Mako, Arden, and Tuck remain the main characters, and problems from the first book remain. They can’t reveal how their masters were disintegrated to dust, or they’ll be tracked down by the giant man who spared their lives. They’ve roamed the kingdom for months, but their Paramond horses attract attention wherever they go. They decide to settle in a remote mining town, but they get caught up in local problems. The trio begins to work for several Anorans, but readers will suspect they’re unsavory characters. Mako, Arden, and Tuck are honorable people, so working for these miners creates an immediate conflict. This story leads to Mako discovering the identity of his birth mother, a woman he’s never met.
Mako continues to struggle internally with the Accursed, Narrix. Mako bonded with this dangerous spirit out of desperation, even though their bond was forbidden. Narrix is always in the back of Mako’s mind, augmenting his power and fighting skills when needed. However, Narrix has a smooth tongue, always sounding sincere and supportive, but Mako can’t trust him. Mako must learn to use Narrix’s help without giving up his control or conscience. He must keep their alliance secret, but that’s hard to do when he displays unnatural fighting skills. Many people suspect the bond, and Mako eventually confesses to two characters.
The rise of the Accursed is the underlying problem in the series, but many citizens are in denial about the possibility. Mako, Arden, and Tuck witnessed the truth when their masters were slaughtered, but they can’t reveal their knowledge. Alternate chapters focus on Mako or Arden with their overlapping and contrasting problems. Arden can sense truthfulness in others, and she knows Mako is hiding a secret. She desperately wants to learn what happened to her father, so most of her chapters follow that storyline. Mako tries to locate a woman who has partnered with Vandrel, the leader of the Accursed, while hiding his true identity. No one has ever bonded to an Accursed without turning evil, but Mako hopes to be the first. His problem is complicated by characters who don’t see bonding with the Accursed as bad. Do they truly believe the Accursed can do good, or are they hoping to use Mako for evil purposes?
What didn’t work as well:
In book one, Mako displayed uncanny talents with the sling and music; it would be nice to see them highlighted more to emphasize his humble background and normality. Amazon suggests this book for ages 8 and older, but readers that young probably aren’t ready.
The final verdict:
You should read Forbidden Mountain, the first book in the series, before reading this one. Understanding Fallen Empire requires knowledge of what happened earlier. This book has complicated characters and relationships and growing suspense as critical decisions must be made. There’s plenty of action, and secrets are revealed. I highly recommend you read this series.
