The Sherlock Society 1 by James Ponti

What worked:

The author presents a dramatic hook as readers meet the two main characters adrift in the water off the coast of Florida. Siblings Alex and Zoe Sherlock had just survived a boat explosion after sneaking on and hiding from the owner and his crew. The setting then shifts back three weeks to explain how the kids get themselves, and their grandfather, into this predicament. This adventure reveals secrets they never expected, putting them in potentially dangerous situations. The book’s title comes from Alex’s admiration for Sherlock Holmes and his mysteries not from the fact they share the same last name.

The story is told from Alex’s first-person point of view although it doesn’t add significant information or insight. The book reads as a mystery when Zoe joins Alex and his two friends, Lina and Yadi, to form a summertime detective agency. Their mother nixes that plan but Grandpa suggests they try to finish one of the unsolved stories from his reporter days. The article they choose to pursue happens to be about Al Capone and a million-dollar hidden treasure he may have buried around Miami. Grandpa says being a reporter is like being a detective so that’s how they’ll spin it when the mother finds out. They often fall back on the 5 Ws of newspeople (who, what, why, when, where) to guide their investigation.

The plot includes news from the past as the Sherlock Society researches Al Capone’s life and historical events during that time. Capone is best known for living in Chicago but he moved to Miami after being released from Alcatraz prison. Grandpa shares what he knows as a lifelong resident of the area and they visit sites from Capone’s life and interview people who have knowledge about him. As the plot shifts, readers learn additional information regarding nature and science when a new antagonist arises. This new conflict allows the characters to use their detective skills to resolve an important public problem.

What didn’t work as well:

The whole plot is about solving mysteries and readers may want a break at times. There are a couple of subplots concerning Lina and Zoe but it might be nice to develop them more.  

The final verdict:

The book begins as an interesting exploration of Al Capone’s past then transitions to an important investigation about a local, public figure. The characters don’t have super-sleuthing talents but they work well together as a team. Overall, I recommend you give it a shot. 

Confessions of a Junior Spy 1 by Rosaria Munda

What worked:

The Pangean Hotel is a curious setting where spies freely roam the hallways and rooms after their worldwide missions. It’s a sanctuary for them and houses the Pangean League, an ancient international association dedicated to maintaining world peace. Its spies are committed to helping people in trouble and they never use violence except in self-defense. The fraternal twins of the hotel’s Branch Director are snobby brats and they provide an annoyance for Bea, the book’s main character. Staff members provide all of the necessary services for spies ranging from clothing and equipment to medical services. Bea’s teachers range from the Interpreter for lessons in Latin and French, to learning chemistry from the Jeweler, and history and espionage from the Archivist.

While this book doesn’t tell a superhero story, it does include Bea’s new super ability. These talents are called Knacks and Bea eventually learns hers has to do with knives. Her best friend Tommy has a Knack for cleaning while her new friend Chantal has a Knack for communicating with animals. Bea’s Knack manifests itself when she needs to protect a friend and she’s overjoyed when she discovers it. If you ignore the fact that she could have seriously injured a bully. The residents and staff of the Pangean respond with praise and congratulations. Bea feels a comforting connection with the weapons and the Jeweler gifts her with a special knife bearing an inlaid, scrimshaw hilt, and tiny teeth. Bea’s mother, however, would prefer Bea use her new Knack to become a skilled surgeon or a chef, like her father.

The biggest conflict is between Bea and her mother and it concerns Bea attending a normal school. Bea doesn’t have any first-hand experience beyond the walls of the Pangean Hotel but she doesn’t want to spend her days sitting behind a schoolroom desk. Classes that don’t include self-defense or stitching up wounds don’t interest her at all. However, Bea’s mom doesn’t want her daughter to enter the dangerous world of spies like she was forced to do as a child. Her mother isn’t sharing all she knows about the spy business but she’s afraid of the dangers Bea’s new Knack might bring.

What didn’t work as well:

Chantal’s knack doesn’t work as well for a couple of reasons. First, she’s supposed to be a “normal” young girl so it doesn’t seem like she should have a special ability. Second, her knack is more supernatural than other knacks. Bea can’t do anything magical with knives other than throw them with great accuracy. The spies’ talents are based on exceptional skills and interests while Chantal's communication with animals goes beyond human capabilities.

The final verdict:

This book is certainly an appetizer for greater adventures to come. Bea’s struggle to pursue a life of spying is at center stage but the appearance of an assassin brings much excitement and suspense. I recommend you give this book a shot and I’m looking forward to its sequel. 

Never Thirteen (The Evers 2) by Stacy McAnulty

What worked:

This book immediately creates a conflict between Ronan and the Evers. Ronan is psychic, like most of his relatives, and he learns from his aunt that psychics and Evers are enemies. Evers can steal Ronan’s psychic power but he can kill Evers through extended physical contact. Ronan’s aunt says psychics have a responsibility to rid the earth of Evers since Evers intend to spread their “disease” around the world. This revelation causes a huge internal conflict for Ronan since an Ever named Ivy is one of his good friends. Ivy’s Ever friends learn about his ability, meaning they now see him as a threat. This conflict between Evers and Enders becomes a bigger problem as Ivy and her friends begin to look elsewhere for answers. Alternating chapters focus on various main characters so readers can appreciate their different points of view.

This series will make readers ponder the concept of eternal life and the serious consequences it holds. The Evers don’t age and their injuries heal while they rest which sounds wonderful. However, not growing old means they never change physically while everyone around them does. It’s impossible to go unnoticed in a community so the Evers are forced to constantly move. They don’t like to develop serious friendships since they can’t last long and the Evers will experience grief and sadness when mortal friends die. Since Ivy’s only recently been changed, the Evers want to make her mortal again so she can have a normal life. Another Ever wants the same thing but his decision creates a rift between Este, the oldest member of their group, and the others.

The author throws another twist into the plot since Ivy’s new roommate is mortal. Aurora knows nothing about Ivy’s secret so she’s hurt and confused by Ivy’s behavior. Ivy is forced to lie about why she didn’t finish the previous school year and why she often sneaks off to meet with the other Evers. Aurora feels like she’s being avoided and pushed away and she realizes Ivy isn’t being honest. This only adds to Aurora’s stress about her parents’ splitting up so the friction between the roommates grows. Other characters new to the series bring different perspectives about Evers and Enders along with additional questions and a few answers.

What didn’t work as well:

The idea of Enders doesn’t make total sense. If Enders can hurt Evers by touching them but Evers can hurt Enders by doing the same thing, won’t they hurt each other if they make contact? Also, there’s still fuzziness about why some psychics feel it’s their duty to end the Evers. Evers don’t seem to have the same feeling about Enders. If this battle has been going on for centuries, why hasn’t Este ever heard about Enders during her almost three hundred years of life?

The final verdict:

The author introduces several consequences of becoming mortal again that really complicate Ivy’s thoughts about returning to a normal life. There are dramatic twists on an emotional rollercoaster as the battle between Evers and psychics escalates. I recommend you give this book a shot but I also suggest you read Forever Twelve first.

One Wrong Step by Jennifer A. Nielsen

What worked:

Each chapter begins with a few lines sharing facts relevant to the following events. Mountain climbing is a major part of the story and readers will learn much about it. The first chapter shares information about Atlas’s first mountain climb to the summit of Kings Peak in 1936. It’s also the time when his mother loses her battle with a chronic disease. A map to the summit of Mt. Everest precedes the second chapter with information about the sherpas who assist climbers. Other chapter introductions explain terms like acclimation, climbers adjusting to the lack of oxygen, columns of ice called seracs, and various tools used during a climb. These descriptions are helpful to understand the nuances of scaling Earth’s tallest mountain. Additional maps throughout the book identify Atlas’s location on Mt. Everest to give readers context for the dramatic events. They’ll discover it takes months, a lot of money, courage, and a bit of luck to attempt a climb up Mt. Everest.

The story is told in first-person by Atlas, a teenage boy from London. This allows readers to learn about his feelings and unspoken thoughts about mountain climbing and special memories. Dealing with grief is an issue since Atlas hasn’t had a serious talk about his mother’s death in the three years since it happened. He’s frustrated that his father won’t let him climb to Mt. Everest’s summit but that doesn’t stop Atlas from trying to change his mind. An avalanche will find Atlas climbing farther than his father expected. Telling the story first-person also lets readers in on Atlas’s climbing knowledge and strategies as well as his conflicted thoughts about his mother.

The climbing team presents a variety of personalities to enhance the plot and drama. Mr. Blake is financing most of the expedition but his superior air creates conflict and mystery. He loves to hear himself talk, mostly about himself, and he frequently shares disparaging remarks about Atlas’s age and skill. Hushed comments between Blake and another team member create uncertainty about Blake’s character and his motives. Chodak is the main sherpa guide and his kind personality is a stark contrast to Blake. He’s the group’s biggest asset but an accident complicates his role. Maddie is about Atlas’s age and Atlas initially doesn’t like her presence on the mountain. She has very little climbing experience and one of her phobias may make her a liability. What kind of father makes Mt. Everest his daughter’s first mountain-climbing event?

What didn’t work as well:

The Nazi subplot slowly emerges but it’s not a necessary complication to the mountain-climbing adventure. The avalanche and Atlas’s subsequent efforts and setbacks to rescue his father provide plenty of drama for one book. Reader attention is distracted from this gripping problem as the topic of a Nazi spy continues. Mentioning the possibility of Nazis on Mt. Everest adds historical context to the plot but it would be better to leave it at that.

The final verdict:

The author captures the life-threatening perils and the harrowing weather conditions found on Mt. Everest to help readers experience the torturous quest to reach the summit. Atlas struggles to deal with his grief over his mother’s death and this subplot may resonate with readers. Overall, this riveting survival story will appeal to a wide audience and I recommend you give it a shot.

Bringing Back Kay- Kay by Dev Kothari

What worked:

The plot is a missing-person story with Lena trying to find her older brother Kay-Kay. It’s kind of a locked-door mystery as Kay-Kay was on a moving train when he went to bed but there’s no evidence of how he disappeared when passengers unload the next day. Lena doesn’t feel the police are doing enough so she begins investigating on her own. It’s hard to believe she’ll succeed, but she’s more emotionally motivated than anyone else. Some people she interviews are kind and helpful while others think she’s interfering and should let the police do their jobs. Lena is able to uncover secrets about her brother but his life is a bigger mystery than she could ever know.

Grief is a major issue as Kay-Kay’s disappearance is devastating for the family. The mother is hit hardest as she withdraws into her sorrow and can’t function anymore. Lena does her best to support her parents during this trying time but it’s not enough to make her mother feel better. The father struggles to carry on but Lena’s investigation wears on his nerves. Lena creates friction with others and her father is the one who hears their complaints about how his daughter is behaving.

The author weaves poetry and flashbacks into the plot as Lena remembers happy times with her brother. She idolizes him and her memories are of times when he supported her, counseled her, or simply brought joy to her life. The poems shared fit Lena’s thoughts of the situations that arise. One called “Expectations” goes with the chapter where Lena is on a bus to find her brother and “A Love Letter” fits her mood later in the story.

What didn’t work as well:

Uncovering the truth about what’s happened to Kay-Kay moves at a slow pace as Lena hits one dead end after another. This is especially evident once Lena leaves the city since readers are already anticipating significant developments in the case. It feels like Lena is back at square one.

The final verdict:

This emotional tale highlights the loving bond between a girl and her older brother. Parental expectations complicate the family dynamics but the conflicts are resolved in a compassionate manner in the end. This book will appeal to readers interested in India and sibling love and I recommend you give it a shot. 

Cousins in the Time of Magic by Emma Otheguy

What worked:

The book presents three cousins with contrasting personalities. Readers are immediately introduced to Jorge’s risk-taking when he accepts a neighbor’s dare to climb onto his garage roof and do a handstand. Camila is more logical and likes to follow the rules. However, she silently dreams of having a magical adventure and that’s exactly what happens in the story. Siggy is the oldest but he’s more concerned about adding to his podcast followers and advertisers than doing anything to support his cousins. Everyone, including Tia Xia, knows the neighbor boy is an arrogant, self-centered snob but Siggy hopes to enter his inner circle and become a bigger influencer. Siggy and Camila’s personalities undergo the biggest transformations as the plot unfolds.

The kids are transported back to Virginia in 1862 where they’re deposited into the middle of the Civil War. Factual information about this period is shared including Old Ironside trying to shoot them out of the water when they first appear. Slavery during this time is described as the characters encounter a young boy who’s separated from his father. However, the role of Latinos during this time isn’t commonly shared in historical writings and the author makes it a large point of this book. The setting shifts to Mexico where the citizens are waging their own battle against a French invasion. This Mexican conflict isn’t commonly known, probably because the U.S. Civil War overshadows it. The Civil War helped to free slaves but the plot stresses that freedom must be everywhere.

The book shares information about U.S. and Mexican history and the author includes sections in the back to help. First, there’s an “Author’s Note” where she provides information and stories related to the Mexican conflict and Latinos during this time period. Then, there’s a section called “Special Notes” where she describes people and terms that are mentioned in the story. A glossary follows that where the vocabulary used is obviously defined. The author provides additional books for those interested in further reading and a bibliography is provided to identify sources of information used in the story.  

What didn’t work as well:

The transition of characters from 160 years in the future is a bit too smooth. Camila immediately thinks she’s traveled back in time and her cousins aren’t shocked about the realization. Kids from the past are surprised when they meet Jorge and his cousins but they quickly accept time travel and go on like nothing strange is happening.

The final verdict:

The book presents an interesting perspective on Latino influence in North American history. Factual information is blended into an exciting adventure set during a defining moment in the United States.  Overall, I recommend you give this first book in the new series a shot.

The Chronicles of Viktor Valentine by Z Brewer

What worked:

From the book’s synopsis, readers already know Viktor’s parents are vampires but Viktor himself is a mystery. The sight of blood makes him dizzy although it doesn’t affect him while playing his favorite video game. He’s often battling a zombie apocalypse with his best friend Damon and blood and gore splatter everywhere. Damon is Viktor’s only friend until a new girl named Alys moves in across the street. Young readers can identify with his middle-school insecurities, especially with a bullying girl living right next door.

Readers have a good idea of what will happen but the author lets the events slowly unfold. This piques their anticipation as they wonder when Viktor will realize the truth about his parents. Viktor’s mother volunteers at a blood bank while his father designs coffins. The opening chapters reveal that Alys and her parents are vampire hunters and they’ve moved to Nowhere to kill one. Alys is nice to Viktor and becomes his friend but readers will know she’s actually collecting information about his family. However, Alys’s father isn’t happy that she displayed sympathy for their previous target and it’s unclear what she’ll do this time. Readers will root for Viktor as he’s just a nice guy trying to survive the early days of seventh grade. It feels wrong for vampire hunters to take advantage of a kind, innocent boy but that adds intrigue to the story. The plot has a bit of a Romeo and Juliet vibe going on.

A couple of supporting characters add to the story’s uncertainty as readers try to figure out if they’re normal humans or friends of vampires. Viktor’s mother insists he volunteer in the school library and she’s helpful with locating vampire information. A substitute English teacher doesn’t fit the description of a “normal” educator. Her appearance gives off a strong goth vibe and she has a special interest in the supernatural. She scraps the regular teacher’s lesson plans and has the students read the novel Dracula. Viktor is startled by her reaction when he shows her his father’s original copy of the novel. Readers will wonder about the backstories of these characters and others.

What didn’t work as well:

The downside of the synopsis is that readers already know what’s going to happen up until the climax. There aren’t as many opportunities for surprises and twists which may not appeal to some readers. However, many truths are revealed during the climax that will make readers want to read the sequel as soon as it’s published.

The final verdict:

The book touches readers’ emotions as an innocent boy doesn’t realize he’s at the center of a brewing storm. He just wants to have friends and survive middle school and doesn’t know his family is in danger. The book will appeal to lovers of vampires and goth and I recommend you give it a shot.