The Sherlock Society 1 by James Ponti

What worked:

The author presents a dramatic hook as readers meet the two main characters adrift in the water off the coast of Florida. Siblings Alex and Zoe Sherlock had just survived a boat explosion after sneaking on and hiding from the owner and his crew. The setting then shifts back three weeks to explain how the kids get themselves, and their grandfather, into this predicament. This adventure reveals secrets they never expected, putting them in potentially dangerous situations. The book’s title comes from Alex’s admiration for Sherlock Holmes and his mysteries not from the fact they share the same last name.

The story is told from Alex’s first-person point of view although it doesn’t add significant information or insight. The book reads as a mystery when Zoe joins Alex and his two friends, Lina and Yadi, to form a summertime detective agency. Their mother nixes that plan but Grandpa suggests they try to finish one of the unsolved stories from his reporter days. The article they choose to pursue happens to be about Al Capone and a million-dollar hidden treasure he may have buried around Miami. Grandpa says being a reporter is like being a detective so that’s how they’ll spin it when the mother finds out. They often fall back on the 5 Ws of newspeople (who, what, why, when, where) to guide their investigation.

The plot includes news from the past as the Sherlock Society researches Al Capone’s life and historical events during that time. Capone is best known for living in Chicago but he moved to Miami after being released from Alcatraz prison. Grandpa shares what he knows as a lifelong resident of the area and they visit sites from Capone’s life and interview people who have knowledge about him. As the plot shifts, readers learn additional information regarding nature and science when a new antagonist arises. This new conflict allows the characters to use their detective skills to resolve an important public problem.

What didn’t work as well:

The whole plot is about solving mysteries and readers may want a break at times. There are a couple of subplots concerning Lina and Zoe but it might be nice to develop them more.  

The final verdict:

The book begins as an interesting exploration of Al Capone’s past then transitions to an important investigation about a local, public figure. The characters don’t have super-sleuthing talents but they work well together as a team. Overall, I recommend you give it a shot. 

Confessions of a Junior Spy 1 by Rosaria Munda

What worked:

The Pangean Hotel is a curious setting where spies freely roam the hallways and rooms after their worldwide missions. It’s a sanctuary for them and houses the Pangean League, an ancient international association dedicated to maintaining world peace. Its spies are committed to helping people in trouble and they never use violence except in self-defense. The fraternal twins of the hotel’s Branch Director are snobby brats and they provide an annoyance for Bea, the book’s main character. Staff members provide all of the necessary services for spies ranging from clothing and equipment to medical services. Bea’s teachers range from the Interpreter for lessons in Latin and French, to learning chemistry from the Jeweler, and history and espionage from the Archivist.

While this book doesn’t tell a superhero story, it does include Bea’s new super ability. These talents are called Knacks and Bea eventually learns hers has to do with knives. Her best friend Tommy has a Knack for cleaning while her new friend Chantal has a Knack for communicating with animals. Bea’s Knack manifests itself when she needs to protect a friend and she’s overjoyed when she discovers it. If you ignore the fact that she could have seriously injured a bully. The residents and staff of the Pangean respond with praise and congratulations. Bea feels a comforting connection with the weapons and the Jeweler gifts her with a special knife bearing an inlaid, scrimshaw hilt, and tiny teeth. Bea’s mother, however, would prefer Bea use her new Knack to become a skilled surgeon or a chef, like her father.

The biggest conflict is between Bea and her mother and it concerns Bea attending a normal school. Bea doesn’t have any first-hand experience beyond the walls of the Pangean Hotel but she doesn’t want to spend her days sitting behind a schoolroom desk. Classes that don’t include self-defense or stitching up wounds don’t interest her at all. However, Bea’s mom doesn’t want her daughter to enter the dangerous world of spies like she was forced to do as a child. Her mother isn’t sharing all she knows about the spy business but she’s afraid of the dangers Bea’s new Knack might bring.

What didn’t work as well:

Chantal’s knack doesn’t work as well for a couple of reasons. First, she’s supposed to be a “normal” young girl so it doesn’t seem like she should have a special ability. Second, her knack is more supernatural than other knacks. Bea can’t do anything magical with knives other than throw them with great accuracy. The spies’ talents are based on exceptional skills and interests while Chantal's communication with animals goes beyond human capabilities.

The final verdict:

This book is certainly an appetizer for greater adventures to come. Bea’s struggle to pursue a life of spying is at center stage but the appearance of an assassin brings much excitement and suspense. I recommend you give this book a shot and I’m looking forward to its sequel. 

Never Thirteen (The Evers 2) by Stacy McAnulty

What worked:

This book immediately creates a conflict between Ronan and the Evers. Ronan is psychic, like most of his relatives, and he learns from his aunt that psychics and Evers are enemies. Evers can steal Ronan’s psychic power but he can kill Evers through extended physical contact. Ronan’s aunt says psychics have a responsibility to rid the earth of Evers since Evers intend to spread their “disease” around the world. This revelation causes a huge internal conflict for Ronan since an Ever named Ivy is one of his good friends. Ivy’s Ever friends learn about his ability, meaning they now see him as a threat. This conflict between Evers and Enders becomes a bigger problem as Ivy and her friends begin to look elsewhere for answers. Alternating chapters focus on various main characters so readers can appreciate their different points of view.

This series will make readers ponder the concept of eternal life and the serious consequences it holds. The Evers don’t age and their injuries heal while they rest which sounds wonderful. However, not growing old means they never change physically while everyone around them does. It’s impossible to go unnoticed in a community so the Evers are forced to constantly move. They don’t like to develop serious friendships since they can’t last long and the Evers will experience grief and sadness when mortal friends die. Since Ivy’s only recently been changed, the Evers want to make her mortal again so she can have a normal life. Another Ever wants the same thing but his decision creates a rift between Este, the oldest member of their group, and the others.

The author throws another twist into the plot since Ivy’s new roommate is mortal. Aurora knows nothing about Ivy’s secret so she’s hurt and confused by Ivy’s behavior. Ivy is forced to lie about why she didn’t finish the previous school year and why she often sneaks off to meet with the other Evers. Aurora feels like she’s being avoided and pushed away and she realizes Ivy isn’t being honest. This only adds to Aurora’s stress about her parents’ splitting up so the friction between the roommates grows. Other characters new to the series bring different perspectives about Evers and Enders along with additional questions and a few answers.

What didn’t work as well:

The idea of Enders doesn’t make total sense. If Enders can hurt Evers by touching them but Evers can hurt Enders by doing the same thing, won’t they hurt each other if they make contact? Also, there’s still fuzziness about why some psychics feel it’s their duty to end the Evers. Evers don’t seem to have the same feeling about Enders. If this battle has been going on for centuries, why hasn’t Este ever heard about Enders during her almost three hundred years of life?

The final verdict:

The author introduces several consequences of becoming mortal again that really complicate Ivy’s thoughts about returning to a normal life. There are dramatic twists on an emotional rollercoaster as the battle between Evers and psychics escalates. I recommend you give this book a shot but I also suggest you read Forever Twelve first.

One Wrong Step by Jennifer A. Nielsen

What worked:

Each chapter begins with a few lines sharing facts relevant to the following events. Mountain climbing is a major part of the story and readers will learn much about it. The first chapter shares information about Atlas’s first mountain climb to the summit of Kings Peak in 1936. It’s also the time when his mother loses her battle with a chronic disease. A map to the summit of Mt. Everest precedes the second chapter with information about the sherpas who assist climbers. Other chapter introductions explain terms like acclimation, climbers adjusting to the lack of oxygen, columns of ice called seracs, and various tools used during a climb. These descriptions are helpful to understand the nuances of scaling Earth’s tallest mountain. Additional maps throughout the book identify Atlas’s location on Mt. Everest to give readers context for the dramatic events. They’ll discover it takes months, a lot of money, courage, and a bit of luck to attempt a climb up Mt. Everest.

The story is told in first-person by Atlas, a teenage boy from London. This allows readers to learn about his feelings and unspoken thoughts about mountain climbing and special memories. Dealing with grief is an issue since Atlas hasn’t had a serious talk about his mother’s death in the three years since it happened. He’s frustrated that his father won’t let him climb to Mt. Everest’s summit but that doesn’t stop Atlas from trying to change his mind. An avalanche will find Atlas climbing farther than his father expected. Telling the story first-person also lets readers in on Atlas’s climbing knowledge and strategies as well as his conflicted thoughts about his mother.

The climbing team presents a variety of personalities to enhance the plot and drama. Mr. Blake is financing most of the expedition but his superior air creates conflict and mystery. He loves to hear himself talk, mostly about himself, and he frequently shares disparaging remarks about Atlas’s age and skill. Hushed comments between Blake and another team member create uncertainty about Blake’s character and his motives. Chodak is the main sherpa guide and his kind personality is a stark contrast to Blake. He’s the group’s biggest asset but an accident complicates his role. Maddie is about Atlas’s age and Atlas initially doesn’t like her presence on the mountain. She has very little climbing experience and one of her phobias may make her a liability. What kind of father makes Mt. Everest his daughter’s first mountain-climbing event?

What didn’t work as well:

The Nazi subplot slowly emerges but it’s not a necessary complication to the mountain-climbing adventure. The avalanche and Atlas’s subsequent efforts and setbacks to rescue his father provide plenty of drama for one book. Reader attention is distracted from this gripping problem as the topic of a Nazi spy continues. Mentioning the possibility of Nazis on Mt. Everest adds historical context to the plot but it would be better to leave it at that.

The final verdict:

The author captures the life-threatening perils and the harrowing weather conditions found on Mt. Everest to help readers experience the torturous quest to reach the summit. Atlas struggles to deal with his grief over his mother’s death and this subplot may resonate with readers. Overall, this riveting survival story will appeal to a wide audience and I recommend you give it a shot.

Bringing Back Kay- Kay by Dev Kothari

What worked:

The plot is a missing-person story with Lena trying to find her older brother Kay-Kay. It’s kind of a locked-door mystery as Kay-Kay was on a moving train when he went to bed but there’s no evidence of how he disappeared when passengers unload the next day. Lena doesn’t feel the police are doing enough so she begins investigating on her own. It’s hard to believe she’ll succeed, but she’s more emotionally motivated than anyone else. Some people she interviews are kind and helpful while others think she’s interfering and should let the police do their jobs. Lena is able to uncover secrets about her brother but his life is a bigger mystery than she could ever know.

Grief is a major issue as Kay-Kay’s disappearance is devastating for the family. The mother is hit hardest as she withdraws into her sorrow and can’t function anymore. Lena does her best to support her parents during this trying time but it’s not enough to make her mother feel better. The father struggles to carry on but Lena’s investigation wears on his nerves. Lena creates friction with others and her father is the one who hears their complaints about how his daughter is behaving.

The author weaves poetry and flashbacks into the plot as Lena remembers happy times with her brother. She idolizes him and her memories are of times when he supported her, counseled her, or simply brought joy to her life. The poems shared fit Lena’s thoughts of the situations that arise. One called “Expectations” goes with the chapter where Lena is on a bus to find her brother and “A Love Letter” fits her mood later in the story.

What didn’t work as well:

Uncovering the truth about what’s happened to Kay-Kay moves at a slow pace as Lena hits one dead end after another. This is especially evident once Lena leaves the city since readers are already anticipating significant developments in the case. It feels like Lena is back at square one.

The final verdict:

This emotional tale highlights the loving bond between a girl and her older brother. Parental expectations complicate the family dynamics but the conflicts are resolved in a compassionate manner in the end. This book will appeal to readers interested in India and sibling love and I recommend you give it a shot. 

Cousins in the Time of Magic by Emma Otheguy

What worked:

The book presents three cousins with contrasting personalities. Readers are immediately introduced to Jorge’s risk-taking when he accepts a neighbor’s dare to climb onto his garage roof and do a handstand. Camila is more logical and likes to follow the rules. However, she silently dreams of having a magical adventure and that’s exactly what happens in the story. Siggy is the oldest but he’s more concerned about adding to his podcast followers and advertisers than doing anything to support his cousins. Everyone, including Tia Xia, knows the neighbor boy is an arrogant, self-centered snob but Siggy hopes to enter his inner circle and become a bigger influencer. Siggy and Camila’s personalities undergo the biggest transformations as the plot unfolds.

The kids are transported back to Virginia in 1862 where they’re deposited into the middle of the Civil War. Factual information about this period is shared including Old Ironside trying to shoot them out of the water when they first appear. Slavery during this time is described as the characters encounter a young boy who’s separated from his father. However, the role of Latinos during this time isn’t commonly shared in historical writings and the author makes it a large point of this book. The setting shifts to Mexico where the citizens are waging their own battle against a French invasion. This Mexican conflict isn’t commonly known, probably because the U.S. Civil War overshadows it. The Civil War helped to free slaves but the plot stresses that freedom must be everywhere.

The book shares information about U.S. and Mexican history and the author includes sections in the back to help. First, there’s an “Author’s Note” where she provides information and stories related to the Mexican conflict and Latinos during this time period. Then, there’s a section called “Special Notes” where she describes people and terms that are mentioned in the story. A glossary follows that where the vocabulary used is obviously defined. The author provides additional books for those interested in further reading and a bibliography is provided to identify sources of information used in the story.  

What didn’t work as well:

The transition of characters from 160 years in the future is a bit too smooth. Camila immediately thinks she’s traveled back in time and her cousins aren’t shocked about the realization. Kids from the past are surprised when they meet Jorge and his cousins but they quickly accept time travel and go on like nothing strange is happening.

The final verdict:

The book presents an interesting perspective on Latino influence in North American history. Factual information is blended into an exciting adventure set during a defining moment in the United States.  Overall, I recommend you give this first book in the new series a shot.

The Chronicles of Viktor Valentine by Z Brewer

What worked:

From the book’s synopsis, readers already know Viktor’s parents are vampires but Viktor himself is a mystery. The sight of blood makes him dizzy although it doesn’t affect him while playing his favorite video game. He’s often battling a zombie apocalypse with his best friend Damon and blood and gore splatter everywhere. Damon is Viktor’s only friend until a new girl named Alys moves in across the street. Young readers can identify with his middle-school insecurities, especially with a bullying girl living right next door.

Readers have a good idea of what will happen but the author lets the events slowly unfold. This piques their anticipation as they wonder when Viktor will realize the truth about his parents. Viktor’s mother volunteers at a blood bank while his father designs coffins. The opening chapters reveal that Alys and her parents are vampire hunters and they’ve moved to Nowhere to kill one. Alys is nice to Viktor and becomes his friend but readers will know she’s actually collecting information about his family. However, Alys’s father isn’t happy that she displayed sympathy for their previous target and it’s unclear what she’ll do this time. Readers will root for Viktor as he’s just a nice guy trying to survive the early days of seventh grade. It feels wrong for vampire hunters to take advantage of a kind, innocent boy but that adds intrigue to the story. The plot has a bit of a Romeo and Juliet vibe going on.

A couple of supporting characters add to the story’s uncertainty as readers try to figure out if they’re normal humans or friends of vampires. Viktor’s mother insists he volunteer in the school library and she’s helpful with locating vampire information. A substitute English teacher doesn’t fit the description of a “normal” educator. Her appearance gives off a strong goth vibe and she has a special interest in the supernatural. She scraps the regular teacher’s lesson plans and has the students read the novel Dracula. Viktor is startled by her reaction when he shows her his father’s original copy of the novel. Readers will wonder about the backstories of these characters and others.

What didn’t work as well:

The downside of the synopsis is that readers already know what’s going to happen up until the climax. There aren’t as many opportunities for surprises and twists which may not appeal to some readers. However, many truths are revealed during the climax that will make readers want to read the sequel as soon as it’s published.

The final verdict:

The book touches readers’ emotions as an innocent boy doesn’t realize he’s at the center of a brewing storm. He just wants to have friends and survive middle school and doesn’t know his family is in danger. The book will appeal to lovers of vampires and goth and I recommend you give it a shot.

Beyond Mulberry Glen by Millie Florence

What worked:

Lydia’s “family” is comprised of unrelated characters who share a deep affection for each other. The Z twins are mischievous characters, part elf and part human, who enjoy playing pranks on others and making boisterous entrances when they choose to appear. Their impulsiveness creates a conflict for Lydia that becomes the plot’s focus. Lydia loves her life in Mulberry Glen and she wants nothing to change. However, she’s at an age where she’s expected to apply for a mentorship but no one in Mulberry Glen shares her interest in herbs and plants. The Z twins’ poor judgment forces Lydia to leave home and she discovers the light and darkness beyond Mulberry Glen.

The Darkness is a legendary danger that’s already taken over a section of the forest called Tenebrae. No one who has entered Tenebrae has ever been seen again and Lydia fears its influence may be spreading. The Z twins notice her concerns and decide they’re going to enter the forest and stop the Darkness once and for all. The Darkness has relevance to readers as it represents despair and loss of hope. It slowly seeps into people’s minds until their depression leads to their demise. Lydia doesn’t know what eventually happens to those affected by the Darkness so readers are left to imagine the possibilities.

The author includes a couple of subplots to enhance Lydia’s search for the twins. She’s joined by a girl named Prehna who’s also looking for a mentoring partner. She doesn’t know what she wants to do but she offers to help Lydia while she’s figuring it out. They’re also joined by a boy named Coran who’s lost his parents to the Darkness. He’s unhappy with his current mentorship but Coran’s brother presents a more interesting story. Cole is a Ranger and he’s willing to do almost anything to save their parents from the Darkness. However, readers will be concerned when they learn Cole’s been secretly researching questionable, more mysterious aspects of the Darkness.

What didn’t work as well:

Lydia has Latin lessons every day and some other characters speak it too. The meanings of the words and phrases are easy to follow but it seems strange to use Latin as the language. It’s similar to authors using Spanish or French but Latin isn’t a language commonly spoken anymore. The conclusion to the plot is satisfying but the build-up to the climax might have been developed more.

The final verdict:

This creative story is entertaining with a powerful message of hope and positivity. The author leads readers through dark times and challenges to love and caring at the end. I recommend you give this book a shot.

Puppet by David Almond

What worked:

The book’s tone is reminiscent of old children’s books or fairy tales. An old puppeteer named Silvester donates his old puppets to a museum and thinks back to happy times traveling and performing with his deceased wife Belinda. He makes one last puppet from scrap parts and that’s when the magic slowly begins. The author’s subtle descriptions of the puppet cause Silvester and readers to suspect it might be coming to life. The author uses the story to share thoughts on aging, friendship, and the wonders of imagination.

The puppet, later called Kenneth, provides plenty of fodder for readers to use their imaginations. Kenneth is sometimes unresponsive to Silvester so readers will wonder what’s happening with him. His vocabulary consists of “EO” and “Jam” until he adds two significant words late in the book. Those are the two main sounds Kenneth uses when he chooses to respond to others so readers are left to imagine what he might be trying to say. What does Kenneth think when he's looking at a cat, clouds in the sky, or a car, or when the old man tries to teach him about other music or love? They meet a friendly little girl in the park named Fleur and she quickly befriends Kenneth. Fleur has a revelation midway through the plot that alters the rest of the book.

The most magical aspect of the book is the author’s artful mastery of the English language. The text sounds very simple and basic but the words generate an abundance of deep thinking. Different sentence lengths create suspense, amusement, or thoughtful reflection. A sense of community is felt from the characters' interactions with compassion and caring for one another. Fondness for past memories and experiences gives rise to hope and inspiration for the future.

What didn’t work as well:

Some readers might not like the simplicity of the story or it might make them think too much. I don’t share those concerns and found the whole book very charming.

The final verdict:

This heartwarming tale will touch the full gamut of reader emotions. Silvester finds a new purpose in his life and his positivity is contagious. This book will appeal to lovers of skillful writing and the power of creativity and I highly recommend you give it a shot!

out of my dreams by Sharon M. Draper

What worked:

The story is told in first-person from Melody’s point of view. Cerebral palsy has confined her to a wheelchair and it’s difficult for her to control her muscles. She utilizes a computer-like machine called a Medi-Talker that she’s named Elvira. Elvira allows her to “speak” by converting typed words to sound. Despite her challenges, Melody is a highly intelligent twelve-year-old as she’s in advanced math classes and has a talent for languages. She’s curious about anything she doesn’t know and she’ll quickly jump on the internet to learn more. Melody uses her wits to save an elderly neighbor named Miss Gertie which leads to a trip to England. Melody is a remarkable character and will be an inspiration to young readers.

The author keeps Melody’s disability real as her family and a neighbor chip in to help her. She needs her mother’s help simply getting out of bed in the morning and she gets embarrassed at times about needing assistance to use the restroom. Her food needs special preparation and she can’t manipulate silverware to feed herself. However, her parents and little sister are very supportive and help her without complaint. A neighbor, Mrs. V., has been helping the family since Melody was born and she’s the one who accompanies Melody to London.

Each book has Melody traveling to someplace special where she faces new challenges. The first book saw her competing in a team competition, she goes to camp in the second book, and this time she travels to London for an international conference. Actually, the middle part of the book is almost like a travel documentary of a London vacation. Melody and her friends do a good bit of sightseeing and Miss Gertie’s connections open up unexpected doors. Melody may have saved Miss Gertie in ways she never expected.

What didn’t work as well:

As mentioned, the middle part of the book is spent visiting the sights of London with a lot of factual information shared. These chapters allow her mind to obsess with Imposter Syndrome as she doesn’t understand what her plain self can contribute to an International Symposium for I.D.E.A. Much of the book describes her journey through this time in her life but there’s not a large conflict that needs to be resolved. Speaking at the conference seems to be the problem but it’s not a dramatic one.

The final verdict:

This book is an emotional roller coaster as Melody laughs, cries, and gets excited during her adventure to London. I recommend you give this book a shot but I suggest you read Out of My Mind first to fully appreciate Melody’s life journey. 

The Chronicles of Viktor Valentine 1 by Z Brewer

What worked:

From the book’s synopsis, readers already know Viktor’s parents are vampires but Viktor himself is a mystery. The sight of blood makes him dizzy although it doesn’t affect him while playing his favorite video game. He’s often battling a zombie apocalypse with his best friend Damon and blood and gore splatter everywhere. Damon is Viktor’s only friend until a new girl named Alys moves in across the street. Young readers can identify with his middle-school insecurities, especially with a bullying girl living right next door.

Readers have a good idea of what will happen but the author lets the events slowly unfold. This piques their anticipation as they wonder when Viktor will realize the truth about his parents. Viktor’s mother volunteers at a blood bank while his father designs coffins. The opening chapters reveal that Alys and her parents are vampire hunters and they’ve moved to Nowhere to kill one. Alys is nice to Viktor and becomes his friend but readers will know she’s actually collecting information about his family. However, Alys’s father isn’t happy that she displayed sympathy for their previous target and it’s unclear what she’ll do this time. Readers will root for Viktor as he’s just a nice guy trying to survive the early days of seventh grade. It feels wrong for vampire hunters to take advantage of a kind, innocent boy but that adds intrigue to the story. The plot has a bit of a Romeo and Juliet vibe going on.

A couple supporting characters add to the story's uncertainty as readers try to figure out if they’re normal humans or friends of vampires. Viktor’s mother insists he volunteer in the school library and she’s helpful with locating vampire information. A substitute English teacher doesn’t fit the description of a “normal” educator. Her appearance gives off a strong goth vibe and she has a special interest in the supernatural. She scraps the regular teacher’s lesson plans and has the students read the novel Dracula. Viktor is startled by her reaction when he shows her his father’s original copy of the novel. Readers will wonder about the backstories of these characters and others.

What didn’t work as well:

The downside of the synopsis is that readers already know what’s going to happen up until the climax. There aren’t as many opportunities for surprises and twists which may not appeal to some readers. However, many truths are revealed during the climax that will make readers want to read the sequel as soon as it’s published.

The final verdict:

The book touches readers’ emotions as an innocent boy doesn’t realize he’s at the center of a brewing storm. He just wants to have friends and survive middle school and doesn’t know his family is in danger. The book will appeal to lovers of vampires and goth and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Long Way Around by Anne Nesbet

What worked:

Vivian is uncertain about starting a new school year but her cousin Owen’s emotional conflict is a bigger issue. Owen is involved in a car accident that sends him to the hospital, but his best friend has more serious injuries. Owen is traumatized in the aftermath of the incident and he’s having trouble accepting the fate of his friend. Amy has a vivid imagination that makes readers wonder if she’s seeing things that aren’t there. She reports seeing and talking to a golden bear but Owen says the only bears in the area are black. She’s eventually given the trail name Bear and the other two characters receive nicknames as the story progresses.

The kids encounter problems during their hike that readers might expect in the mountainous areas of California. The state experiences many earthquakes and a large one causes the plot’s main conflict. Smaller tremors ensue to make the setting uncertain. Smoke from a fire is spotted in the distance so readers don’t know if that will become a factor. The weather is unpredictable so readers don’t know if flooding or slippery rocks may complicate the kids’ plans. Amy’s questionable sighting of a bear introduces the possibility that the kids might encounter wild animals. Readers are reminded that the main characters are young children with little experience surviving in the wild.

The relationship between the cousins will make readers feel good. They constantly have positive words for each other to help them deal with their issues. Vivian and Amy display empathy for Owen especially when begins sharing the truth about the car accident. Amy begins to lose hope but Owen and Vivian find different ways to motivate her to keep moving forward. Owen is in charge of their food and he always manages to use meals and snacks to keep up the morale. Amy and Owen understand what’s bothering Vivian and they provide verbal and emotional support to help her battle through them.

What didn’t work as well:

For a survival story, the journey around the lake isn’t as dramatic as it might be. There are many opportunities to add twists or to make things more challenging but they never happen. Experienced readers will expect Mother Nature to present life-threatening obstacles but the kids surprisingly navigate everything they face.

The final verdict:

This book tells a wonderful survival story for those who’d prefer not to deal with intense fear or danger. The real story focuses on the three kids as they provide loving support for each other’s emotional needs. The long hike provides situations where they must face unresolved issues but their fondness for each other carries them through. I recommend you give this book a shot.

The Gods' Revenge by Katherine Marsh

What worked:

The premise of the series is that Greek gods control all of the details in myths to depict men being in charge and heroes of every story. Library books have been censored to share the stories they want known so their lies will continue. Ava is determined to reveal the truth about all of the gods but they will do all they can to stop her. In the previous book, Ava discovered her mother, the gorgon Medusa, is still alive and Perseus never chopped off her head as the myths say. Ava’s school year is complicated when Pereus is named the new headmaster of the school! Her friends know she’s being targeted and they do their best to keep her from being expelled.

Middle-grade readers can identify with Ava’s insecurity about her appearance as she begins a new school year. She’s initially excited about being several inches taller until she sees how her friend Layla has changed. Layla can make herself appear as anyone she likes so she decides to become as beautiful as possible. She still has the same kind, friendly personality but Ava is uncomfortable with everyone staring and wanting to be near Layla. It creates an internal conflict for Ava when she feels guilty for any negative thoughts about her friend’s new look.

Perseus is a cocky character whose main role seems to be antagonizing Ava. He changes instructors, classes, classrooms, and activities to favor male students and it’s not done quietly. There’s no effort to hide his unfair treatment which helps to magnify the conflict between the gods and females. Perseus assesses strikes to students for unacceptable behavior and three strikes result in a student being kicked out of the school. Perseus is assisted by other godly characters and readers may be surprised to see female characters helping to oppress the rights of all women. Ava helps reveal the truth about god-created stories that have misguided some female characters.

What didn’t work as well:

It’s surprising when Perseus uses supernatural powers to control others. He’s a demi-god in myths and doesn’t display any special abilities like that. His character is confusing when compared to the typical myths of Perseus. However, his puzzling powers are explained later in the story and make perfect sense.

The final verdict:

This book highlights the fact that whoever controls the information also controls the power. Ava’s efforts to uncover hidden truths create conflict with the gods that will continue throughout the series. Readers who enjoy mythology and women’s rights will appreciate this book and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Crossbow of Destiny by Brando Hoang

What worked:

The whole story is immersed in Vietnamese culture. The opening pages present a folktale about a magical crossbow. The king makes a deal with a turtle-god to protect his realm but he eventually becomes greedy and won’t fulfill his part of the deal. Obviously, bad things result and the crossbow becomes legendary. The author includes an abundance of information about Vietnam through clothing, food, rituals, landmarks, and language. Readers get help with understanding new vocabulary since Freddie, the main character, has forgotten much of it since moving to America. There’s also a glossary at the end of the book. Freddie’s cousin Lien is very helpful with explaining unknown ideas or language. Freddie’s grandfather is retiring after a long career as an archaeologist and his research into Vietnam’s history and culture is important in the overall plot.

The cousins are each dealing with their own internal conflicts that trouble them throughout the book. Freddie has forgotten much of her Vietnamese past since she moved to America and it frustrates her. There are glimpses of memories but she still feels disconnected from her relatives. She thinks she’s disappointing them and her poor speech is embarrassing. Lien has always been a straight-A student and everyone expects her to be perfect. Her parents don’t want her taking risks and they expect her to obediently follow the rules. Lien feels stifled and irritated and she wants more freedom and respect. The unsettled feelings of Freddie and Lien eventually create friction between the two cousins.

The plot becomes an adventure into the wilds of Vietnam when Freddie, Lien, and a boy named Duy traverse the country to rescue Freddie’s grandfather. They’re forced to find refuge in the jungle where they encounter vicious animals and a harsh environment. Meager rations force them to use their ingenuity to survive while also being on the lookout for dangerous henchmen. The success of their mission is dependent on their ability to decode a folktale and a diary to locate the Crossbow of Destiny. However, how can they expect to uncover the secrets when no one else has for thousands of years.

What didn’t work as well:

In some sections, the Vietnamese facts become informational and may distract from the plot. It’s not a big deal and may not bother all readers.

The final verdict:

This book shares an exciting adventure into Southeast Asia in a country that’s not often highlighted. Vietnam offers a unique culture and setting that should appeal to lovers of folklore and legends. Overall, I recommend you give this book a shot.

Boy 2.0 #1 by Tracey Baptiste

What worked:

The opening hook describes the mysterious circumstances when Coal is forced to change foster homes. He really likes his foster father Tom but one day Tom starts telling him to run while trying to stab people no one else can see. Coal and readers don’t know anything about his real family as he was left on a doorstep as an infant. This backdrop leads to all kinds of possible explanations when Coal discovers he can turn invisible. Readers can use their imaginations to fill in details and modify their ideas as more information arises. There must be more to Tom’s character than we know and the story of Coal’s parents must eventually be revealed.

It's always interesting to watch how characters respond when they suddenly acquire “superpowers”. Coal escapes a traumatic situation when the police can’t see him hiding right in front of them. He freaks out when his skin becomes invisible and is frightened by the unexplained. Doubt then sets in when he can’t make it happen again and he can’t trust anyone to share his secret. He finally confides in his best friend Door and their curiosity is piqued. This range of emotions is more “realistic” than immediately deciding to become a new superhero. Coal never even considers intentionally using his invisibility because he’s more concerned with understanding it.

A couple of social issues are included in the book. Racism is an underlying issue throughout and police brutality in particular is highlighted after the news of a young girl’s death. Coal has a frightening encounter with a white man and police officers after he’s spotted painting a mural of her. This terror leads to his first episode of invisibility. Coal’s new foster parents, Doc and Jackson McKay, try to balance their understanding for his emotions and freedom while trying to keep him safe from dangerous situations. Moral and ethical questions arise when Coal learns more about genetic engineering and the manipulation of DNA. This would allow scientists to speed up human adaptation in response to the rapidly changing global environment. However, just because something might be possible doesn’t mean it's something that should be done.

What didn’t work as well:

The plot could use a faster pace as most of the real action begins when Coal locates a company that is cutting edge in the field of genetic engineering. It also seems overly convenient when Coal moves in with the McKays even though the parents say it was unexpected. The transition is too smooth so readers will know there’s more to the story. The parents and children go out of their way to support Coal so it’s surprising when it takes so long for him to trust them.

The final verdict:

Readers will empathize with Coal as he struggles with his new ability after being shipped to a new foster family. Strong emotions are embedded in the story as he tries to uncover the mystery of his past and the dangers in his future. I recommend this book for lovers of origin stories, science, and social issues. Give it a shot.

Jack and the Beanstink (Stinky Stories 2) by J.J. % Chris Grabenstein

What worked:

The book allows readers to use their imaginations as it presents another version of a familiar fairy tale. Many of these stories take on a whole new meaning if they’re considered from a different point of view. What if the giant is considered a victim? Jack sneaks into his home, steals his stuff, and is injured when Jack cuts down the beanstalk. Is it right to let Jack get away with his crime while the giant is killed in the fall? The characters in this book think not so the story continues by assuming the giant survives.

Stinky is a stuffed toy skunk sitting atop a library shelf. He can talk to children, along with several other stuffed friends, as long as there are no adults around to hear. Apparently, the librarian is aware of Stinky’s ability as she winks at him before leaving the room. Stinky injects himself into the fairy tale to create alternate endings to them. He encourages the children in the library, and those reading this book, to use their creativity as his new version moves along. One child recalls a detail that helps Stinky bring this story to a happy ending for the giant.

What didn’t work as well:

The Amazon listing indicates this book is for ages 6 and up but I’d bump that up a year or two. The story includes wordplay and humor that kindergarten and first graders might not understand. However, they’ll like the numerous illustrations on almost every page.

The final verdict:

This book is perfect for young and emerging readers as it begins with a familiar story. Using humor, pictures, and short chapters helps to make it more accessible for students learning to read. I recommend this book for ages 7-10 or older readers looking for a funny story to read quickly.

Ambush at Sorato (The Royal Ranger 7) by John Flanagan

What worked:

The previous book introduced a magical element to the series but it’s nice to see the author hasn’t included it this time. The “magic” of the series is found in the Rangers’ unbelievable talents, intelligence, and tactical skills. Tales of the Rangers have been exaggerated into folklore over time and they’ve reached mystical status. King Duncan often sends them on diplomatic, as in this book. The opening chapters find Will and Maddie brokering a truce between two countries since their military strengths complement each other. The mission quickly morphs into an alliance to defend against a Temujai invasion. The author alternates chapters to follow the separate, but equally important, quests to prepare a coordinated effort. The second half of the book focuses on Will and Maddie with some chapters switching to the Temujai leader and his plans to crush the citizens of this country.

The author likes to incorporate elements from The Ranger’s Apprentice series into other books like this one. The references aren’t important prior knowledge so readers won’t feel like they’re missing anything. Maddie is the Royal Ranger as she’s also a princess. She’s gained confidence throughout the series under the tutelage of her mentor, Will Treaty. The story refers to Will’s previous encounter with the Temujai in The Ranger’s Apprentice series but this tribe also appears in The Brotherband Chronicles.

Will displays compassion and understanding for others that other characters don’t always show. Mercenaries are needed to battle the Temujai and Will insists servants accompany them for their help. The servants are treated poorly and aren’t given any respect until Will changes that attitude. When handling negotiations, he listens and considers different points of view and he’s willing to concede or modify his position if there’s value. One character in particular doesn’t view others in the same way which will lead to a showdown in the book’s closing chapters. Will continues to share his wisdom and experience with Maddie but he also treats her as a highly-skilled Ranger.

What didn’t work as well:

Since this is the seventh book in the Royal Ranger series, readers may be surprised that Maddie isn’t the main focus. Will is the main character and Maddie acts as his assistant. Perhaps it’s because I’ve read so many books about the Rangers, but their skills don’t seem to be on full display as much as in previous books. The story doesn’t feel fresh.

The final verdict:

The story is still an exciting adventure although it lacks the suspense and drama found in some of the other books. This book can be read independently and I recommend you give it a shot. I also recommend you read the other series too!

The Graveyard Gift by Fern Forgettable

What worked:

The book has a curious structure as the story is written by Fern, a mischievous fairy, but it’s narrated by the author, Piper CJ. Fern is not seen again after the first few chapters. Readers are informed in the opening pages that all humans have magic in them, including readers themselves, although they probably don’t know it. What a way to make young readers feel special! Rosemary is the main character and she has lived with her human mother, in a human world, until she discovers her ability to foresee future death comes from her fae father. She knows nothing about her father so that’s a mystery for readers to consider throughout the story.

There’s an air of mystery when Rosemary first arrives at the school. The school is located between the fairy and human realms to protect wayward fae from both worlds. There’s an underlying conflict where some fae think there shouldn’t be a barrier between fae and humans anymore, magic should be everywhere, while others feel it’s safer to keep fae and humans separate. There’s an unwritten conflict in the school between Seelies and Non-Seelies where the Seelies view themselves as better and more powerful. Rosemary realizes the staff at the school are unhappy about her arrival and something has them spooked. They insist nothing dangerous can reach students in the school even after Rosemary’s best friend Essie disappears.

The author creates an unusual cast of characters as the students have a wide variety of powers. While Rosemary foresees when people die, her roommate Tryst can foresee how they die. Tryst is part banshee and her screaming in the middle of the night killed her previous roommate. She warns Rosemary to wear earplugs when she goes to bed! Another student can use glamour to influence other’s thoughts while Essie is part djinn, or genie. Another student has a connection to the ghost world that may come in handy. Rosemary is determined to find Essie and she’ll need the help of other students’ abilities to do it.

What didn’t work as well:

Readers should expect to read the sequel whenever it’s published. Finding Essie is a conflict for this plot but the overall book feels more like the introduction to a series.

The final verdict:

Rosemary is an intriguing character since she’s not fully aware of her abilities and we don’t know the identity of her father. A little bit of information about her father is shared at the end when Rosemary finds herself in a very unexpected situation. Overall, the book will appeal to lovers of fae and magical abilities and I recommend you give it a shot.

The Twisted Tower of Endless Torment (THe Horrible Bag Series 2) by Rob Renzetti

What worked:

The book gives an ample recap of the previous book to understand the backstory. Zenith’s older sister Apogee was changed into his four-year-old younger sister so they re-enter the skin-covered bag in a return to the land of GrahBhag. Apogee wants to be the older sister again! However, Zenith is public enemy number one so every citizen and creature is on the lookout for him. This adds a large complication to the plot as Zenith can’t move freely around the lands after being separated from Apogee. A huge surprise awaits readers when they reach the plot’s climax!

The story has a humorous tone as GrahBhag is a world of the unexpected and absurd. A gargoyle aids Zenith when he first arrives in return for eating his earwax and munching the peeling skin found on his sunburned back. A blindfolded moose presides over a courtroom where the guilty (the accused) has no chance of proving his innocence. A prison doesn’t need bars or cells because the walls conjure confusing obstacles to keep inmates from escaping. Zenith has amusing interactions and exchanges with other characters especially when they think Apogee and he have magical powers. Their reputation after defeating the Great Wurm in the previous book precedes them.

Most of the chapters are fairly short (five to seven pages) which will appeal to reluctant readers. They’ll feel a sense of accomplishment for finishing chapters while more experienced readers will have ample stopping points to choose from. Readers’ imaginations are challenged especially when they reach Eternity Tower. Confusing descriptions are perplexing when trying to create mental images. Readers will be constantly on the lookout for strange characters and animated plants.

What didn’t work as well:

The humor probably won’t appeal to everyone. In addition, Zenith gets side-tracked for much of the book so the search for Apogee is put on the back burner. It’s unclear at this time why the author includes Zenith’s friend Kevin in the GrahBhag adventure.

The final verdict:

Readers must have a tolerance for weird humor as the settings, characters, and events will have unexpected twists. Zenith is an admirable big brother as his sole concern is keeping Apogee safe. Overall, the book won't appeal to everyone but it’s entertaining. I recommend you give it a shot and see if it’s a good fit for you.

The Dream Stealers by Stuart Beard

What worked:

Josh’s story is the most entertaining when he awakens in the middle of a forest with no idea how he gets there. He’s transported into a fantasy world where he immediately meets an unusual pirate driving a huge vehicle called The Marvellous Contraption. Zephaniah is a collector of oddities and he’s used his ship to explore different dimensions. They’re joined by a lizardman named Crumplehorn who agrees to help Josh return home. Crumplehorn is an amazing inventor and Zephaniah has unbridled enthusiasm and imagination so there’s no way they can be stopped.

Other sections of the book describe a malevolent character posing danger to young children everywhere. The Raggedy Man uses a bone-carved flute to mesmerize his targets and control his army of giant stag beetles, spiders, and other terrifying creatures. The author includes song lyrics the Raggedy Man sings to his victims as well as lyrics sung about him. These lines of poetry provide a different writing style to the story and a level of creepiness. An evil demon is scary enough but it’s even worse when he starts spouting rhyming verses. It makes it feel like he’s playing with the helpless characters so their demise is inevitable.

Young readers will enjoy the author’s sense of humor. Zephaniah’s positivity seems out of place in dire predicaments but it creates light-heartedness. His responses to threats are rarely what readers will expect. The Marvellous Contraption is an impressive vehicle but readers won’t know what strange things characters might find stored in boxes and compartments. Crumplehorn’s assistant is a robotic hedgehog named Norman who speaks like an English butler. Readers will be surprised when bananas prove to be effective weapons and who would expect to find a princess living in the middle of a swamp, or is it a marsh?

What didn’t work as well:

The plot covers multiple settings and they’re not clearly connected in the beginning. This is a problem as readers are trying to make sense of the events to understand what’s happening in the plot. The opening scenes describe a young girl being attacked by the Dream Stealer but it’s not necessary. The other scenarios, especially Josh’s story, clearly establish the threat and conflict.

The final verdict:

The author creates a fun-filled adventure that will appeal to many middle-grade readers. Zephaniah is the book’s highlight since his comments and actions are often out of the ordinary. While the plot’s conflict is resolved, readers should anticipate a sequel sometime in the future. I recommend you give this book a shot.  

How to Stop Freaking Out: The Ultimate Guide to Keeping Cool When Life Feels Chaotic by Carla Naumburg

What worked:

It’s remarkable how well the author shares psychological suggestions by making them relatable to young readers. Everyone deals with anxiety and stress and the book reassures readers that freaking out is normal. Everyone freaks out at some time. Information is accompanied by colorful cartoons which adds a little levity to mature concepts. The author constantly provides examples and “what ifs” to give kids specific situations that may resonate with them. Approaching freakouts is compared to getting on a roller coaster as it’s harder to get off as the moment nears. Readers learn about their buttons and how to avoid getting them pushed. Short quizzes are included throughout the book to help readers recall and internalize the information covered.

Almost every page includes humor and amusing ideas to explain the coping techniques. The narrative is written in a conversational tone to make readers comfortable. The author makes jokes when appropriate and paints some amusing mental images. The introduction tells readers that two important strategies to use when freaking out are F.A.R.T.s and BuRPing. Not those kinds of farts and burps! The terms refer to acronym reminders to identify potential freaks outs and ways to de-escalate when they’re happening. “Quack like a duck” is listed as one of the BuRPs! A person’s limbic is always looking for ways to keep them safe and the author compares this part of the brain to a Safety Squirrel.

The author is a clinical social worker and has previously written four parenting books, one of which is about not freaking out. She begins by defining the term freaking out and identifies situations that are examples and non-examples. Young readers learn how their bodies handle stress and anxiety which enables them to better avoid going bonkers (one of her terms). Kids are reminded throughout the book that there’s nothing wrong with them and there’s nothing wrong with their feelings. Again, the author’s writing style will make middle-grade readers comfortable with the material while arming them with useful tools for maintaining their mental health.

What didn’t work as well:

This book is more like a manual or guide (the title says it’s a guide) in that it will be nice to have handy for reference purposes rather than memorizing everything in it. The author shares twenty-six ways to BuRP but readers are encouraged to choose the ones that work for them.

The final verdict:

It’s easy to forget the author is sharing useful techniques for handling stressful situations as she makes the narrative amusing and easy to read. She takes the process step by step so young readers fully understand what’s going on with their minds and bodies. I recommend you give this book a shot!

The Door by Jan Fields

What worked:

A mysterious door appears in a school hallway and it’s become legendary to the students and alumni. Stories are told about kids who enter the door never being seen again but no one really believes it. Lata and Tom don’t know each other but they pass through the door and enter a world identical to the one they left. The first big sign that things are different is when Lata finds her sister alive! However, this Zoya has no memory of Lata and her parents don’t know her either. Tom assumes his parents must never have moved here from Boston so both kids are stranded in a world where no one knows they exist.

Lata is emotionally distraught due to her older sister’s death three months before. She loved and looked up to Zoya but regrets not sharing these feelings with her. Her parents haven’t adjusted to the loss very well and Lata is constantly upset about their fighting. She’s given up and just wants the pain to go away. Tom is angry that his father made the family move to North Carolina forcing him to leave his friends and comfortable life behind. Other students make fun of his Boston accent and he’s not connecting with any potential new friends. Lata and Tom must each deal with their emotional baggage although Lata’s problems dominate the plot.

What didn’t work as well:

The book needs to be longer. Legend says no one’s been seen again after entering the door and no one knows how it happens. It’s hard to believe everything gets figured out over the course of one weekend. In addition, both kids have personal issues that deserve more development and readers may be left wanting more.

The final verdict:

Being forgotten is a horrible emotional trauma that will touch the feelings of young readers and the plot will connect with those who have dealt with loss. The book is a surprisingly fast read and offers a unique conflict. The listing says the book is for ages seven and up but the main characters are in the eighth grade. Over all, this book shares a heartfelt story of grief and I recommend you give it a shot.

Lights, Camera, Brains? by Michelle L. Brown

What worked:

Young readers will immediately connect with Marty’s loveable, hapless, anxiety-filled character. He has dreams of becoming an astronaut but it’s hard to see that happening when his queasy stomach might explode at any moment. He’s already terrorized when he tries to last the full time on carnival rides! He dreads his parents’ news that they may lose their home, which adds to the stress he already has. He’s already traumatized from trying to last the full time on the carnival rides! He can’t bear to lose his best friend Beau if his family is forced to move from California to Michigan.

The author includes gross descriptions that can amuse and disgust young readers. Marty loses his lunch in the opening scene so readers know any future incidents of nausea could result in further vomiting. It’s not enough to say certain foods are revolting so the author creates mental images. Readers can experience the same sickening feelings as Marty. Even Marty’s own zombie make-up gets his mind roiling as the author details his eyeless socket and slimy brain skullcap. Some accounts of repulsive details may seem over-the-top but they go with Marty’s character and a young sense of humor.

Marty has other emotional issues besides stomach distress. He’s overwhelmed by the thought of working with famous child actors on a new television show although for different reasons. The young actress, adored by Beau, has beautiful, blue eyes and professional talent. Marty knows his abilities aren’t as polished as hers and he can’t understand why she hits him in their first scene together. Another child actor wants Marty’s lead role in the show so he does all he can to make Marty miserable. Young readers will empathize with Marty’s bullying problem as he searches for ways to survive. Add to these issues the fact that Marty can’t dance and it’s clear he has good reason to feel overwhelmed.

What didn’t work as well:

The gross descriptions probably won’t appeal to everyone as Marty’s nausea lasts until the last chapter. The book resolves all of the issues but the ending feels rushed. Marty’s relationship with Beau is strained, the bank is taking possession of his home, his father is still unemployed, and there are other concerns about the show. They’re tied together in one resolution with readers inferring the details.

The final verdict:

Marty’s anxiety is relatable to young readers although auditioning for a new television show is not. The experience touches on different aspects of creating a production that theater lovers will appreciate. The book is an entertaining, quick read for emerging and reluctant young readers and I recommend you give it a shot.

Tessa Miyata is so Unlucky by Julie Abe

What worked:

The book is immersed in Japanese culture and the author includes several sections of information before the story even starts. They include a map, a description of the “magical side of Japan”, vocabulary for the magical and real worlds, and a brief recap of events from the previous book. The recap is told by a character since he’s heard “mortal minds are forgetful” and we might not remember earlier events. The author takes the time to make readers comfortable with the plot even if they haven’t read the previous book. The story moves back and forth between the godly and human worlds  as the characters compete in an immortal competition.

The cast of characters is a unique blend of mortals and immortals competing as “equals”. Tessa and her best friend Jin are the only mortals competing in the first Cycle in four hundred years. They are teamed with a minor god named Mimi and a minor spirit named Hachi. Mimi has a refreshing view of winning that contrasts with Hachi’s need to please his father. Tessa and Jin are God-blessed and they’ve entered the competition to save the Unlucky God named Kit. These three characters teamed up in the previous book but Kit will be demoted and transformed to ether if his team loses. The other seven teams of immortals have no respect for mortals and they combine their efforts to make sure Kit’s team is eliminated. This sets the stage for an exciting underdog story.

An underlying plot revolves around a secret group of rebels called the God Hunters. They want a separation between gods and the mortal world. Most of the immortals don’t believe the God Hunters exist but readers will suspect strange happenings during the Cycle must be connected to them. The immortals can’t explain why some competitors disappear for short times or temporarily lose their abilities during the competition. More information about the rebels is shared later in the book and the author presents a huge twist with one of the characters that will surely affect the next book in the series.

What didn’t work as well:

The author includes Japanese terms in the story but their meanings aren’t always clear from the context. Readers can utilize the glossaries found at the beginning of the book but the confusing vocabulary words might not be there.

The final verdict:

Tessa’s group epitomizes teamwork and support for each other as they struggle to save Kit. It’s admirable that Tessa is the team leader even though two of her team members have immortal powers. The book will appeal to lovers of folklore and Japan and I recommend you give it a shot!