for three months and she intends to find out where he’s gone. Readers
quickly discover the town has more mystery and adventure than it seems.
The story is presented as Hannah’s journal entries where she
records everything she learns from her investigation. It’s supposed to be her
grief journal. Hannah’s voice speaks directly to readers which helps to draw
them into the book. She explains events and her thoughts throughout the story and
shares the importance of keeping accurate, thorough records. She even
transcribes her tape-recorded interviews. One chapter is written in prose using
a style Hannah learned in class. The chapters allow readers into her neurodivergent
mind as her thoughts often switch to different topics or her brain becomes
fixated on one task. She has trouble sitting still and frequent daydreaming
should be expected. The chapters also describe Hannah’s irritation toward her
Uncle Fergus and her suspicions about the school guidance counselor. Could Ms.
Grant be a witch?
Early parts of the book allow readers to wonder if anything
supernatural is happening. Hannah’s best friend Sam says he’s seen a ghost in
the abandoned mill and he’s pretty sure it looked just like her father. Hannah
doesn’t believe in ghosts so she’s skeptical of Sam’s story. She finds
explanations for ghostly evidence they encounter plus she’s not ready to believe
her father is dead. Denial is a natural reaction to tragedy and Hannah has been
dealing with grief since her father’s disappearance. It takes the entire book
until she finally accepts the truth and can heal her broken heart.
What didn’t work as well:
Uncle Fergus comes across as a shifty character right from the
start. It would be nice if his sneaky, manipulative qualities were more subtle
so readers could discover his dishonesty on their own.
The final verdict:
The plot addresses the grief of suddenly losing a loved one in the
form of a ghostly mystery. Sam loyally stands by Hannah even when she holds out
hope for her father despite increasing evidence that he’s gone. This book
should appeal to lovers of ghosts and small-town mysteries and I recommend you
give it a shot.
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