Ali Cross: The Secret Detective (Ali Cross #3) by James Patterson

What worked:

The main topic of the book is a current event that’s also an important social issue. The role of the police in society is debated, both figuratively and literally. The catalyst this time involves the shooting of a gang member by a policeman trying to stop a shootout between opposing gangs. The boy isn’t seriously hurt but it ignites deep feelings by people with conflicting thoughts. One side thinks the police are murderers and that their excessive use of force is a threat to citizens. The other view thinks the police are honest and caring and they’re trying to do their best in difficult situations. The author effectively shares ideas from both sides in an intriguing tale about a real-life problem.

As the son of a police detective, Ali finds himself thrown into the middle of the conflict at school and in public. Many classmates taunt him with jeers and bumps and a fake Instagram account with his name in the handle doesn’t help matters. Many people think Ali will always side with the police but he actually has a mind of his own. All the policemen he knows are good men and women but he understands how it looks when officers are forced to fire their weapons. Some people become obsessed with isolated instances and they ignore dangerous situations where officers step up to protect citizens. Even with the support of his closest friends, Ali feels alone when nasty comments and threats are targeted at him.

Nana Mama, Ali’s great-grandmother, is an admirable character living with Ali, his sister, his dad, and his stepmother. She steps up to calm a crowd of people who’ve collected outside the house to protest the police. She projects her voice with authority and manages to allay some of the tension. Ali has a habit of sneaking out of the house in the middle of the night and he feels like Nana Mama always knows what he’s doing. She never scolds him but offers thoughts to consider. She understands Ali’s behavior and worries and she does her best to lend support. She even lets him start dinner one evening even though it’s clear it will be a disaster.

What didn’t work as well:

This book differs from the previous two books and the title seems misleading. Ali isn’t actually solving any crimes as he’s caught up in tensions between the police and the public. The story itself is thought-provoking but it’s not what readers might expect when they start the book.

The Final Verdict:

The book doesn’t go into great detail regarding the issues surrounding the behavior of police but it presents the problem in terms young readers can understand and accept. This topic is the focus of the whole plot without any major twists or diversions. Overall, I recommend you give the book a shot.

What We Saw by Mary Downing Hahn

What worked:

Abbi and Skylar are best friends, the Dynamic Duo, but most young readers will connect with their boredom of summer’s end. Kids can only hangout or go to the mall or pool so many times before they fall into a rut. They’re looking for something different and exciting to do. Abbi and Skylar decide to bike to a more dangerous part of town, but that’s when their summer vacation takes a turn.

The girls stake claim to an abandoned tree house where they can oversee the surrounding fields and forest. They notice some delinquent boys from their middle school and know they’re up to no good. A man and woman meet under the tree every Thursday, and Skylar is especially certain they’re either Russian spies or having an affair. The girls find a no trespassing sign, bullet holes, a dead deer, and they encounter a couple of unsavory men. All of these experiences present questions as a mystery develops. It turns out the woman is Abbi’s favorite teacher, and Abbi doesn’t know what to do when she turns up missing.

The book becomes more than a mystery story, as the characters are forced to deal with other emotional issues. Divorce is a huge topic, as Abbi and Skylar are living in homes without fathers. Skylar is very bitter toward her father after he has an affair and leaves their family. She transfers this anger to any person she suspects might be having an affair even when she jumps to conclusions. Abbi tries to be the voice of reason, but it’s hard to change Skylar’s mind once it’s set on something. Abbi doesn’t remember much of her own father, and she’s lucky that her mom has found a kind boyfriend. Abbi doesn’t carry the divorce baggage like a lead anchor, but she’d still like to have a father again.

What didn’t work as well:

This is probably my own issue, but I’m used to the author’s spooky, eerie ghost stories, so this book is an unexpected contrast. The mystery early in the plot creates unease, but nothing supernatural is waiting to happen. That doesn’t make the book bad, but it’s just not what I was anticipating.

The Final Verdict:                 

Curiosity can be dangerous. The author crafts an intriguing mystery that could happen in almost any city, in any state. The suspects are many, and readers will follow the emerging clues as the author reveals them. The climax isn’t a huge surprise, but the girls’ overall adventure is entertaining. I recommend you give the book a shot.

 

National Geographic Kids Almanac 2023 by National Geographic

What worked:

As you should expect from an almanac, this book is crammed full of interesting facts and information about a wide range of topics. The contents seem random when flipping through the pages but similar things are grouped together by chapters. Some groupings have unique themes such as “Kids vs. Plastics” (including how it affects sea turtles), “Fun and Games” (with a Critter Chat and Mad-lib-like story), and “20 Things to Make You Happy” (such as meditation and pets). More common themes share stories about science, history, culture, and space that target the interests of young readers. The colorful photographs and illustrations are sure to catch the eye of everyone. In addition to being informative, some pictures are highly amusing and surprising.

A table of contents and a comprehensive index help make the information more accessible but readers can still find unexpected topics throughout the pages. A section on animals includes comparing giraffes to ninjas and it shows a variety of frogs with very unique characteristics. Who would expect to find the history of chocolate within pages dedicated to cultures? The section on science and technology shows pages about “The Science of Spooky” and future homes and food. A large section on geography near the end of the book covers the seven continents and includes flags, uncommon facts, maps, and a page about how maps are made by cartographers. I enjoy the “Quiz Whiz” presented in each chapter covering information shared within those pages. These multiple-choice questions can be treated as little puzzles to be solved with their answers found at the bottom of the pages.

What didn’t work as well:

The amount of information can be overwhelming for young readers and it’s not as easy to find as in adult almanacs. On the bright side, the visual appeal and variety of information can be very entertaining for people wanting a book for casual non-fiction reading.

The Final Verdict:

An engaging resource for young readers. Interesting information is shared in short narratives accompanied by eye-catching graphics and is highly informative and easily read. Common facts are blended with entertaining anecdotes and will delight middle-graders. I recommend you give this book a shot. 

Critter Chat by Rosemary Mosco

What worked:

While the content of the book is non-fiction, the format of using the internet and social media is fictional and will appeal to young readers. The chat rooms are most entertaining as unlikely “friends” amusingly talk about their lives in different habitats. A shark, whale, sea tortoise, and seal chat about life in and around the ocean while a different chat room finds creatures discussing where they find water for survival. Dolphinstagrams show a Honduran White Bat talking about its love for camping and an Orchid Mantis sharing how it uses its disguise to catch food. There are Yelp-like posts, Yip-advisor reviews of habitats, Bee-harmony posts looking for companionship, a one-star Llamazon rating for a narwhale’s toothbrush, and a bat’s five-star Yowl review for the Algerian Desert.

Information is presented through the animals’ voices which creates some amusing points of view. A lion ROARS about being the king of its one territory while a cheetah and giraffe counter with the advantages of moving to new areas. A Greater Bilby can’t share much in its chat room since it’s falling asleep during the daytime. A mockingbird gets annoying when it keeps repeating what other animals say. In another chat, a spotted salamander, an earth snake, and a mole talk about what they like to eat (worms), an earthworm is offended and says “I’m right here!”, so the salamander asks for a text of its location.

What didn’t work as well:

The book opens with a page telling readers to watch for an arctic tern in the pictures as it migrates across the planet. I was hoping this would tie the pages together, but the tern’s appearances aren’t highly noticeable. Consequently, information about animals from around the world seems to appear randomly. However, this isn’t a terrible problem as the information is presented in an amusing and entertaining style.

The Final Verdict:

 I’m sure young readers will love this book and learn a lot about the diverse lives of animals. This information is kept simple in a humorous way, is accompanied by colorful photographs on every page, and is presented in a variety of styles. I highly recommend you give this book a shot!

Search for Treasure (The Islanders) by Mary Alice Monroe

What worked:

The book addresses various emotional issues. Jake’s father lost a leg in the war and he’s struggling to accept his life as an amputee. He’s very self-conscious and sensitive about it and he will shut down emotionally when he’s reminded. The characters discover another veteran on the island with experiences from Vietnam and Jake, Lovie, and Macon learn a lesson about not judging others based on their appearances. Jake and Lovie’s friendship may become something more although it’s challenged by the appearance of two “Invaders”. The three main characters are best friends but each of them is forced to adapt to changing situations. Jake is especially frustrated by his father’s behavior as he battles with new challenges created by his prosthetic.

The overall book has a wholesome tone, which is not typical for today’s middle-grade novels. The main characters are respectful to their parents and don’t make irresponsible decisions. Dewees Island is a nature sanctuary so it doesn’t have any stores, restaurants, or other businesses. Cars aren’t allowed so residents travel the island on golf carts or by walking. Jack is shocked to learn his grandmother Honey now has internet service but she won’t let it interfere with his ability to commune with nature, friends, and family. She runs a nature center and has a strong personality. She’s determined to protect the plants and animals on the island and she’s aware that sometimes visitors need to be protected from the alligators.

Readers can learn a bit about U.S. history and about the wildlife found off the coast of South Carolina. The main characters are determined to find treasure and their initial research is on the history of Black Beard and shipwrecks in the area. Sea turtles lay eggs on the island and a team of residents is dedicated to protecting their nests and the hatchlings. Alligators roam in the wild and information about their habits is included in the plot with sea otters, dolphins, and other creatures making appearances. A tropical depression (not a hurricane) engulfs the island early in the story and readers will learn how these storms can affect the habitat.

What didn’t work as well:

The plot doesn’t create high drama or suspense which may not attract middle-grade readers. However, the story depicts young kids adventuring together in a very realistic way. They want to find a treasure but are willing to adjust their plans to more reasonable expectations. They confide in adults when they need help instead of making reckless choices that will only get them in further trouble. It’s refreshing to read realistic fiction that truly feels realistic.

The Final Verdict:

Good friends support each other, no matter what. The plot is easy to follow without any unnecessary, gimmicky twists. The author still forces the characters to adapt to changes and the story reinforces what true friendship might look like. I recommend young readers give this book a shot. 

The Prince of Steel Pier by Stacy Nockowitz

What worked:

The Jewish faith is an important part of the story, as Joey questions his place in the community. He wonders how God can allow bad things to happen and questions how well he understands his religion. However, he’s very loyal to his close-knit family, as his parents, brothers, grandparents, and uncle operate a hotel right on the beach. They practice their culture by eating kosher foods, visiting the synagogue regularly, celebrating Jewish traditions, and periodically speaking Yiddish. Joey’s anger kicks in when he witnesses and experiences prejudice against Jews in the form of disparaging slurs and unintentionally offensive comments.

The inclusion of mobsters in a book for young readers is uncommon, as the story takes place during a time when casinos are forcing people out of their New Jersey neighborhoods by buying up their properties. Joey admires Artie, the mob boss in the area, and he’s pleased when the man takes a special interest in him. Artie’s thugs are clearly dangerous men, and Joey’s frightened by phone conversations he overhears and threats he witnesses. Joey’s relationship with the mobsters contributes danger and mystery to the plot, and the situation is further complicated when Joey becomes the “baby-sitter” for Artie’s visiting daughter.

Honesty is an important topic in the book, as Joey struggles with the lies he’s telling his brothers, parents, and relatives. They begin simply with misleading statements or half-truths but quickly evolve into flat-out deceit. Readers will notice how his deceptions get out of control until Joey finds himself in an unexpectedly dangerous situation. He wants to confess to his brother or grandfather, but the notion that things will get better at the end of the week is naive. Problems won’t go away by themselves, and the only thing he can count on is family.

What didn’t work as well:

As with many books for young readers, the main character gets himself into trouble beyond his control and tries to keep it secret from those who might help. Being truthful in the beginning will prevent future problems. However, in this case, being honest would undermine the conflict and plot, and the author wouldn’t have a captivating, emotional story.

The Final Verdict:

Readers will immediately connect with Joey’s character due to his kindness and good heart. They’ll feel empathy for him as his problems mount and root for him when things look worst. Overall, I enjoyed this book very much, and I recommend you give it a shot.

Ghostlight by Kenneth Oppel

What worked:

I always appreciate a great hook, and chapter one of this book describes the “murder” of a lighthouse keeper and his daughter in the early 1800’s. The plot jumps almost two centuries ahead as a mystery-adventure evolves with ghosts taking on major roles. Gabe is able to see and speak with Rebecca, the ghost of a character dying in the first chapter, and he’s determined to help free her father from the ruthless ghost named Viker that devoured him. The key to stopping this spirit is a ghostlight that went missing so Gabe and his friends must collect clues to locate the amber lens before Viker becomes too powerful to stop. He’s consuming other ghosts to build strength, and the living characters are unaware of his ultimate plans.

Strong emotions are shared to create subplots. Gabe’s father left the family in the prior year but was then hit by a car and killed. Gabe is left with unresolved feelings of love and anger toward him that continue to pop up. Seeing his father’s ghost doesn’t make things better. Rebecca obviously has strong emotions due to her own death and her father’s fate after being ingested by Viker. Gabe’s best friend Yuri’s family recently moved from Russia, but not all members of his family have adjusted well to the changes. Unrest with Yuri’s family creates additional angst for his character. Another friend named Callie is the most stable character, but even she experiences concerns due to family expectations. Becoming a journalist does not offer the money she can make if she pursues a career in dentistry like her parents and other family members.

The most entertaining aspect of the book is the main plot itself. Trying to locate the lost ghostlight to stop an evil spirit is straightforward, but the author effectively adds twists and turns to complicate matters. You can imagine the difficulty of finding a lens lost in the sand two hundred years ago, but Gabe learns the identity of various characters that create a trail of clues to follow. These characters are now ghosts, so readers aren’t sure what to expect when he meets them. Dangers await at every turn as Viker seems to pop up every time Gabe and his friends make progress. My greatest anticipation is with Rebecca’s character. Gabe is able to see and hear her when she clasps his hand, but that act transfers some of his energy to her. Will this become a problem in the long run? Gabe starts to view Rebecca as a girlfriend, but he’s shocked at times when she reveals a wave of anger from within. Is she a sincere ghost trying to stop Viker, or is there a malevolent spirit inside her waiting to erupt? Several times, the plot appears to build to a climax only to take unexpected turns. Rest assured, the story finally reaches an exciting, suspenseful conclusion that leaves the door open for a possible sequel.

What didn’t work as well:

The trail of clues is unrealistic at times. The ghostlight is originally lost on a beach, and its ownership passes to random people over the course of decades. Somehow, the teens are able to research in their spare time to find names, articles, and locations to follow the history of the lens’s past. Finding clues seems unusually easy when you consider what the characters are actually doing. However, ignore any concerns and simply enjoy the exciting adventure created by the author.

The Final Verdict:

Using the ghostlight to bring peace to lost souls. Obviously, this book tells a ghost story, but it’s more about the perilous exploits of the characters than creating a spooky, eerie atmosphere. Overall, it’s a highly entertaining adventure, and I highly recommend you give it a shot.

Ghostcloud by Michael Mann

What worked:

The premise is very creative, as it takes a look at ghosts from a different viewpoint. Some ghosts linger with the living by connecting to objects or places. Ghostcloud refers to ghostly characters in the book who are connected to the air. Alma meets Luke, the main character, and soon realizes he’s also a ghostcloud, and a half-ghost, since his heart stopped beating for a minute at childbirth. Half-ghosts are extremely rare and this opens up many possibilities for this character. His soul is able to travel anywhere air flows so he’s able to explore places outside of his body. He discovers a possible way to escape, but that creates new questions. The author presents ingenious concepts regarding ghosts, their origins, and their abilities.

The setting for this dystopian novel is London sometime in the future. Luke and his friends are slaves and spend most of their time digging coal for a cruel, ruthless woman named Tabatha, but a new girl named Jess has special knowledge of plumbing. She discovers there’s something different about the pipes and the incinerator inside Battersea which creates a mystery as to what’s really going on. Luke has a love and talent for solving mysteries, so figuring out what’s going on and finding a way to escape are within his wheelhouse. The author slowly provides clues allowing readers to discover Tabatha’s evil plans and this problem becomes the focus of the plot. It’s an innovative problem that’s ruthless and malevolent.

Jess is the most interesting character in the book. She always has a positive attitude and doesn’t allow her circumstances to bring her down. It becomes a bit of a joke later in the story. Jess constantly notices inconsistencies inside Battersea that cause the characters to consider new ideas. She trusts Luke completely and is willing to take risks to support him. Physically, she seems very fragile and Luke is worried about her survival as a digger. However, her courage and loyalty to Luke make her an indispensable friend.

What didn’t work as well:

The title doesn’t indicate this book is the start of a series but the resolution leaves unanswered questions that seem to indicate a sequel will be coming. The book is still highly entertaining but the ending may leave readers wanting more.

The Final Verdict:

Bridging the gap between the living and the dead. It’s refreshing and unexpected to come across a book with such original literary thoughts. Luke is an appealing main character with a pure and endearing personality. The story will appeal to lovers of ghosts and underdogs and I highly recommend you give it a shot.

Frightmares by Eva V. Gibson

Most of my posts are for middle-grade fiction, but this book is for young adults.

What worked:

The death of an actress at a horror show is the basis for a murder mystery. Dave discovers Bethany’s body during his performance but the corpse is gone when he returns with a co-worker. He doesn’t report anything to the police with no evidence of a crime so he initially questions his own sanity. Nuggets of corroborating clues help Dave understand he’s not crazy and he’s assisted by an eager, new friend named Maya. She gives him the motivation to continue investigating but Dave is the one with all the knowledge of the events and characters.

Setting the story at a business dedicated to presenting bloody, ghastly scenes is perfect for this book. Dave’s performance is to dismember Bethany’s body while other rooms in the building display equally disturbing scenarios. The dismal atmosphere is further embellished by the poor condition of the property. Faulty lights, broken machines, and props held together with duct tape help to create the atmosphere of the deteriorating building. Much of the action takes place at night or within its dark walls which adds to the eeriness. Dave is living alone for a couple of weeks which contributes to his feelings of isolation and vulnerability. The climax occurs on a dark and stormy night.

After Dave discovers Bethany’s dead body, he starts to hear multiple voices in his mind. Bethany’s voice questions and motivates him but he must also deal with his own thoughts while he deals with stress. He compares them to little versions of himself sitting on each shoulder offering conflicting advice. One version is called Chill Dave while the other is Anxiety Dave. The internal dialogue sheds light on Dave’s thoughts and occasionally adds humor to the story. Despite his persona as a guy with his act together, inside he’s filled with dread and self-doubt. Dave’s had a crush on Maya for years but it only adds to his angst when she gets involved.

What didn’t work as well:

The story moves slowly for a murder mystery as Dave doesn’t uncover any significant information during the first half of the book. This time is balanced by his budding relationship with Maya who is all in with tracking down a murderer. Many of their decisions are questionable when compared with sane logic but their choices only help to build suspense and drama awaiting at the end.

The Final Verdict:

The plot doesn’t have as much violence as one might expect but that’s not to say it doesn’t have any; the climax has plenty. I would prefer the case to move a little faster and provide more viable suspects. The potential killers are limited to the approximately ten characters working at Frightmares. Overall, the book should be appealing to teens but it’s not the kind of story I enjoy.

 

Miraculous by Caroline Starr Rose

What worked:

The mystery of Dr. Kingsbury and a tonic that cures everything drives the plot. How can one medicine cure skin ailments, hearing loss, and disease? How well does Jack actually know the doctor and his past? The elixir’s ingredients are never revealed but the symptoms of some characters improve or disappear. The explanation might be a coincidence but it doesn’t explain how a man’s hearing comes back or another man is finally able to walk without crutches. The unknown aura surrounding Dr. Kingsbury will keep readers captivated as they try to discover the truth about this character and his tonic.

Dr. Kingsbury is an intriguing and perplexing character as he displays the light and dark sides of his personality. He’s charming and empathetic with the townspeople as he inquires about their problems and ailments. However, Dr. Kingsbury strikes another employee for challenging him and this character leaves and never returns. However, he’s not forgotten as Jack continues to think about his friend and tries to learn what’s happened. Dr. Kingsbury treats Jack well enough but his mood can swing drastically when he’s displeased. While the health of his customers seems to be a high priority, making money by selling more tonic is his main motivation. Who is this man?

One subplot involves a character named Simon. When he was younger, Simon once traveled to Oakdale looking for a job to help his family. He worked as a farmhand for a man named McCall despite being treated poorly by other boys working for the farmer. Now, he’s returned to buy McCall’s deteriorating farm and observes events around town from afar. Ms. Moore owns a hat store and struggles to remember where she previously saw the doctor and has trouble feeling welcome in Oakdale even after living there for years. Then, there’s an oak tree in the center of town that represents the citizens’ deep roots and their close-knit community. A picket fence encloses the tree for protection, although it may have symbolic meaning too. Finally, the lone school teacher begins to suffer from a disease and fears he may be fired from his position.

What didn’t work as well:

I often dislike plots told from various points of view and the early part of this narrative shifts between multiple characters and time. This creates some confusion as the story develops since it’s more challenging to make connections with unfamiliar characters and events. Rest assured everything comes together and the author saves a few surprises as the plot nears its climax.

The Final Verdict:

Some things are too good to be true. The book features several compelling stories concerning interactions between members of a closed community and several recently-arrived characters. The overall story teaches a lesson about acceptance and morals. The plot isn’t overly dramatic but I recommend you give it a shot.

Amari and the Great Game (Supernatural Investigations #2) by B.B. Alston

What worked:

You should definitely read the first book before reading this one, to understand Amari’s complicated life as a powerful magician. She’s a born magician which is a very rare and feared position to be in. Magicians were at the center of a war centuries ago, and they’ve been considered UnWanteds ever since, despite Amari’s efforts to save the world in the previous book. She’s forced into a personal battle between fair and foul magick, as she learns evilness is constantly looking to take control. Amari is one of the most powerful magicians ever, but she still needs to learn how to use her abilities. Her former partner Dylan succumbed to the power in the previous book, and he’s the main suspect behind all of the current problems in this book.

Outright war between magicians and other supernaturals is on the brink of exploding, as the Magician’s Guild comes to the forefront. The previous book implied they might provide support for Amari, but that’s not the way things turn out. The intriguing thing about this series is how the author is able to create different levels of mystery and suspicion in characters and situations. The Guild has its own agenda, and Amari sets events in motion when she refuses to lead them by accepting the Crown. The end result is the Great Game is activated to decide the future of all magiciankind. Amari’s convinced a magician did not cause the time freeze, but who else has a reason and the power to do it? Dylan is the obvious answer, but is that too obvious for readers to accept?

As in the previous book, Amari gives herself a quest amid outrage from the supernatural community. It was finding her brother last time, and this time she’s determined to discover who’s responsible for stopping time across most of Georgia and the supernatural’s Congress Room. Elsie, Amari’s best friend and weredragon, is once again by Amari’s side, though this story doesn’t include as many of her creative inventions. The big surprise is Amari’s new partner is Lara, the girl who bullied and tormented her in the first book. Amari grapples to trust her, and Lara promises she won’t turn on Amari. However, the doubt in their relationship is planted and complicates their interactions for most of the book.

What didn’t work as well:

The resolution isn’t happily ever after, but it sets the stage for a dramatic and eventful third book. I didn’t have any problems with the book overall.

The Final Verdict:

It’s hard work to stay good. The book boils down to a battle between good and evil, although it’s not always easy to tell one from the other. The secret motives of various characters will keep readers engaged and thinking. I highly recommend you give this book, and the series, a shot!

Ravenfall by Kalyn Josephson

What worked:

The author presents a magical setting with creative ideas driving the plot. The Ravenfall Inn in Wick, Oregon, is run by a family of psychics, and humans visit for various reasons. Some are oblivious to the strange goings-on, others come for the mystical aura, and some guests arrive looking for answers. The inn acts as another character and sees to all of the common tasks required to run a hotel. It listens when the family talks, replies using shakes and groans, cleans laundry and returns it to the guests’ rooms, and even provides delicious feasts. A jabberwocky named Sam, in the form of a black cat roams the grounds and guards the border between the Otherworld and the human world. While it doesn’t speak, it displays a sneaky, kind, protective, and mischievous personality that makes it a memorable character.

The point of view alternates between Anna and a teenage boy named Colin. Colin’s parents are murdered while in witness protection, and before fleeing the scene, his brother Liam tells Colin to meet him in Ravenfall. Colin has no idea about the existence of magic, so sharing his observations, thoughts, and confusion help readers realize there’s more going on than the characters know. Why hadn’t his parents said anything to him about where they met, who they were, or how Colin is connected to Wick? His point of view shares the emotional aspect of his parents’ murder and his mixture of fear, uncertainty, and desire for revenge. Anna’s point of view adds knowledge of how the magical world works, and readers will empathize with her need to prove she’s a useful member of the family. She balances Colin’s strong feelings with logical thinking on how to navigate the magical community and its potential dangers. The author provides uncertainties and vague memories that create questions about characters and potential outcomes for the problems. An ancient evil might be back.

Everyone in Anna’s family has a magical ability, but Anna thinks hers is the only one that’s useless. How can touching someone and seeing death lead to anything good? She’s more withdrawn than her siblings out of fear of what she might see and does her best to avoid contact with others. Her lack of a positive self-image is a major concern throughout the story, especially when she discovers Colin has abilities too. She also wonders if she’s having dreams or premonitions during the night, as the images are very unsettling. All of these factors create an internal conflict for Anna and sometimes hamper her efforts.

What didn’t work as well:

The alternating points of view are effective, but there are moments when I need to remind myself if a chapter is about Anna or Colin. This is not a major issue or distraction, but it happens.

The Final Verdict:

Embrace the weird. Colin learning to master his new powers is a main focus and is common in many middle-grade books, but it’s interesting how it’s only one part of the whole story. The family’s support of him is equally important in the adventure, and the resolution is only possible with their teamwork. The book offers sensitive character interactions, playful humor, and action-packed battles that will appeal to many young readers. I highly recommend you give it a shot, and I’m looking to its sequel called “Hollowthorn” coming in 2023.

Frances and the Monster by Refe Tuma

What worked:

Frances hasn’t left the manor in seven years, as her inventor parents are overly protective since she lost an ear in a car accident. The author uses this fact as the cause of Frances’s boredom and frustration in not being allowed in the outside world. She’s just smart enough to think she knows more than her parents, and her impulsiveness leads to many bad decisions. Her parents have well-stocked laboratories in the basement, so the kindling is present for Frances to create real problems. Finding a specimen from her great-grandfather’s failed experiment provides the catalyst for a disaster. It’s evident that Frances will discover a surprise about her past since the author mentions several times that she can’t remember much about the accident.

Hobbes, a robot tutor, and Fritz, an intelligent chimpanzee, make for fascinating and entertaining characters. Hobbes spends most of the book as a disembodied head thanks to another poor choice by Frances. It humorously makes obvious observations and comments that thoroughly annoy Frances, but it also provides timely and important advice. Fritz is able to communicate with Frances using sign language, and he follows her orders independently. They have a close bond after their years together, and he comes to her rescue when needed. Unfortunately, his intelligence serum may wear off in two days.

The adventurous plot is easy to follow, as the conflict is centered on capturing a runaway monster. Complications arise since Frances doesn’t remember life outside the manor, and she manages to transform a policeman into her personal tormentor. It’s unclear what’s motivating the monster since it stays out of sight and Frances can’t see a pattern to its path of destruction. It’s harder to search for it with the officer constantly popping up wherever she goes. The story’s resolution leaves the door open for a sequel, although there aren’t any indications that one is in the works. It not, the final pages only create more questions and problems to be solved.

What didn’t work as well:

When will young characters learn they don’t know everything and that making more bad choices doesn’t cancel out the ones they’ve already made? The answer is never, but Frances seems overly headstrong and out of control in creating the monster. However, that’s her personality, and it’s what identifies her character. She eventually starts to understand the monster and develops empathy for it, so the end of the book takes an exciting turn.

The Final Verdict:

Hunting down a monster. The connection between Frances and the monster is what drives the plot, as she feels responsible for its destruction and terror. She’s forced to learn about friendship during her quest, and the emotional climax brings everything together. Overall, middle-grade readers should love the book, and I highly recommend you give it a shot.

Daybreak on Raven Island by Fleur Bradley

What worked:

The trio of main characters form an unusual blend of personalities. Tori is a competitive soccer player and could be a popular member of the class. However, she’s upset about being suspended from her team, her brother’s in prison, and she really has no interest in making friends. That’s strange as she chooses Marvin, a geeky boy with dreams of creating a spooky movie, as her field trip buddy and they add Noah, a withdrawn new kid who fears everything, as their third. Marvin’s curiosity gets them into loads of trouble. Noah doesn’t want to be left alone even though every new experience adds another subject to his list of fears; he literally has a twenty-page list of them.

The story involves ghosts but it doesn’t exactly feel like a ghost story. The kids are able to see ghosts, while adults cannot, but their interactions aren’t frightening or spooky. A ghost offers help when the kids are lost in the dark woods but other observations are more confusing. The ghost of the last warden is seen talking to inmates near a rowboat along the shore but the kids don’t understand why. They figure out something happened on the island when the prison was still open and they’re determined to uncover the secrets. The overall story reads like a mystery so readers will be able to speculate and piece together the clues along with the characters.

The setting is perfect for a ghost story. The deteriorating stone prison is crumbling, damp, and musty which creates a stifling atmosphere. The waters between the island and the mainland are treacherous as the powerful tides only allow the ferry to safely traverse the distance once each day. The kids have no way to leave and much of the story takes place at night. Of course, it’s a cold and rainy night. The structures on the island include the run-down prison, an old lighthouse, and a forgotten morgue. Black ravens constantly watch from the trees causing readers to wonder if the eerie birds might be stalking the kids.

What didn’t work as well:

For kids with various emotional issues, all three main characters make incredibly “brave” decisions and take dangerous risks. Noah constantly ventures into the unknown despite requiring psychiatrists in the past to help him face his phobias. The characters’ behaviors don’t always match up with the personalities established in the early chapters.

The Final Verdict:

Don’t let your fears control you. The mystery on Raven Island is interesting but it’s difficult to make connections with the characters. Perhaps it’s just me, but I keep wanting more descriptions or detail to help me infer the whole characters. The atmosphere and conflict definitely fit the story and I recommend this book for lovers of mysteries and ghosts.

How You Grow Wings by Rimma Onoseta

Most of my posts are for middle-grade readers, but this book is for young adults.

What worked:

This book offers a contrast in the lives of two Nigerian sisters, daughters of a physically and mentally abusive mother. Their stories are shared in alternating chapters. Cheta is the older sister and bears the brunt of her mother’s anger. She’s headstrong and defiant and refuses to be cowed which infuriates her mother further. On the other hand, the abuse rarely targets Zam as she tries to be obedient and inoffensive toward others. Cheta perceives her sister as the cherished daughter which only fuels her feelings of persecution. She’s tormented when outshined by her younger sister although she’s quick to come to Zam’s defense. Zam slowly learns to deal with her severe anxiety and her transformation as a developing woman is remarkable.

The Nigerian family culture depicted in the story is quite different from what readers may be used to. Strict discipline is enforced by many parents and they are not to be questioned or defied. A cousin is brutally beaten by her father in the opening chapter while other adults watch. Some of them are uncomfortable with the assault but no one tries to intervene. Cheta once slapped her mother in retaliation so she’s now forced to dodge knives, pots, and other objects flung at her. Men are viewed as the dominant gender although women seem to have inner disgust toward them. A wealthy uncle and aunt are publicly revered, and secretly despised, and life in their gated mansion is quite different from Zam’s humble home. An independent-thinking housemate becomes a close friend and mentor as Zam learns to survive life’s challenges.

Obviously, this book addresses mental and emotional health. Cheta has the larger challenge due to her lack of support from her parents. Her mother is the source of her anguish and her father is withdrawn and rarely interacts with others. She has no money and lacks options to escape the situation. Seeking help from friends may land her in even more unsavory situations. Zam’s been suffering panic attacks for years but thinks she’s being punished by God and doesn’t deserve any help. Life with her aunt and uncle is better financially but the mansion is the scene of its own drama. Her cousin isn’t receptive to Zam’s presence and Zam’s actions around the mansion staff aren’t normal for family members. She feels guilt for leaving her sister behind and experiences additional stress after her mother’s phone calls. Each sister learns to cope with their emotions in different ways.

What didn’t work as well:

The tone of the story is pretty dreary especially when sharing Cheta’s life around her mother. Zam’s life living with her aunt and uncle is better but she still finds conflict within the mansion and is forced to deal with severe anxiety. The plot doesn’t have a clear goal in the first half of the book so it’s unclear where it’s headed. However, it becomes dual stories of survival although the sisters have drastically different roads to follow.

The Final Verdict:

This book doesn’t share an uplifting, inspiring story but it tells of the emotional battles faced by two sisters. They face contrasting challenges of poverty and wealth that will evoke a wide range of feelings from readers. I recommend you give the book a shot.

Pilar Ramirez and the Curse of San Zenon (Pilar Ramirez Duology #2)

What worked:

Pilar is of Dominican Republic heritage which is a culture not often featured in novels. The story includes language, food, and other cultural details as much of the plot takes place on the island. The antagonists are mythical creatures in the Dominican folklore and a couple of them are returning from imprisonments. Seems like they may want to find a more powerful, magical penal system. The giant evil being resurrected in the plot was considered gone forever until the reality of its return faces the main characters. The conflict finds Pilar and her allies struggling to discover an impossible way to stop the overwhelming power being wielded by a bruja traitor.

Pilar is a bruja, and the dictionary defines that term as a sorcerer. Pilar is able to wield magic but seems more like a warrior-in-training, as her friend Carmen has been teaching her fighting techniques. Pilar is the only person able to see the storm growing over the sea and the truth behind this vision is revealed later. She also has dreams of people she’s never seen in places she’s never been and the meaning of these images becomes clearer as the story moves on. Most of the brujas in the world have died so Pilar may be the most powerful one left. La Bruja seems to be the boss, but she defers to Pilar’s judgment at crucial points in the plot.

The adventure has a good deal of action-packed scenes that will satisfy young readers. Pilar and her friends use magic to conjure weapons against their foes. Machetes are wielded in hand-to-hand combat as some beasts can only be defeated by removing their heads. Powerful storms and devastating winds create a dark, malevolent atmosphere to accentuate the intensity of the characters’ clashes. Pilar uses her magic and special gloves to traverse the city spiderman-style and to maneuver around giant creatures. She later learns that teamwork is a highly effective strategy against their enemies.

What didn’t work as well:

Authors often use vocabulary from other languages to enhance the cultural influence. This book frequently uses insignificant Spanish conjunctions which may distract readers due to over usage. Other Spanish phrases are used more strategically, adding a cultural flair to the events. The vocabulary seems more appropriate and blends into the story better when it’s used in the characters’ dialogue.

The final verdict:

I recommend reading “Pilar Ramirez and the Escape from Zafa” before reading this one as many connections are made to past events and characters. The action, suspense, and Dominican folklore should entertain young readers and I recommend you give this book a shot. 

Hana Hsu and the Ghost Crab Nation by Sylvia Liu

What worked:

The template for the story is familiar so it will be easy to follow the plot. Hana dreams of attending Start-Up like her older sister but she soon learns that something nefarious is going on at the school. Large corporations are presented as the antagonists while their motives remain secret. Why would they care about different fungi and parasites and what does that have to do with the school? Hana tiptoes into the center of the drama as she reluctantly gets drawn in and she’s assisted by two classmates. The new friends have differing opinions throughout the book which offers a twist to a familiar story. Tomas is withholding a secret that will eventually be revealed to his friends.

Some moral issues concerning technology are at the forefront of the plot. The right to privacy is in doubt as all citizens are meshed, their brains becoming connected to the multiweb. It allows instant contact with friends, games, and news, but the corporations are also able to track everything people do. In addition, a point is made that the control of knowledge is power. People feel informed due to electronic connections to information but who’s controlling the news? Brainwashing is highly possible when corporations can decide what information and “truth” to share with the public. Hana’s own family finds itself on both sides of the issue of anti-tech and becoming enmeshed.

Hana’s character bridges the conflict between corporations and the rebellion against technology. The corporations are starting to control her school as traditions and procedures are changed. Hana discovers things feel wrong and some of her technology doesn’t work properly. She likes to build small, mechanical bots and frequently visits the Junkyard looking for parts she can use and recycle. She meets a tough girl named Ink and becomes drawn into the untold world of technology. Ghost Crab Nation refers to the name of a major anti-tech group. Hana is forced to face the conflicting stories of being meshed and must rethink her future. To complicate matters, Hana’s mother works at the largest corporation in the world and her research places her at the center of a covert plot.

What didn’t work as well:

The early chapters of the book share the common story framework of secret, evil things going on behind the scenes at a character’s dream school. However, the rest of the plot morphs into an engaging conspiracy with many unexpected twists and turns. More surprises await even after Hana figures out what’s actually happening.

The Final Verdict:

People should be free to think. The plot considers issues related to technology as it continues to become more invasive in our lives. Hana’s friends and family provide different perspectives on the issues but struggles with both groups add additional problems for her character. I recommend you give this book a shot!

Gravebooks by J.A. White

What worked:

This book is the sequel to Nightbooks, but it’s not essential that you’ve read it first. The prologue provides enough information about the evil witch Natacha that readers can easily jump right into this new adventure. The premise of the story is reminiscent of The Arabian Nights where Scheherazade must make up new stories every day to avoid being killed by the king. Natacha enters Alex’s dreams and won’t allow him to wake up until he’s written her an original story. She expects a new one every night, although she often requires Alex to write multiple tales before she deems one of them acceptable. The stories appear on gravestones and cause flowers to grow. Natacha is expecting unique flowers, and her jackal’s sniff determines the worthiness of Alex’s efforts. The importance of the flowers will be revealed later in the book. The author provides multiple surprises as the plot nears its climax.

A fun twist to the book is the fact that the plot includes the short stories written by Alex. They’re supposed to be original and scary because Natacha won’t accept them if they’re not. If you’re like me, you’ll find yourself judging the quality of the stories just like Natacha. For the most part, Alex is successful, so readers are able to enjoy many spooky stories within the pages of one book. Another novel approach by the author occurs when Alex discusses his writing process, so readers can learn about how authors craft new stories. Alex considers the origin of new ideas, characterization, plot development, word choice, conflict, and creative endings. He also battles writer’s block, which presents an additional problem while trying to escape his dreams. 

The author’s creativity is highlighted in this book. The dreamworld appears as a graveyard of Alex’s abandoned writing topics and it’s very real for him. It’s frightening how he can’t escape his own mind unless the witch allows it. After choosing a tombstone, Alex drops into another dreamworld based on an idea from his past, and he’s forced to compose a story before he can leave it. He’s trapped in a dream within a dream that has infinite possibilities. The additional characters, conflicts, and solutions allow plenty of room for healthy imagination. Alex must also learn to understand his friendship with Yasmin, and she’s forced to deal with her terrors from the first book.

What didn’t work as well:

While not a huge issue, the characters reference events from the first book, so readers may feel like they’re missing something. The easy solution to the problem is to read Nightbooks first. I’ve not read it yet, but I was easily able to enjoy the suspense and eeriness found in Gravebooks. 

The Final Verdict:

It’s not safe to dream anymore. The overall book is scary, but the short stories included are even more frightening. The author is skillfully able to evoke feelings of uneasiness and fear, and I highly recommend you give it a shot.

Tales to Keep You Up at Night by Dan Poblocki

What worked:

The story centers around an old, tattered library book titled Tales to Keep You Up at Night that Amelia finds in her grandmother’s attic. The book contains a collection of eerie stories beginning with Moll Bowen, a 90-year-old woman using a stiff, leather-bound book with yellowed pages to help her neighbors. Moll’s Well is said to have the purest, sweetest water anywhere, and she uses it to complete the recipes within the book’s pages, although Judge Turner sentences her to death for practicing witchcraft. This event becomes the catalyst for future tales surrounding the book and the well. Adding to the mystery, Amelia’s last name is Turner, and the librarian’s last name is Bowen.

Much of the book is comprised of creepy short stories that seem to be unrelated. However, the names in the stories should become familiar, and Amelia finally discovers connections, even though they’re very improbable. The stories describe witches that can appear as anyone, giant golem-like creatures wandering the forest, pumpkin vines seeking to kill, and other dangers that lurk in the night. The variety of tales will keep readers engaged and wondering where the plot is headed. They create a riddle to be solved with clues that will tingle your spine, and readers may not like the many possible solutions. Young readers may fear the dark after reading these stories!

The format of the plot is a bit unusual since most of it is introduced through the short stories. Brief chapters about Amelia, the main character, pop up throughout, but they mostly share Amelia’s actions between readings. She’s deeply distressed about her grandmother’s disappearance last year, and she’s extremely upset that her mothers have chosen to sell the old house. Amelia wants to learn what really happened to her grandmother, and that spurs the opening of the plot. She eventually uncovers what happened, but it’s not something she ever expected.

What didn’t work as well:

The early stories are unrelated, so understanding an overall conflict or plot is more challenging. You might imagine where the narrative should be going, but the stories don’t easily fit that idea until Amelia discovers how they tie together. They’re woven into a heart-pounding, ominous adventure.

The Final Verdict:

There are many ways a story can echo through life. The ghoulish tales will keep readers up at night, and the format of the narrative will keep readers thinking. The overall book successfully presents a chilling plot that will highly entertain middle-grade readers. I highly recommend you give it a shot.

This Appearing House by Ally Malinenko

What worked:

The book fulfills the author’s goal to write a book showing a young person overcoming a serious illness. The journey isn’t without struggles, as Jac fears the disease is returning after five years of treatment. She takes a couple of falls, her hands start to twitch, and she might be experiencing hallucinations. How else can she explain the house that appeared at the end of Juniper Drive? The plot becomes a haunted house story, and the author’s skillful descriptions conjure creepy, eerie emotions. The experience inside the house is a metaphor for the internal battle Jac’s facing. The only way out is through, and she’ll eventually need to face her inner monsters.

Jac has recently moved to New Jersey, so school and friendships offer challenges. She hasn’t shared her health problems with anyone else, not even her best friend Hazel. Hazel has his own issues dealing with a bully intent on shaming him for his girl’s name. Hazel’s character isn’t going through a gender-identity crisis; he’s named for a rabbit in his mother’s favorite story. Jac has erected a figurative wall inside her mind to shield her feelings, so no one truly knows what’s happening to her.

The story spends a good deal of time describing Jac’s relationship with her mother. It’s complicated, as her mother tries to juggle being a caring parent while not being overly protective. Jac tries to live as normally as possible, but her mother’s constant questions about how she’s feeling sidetrack her thoughts. It’s hard to not obsess about the disease when her mother won’t let her forget. On the other hand, her mother must protect her daughter from harm, so she needs to know what’s going on. Mother and daughter want the same thing, but their efforts are in conflict. As I said, it’s complicated.

What didn’t work as well:

Most of the book doesn’t specifically mention Jac’s disease and simply talks about its symptoms. It’s not clear why the author chooses to keep it secret, since the book’s synopsis says it’s cancer. Why not use the word from the beginning? Jac struggles with accepting her diagnosis, but informing readers of the disease shouldn’t significantly affect the story.

The Final Verdict:

The only way out is through. This book could be categorized as a ghost story, but it shares the profoundly emotional war that consumes people diagnosed with serious diseases. The author passionately expresses the fear, confusion, and anger of living with an illness. I highly recommend you give this book a shot. 

The U-nique Lou Fox by Jodi Carmichael

What worked:

The book describes the problems associated with dyslexia and ADHD. These two disabilities make school especially difficult for Louisa, as she struggles to read and pay attention. Dyslexia makes letters on the page get mixed up, so reading textbooks and directions from the board require extra concentration. However, the ADHD causes her mind to wander and leads to conflicts with her teacher. Her frustrations result in impulsive comments and behaviors that get her into additional trouble. She views her teacher as the Shadow Phantom, and Lou sees their relationship as opposing forces. The unfolding story requires both of them to better understand the other. Lou’s command of verbal language and her knowledge of word definitions make it hard for others to understand her issues. The story is told from Lou’s point of view, so readers share her thoughts and feelings as events start to unravel.

Lou’s parents are extremely supportive and loving, but their announcement of her mom’s pregnancy creates mixed emotions. Lou is excited to become a big sister, and her two close friends, Lexie and Nakessa, are equally enthusiastic for her. However, Lou overreacts to small things around the house and becomes jealous of the unborn sibling. Readers with younger brothers and sisters can relate to her since the family dynamics are forced to change. Parent time will be divided with an additional child, and Lou’s life as an only child leaves her feeling unprepared for the necessary adjustments.

Luckily, Lou is distracted by the upcoming presentation of a play that she’s producing with Lexie and Nakessa. Most of the chapters describe their progress as the play evolves, and it’s the source of creativity, happiness, and potential conflict. The three girls meet every day before school under an oak tree to stretch and chat. They call themselves the Bendables, and Lou’s future backup plan is to join Cirque de Soleil if her playwriting career doesn’t work out. Lou’s friends are super supportive and understanding, and they try to remind her to make wise choices when they see her frustration boiling over. They’re tolerant of Lou’s moods and encourage her to express her creativity and artistic talents. However, Lou must learn how to control her behavior and become the best friend and big sister she can be.

What didn’t work as well:

Lexie and Nakessa are very important characters, but they’re flat. The author doesn’t provide many details about their lives beyond school, so it’s difficult for readers to make connections. More character development would make it easier to become emotionally involved, but the story of Lou’s struggles with learning problems and becoming a big sister carry the plot.

The Final Verdict:

Appreciate those close to you. The author is able to evoke empathy for Louisa, as she becomes overwhelmed by the challenges faced every day. The plot isn’t overly complicated, but the feeling of normalcy helps to make the book approachable. This book became more than I expected, and I highly recommend you give it a shot.

David Massie and the Hidden Underworld by Andrew M. Nehring

What worked:

The book presents an intriguing tale of time travel. Time Police have the responsibility of monitoring events and stepping in when disruptions occur. All of them were killed in the previous book except for CP and David, and CP is now determined to exact revenge against the Dark Armored Figure. The jaunts through time are almost instantaneous, as CP, David, and his girlfriend Rory try to repair a destroyed reality gate. The author saves some surprises about an important character that will alter the future of the series.

The banter between characters is amusing. CP likes to tease David and Rory about their relationship which usually results in much blushing. The couple finds time to act like kids and to share their feelings with each other. David likes to make snide comments and call CP “Ace” when things don’t seem to work out as planned. CP usually gets the final word when his ideas actually work to save them. These interactions typically happen during action scenes when situations look dire.

The story includes a blend of elements from various supernatural genres. A spaceship SUV is able to transport the characters through time and then move invisibly around ancient Greece. Robots help with cleaning and flying the ship, although the antagonist modifies them to attack and defend. CP and David wield blasters, and David has a watch that allows him to create useful holograms. These things contrast with common Athenians found thousands of years ago, although one citizen isn’t fazed by the concept of time travel.

What didn’t work as well:

This book is very short at less than 100 pages, so it doesn’t include a great deal of description or detail. Rather than describe well-thought-out plans, the characters often resolve issues by pushing a button to capture attackers, escape a formidable situation, or create items from nothing. I prefer when characters use their wits and materials on hand to take care of their problems.

The Final Verdict:

This book has creative technology and the potential problem of an evil character gaining access to traveling anywhere in time. A longer version of the book would allow the author more time to fully develop the characters, the conflict, and the overall story. The book is still entertaining, and lovers of time travel should definitely check it out.